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Wow this is going great . Fabulous job titi di bhagu neera and savira. Continue and keep writing .
Sahi hai....going great. Eagerly waiting for more updates. Jaldi next part bhi likhiye!
It'd also be great to read the full versions of all your takes in addition to this mix n match FF! So that way we can get this FF plus like 4-5 more.
I want to continue from my part
Anupriya goes to college
Malhar goes to Police station
Sampada stays in Kalyani's room and asks her to do exercises as per instructions. Kalyani performs them very well.
That bai gives lunch to Kalyani, Sampada is taking good care of Moksh. Kalyani eats food but is feeling very bored. She was missing Malhar ji because pichle 5-6 din se usse unki aadat pad chuki hoti hai. Wahi usse lunch khilate the. In mind she says "Kalyani tujhe ho kya gaya hai? Pagal ho tum. Abhi Malhar ji iss waqt police station mein hi honge na. Miss mat kar unhe, chupchap khale. Lekin nahi yaar dil pe control hi nahi ho raha hai..Unka hi chehra samne aa raha hai. Imagine ho raha hai ki wo kitne pyaar se khila rahe hai. Uff Kalyani ab shant baitho". She somehow manages to divert her mind.
Here, in police station Malhar's state is also not good. He is missing Kalyani. He is constantly worried for her. But he somehow manages to divert his thoughts due to work. In lunch break he calls at home and Sampada says everything is fine, don't worry. He is little bit relaxed. While eating he misses her a lot and finishes lunch hurriedly.
In college Anupriya is missing Kalyani..But she pays attention in class and takes notes. Palak and other friends also misses Kalyani and with teacher's permission records all the lectures well.
Sampada gives her medicines and Kalyani sleeps. Moksh also sleeps with Kalyani in cradle. Sampada is there to look after both of them.
In sleep Kalyani gets dream like Malhar is sitting on white horse. She is wearing dress like princess. He comes near her and says I love you Kalyani. Will you marry me again! She gets shy and nods yes. Kalyani wakes up and thinks phir se Kalyani, phir se..Uff stupidity ki sari hadh paar ki tune. Ye kya filmy style, fairytale style sapne dekhti hai tu. And wait tune aisa sapna dekha ki Malhar ji tujhe propose kar rahe hai. Uff, pagli hai tu. Aisa reality se koso dur sapna dekh liya. Ye sab chod aur thik hone ke khwab dekh jara. She brushes off her thoughts.
In evening, Anupriya comes home. She hugs Kalyani and says beta tujhe kitna miss kiya. Jaldi se thik ho ja aur mujhe join kar college mein. Accha tere liye ek surprise hai. Palak and gang comes there. They hug her and says e Kallu tujhe kitna miss kiya yaar. Ab jalddi se jaldi thik ho ja and aa college mein. Teri chirpy voice ko, tere khurafati ideas ko and tere sahi jawabon ko bahut miss kar rahe hai hum sab. Humari classroom tumhara intezar kar rahi hai. She conveys I also miss you through her eyes.
Malhar comes home just then. Palak gives recordings of lectures to him. He says thank you to them.
He freshens up and goes to see Kalyani. Kalyani is so happy to see his face after long time. She blushes little bit. Malhar asks how are you Kalyani? Pata hai tumhein bahut miss kiya. Kalyani smiles and gets happy that he also misses her.
He then asks her to do evening exercises. Sampada says maine Moksh aur Kalyani ka khayal rakha. She is improving aur ye jab soyi thi tab pata nahi kyu lekin blush kar rahi thi. Malhar says "ha ha thik hai. Thanks. Tum jao abhi"
Malhar is surprised and says ab ye Kalyani kyu blush kar rahi thi. Khair chodo.
He then plays recordings of lectures for Kalyani and explains her. He then copies notes from Mai's notebooks in Kalyani's notebooks. Kalyani is touches by his gesture. She feels that she is blessed to have husband like Malhar ji.
After study, Malhar takes Moksh and sits with Kalyani. He plays with him and Kalyani smiles and is happy.
He then brings dinner for her, feeds her and Moksh and eats.
They sleep peacefully.
Wow bhagu yaar please see my post in at 84 page and reply ki tumhare vahan hotha he Kya ye
Sampada positive hogayi hai is FF main toh! Aajkal show main bhi grayzone hai. As long as it's like bomb threat, terrorist she's normal and smart, helpful. But then rest of the time she's cruel and negative
Part 8
This has been two weeks since Kalyani was paralysed . Her conditions was more better now. Doctor recommended malhar to be with her as with him she recovers quickly. Malhar was doing all things he can do to support her Kalyani. He help her to do all the basic needs work.
In these two weeks, their dependence on each other increases infinitely. Kalyani no more feels helpless with malhar. She feels more empowered than anyone with him. She loves to be pampered by him. She can see a perfect companion in him, who can sail away their ship perfectly in the hustle of world . He loves the moments when he feed him, touch her. May be she feels a more lucky in her paralysed conditions than normal ones.
Malhar has also become a more sensitive and mature guy in their relationship. He now knows what's are perks of being in a relationship. Even the responsibility to take care of a fully paralysed wife is a satisfaction for him now. He can feel the true love or rather I should say divine love in his soul for Kalyani.
Kalyani, now can speak properly and move her legs and arms partially . She can't sit or stand as her balance is not that good now. She needs a support.
It was beautiful morning of Monday, malhar decided to go for a long jog to a nearby garden as he was unable to exercise due to all drama in his life from past days.
It was 4.30 in morning, he wore a ganji and track pants.
He was just about to go for jog when Kalyani wake up.
Kalyani :::: Malhar ji suno
Malhar :::: Ha Kalyani bolo, mai sirf ek ghante ke liye bahar jog karne ja raha hoo. Tum so Jana.
Kalyani :::: Malhar ji, mai Kitne Dino se ghar par hi hoo, Mujhe bor ho raha hai. Aur abhi neend bhi nahi aaegi, din bhar rest karti hoo. Plz Mujhe bhi le Chalo na.
Malhar :::: Kalyani Vo toh theek hai, par tumhari wheel chair kal repair hone gayi thi, subai 10 baje around hi aaegi.
Kalyani has a little cute idea in her mind to tease malhar .
Kalyani :::: Vaise malhar ji kya aap Mujhe utha sakte hai godi mai. I am sure you can't. Itne din apne koi workout hi nahi kiya.
Malhar :::: Oh you are so sure na, lets see. Tumhe bahar bhi Jana hai na. Mai le jata hoo par. Par koi drama nahi.
On hearing, going outside she smiles and get happy.
Malhar picks her in bridal style and start going outside.
She thought may be he will take her in garden by driving in Jeep .
But Malhar has different plants his mind , he keeps walking on the Road where many people are also jogging.
Kalyani was still confused why he walking on the road by lifting her in his lap .
Kalyani was also blushing as many people are watching her in a surprised gaze .
Kalyani :::: Malhar ji aap mujhe Aise Godi
main Utha Kar Lekar Kyun ja rahe ho.
Malhar :::: Are Kalyani tumhe hi toh Janna tha na Mai tumhe utha sakta hoo ya nahi. Aur bahar bhi toh Aana tumhe hi toh tha.
Kalyani understands that the plan she made to tease Malhar was backfired on her and now he was going to take her in his lap up to the the garden and he will not hear any excuse of her so she better remain quiet.
Malhar :::: Kalyani don't worry Mai tumhe nahi giraoonga. Aur meri weight lifting bhi Ho rahi hai.
Malhar smile ' s at looking at blushing Kalyani. Kalyani also laughs.
By reaching garden he laid down Kalyani on a bench. And start jogging, push ups, pull ups, and other exercises.
Kalyani was watching her husband fascinatingly. He was definitely looking a macho man.
When malhar feels a little tired he sat down beside Kalyani, and Kalyani laid down on chair such that her head is in his lap.
Kalyani and malhar both looks into each other eyes comfortably for long time. Malhar placed his hand on his forehead.
Malhar :::: Kalyani suno tumhe ek baat bolu.
Kalyani :::: Boliye malhar ji
Malhar :::: Kalyani mere dil me yeh baat bahut Dino se hai. Agar us din tumhe kuch ho jaata toh socha hai Mai kaise ji paata tumhare bagair!! Tum Nahi toh Mai b Nahi...tum mere Dil ki dhadkan ho...I can't live without u...Tumne mje jeene ki wajah di...use b tum hi chenna chaahti ho..samajhti kya ho tum Apne aap ko?? Ainda se aisa kiya na toh Mai tumse Kabhi baat Nahi karunga .
Malhar said all this in one go.
Kalyani has tears in her eyes. Malhar also has tears in his eyes. She lift her hand slowly to wipe his tears and simultaneously he also forward his hand to wipe her tears. They both wipe each other tears.
Kalyani :::: Malhar ji , I am sorry Maine apko itna hurt kiya. Mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki kab se main apko dard de rahi hoo. Shayad Itni baar Maine apni jaan jokhim me Dali hai isliye mai paralysed Ho gayi hoo. Sorry malhar ji Aage kabhi aisa nahi karoongi.
Malhar :::: Kalyani promise na, ab meri jaan ko kabhi jokhim mai nahi dalogi.
( He has tears in his eyes and smile on his lips)
Kalyani :::: Pinky promise malhar ji
( She also tears in her eyes and smile on her lips)
He kisses on her forehead. She also kisses on her cheeks as he bent forward.
Kalyani :::: Malhar ji suno main na yeh kehna chahti thi Itne Dino se ki mai bhi na apki jaise exercise Karna chahati hoo. Vaise black belt hoo Mai par bas aap jaise gundo ko pitte ( beat) hai na vaise mai bhi pitoongi.
Malhar :::: Chal hath Pagli, vaise hi Itni dare devil hai upar se meri ab acp ki post bhi leni hai.
( He was smiling)
Kalyani :::: Plz plz malhar ji, pakka daring nahi karongi. Sirf health ke liye karoongi.
Malhar :::: Theek hai meri Pagli, tu theek ho jayegi na toh hum dono gym join Kar lenge.
Kalyani :::: Thank you malhar ji.
Both are having good talks, all people watching them also admiring them as a perfect couple.
Malhar calls pawar to drop them back to home as he was very tired to lift Kalyani again.
Thank you all for writing parts in your version. It's very exciting. When we merge all these part it will be a good ss.
Keep writing all girls.
Love you, tell me how this part is. Yeh toh os jitna lamba ho gaya hai. 🤣.
## Kalma magic.
Awesome it was . Bohot sahi ja rahe ho bandhu log ! This is awesome !
Wow bhaggu nice.... sab k write ups brilliant hai....
Originally posted by: pyaar2012
Wow bhaggu nice.... sab k write ups brilliant hai....
thanks Titli di
ab next part mein Kallu puri tarah se thik ho jaaye and usse bravery award mile
she goes to college and discusses with friends about her dreams and feelings
friends giving her advise
and then slowly she realises love ye chalega kya?
Hey guys I am here hope I will be able to justice with this part
Part 6
Sampda is taking care of moksh with the help of kalyani .kalyani was improving day by day with the help of anu and Malhar .now a days she even started walking in room.Malhar was constantly doing everything for her be it brushing her hairs ,helps her in changing dresses , helps her in changing pads and under wears .the most torture part was for him giving her bath .he feels current in his body.kalyani was also feeling the same feeling which Malhar was facing .in morning as uaual Kalyani wants to take bath and anu was in college .malhar was feeling nervous with the thought of giving her bath and touching her bare private parts. Malhar says kalyani ma ankhein to band kar lon ga likin without touch ka ma bath nhi den paonga ?? Kalyani replies with writing on pad you can touch me malhar ji I trust you don't worry ap ka haq hai mujhe pa .malhar silently obeys her commands.he removes her clothes and start giving her bath .Kalyani was blushing like a bride .she feels current in her body .malhar immediately finish bathing her and wrapped a towel around her body .Kalyani goes closer to him and removes the patti from his eyes.he opens his eyes and was lost in her beauty. she was looking gorgeous as usual plus hot at same time.he looses his balance and slip.both kalma fall on bed with each other.malhar kiss on her forehead and looks at her lips .he feels urge to touch her rosy lips .she understand his desires.their was fire in his eyes .she simply place her lips on his .he feels heat inside his body .he holds her and place his lips on her giving a passionate kiss to her .their tounges explore each others mouth moving in rythem.he seals his deal of with kiss .she was all red and hides her self in his arms. He smiles and says pagli itna bhi mat sharmao sirf kiss hi kiya kuch aur nhi .Kalyani shows fake anger and hit her arms on his chest .Malhar says in her bohat khoobsurat lag rhi ho is towel ma Kalyani aur sharmate hoe aur achi lagti ho ma to bus os din ka wait kar RHA hon jab tum theek ho jao GI aur ma phir tume apna bana lon ga hmesha ka liye I want to make love to you Kalyani rane .she feels shy and hugs him by hiding her body .he tightly held her in his arms protecting her from the whole world.
This is it don't know how it is.I try my level best ka neera and titli jaise hi likhon kyun ka start unhone na kiya tha Jo bohat amazing tha. Do tell me how it was ??
You are awesome ! Hum sab ka style alag hai...U are a very good writer .And the best part is u write regularly . Thats an amazing thing for us and it boosts us so much to write more !