Let's pen down :: Kalma scenes 💕💝💕

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys, let's play a series of scenes ( plz participate)

Kalyani was saved by malhar but she slipped in a state where she can't move and have a temporary paralyse. She just got a bed rest. She can listen, see, feel but can't speak.

Hey guys plz wrote down some situations where he feels helpless, cried, importance of her in his life, being strong to help her, feeding her, brushing her, helping her to change her clothes but totally being in his limits, Kalyani gives permission him to touch her with her eyes, slowly slowly she gets recover but just able to speak and move a bit, malhar help her in her periods , Kalyani not feeling helpless but a lucky girl, their confession and end of her paralysed conditions .

Guys let's do this for next two days.

Let's start, guys plz batao na are you in for it.

Index

Part 1 :: Below by Neera

Part 2 :: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151052694?tid=5109463

By Pyaar 2012 ( Titli)

Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151054313?tid=5109463

By Vermilion ( Neera)

Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151054849?tid=5109463

By Pyaar 2012 ( Titli)

Part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151058076?tid=5109463

By Bacillusbadius ( bhagya)

Part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151063447?tid=5109463

By bb14 ( Savira)

Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151063749?tid=5109463

By Bacillusbadius ( Bhagya)

( Note :: This Part is in continuation of part 5 that was written by her only)

Part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151064088?tid=5109463

By Vermilion ( Neera)

Edited by Vermilion - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Guys, let's play a series of scenes ( plz participate)

Kalyani was saved by malhar but she slipped in a state where she can't move and have a temporary paralyse. She just got a bed rest. She can listen, see, feel but can't speak.

Hey guys plz wrote down some situations where he feels helpless, cried, importance of her in his life, being strong to help her, feeding her, brushing her, helping her to change her clothes but totally being in his limits, Kalyani gives permission him to touch her with her eyes, slowly slowly she gets recover but just able to speak and move a bit, malhar help her in her periods , Kalyani not feeling helpless but a lucky girl, their confession and end of her paralysed conditions .

Guys let's do this for next two days.

Let's start, guys plz batao na are you in for it.

Mujhe vaise bhi do ff likhna hai ...i will soon give teaser and the 6 th chapter of nighaien. Yeh sochsamaj k likhti hun !

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1

Kalyani was saved , but due to pressure of water and extreme adrenalin rush due to shark, she gets herself in a paralysed conditions .

She can't move and speak but her senses are OK .

When Kalyani was taken back to AN in ambulance , She was still lying on stature . As malhar already told anu about her accident she knows that her life is on the verge of being end. When she saw her only princess lying still, she cant control her mother heart. She thought that her jaan has lost her lives to save a hundreds of people. But her heart also hoping that she will be fine.

She went near to her and start crying.

Anu :::: Kalyani, Kalyani utho. Aise kyun Chupchap leti hooi ho. Tum apni baat batao na, Pillu ke bare Mai bolo na, malhar ke bare me bolo na, apni aai ko cute nahi bologi, mere sath selfie nahi logi, meri sarthak ji ke sath shadi nahi karwaogi. Bolo Kalyani ( tears are still flowing and she was loosing her words and balance)

Anu :::: Utho na.

She out of fear of loosing her daughter get faint. Aao sahib with the help of Pallavi take her to her room.

Malhar was witnessing how a mother is loosing herself. He was literally in shock since he get to know about Kalyani accident. He literally feels proud on her for being tooooooo good and helping even sampada who once tries to ruin their life. She literally proved that she is the wife of acp malhar rane. A police man who his statue of patriotism and her wife is the one who is admirer of his patriotism and get so much lost in patriotism of country that she considered her life nothing as compared to lives of hundreds of people.

She was the one who is ready to risk her life for well being of other life. She do it again. Each time when she do something like this she forget how much pain she is giving to the ones which live only for her. They are malhar, Anupriya, Pillu. May be malhar never expressed his love for him but it is obvious that he cares for her madly. And how can she do this.

Malhar was hell angry on her also. Why, this question is just simple as that. Bcoz Kalyani rane is the life of malhar rane and he is living his life just to see her in front of his eyes always. How can she risk her life. By doing this she gonna made him vision blind as his eyes opens just to see her happy.

He went to the doctor and..

Malhar :::: Kalyani theek toh hai na. I know ki she is fine, par woh unconscious kyon hai.

Doctor tells him all the problems she is facing. He just get a hope that she is living. His life is living. His eyes are living. His soul is living. His body is living.

He takes her to his bedroom. Doctor gave him some medications. Doctor also ask him to hired a nurse but he refused. He said "" Kalyani meri patni hai , aaj tak Usne ek patni hone ke sare kaam kiya hai. Ab meri Bari hai. Mai apni patni ka khayal rakh sakta hoo)"".

He was angry on her but he still promised himself that he will teach her a lesson about how it felt when we lost something precious in our life, but now he have to take care of her wife. He wants to Kalyani.

And.......

Now it's your turn.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Mujhe vaise bhi do ff likhna hai ...i will soon give teaser and the 6 th chapter of nighaien. Yeh sochsamaj k likhti hun !

Hey titli just read the part 1 which I posted below your post and continue it. Just start writing it and you will get involved in it. And it doesn't matter how long it would be. Just we have to prepare this scenes with help of all forum members.

Uske Aage ka thoda likh do na

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ok !likhungi toh zaroor !

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Woh 18 march epi ke din how he scolded kallu about being a jagmata always risking her life...not thinking about herself and her family's emotions towards her...but like a strict teacher...but ab mallu should confront kallu stating in a clear sentence that agar aaj time kuch ho jaata toh socha hai Mai kaise ji paaunga tumhare bagair!! Tum Nahi toh Mai b Nahi...tum mere Dil ki dhadkan ho...I can't live without u...Tumne mje jeene ki wajah di...use b tum hi chenna chaahti ho..samajhti kya ho tum Apne aap ko?? Ainda se aisa kiya na toh Mai tumse Kabhi baat Nahi karunga...he should say all this in one go..yelling like a possessive hubby ❤❤ stating tum Nahi samjhogi Mai kya feel karra hu!!
Edited by thr_830 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kya Likha hai dear...loved it❤❤ Ek os Likha do plz on the basis of mon's epi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: thr_830

Kya Likha hai dear...loved it❤❤Ek os Likha do plz on the basis of mon's epi

Sorry Sach bolu Monday se I have paper toh not possible, par pakka try to post in continuation of this.

Good night.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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hum continue karte hai mein zaroor likhungi ! i liked ur idea aur pura khatam hone ke bad alag se ek nam de kar post karenge FORUM pe

Edited by pyaar2012 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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@Vermilion

I love your start so I am really eager to read your version. So in addition to asking for forum members to continue the story, please can you maybe also write your version of this as a full fledged FF. That'd be amazing. So we can get many versions of the ff. Till weekend is over it'd be awesome to read a the kalma FF . Please write your continuation also....I can't wait to read it!

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