Sukor - an innocent Love (Last Part) - Page 11

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Amazing ff yr...want next part...plzz update soon...cant wait now...😳

Thank u dear I will try my best

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Chakor is developing feelings for Suraj😊

Vivan is right about Sukor's relationship, waiting to know the fate of Sukor

Waiting for next

Thank u. Yes it is difficult to discribe it how the fate will be

Nice update

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Nice update

True, Imli is a chudail😆.

Chakor didn't notice what she did when she went into the bathroom, how embarrassing for Suraj.

Chakor was cute acting as a miffed wife.

Sukor have grown attached to each other and can't think of being away from each other.

Vivaan told him the harsh reality, so what will Suraj do now?

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank u yes she is to innocent in this matter. I can tell u a big twist is coming don't know if u will like it but I will stick on my original plan.

Again thank u

Hi sorry Please don't hate me but this is my original story plot I was abit scared to post bcz of ur reactions.

Recap; Sukor r developing feelings for each other but Vivaan tried to explain that this will not work. As both r too different.

Suraj was lost in his thoughts but Chakor was still crying holding Suraj collar. Saying him not to leave her.

Vivaan; See Suraj. He pointed on Chakors behaviour. She has changed to someone barnacle. U can't live with her she ia mentally instable n she will stay like this. U know it Suraj.

Chakor turns to Vivaan. Go away I hate u!!! She was crying even louder. When the door bell rings. Suraj hold Chakor back bcz she was attacking Vivaan.

Suraj; Chakor... hey... hey... hey... relax Chakor I'm here na look at me. I'm not going to leave u. U will stay with me here as long as u want to. Ok.

Chakor was breathing hard but soon Suraj words reached her n was trying to control her breath.

Ajay come with Riya in. Suraj had invited them before as all of them had a day of n it would be great to spend some time together with Chakor. Ajay come with a balloon only for Chakor.

Chakor was hiding her face in his chest. Suraj was holding her tight still lost in Vivaans warning words.

Ajay saw the teary eyes of Chakor. Angry face of Vivaan n the tension face of Suraj. He knew something is wrong.

Riya too felt the awkwardness in the air. She goes to Sukor n took Chakor from there but she refused to go with her she was scared they might take her away from Suraj. But Suraj made her understand that they won't fo that n he won't let it happen.

Riya went into the bedroom with Chakor. They took some new fresh clothes. Suraj n she bought yesterday.



Riya; wow Chakor u look so cute. Chakor was finally smiling. Suraj bought me this. I pick this bcz he said it will look gud on me.. Riya; ya it really does look great on u. Come let's show the others. Chakor pout. No. Riya; Y what happen? Chakor; Vivaan is bad... her eyes become teary again. He wants to separate me from Suraj. Riya; No u r mistaken. Come please u want to show Suraj right. Chakor nod.

Suraj was discussing with Ajay n Vivaan. Vivaan had told Ajay abt rhe developing feeling. Ajay; it can happen I mean she is now living her for 3 months? Vivaan; r u mad Do u even know what u r saying? Ajay; hey she considers me as her brother. N if she has feelings what's that wrong on it. This poor n innocent soul is unknown of the reality. Vivaan; n there is the problem. Y don't u get this. She is abnormal whereas he is having a normal life how can he waste is for her.

Suraj; Bcz I fall for her. Ajay n Vivaan were just looking at him. Ajay; u know what u r saying? Suraj nod. I know it is wrong but just bcz she has this illness it doesn't mean she is not a human that she has no rights to live a happy ya a happy married life?.

Vivaan; bcz she is ur patient. Not just anyone. She is ill. A rape victim. What else do u want to know?. Suraj had turned his face.

Riya n Chakor come out. Suraj wasn't looking at her so she runs to him. Chakor; Suraj... Suraj... she pulls on his shirt. Suraj! Look at me!!!... Su...raj. She starts to cry. She goes to Vivaan hits him. I hate u!!! Go away. My house leave!. Vivaan; Chakor stop. It is not ur house. U r just a guest. As soon as the case is solve we will send u away.

Suraj was numb his tears were rolling down his cheeks he couldn't hold them back anymore.

Riya was shocked. Vivaan! How dare to say something like this. We r not going to send her away. Ajay; too was fumes. If U have a problem that she is staying with Suraj then I will keep her with me. She will be secure. Living at the house of her brother.

Riya; N if u have a problem with that too I will keep her. U got it.

Chakor was lost... When the case is solve we will send h away... This sentence was echoing in his ears unstoppable she closed her ears n shouts loud NO!!!!!

Suraj turns to her. He hold her before she could hit the floor. She was unconscious. The stress n Vivaans words were too much for her.

Suraj picks her in his bedroom. Riya comes in with water. Ajay; please check on her. Suraj n Riya nod...

Riya comes out with a shocked face. Suraj too but he left the house immidiately. Chakor was still unconscious. Vivaan n Ajay were looking at them impatiently. What happen? Is she fine? Does She need something? Where did he went? When will he return? Y aren't u saying anything?!. Riya!!!! Say something!!!.

Riya; SHE IS PREGNANT!

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Sorry to end here.

Please Do Not Copy my Story

interesting update but sad for sukor little

Interesting & Shocking update😲

Originally posted by: Shar456

interesting update but sad for sukor little

If u don't Mind please try to update the next part today as the story is becoming interesting n cannot wait till next week

Pleaseee

Thank u dear. I know itwas a very delayed update. I will try to update sooner

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting & Shocking update😲

Vivan was somewhat rude in his words, Chakor's mind is not stable to understand it😡

Suraj loves her so much😊

Last part was shocking, poor Sukor😭

Waiting for next

Yes Vivaans words r rude but he just wantsto make them to understand the situation. Haan his love is indiscribale n she is just too innocent to understand the whole situation.

Wow amazing update...waiting 4 next...😳