This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 16

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

She will treat his mom and he will have to forget about his revenge. Unless he is a really ungrateful scoundrel.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome

Maan try to say it's not revenge it's enjoyable revenge but Geet felt insult

Maan didn't let her drive she thought he's also like his ex boyfriend she don't do mistake to fall fr him

She took cap and Maan following her he concern about her y he want revenge

Both don't know y they care fr each other without knowing

Maan mom not well and need Dr. so he stopped her cap and pull her out to go with her as his mom need Dr

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Posted: 4 years ago

chalo achcha hi chal raha hai..........


lovely update................

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 7)

Winner: Khwaishfan Taahir004

Runner ups: Umadevi97 Creampuff

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Lets continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun


Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right 😉

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 8

Maan- Mumma.... Wo. Wo behosh… Please chalo...

Holds her hand and drags her to his car

G-Maan...Maan calm down. I will go...but mere paas kit nahi hai abhi

He looks at her helplessly

Staring through out

Doesn't know what to do

Geet lets the cab go and comes with him

She keeps her hand on his cheek to calm him down

G-Suno meri baat.... main kit leke aati hoon...tum tab tak jaake unko admit karo

M- Tumhare clinic..?

G-Admit her in hospital

M- Unki BP measuring machine and stethoscope hai ghar pe baas aurr kuch nahi

G-Ok chalo

In the car, Geet sees that Maan is super tensed himself...

She gently keeps her hand on his to re-assure him

He looks at her helplessly

Geet reaches and checks his mom who was unconscious

G- Chinta mat karo. Sodium deficiency hai. Ye medicines likh di hai...subah shaam dete rehna

M- Koi problem to nahi hai na..?? Mumma theek toh ho jayengi naa..?

G-Yes. She will be fine

M- Thank God... Kab tak hosh mein ayengi.?

G-Subah tak. Let her rest tonight

M- amm. Kuch logi...? Chaaye coffee…. Anything...?

G-No…its ok

She shrugs and starts to go but stops mid-way

G- Its better we stop our Revenge childishness and don’t cross each other’s paths

He nods.

M- I have a request

G-Go on

M-Please come with me to the lounge. I want to speak to you

She follows him thinking iske ghar mein lounge hai?

He pours some water in a glass for her which she accepts

He sits opposite her

M-Geet

She stops drinking water and looks over at him as he utters her name

M- I am not the bad guy, you think I am

She doesn’t have a reply

She just nods

M- Thanks for coming for my mom

G-Its ok, Maan

She also tries saying his name, but it doesn’t have the same effect and ring to it

She gets up

G-I should leave now. Its late


He nods

She starts to book a cab

M- Don’t. let me drop you

G-No, it’s ok.

M-I know you are but It’s my way to thank you

She nods

M-By the way, you can drive if you want

He says with a smile looking at her with a side glance

She also smiles

G-I think I will pass. I think I deserve a chauffeur

She says cheekily

He doesn’t mind her cheekiness her brains always impress her

They have a calm drive to her home after she sets the location on the google map, she closes her eyes for a quick nap

G- Do you mind?

M-Not at all. I will wake you up

After a while

M-Geet ...Geet

G-Huh? Huh?

M-We are here. Where is your home? There are so many buildings

G-Yeah my place is in that tiny lane. Your car won’t get through it

M- Oh. You want me to walk you there?

G-No. I am good. Thanks


He shrugs ok

M-ok take care

G-Bye

She walks off

Maan starts to drive back when his phone rings

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 7

Nice. Geet being a doctor she's really responsible to not let Maan drive while he's drunk and must I say ki that Geet and Maan both are really stubborn when Geet wants to be away from Maan and Maan wouldn't want that. I agree with what Geet is feeling it's not easy to trust someone when they had a bad experience doing so. So yes Geet is right in her place and Maan ok agreed that he's a little protective towards Geet. This line really cracked me up "Just ignore him, bhaiya...nautanki kahin ka"🤣🤣🤣she called Maan nautanki... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ab Maan ki Mumma ko kya hua 😲lucky Geet is there so this shows that Maan trusts Geet with her medical abilities and decided ki yeh meri Mumma ka ilaj karegi😛. And from this we can see that Maan loves his Mumma so much 😉

Very nicely written Di.😍 Waiting to see what happens next will Geet save Maan's Mumma..? 🤗


Yup she totally thinks Maan is nautanki because of his revenge stunt and all. Good perspective-"shows that Maan trusts Geet with her medical abilities and decided ki yeh meri Mumma ka ilaj karegi"

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 7

Oh I just love geet’s character ❤️

“Misogynic a-hole “ 🤣🤣 you tell him girl !!! hhehehe..yeah she tells him!

Women are better drivers than men !!! Exactly!

Interesting how geet doesn’t want maan to drink & drive & maan doesn’t want geet to take a cab home hmmmm I think they both care about each other but are too stubborn to admit it ! Geet rationalizes with herself ki I dont want to be driven by a drunk man

Like how maan was following geet’s cab to make sure she arrives home safely ..... but funny he doesn’t know where she lives 😆

Oh no maan’s mom is ill & maan has convienantly found a Doctor 😛

I hope his mom is ok

Super interesting that geet is going to meet his mom or should I say her future mother in law 😆

Thank you so much for the back to back updates & pm 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi, how are you? I am fine dear. Thank you for asking. It means a lot

thanks for the regular updates! you are welcome

Thank you for the award....you deserved it


Part 7

Awesome song choice....Thanks

Entertaining update..... brilliantly written...TY

well he was teasing her....

So Maan knows how to annoy Geet....usmein toh wo PHD hai how dare he thinks woman are not good drivers! Exactly!!!

her anger and outburst are justified. Yup

as expected she refuses to go with him.

her thoughts are understandable. True

liked his concern for her.

at least Maan followed the cab to ensure she reaches home safely.

great that chose a carpool.

not surprised she compares Maan to Piyush.... Interesting, please give more detail on why do you think its not surprising that she compares Maan to Piyush

oh no Maan's mom is unwell.

Maan's tension reasonable.

Thank God Geet was nearby!

of cos Maan stopped the cab and takes Geet with him.

Hope his Maan will be fine....


Guess: Geet sees a caring Maan


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 7


Concern , Caring and Fantastic Update


Though Maan was clearly letting Geet know what he actually

feels about their first and second meeting

Geet took that it a wrong way thinking that Maan could also be like Piyush

which I highly doubt

because the moment Geet wants to drive Maan's car he refuses but instantly

when she leaves he wants her to drive

he was about to trust her with his car and that is not easy for a man Yes!!!!! That's such a great observation!!!

secondly he cannot be like a cheater called Piyush because Maan

is taking his time and following the cab ensuring and concerned

about Geet's safety

the moment Maan gets a call that his mother has fainted

the only doctor that comes to him instantly is Geet

and for me that is trust on a person Absolutely!!! I love how read between the lines


waiting to see Geet at Maan's house and treating his mother


I guess


Geet will learn a different side to Maan

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

She will treat his mom and he will have to forget about his revenge. Unless he is a really ungrateful scoundrel.


Lol...i loved the second line🤣

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