Star Commentor Award (Part 9)
Winner: UmaDevi97,Taahir004
Runnerups: Coderlady
Special Mention MariumChoudhary
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups 👏
Also special thanks to readers for pleasantly surprising me with reading and commenting on the story even without a PM. I know I got late PMing. Big hug to you all🤗
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 10
Maan sits and Geet removes the top in style
Maan nods with appreciative gaze
She starts the car
M- Wait wait, I have something for you
Geet looks at him with surprise
He gives her a box
She opens the box to find an expensive diamond necklace
G- Yeh??
She looks at Maan surprised
He is trying to gauge her expressions
G-nahi nahi this is too expensive. I can’t keep this
She shuts the box and gives it back to Maan
M-This is for you. This is not even that expensive. Also, wedding mein pehnogi toh acha lagega. It will salvage me from looking at your sucky style!
G- I said no. Just put it back
M-Fine! Agar tum ye nahi rakhogi toh main bhi tumhari car mein nahi jaunga
Khub saare argument ke baad Geet maan gai ye sochke ki abhi ke liye rakh leti hoon, wedding ke baad will give it back to him or will stuff it in his luggage. And that she won't wear it. Too costly to wear... she wouldn't feel comfortable
Toh Geet necklace ka slim sa dabba purse mein rakh leti hai
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Geet starts driving
Rastaa lamba tha and Geet’s driving wasn’t great in highway during night
Maan offered to drive for a while so she could rest
Drive karte karte andheri sunsaan raaste pe kaafi time ho jaata hai
Maan is wondering ki kahin raasta toh nahi gumm gaye?
Ye Piyush ne bhi kiss jungle mein shaadi karni hai! Kanjoos saala!
Tabhi achanak raaste ke beechon beech kuch log aa jaate hain
Maan stops the car with a loud screech
Geet gets up with a start
The men pounce at the car like hyenas
Wo gunde unhe gaadi se nikalne ko kehte hain
Gunde- Niklo gaadi se
They both get down
Gunde-Arre ladki toh badi mast hai
Dono ko gaadi se nikaal ke dickey ke paas khada karte hain
Gunde-Zyaada hoshiyaari dikhai toh kaat ke rakh denge, pata bhi nahi chalega
G- Kya chahiye? Jaane do humein!
Gunde-Kya chahie…bata dein?
They make some vulgar comments about Geet too...ki ye karenge wo karenge
Geet steps back and collides with the dickey
Thoda commotion mein mauka padta hai
Maan takes out his gun and points towards the goons
But the goons are looking at some other direction, petrified and freezed with fear
Maan looks at the direction the goons are looking at
He is surprised to see, the goons staring at Geet with unadulterated fright instead of him
Maan realizes that Geet is holding a chainsaw in her hand
She pulls the lever to start it in full force with a smile on her lips
Maan thinks other gals keep pepper spray in their bags for safety she keeps a chainsaw in her dickey?
She walks ahead so that her back touches Maan’s
They are standing back to back with gun & saw in their hands with a gleeful wicked smile
Ab gunde toh bhaag gaye sochke ki kya psycho couple hai
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