Prerish Os ~Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai ~ [Teaser]

Hi guys,

After watching Mr Rishab Bajaj entry I have started KZK and really loved Prerish track so much . So i have written OS . It is regarding Monsoon Feelings . This is my Second attempt at writing a story, so i have so many mistakes n error. so please forgive me for that . At first i have given a Teaser of os. . Please tell me if I should continue or not. All comments , constructive criticism and reviews are most welcome.

And lastly one request please don't be silent readers . Give your Response and suggestions to improve myself . Thanks!

With Regards,

Opsora

Teaser

Prerna could not control herself.She just went out from the car , stood on middle of the road and filled her face with the rain droplets. She closed down her eyes and spread her hands from two sides...A large smile was on her pearly lips. Her face was full of satisfaction of joy. She was completely lost on the rain........

In the mean Time Mr Bajaj Back from Car station . but prerna as much as sunked in rain she could not notice when MR bajaj stood out behind her and was continuously watching her craziness without blinking his Eyes. .

Suddenly a Truck was coming from the opposite side of the road.

"Prerna" - Mr Bajaj Screamed badly and started Running in the rain .

Nice one..continue soon

Tease mat Karo aise😭

I love your writing.

Please update soon.

Originally posted by: apoorva1999

Nice one..continue soon

yah I will continue so soon. Thx dear

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Tease mat Karo aise😭

aj toh dil KO 😆tarsayungi...

Originally posted by: awesome

I love your writing.

Please update soon.

Thank you so much dear...yah will update so soon

awsm strt

Do cont asap

Wow very nice teaser

Now waiting for the story to start and thank you for pmdear