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Firstly a big big π€ hug to you for writing this beautiful shot for me even after being so wrapped up in work. Thank you so much Oswald, it means a lot! <3
To begin with, I'll just say what I've said before as well your progress as a writer makes me so so proud. :')
Like, I've seen you grow from an amateur one to the one who puts together words so beautifully. It seems like it was just yesterday I asked you to write something on Zaroon Abeer for my birthday for the very first time and now we're here. π³
Now I'll just say I'm eager for your birthday to make you smile just like you did it for me. :*
Coming to the OS,
The beginning with Zaroon trying to order a whiskey but then he realizes that he's broke and settles with a beer! ππ
And no doubt he would attract a crowd, I mean labels don't make you sexy, your personality does! π
His gloomy thoughts about being broke are adorable. ππ
Personally I loved how he raised the bottle to that girl with a sexy smile and he was even planning to go over but then our seductress enters!
Lemme just say, the dress you chose for Abeer is so so gorgeous and understatingly sexy! *_*
That asymmetrical cut of the dress is gorgeous! β€οΈ
That aankhon aankhon mein conversation, and Zaroon admiring her toned legs was so sexy!
I can imagine the gorgeousness Abeer would've been looking in that dress with a sleek pony, no makeup with just a dash of kohl and red lipstick. *_*
Even Zaroon is no less! What a hotness he looked in his grey linen shirt! *fans myself!*
Abeer checking him out spcly the bit where his strong arms are revealed as the shirt cuffs are rolled up, uff. So HOT!
Their conversation was so sensual hinting at that sexual tension between them.
Him complementing her perfume, asking the meaning of her name while admires her laugh and those rugged hands! Sexy.
Abeer isn't wrong that guy can seduce women with just that laugh of his! π³
Abeer already thinking how his hands would feel on her bare skin, teasing her, touching her. Gadar!
Their conversation about their married life, with Abeer telling him that she's Mrs and Zaroon spurting out his beer. π€£
That ungrateful git had me in splits too! ππ
Even I hate that BDSM shit, and fail to understand why ppl are into it in that very first place?! π‘
The bit where Abeer touches him is so sensual and finally unable to endure it anymore she kisses him on the dance floor.
Even I loved how she complimented his cologne and I'll admit that incredible smelling men are one of my weaknesses. π³
Their kiss was right amount of sizzling and passionate.
He pulls her out of the club while her mind is still fuzzy with the kiss is sensuous. βΊοΈ
Then comes the most anticipated part, I loved how you described the beautiful serene surroundings of the beach and the need throbbing in them both. βοΈ
Their love making was so so so sexy, passionate and sensual!
Like I said, you made me sweat in an AC room! βΊοΈβΊοΈ
How I wish IF had some fire emojis! π
The words used, The feelings written are so so perfect without giving you an eww feeling, give yourself a standing ovation from me! πππ
I'm actually so proud of you being so young yet writing a love making scene like a pro! πβοΈ
Nora Roberts did us both a giant good for being such a continuous inspiration. β€οΈ
My favorite bits had to be, the part where he pleasured her bosoms, pulling down her the zip of her dress! π³
The bit where he pulled away the silk from her leaving her in just a lacy barrier and then dipped down! *FIRE!*
And when Abeer undid the fasteners of his jeans so fast that it amazed him even! βΊοΈ
But the most beautiful, the way she asked him to make love to her and the way Zaroon made her face him to see those aroused emerald eyes. β€οΈ
Loved this to bits!
The aftermath was funny and cute as well with Abeer telling him that it was earth shattering and he said it was all his pleasure, Ofc it is! πππ³
How cute was Zaroon Junaid looking at his beautiful wife through sleepy eyes, yawning and saying that he loves her! Haye! β€οΈ
How adorable is he pulling his wife back to him when Abeer says that she doesn't plans on falling asleep here! ππ
But she gives him a kiss telling him that she needs a shower and wants him in there! Mrs Zaroon is no less! βΊοΈ
The cutely defeated look he gives her, Aww, my heart! ππβ€οΈ
But then the naughty grin, Baby! :* β€οΈ
Abeer telling him not to even think about it for it's her turn! πππ
These two are loveee!
Thank you so so so much for this precious gift!
I love you and will just say, wait for your birthday to get the biggest surprise of your life! β€οΈ
Edited by .Archangel. - 7 years ago
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