Behir SS : Beyhadh.PART 6 PAGE 7

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Chapter no 1:
Bela was getting dressed up for her new business party. She looked beautiful just as if she is a fairly amazing. She went down and attended the party. Everybody was shattered to see this ultimate piece of beauty. Bela was unaffected by everyone's views.

"Good evening everyone...as all of us know about the success of our new business this party is being held. Today, I am very happy...beyhadhly happy!! And I want that we all celebrate this happiness" announced the pretty girl,Bela.

Everybody started to do couple dance. Bela also wanted to dance, she looked around and found a young man. She knew him and she had already fell for him. She went near him and asked if he was interested in dancing with her.

Mahir quietly happily replied yes.

They both went to the centre and started to dance.

Ishq shava
Mushq shave
Khusamadebe marhaba

Bela was just lost in his eyes. She had realised that she wanted him.

After the dance,bela was about to confess her feelings to him when Mahir left her alone and hugged a girl.

"Shivli...how are u?" Mahir asked to that girl.

"Mahir...I am okay...how are u? And I say your dance... well enough hunh!"replied Shivli to Mahir.

Bela was left in a dilemma. Sparks of tears were visible in her eyes.

"No no no...u can't do this to me mahir. I love u...u can't go away from me like. I...i have to do something about this girl.."complained bela to herself.

Bela took the mike and announced " my dear guests. Today I want to make some big announcement. I love Mr.Mahir Sehgal. Yes he stole my heart away from me. And I want to ask u Mahir...will...will...will u marry me?". Shivli was shocked. She went two steps back from mahir. Bela came near mahir and hugged him. She whispered in mahir's ears that " I really really really want u mahir. Think mahir think...your mom will be very much happy when she will know that you are going to get married. And u have no option except marrying me". Mahir pushed her away. He replied boldly "stay away from me. I love Shivli not u. I am not your servant. So just stay away. "

Bela got angry and she threw her wine glass.

The end
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 2:
Bela threw her wine glass. Mahir was shocked. Shivli and all got frightened by seeing the reaction of bela. Bela got heartbroken and she left. Bela's mom asked all the guests to stay calm and enjoy. She went near mahir.

"Mahir, my daughter has already got so many shocks after her younger sister's death. She has struggled a lot. Mahir please don't refuse my daughter's hand." Bela's mother requested mahir.

"Your daughter got so many shocks in her past life that doesn't mean I will leave my love and marry her without thinking anything? Listen aunty, I love Shivli...and she is close to me. Your daughter looks like she is psycho. I can't marry a girl who is suffering from mental disorder" angry mahir burst at bela's mother.

Shivli requested mahir not to quarrel. Mahir and Shivli left the party.

At a park,

Mahir was still angry. Shivli was trying to console him.

"Listen mahir , whatever happened there don't take stress about it. And I hated the way u replied at Bela's mother. Mahir I know u don't want to marry her but she has fallen for u. U have to understand her feelings too."

"So what? I will marry her without thinking anything?"

"No mahir, u have to make her understand that u are not happy with her. If she loves u truly then she will hug u mahir and ask u to leave. "

"She just likes me and she feels that she loves me Shivli and nothing else."

"Hmm...let's see what happens next!"

"Hope for the best shivu..."

"When did I said that I am hoping for the bad??"

"But u even did not say that u are hoping the best;)"

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Bela hurts herself by breaking her bangles. Her hands started to bleed. She was getting unconscious and still crying "mahir please don't go...mahir"

The end

I hope I get at least 3 comments 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww
Awesome
But chapter is so short
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's really nice
Different shade of Bela
Mahir is right
Love cannot be forced
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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behir dance is so romantic. shocking that mahir loved shivli.shocking that still bela proposed mahir n forced him to marry her.sad that mahir rejected bela rudely.sad that mahir called bela psycho to her mom.but mahir is right.he can't leave his love n just marry bela.shivli advising mayor to make bela understand softly was nice.waiting to see how bela will react.shocking n sad to see bela injuring herself.please update soon.is this inspired by the show beyhadh?
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Originally posted by: Mahi114

Aww

Awesome
But chapter is so short


Thank u...I will try to update a long chapter soon😉
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Originally posted by: Priya258

It's really nice

Different shade of Bela
Mahir is right
Love cannot be forced
Continue soon


Thank u...
Bela's different shade is my dream 😉😆
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

behir dance is so romantic. shocking that mahir loved shivli.shocking that still bela proposed mahir n forced him to marry her.sad that mahir rejected bela rudely.sad that mahir called bela psycho to her mom.but mahir is right.he can't leave his love n just marry bela.shivli advising mayor to make bela understand softly was nice.waiting to see how bela will react.shocking n sad to see bela injuring herself.please update soon.is this inspired by the show beyhadh?


Yes I have taken a very small part from it...
Ending and Behir's relation wil be different...
A little bit from beyhadh show and a little bit from my imagination 😊...
Thank you
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing amazing update!!!!
Bela is psycho????
No!!!!!
U are breaking my heart dear!!!!
Super...
Update soon

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