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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 9)

Winner: UmaDevi97,Taahir004

Runnerups: Coderlady

Special Mention MariumChoudhary

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-ups 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32


Also special thanks to readers for pleasantly surprising me with reading and commenting on the story even without a PM. I know I got late PMing. Big hug to you all🤗

Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 10

Maan sits and Geet removes the top in style

Maan nods with appreciative gaze

She starts the car

M- Wait wait, I have something for you

Geet looks at him with surprise

He gives her a box

She opens the box to find an expensive diamond necklace

G- Yeh??

She looks at Maan surprised

He is trying to gauge her expressions

G-nahi nahi this is too expensive. I can’t keep this

She shuts the box and gives it back to Maan

M-This is for you. This is not even that expensive. Also, wedding mein pehnogi toh acha lagega. It will salvage me from looking at your sucky style!

G- I said no. Just put it back

M-Fine! Agar tum ye nahi rakhogi toh main bhi tumhari car mein nahi jaunga

Khub saare argument ke baad Geet maan gai ye sochke ki abhi ke liye rakh leti hoon, wedding ke baad will give it back to him or will stuff it in his luggage. And that she won't wear it. Too costly to wear... she wouldn't feel comfortable

Toh Geet necklace ka slim sa dabba purse mein rakh leti hai

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Geet starts driving


Rastaa lamba tha and Geet’s driving wasn’t great in highway during night

Maan offered to drive for a while so she could rest

Drive karte karte andheri sunsaan raaste pe kaafi time ho jaata hai

Maan is wondering ki kahin raasta toh nahi gumm gaye?

Ye Piyush ne bhi kiss jungle mein shaadi karni hai! Kanjoos saala!

Tabhi achanak raaste ke beechon beech kuch log aa jaate hain

Maan stops the car with a loud screech

Geet gets up with a start

The men pounce at the car like hyenas

Wo gunde unhe gaadi se nikalne ko kehte hain

Gunde- Niklo gaadi se

They both get down

Gunde-Arre ladki toh badi mast hai

Dono ko gaadi se nikaal ke dickey ke paas khada karte hain

Gunde-Zyaada hoshiyaari dikhai toh kaat ke rakh denge, pata bhi nahi chalega

G- Kya chahiye? Jaane do humein!

Gunde-Kya chahie…bata dein?

They make some vulgar comments about Geet too...ki ye karenge wo karenge

Geet steps back and collides with the dickey

Thoda commotion mein mauka padta hai

Maan takes out his gun and points towards the goons

But the goons are looking at some other direction, petrified and freezed with fear

Maan looks at the direction the goons are looking at

He is surprised to see, the goons staring at Geet with unadulterated fright instead of him

Maan realizes that Geet is holding a chainsaw in her hand

She pulls the lever to start it in full force with a smile on her lips

Maan thinks other gals keep pepper spray in their bags for safety she keeps a chainsaw in her dickey?

She walks ahead so that her back touches Maan’s

They are standing back to back with gun & saw in their hands with a gleeful wicked smile

Ab gunde toh bhaag gaye sochke ki kya psycho couple hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Ye Geet tu kamaal hai 😳Bechare Gunde 😆😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice part 🙂, maan ko geet ke naye naye roop dekhne ko milte hai ,geet is different from other girls . waiting for next part 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice one.Different couples gundas also frighten to face this couples.hillarious one.

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Hilarious. Chain saw. Really !!! What is she. Maan better be careful of her haha

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Fabulous & Marvelous update

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hi Merry Christmas....

Congrats to all the winners

thanks for the pm


Part 10

Incredible update.... eloquently written

as expected Geet refuses to accept the gift

of cos Maan is stubborn....

well she decides to accept and then return it to him

at least she let Maan drive!

Gosh some goons stop them

Omg they underestimate Maan and Geet

he had a gun and she a chainsaw

ha ha Geet is dangerous

not surprised the goons ran away lol

well this couple are defn pyscho and perfect for each other

I guess Piyush will be shocked seeing Geet


update soon and take care

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonderful update dear

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 9

Thanks for the award !!

Wonderful update !! 👍🏼

Liked how maan came back to help his damsel in distress

Uh ho geet wants to go to piyush’s wedding !!!! 🤔

But that was part of maan’s revenge plan

Now maan is stuck he cannot say no but his guilt compels him to buy a diamond necklace 😲 ........ that is an expensive present for his guilty conscience ........ I don’t think geet will accept it

Wow geet has a convertible...,,,, super cool 😎

So geet is off to the wedding with maan in her nice wheels

Thank you for the pm & update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats to the winners !! 👏

Part 10

Omg what a superb part !!!! 👏👏

I didn’t even imagine this would be a possibility 😆

Geet as predicted wouldn’t accept the necklace

But maan’s little tantrum forced her to accept it temporarily

I was initially scared with the gunde

But I had faith in our muscle man to save his lady

But this lady doesn’t need saving 😆

Instead the men need to be saved from our crazy gutsy gal 🤣🤣🤣

Loved the turn of events 😃

Thank you so much for pm & update !!

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