Pledge of love - PurVir SS part-7 on page 8 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Hii.. My name is supriya. Thank you 🥰

Upcoming parts me Vir will plead her to forgive aur bhut kuch krega Purvi ka dil fir se jeetne k lie😉

Cant wait ti read the next part

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Here comes my first ever fan fiction 😅

This is in continuation with the episode of 18 March, where Purvi now decides to prove herself innocent and virtuous with the help of Sudha. And prakashi isn't a vamp here.

Part 1 : Purvi takes her ground

After the panchayat was summoned and seated, Purvi requested to watch the video (of her and karan) again before appearing for her agni pariksha. But this time, tables were going to turn as the video which now played was of Vir and some girl in an intimate position (it was a tapered video of him and Sudha in real).

Everybody was shocked to the core on seeing this. Vir froze. On regaining his senses he shouted - it's fake and he can't ever do such a low lying deed . The 4 panch present there questioned Vir about what they just witnessed.

Purvi then explained - jo ap sab abhi dekh rhe hai ye utna hi sach hai jitna hmara aur karan ka video tha. Is video ke sath bhi waise hi chhed Chad ki gyi h jaise us din hmare video ke sath hui hui." She then playes the original video of SudhVir and said - computer graphics ki madad se bhut asani se ye kia ja sakta hai. Saying this she called a computer expert to explain that this is possible and easily accessible.

Vir was now realising what blunders he did in the past few days. As the proceedings went on, his anger was metamorphosing into regret for shaming his wife in front of everyone. He wondered how will he ever be able to heal the wounds he gave her.

Purvi then played the recording when she went to confront karan where he confessed all his crimes in order to make Pur more vulnerable. Also, he revealed Anjali's name for helping and paying him to create this fiasco.

Vir's infuriation knew no limits. He wanted to kill karan and anjali right away for they were the ones to sow the seed of separation and misunderstanding between him and his bawri. Vir saw Purvi, realising how much she might have suffered. He wanted to bow down in front of her but couldn't as right now he was the sarpanch who was yet to take the ultimate decision.

Purvi undoubtedly was proved innocent. Nobody had the courage to look into her eyes which sparkled with truth and blazed with anger. Anjali now searched for a corner to hide her face and then swiftly vanish to avoid the outrage of Vir (her jeth ji 😏) and most importantly Yogi. But all her endeavours were in vain. Yogi held her hand tight, with anger and disgrace in his eyes for having such a disastrous wife and dragged her in front of panch - mai is panchayat se vinti krta hu ki sabse pehle us doshi ko saza di jaye, jisne apne hi ghar ki izzat ko uchhalne me koi kasar nhi chodi, Bhabhi par ye ghatiya ilzam lgaya. Aur mai chahta hun ki saza aisi ho jo ye hmesha had rakhe.

Prakashi too was broken. She slapped anjali - tanne sharm naa ayi ke? apni hi jethani ke khilaaf aisa zaleel kam krte hue. (Crying) Bhagwan jane maine kaun se pap kiye the jo pehle Vai aur fir tu ne mere parivar ki izzat se khilwad kia. "

Vir (in mind) - Tera sabse bada gunhegar to mai hun. Pati hone ka koi farz na nibha saka mai, tujhpe bharosa na karke us sapole ki chaal me fans gya. Tujhpe hath uthaya aur kya kuch nhi kaha tujhe. Pta na kaise mafi magu thare se, par tu jo bhi saza degi mai sir jhuka ke maan lunga. 7 din to kya is bar agar sari zindagi bhi apna gulaam ban ke rehne ko kahegi to ban jauga mai bawri!

Now it was Pur's turn to speak her heart out. She went, took the thaal of laddu and threw away in anger. (Shouting with tears) "Hmare samman aur charitra ka bhi yhi haal hua hai (looking at the messed up sweets) sab kuch bikhar gya hai. (Looking pointedly at Vir) Yha tak ki hmare pati ne bhi koi kasar nhi chodi hme zaleel krne ki, aur kyo na ho akhir hm hai to ek MOLKKI hi naa, ek suhaagan nhi. Hme khareeda jata hai ek samaan ki trah, aur bas istemaal kia jata hai. Jiska kaam sirf zimmedariya nibhana hai, par uska khayal rakhne wala koi nhi hota. Mol hmara lgaya jata hai par hmari izzat aur bhawnao ki koi keemat nhi hoti. Ye hai Rewari ka nyaya, jaha bina kisi sunwai ke hme doshi karaar dia gya. Jaha hmari pavitrata ki parakh in zeher ke ladduon se kri gyi. Jo auraton ko barabar ka darja na de sake, wo panchayat hme kya nyaay degi."

All those who have pointed finger on her bowed their heads down for insulting a woman like that. Her words were like bare daggers, darting every heart and soul who heard her. Her each word spoke the story of hundreds of girls like her who were sold at the stake of their self respect. The pain oozing from her wounds made her say all the bitter truths, making her words even more impressive, affective.

Vir was no better. The whole time he was looking at Bawri, reading her eyes, repenting why dint he do this before ? "Bhut badi galti hui hai mhare se. Kyo pehle na padh paya mai teri ankhe? Kyo naa dekh paya teri sachhai? Itna andha ho gya tha mai apne gusse aur..... aur..... jalan ki aag me 😔." He could not meet anyone's gaze, not even his own. He was miserable knowing he made her go through enough tribulations. Only if he had trusted her for once, heard her side of the story, things might have been different. She wouldn't have had so much of agony and bitterness in her heart. The girl who brought colours to his life, whose smile brightened the haweli, who made her live like a human again, had lost her glee. The chirpy, talkative girl became a harsh orator today.

After saying this she left the place, without wanting to hear what her sinners were punished with. She was too broke and burdened with all the allegations put on her specially by her Mukhi ji. She wanted to hear nothing, see none. She kept walking, tears continuously sliding down her cheeks, recalling her worst experience for life and reached near the ghat by whose bank she has grown.....

To be continued..!! 😊

Do give suggestions as to what should happen next.

Waiting for the next part ☺️☺️

👏👏 every woman goes through this when there is injustice, she is too blame. we haven't learn a single thing from Ramayan.

please update soon. ❤️

Part 2 : The Punishment

Vir desired to stop Purvi, so that she can witness her culprits being punished severely. He felt helpless, he knew she wouldn't stop at anyone's call (except for their children's, who weren't present in the panchayat). He vowed - "mai tanne vachan deta hun bawri tere sabhi gunhegaaro ko aisi saza dunga ki wo fir kabhi tanne chot pahuchane ki soche bhi na"

The first one to bare Vir's rage was Karan (sapola😏). He looked daggers at him. Vir caught him by his collar, slapped him back to back for each tear he and bawri had shed in past days. The husband in him had overpowered Mukhiya of the village. He caused him as much physical pain as he had induced them emotional pain. Vir might have beaten him to death if not stopped by the panch. Mukhiya in him regained consciousness.

Vir sat on the royal seat from where he had been serving justice to everyone since years. Today, he had to penalize the wrongdoers of his wife. He thought "Shayd tujhe insaaf dene ke baad mai tujhse nazre mila saku bawri" Also, setting an example for what could be the consequences of disparaging a woman.

Vir - "ek nhi balki do do ladkiyo ki izzat se khilwad krne ke lie is karan ko uske college se aur saath hi Rewari se bhi hmesha ke lie nikala jata hai." (Angst erupting from his eyes like lava. If he wasn't the Mukhiya but a husband at this time, he would have buried him alive.)

Karan ran and fell on Mukhi's feet, pleading to have mercy on him. "Mujhe maaf kar dijiye Mukhi ji, mai badle ki aag me andha ho gya tha. Mujhe yha se mat nikaliye please 🙏🏻. Mere bina mere baba (Chaurasia) ka kya haal hoga, unke lihaz se hi sahi, mujhe mat nikaliye."

Vir - "Ruk jaa !! (Shouting) 😠 Nyaay ibe pura na hua. Tujhe apne baap ki bhut chinta hai naa, tab key hua tha jab tu kisi aur ki maa ne badnaam kar rha tha (remembering Juhi and Manas). Ib is gaanv se tu akela na jawega, tera baap bhi tere sath aur teri vjah se yha se hmesha ke lie jawege. Sath hi tere baba ki jo gairkanooni factory hai na yha, mai use bhi zabt krta hun. Aur yo mera akhri faisla hai."

Sending a venomous creature away from their lives is the best way to avoid any future stings. Mukhiya had made his verdict- unquestionable and exemplary like always !!

Now it was Anjali's turn to face her Jeth ji🤣. She was frightful - "agar jeth ji ne mujhe bhi gaanv se jane ko keh dia to mai kya krugi. Hey bhagwan is bar mujhe bacha lo mai vaada karti hu age se kabhi apne ghar me khud aag nhi lagaugi".

Before Vir could say anything, Yogi interrupted and made a request - "Bhaiya agar ijazat ho to mai kuch kehna chahta hu." Vir nodded.

Y - "ye pehli baar nhi hua hai jab Anjali ne kuch galat kia ho. Har bar iski galti ko nadani ka naam nhi dia jaa sakta. Mai divorce chahta hu isse. Jo aurat mere pariwar ka dhyan na rakh sake wo meri patni nhi ho sakti."

V - "ye tu ke keh rha hai Yogi. Itna bada faisla aise jaldbaji me naa kar. Thande dimag se soch."

Y - "nhi bhaiya. Ye mera akhri faisla hai. Mai iski vajah se ab aur sharmsaar nhi hona chahta"

V - "thik hai jaisa tu chahe. Mai vakeel se baat kar luga."

Anjali broke into tears. For the first time she discerned the disasters she had been creating. She wanted to repent, but it seemed too late.

Nobody was ready to hear her pleads and apologies, neither Yogi nor Prakashi (she dint dare to face Mukhi).

The panchayat was adjourned.

Vir (in mind) - "ibe tujhe pura insaaf na mila hai bawri. Tera doshi to mai bhi hun. Aur mujhe saza dene ka adhikar sirf tujhe hai."

Vir called at home to know if Mukhiyani had reached there safely. He was baffled to hear a no, as to where she might have gone - "kaha hai tu bawri, mujhe tere ta baat karni hai". It occurred to him in a few moments, where he might spot her - the ghat. "Mai aa rha hu Bawri. Tu chahe kitna bhi durr bhag le mujhse, par ib mai tera saath kabhi na choduga, zindagi bhar naa. Tujhe akela chodne ki galti mai kabhi na kruga !! "

To be continued....

Abhi to Purvi ka gussa, Vir ka use manana, dono ke gile shikwe dur hona aur dher sara romance ana baaki hai 😜

Apology for mistakes and thanks for reading !

Originally posted by: Milalal27

👏👏 every woman goes through this when there is injustice, she is too blame. we haven't learn a single thing from Ramayan.

please update soon. ❤️

"Ab sita agni pariksha nhi degi."

I'll soon bring this part into the SS like a strong message for the society.

Thanks for the precious suggestion and Happy reading 😊

Wow Supriya, this is as fab as the earlier part! So glad to see Karan thrown out...and finally Yogi also spoke

Vir's dialogue...mujhe saza dene ka adhikar sirf tujhe hai perfect!

Superb ❤️

Continue soon

Read both the parts in one go n omggggg kya Likha he 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Nothing more is left to say so Pls jaldi update dena🤩

N welcome to the forum 🤗

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Wow Supriya, this is as fab as the earlier part! So glad to see Karan thrown out...and finally Yogi also spoke

Vir's dialogue...mujhe saza dene ka adhikar sirf tujhe hai perfect!

Superb ❤️

Continue soon

More engaging dialogues still await !!

Next part will be out either by late night or early morning.. keep reading 😉

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Read both the parts in one go n omggggg kya Likha he 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Nothing more is left to say so Pls jaldi update dena🤩

N welcome to the forum 🤗

Thanks dear 😊

Yes I'll update soon..

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Was just wondering what havocs are awaiting PurVir post Sakshi's entry 😭 I'm really crying over this.

Supriya, please update karo 🙏🙏

Weekends FFs ke sahare hi kat te hai🥺