|| PreRish SS: Edge Of Thorns || BANNER. - Page 7

Originally posted by: pharm555

Thank you for the quick update. The background for RB is intriguing and it was interesting to read about the sacrifices he made for family which is so much in tune with RB's character. RB is definitely curious about Prerna from his reaction after speaking to her on the phone and when he saw her well, lightning as they say does not strike twice. I am so excited for the next update which will be their first meeting and am sure sparks will fly. I am so hooked on this tale, there is constant underlying angst which makes it so addictive…Keep writing Ritu.

Thank you so so so much for this lovely long comment .

I love it when you guys appreciate me.

Give me enough comments and i'll update as soon as i can as i have the update almost ready :)

Okay Ritzy,🤗

I finally had the time to read both chapters at a go. Thanks for the PM.

I am a sucker for A/Us. This is really wonderful writing. I am intrigued and hooked. I like that you have given us enough background for the characters that we are invested in them but there is still a mystery to them. 👏

I can not wait for their first conversation.

Keep up the great work 👍

Love,

Blues

FABULOUS,WONDERFULLY WRITTEN....👏LOVED IT......❤️

RB backstory is interesting....Eagerly waiting for the suspence to unfold and how the sparks fly between them.....Keep up the great work👍🏼

Lover of thriller stories.. SHAHINA☺️

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Okay Ritzy,🤗

I finally had the time to read both chapters at a go. Thanks for the PM.

I am a sucker for A/Us. This is really wonderful writing. I am intrigued and hooked. I like that you have given us enough background for the characters that we are invested in them but there is still a mystery to them. 👏

I can not wait for their first conversation.

Keep up the great work 👍

Love,

Blues

Thank you so so so so much Blues.

I like to build my characters before jumping to the story directly.

Would update soon

Originally posted by: shahijazz

FABULOUS,WONDERFULLY WRITTEN....👏LOVED IT......❤️

RB backstory is interesting....Eagerly waiting for the suspence to unfold and how the sparks fly between them.....Keep up the great work👍🏼

Lover of thriller stories.. SHAHINA☺️

The next few updates are going to be really lovely i promise.

thank you so much <3

Hiii!

I feel like I know you better alread, as I comment, thanks to your matter of fact PMs. I told you, I'd read the story, as and when I can and I am done reading both updates. Before I comment on the story, I'll pen down some things -

1. I love your style of being an FF writer, PMs communicating what's necessary without the excessive pleading to read, I like that in writers. I used to write miserably before, and always wanted to achieve that kind of author's behaviour.

2. However, I don't understand how you can write a story without shipping them. But you write well, so no qualms. Just surprised.

Coming to the story:

1. Your writing style is amazing, English flawless and simple, descriptions vivid enough to engage an unimaginative reader's mind but not too ostentatious for us to lose track.

2. One more thing I LOVED, this is NOT in sync with the current story line. I love reading AU stories if the characterisations of the characters are in sync. I always wanted like a teacher student love story between PreRish, sadly no one's writing it. 😆 From QH Forum, There was an unfinished story called The Masks That People Wear. I loved it, so I guess still trying to find a closure to that. Idk if you will write it, but if you do something like that for PreRish, I'd be the first to read!

2. Coming to this story, as soon as I started, it reminded me of Noe123's story The Sun Has Set on AsYa, again not completed. But idk, even in that, the girl's husband goes missing and Asad was the cop, and funnily enough her husband had actually looked like Asad. Anyway, yours is very different but kind of similar. Even that was set in some scenic location.

3. Thirdly. What's RB's age? I can't and don't want to imagine him in his 20s or 30s, the 44 year old RB has grown on me.

4. Update - Intriguing, I loved how you have illustrated the romance, for once it seems real and not thrust upon, like how it's happening on the show, he's noticing her for her beauty, there are those little things of heart fluttering and some sort of romance to it. Lovely.

5. P's past is scarred, but I am looking forward to their interaction like SO much without feeling overpowered by Rishabh's powerful characterisation or Prerna's lack thereof.

This was just the character base right, so from your next updates, I hope to give detailed comments on the update itself!

I am Naj, btw. I still don't know your name? And, you still haven't given your QH index link.

Loads of love!

See you soon!

Beautiful update 👏

Loved Rishabh's characterisation 👏

The past story was very emotional 😭

This is Rishabh's father's unfinished case

The starting of the love story is beautiful

Waiting for next

So far I'm loving it😉

Originally posted by: najma123

Hiii!

I feel like I know you better alread, as I comment, thanks to your matter of fact PMs. I told you, I'd read the story, as and when I can and I am done reading both updates. Before I comment on the story, I'll pen down some things -

1. I love your style of being an FF writer, PMs communicating what's necessary without the excessive pleading to read, I like that in writers. I used to write miserably before, and always wanted to achieve that kind of author's behaviour.

2. However, I don't understand how you can write a story without shipping them. But you write well, so no qualms. Just surprised.

Coming to the story:

1. Your writing style is amazing, English flawless and simple, descriptions vivid enough to engage an unimaginative reader's mind but not too ostentatious for us to lose track.

2. One more thing I LOVED, this is NOT in sync with the current story line. I love reading AU stories if the characterisations of the characters are in sync. I always wanted like a teacher student love story between PreRish, sadly no one's writing it. 😆 From QH Forum, There was an unfinished story called The Masks That People Wear. I loved it, so I guess still trying to find a closure to that. Idk if you will write it, but if you do something like that for PreRish, I'd be the first to read!

2. Coming to this story, as soon as I started, it reminded me of Noe123's story The Sun Has Set on AsYa, again not completed. But idk, even in that, the girl's husband goes missing and Asad was the cop, and funnily enough her husband had actually looked like Asad. Anyway, yours is very different but kind of similar. Even that was set in some scenic location.

3. Thirdly. What's RB's age? I can't and don't want to imagine him in his 20s or 30s, the 44 year old RB has grown on me.

4. Update - Intriguing, I loved how you have illustrated the romance, for once it seems real and not thrust upon, like how it's happening on the show, he's noticing her for her beauty, there are those little things of heart fluttering and some sort of romance to it. Lovely.

5. P's past is scarred, but I am looking forward to their interaction like SO much without feeling overpowered by Rishabh's powerful characterisation or Prerna's lack thereof.

This was just the character base right, so from your next updates, I hope to give detailed comments on the update itself!

I am Naj, btw. I still don't know your name? And, you still haven't given your QH index link.

Loads of love!

See you soon!

First of all thank you so much for this lovely lovely comment. It blew my heart away. Seriously.

To answer your question about how can I write without shipping them is, that I am not a regular to the show. Hence, I don't connect with any of the couples of that level, mostly my story is my inspiration which I use to go ahead and write something worth reading. Thank you.

I believe a reader is engaged into your story with the very first line that comes in front of his or her eyes if that is good rest is bound to be good. That's why I start off with quotes relating to the updates. THE MASKS THAT PEOPLE WEAR was a teacher / student thing with a whole lot of mystery to it, I loved it. SUN HAS SET By Noe123 is one of those stories that I really really wish would have never been gone undone. I've read it this one's completely different as far as I know. :)

Rishabh's age wasn't something I pondered on but it could be 30ish or so. You can imagine on your own though.

The next few updates are going to be building on the liking of Prerna in Rishabh's heart and knowing more about the characters and the missing person of course.

So wait up and it'll be as soon as I get enough pages of comments I'll update.

(13 or so pg I believe.) :P

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update 👏

Loved Rishabh's characterisation 👏

The past story was very emotional 😭

This is Rishabh's father's unfinished case

The starting of the love story is beautiful

Waiting for next

Thank you so much for appreciating me

It would be as soon as pg 13 arrives :)