Star Commentor Award (Part 8)
Winner: Creampuff
Runnerups: Taahir004
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups 👏
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 9
Maan starts to drive back when his phone rings
M-Hello
G-Can you come back please? I am kind of locked out
M-Oh Okay
Maan turns his car without hanging up on Geet
M- But I don’t know your place
G- So walk straight into the lane from the place you dropped me, you will be able to see me
Maan follows her instruction
He locates Geet
She is standing outside her apartment building
M-Kya hua?
G- I think security bhaiya gate lock karke kahin chale gaye yaa so gaye, maine awaaz bhi lagai kisi ne suna hi nahi
M-hmm
He inspects the iron gate
Jab kuch karke kuch nahi hua toh he climbs on the gate and reaches on the other side
M- Good news! It’s not locked, just latched from inside
Maan undoes the latch and pulls open the gate
Geet walks in
G- Thanks
M- No problem. So you live in this building?
G-Yeah
M- Which floor?
G-The rooftop room
He nods
M-Okay then, I should get going. Good night
G- Good night
He walks away while Geet walks into the building
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A usual week passes by; as Geet had asked Maan to update heron his mother’s condition so she would text him back suggesting some medicines and all after Maan updates her that his mother is fine
Maan receives a text from Geet
‘So, you mentioned you are going to Piyush’s wedding, right?’
He frowns ki achanak ye kyun puch rahi hai
He replies ‘Yes’
Again, his phone rings with Geet’s message
‘When is it? Where is it?
Maan replies: ‘This weekend.' and shares the location
Geet again texts: ‘This is place is 2 hours drive from here…cool…I will take my car. I wanted to take my new car for a long drive anyways. I will pick you up from your place’
Maan is flabbergasted.
Ab bole bhi toh kya bole samajh nahi aa raha coz when he asked her to join the wedding then his intentions were completely different. He wanted revenge from her and his uska plan tha waha jaakar Geet ki beizzati karne ka ki look she can't get over Piyush she is despo and all
Ab samajh nahi aa raha kya bole
Backout bhi nahi kar sakta, as abhi backout karega toh Geet ko pata chal jayega ki uska plan kya tha and he doesn’t want to create anymore bitterness
So, he decided not to tell anything to Geet and go along with it
But Geet ko haan toh bol diya but his guilt was killing him
So, he decides to get her a gift to get rid of his guilt
He buys a beautiful diamond necklace
The wedding was Christian, so he though Geet ki dress ke saath acha jayega
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He is waiting for Geet to pick him up
Geet drives in with her convertible car
Maan is surprised ki isko toh middle class samajh raha tha
She stops near Maan and giggles at his happing face
G-Get in
M-This is your car?
G-Kind of, EMI chal rahi hai abhi bhi. Second hand hai. Mera ye bachpann ka sapna tha, aisi car lene ka
M-So that’s why you wanted to take your car
G-Of course, itna paisa kharch kia hai aur ab mauka pada hai national highway pe drive karne ka, waste karenge kya?
Maan sits and Geet removes the top in style
Maan nods with appreciative gaze
She starts the car
M- Wait wait, I have something for you
Geet looks at him with surprise
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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