Sukor - an innocent Love (Last Part) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Krupy

I like that you write about sensitive things such as mental disorders and after rape pregnancies.

I must admit that at beginning I wasn't sure how the story will be going and I was a little confused about my opinion on it. But liking it very much.

Also, I read most of your story's on wattpad and I'm liking your way of writing.

Please if you can share more of your storys here, our forum needs more story's and writers.

Thank u dear that is very nice of u. Ya I will try to share anothrr story here too.

intersting update

Hi

Recap; Chakor is pregnant. Suraj will take the responsibility. She no one else than Chakoriya Laal she has a
photographic memory her autism is less strong. She asked for the baby???.

Chakor; baby whom's baby?. She scared n nervously. Suraj hold her tight. Our baby he said with a smile. But Chakor understood she hide her face in Suraj chest to cry.

Suraj hold her tight. She doesn't wanted it but it was too late n Suraj would never take an innocent soul's life. But Chakor too wouldn't have let anything happen to it.

Vivaan was thinking of her situation. Suraj is taking a big responsibility the least he can do is to support them.

Vivaan took a deep breath. Chakor please tell us more abt urself. It is gud to share ur feelings with ur friends n family. We know something had happen ur uncle n aunt r bad but we need to know more. Ajay needs to know more otherwise they will harm other like u. Chakor looked at him. No!.

Suraj hold her. U need to be strong n don't worry I'm always with u!. Chakor looked at him. His feeling n present was giving her strength.

Chakor looked at everyone. She took a deep breath.

Ajay; wait! He stood up n went to Sukor bedroom Chakor was looking pale but Suraj support was enough for her to stay strong. Ajay was back holding a thick quilt. He put it around Chakor.

Ajay; I'm not done yet. All looked at him. Ajay; are yaar she going to tell us a story!. All; So? Ajay; Hot chocolate for my princess n u other do it urself. All looked at him open mouth. Vivaan; coffee!. Riya; me too. She was jealouse seeing the care for Chakor but also happy to see another shape of Ajay. Chakor; Suraj chai less sugar!. Suraj smiled he places the quilt correctly on her.

Ajay returns with the drink for everyone. Chakor was abt to drink but Suraj stopped her. It's hot . Chakor nod with pout.

Ajay; Now u can start with ur story. We will all listen to u without interruption right?. They all nod to give her comfort.

Chakor was sitring close to Suraj holding his hand.

I'm Chakoriya Laal my age is 22. I come from Rampur. I lived with my mom she was my family... Her eyes filled with tears. Suraj hold her hand n closed her in his arms. Both looked at each other n shared n eyelock. Suraj wipes her tears away with his thumb he did it with care n love.

Suraj; Chakor take ur time. Chakor nod. She sniffs once she looked at him only.

My papa died when I was a baby. Mom n me were alone. Again a sadness comes over her.

Suraj hold her cheek. It's ok Chakor..

When I was 5 we moved to my uncle aunty first they were nice but soon they changed. Chakor got angry.

Ajay; What they did? He took out his notepad n pen to write down everything.

They used to abused my mother n me. Calling me ill. They cursed me n even hit me bcz I was different. Maa tried to save me she always saved me but sometimes they caught me .

Ajay; Don't worry they won't be able to do this ever again. He said with an angry strong voice.

When I was ten my mum become their servant bcz we were living their for free. But all the money belonged to my Papa they snatched it away.

Vivaan; Chakor u have to overcome this otherwise u will feel insecure but u can't. U have to be strong.

Suraj; Chakor. His voice always calms her. She again looked at him. He was the one she trust most.

We were in the kitchen mom was trying to find something but mom was weak in remembering I saw her how she searched for salt . I was trying to hide my laugh but mum caught me. I then told her where the salt was. N this happens often one day mom was scared my uncle had blamed her of stealing the money but I saw it weeks ago he had lend the money to a man. Maa was shocked it wasn't weeks ago but months ago. I gave her a complete discription of the man. That day they she got to knew abt my gift.

Suraj; Ur mom loved u alot?.

She was my only supporter...

The 3 were sitting opposite to them. Chakors eyes were fixed on Suraj only he too was just looking at her.

Ajay was sitiring in listening to Chakor while he was holding a pillow n of course he was writing all.

Riya was very excited she was sitting with crossed-legs on couch.

Vivaan was sit there with folded arm's in front of his chest.

All the three had the same thought. - The only support like Suraj -. They werr admiring their understanding in love for each other.

Then my mom got ill... she died years ago n left me alone... Y she couldn't take me along with her? .

Suraj; was heart broken. If she had I would have never met u... Chakor hugs. I won't leave u. Suraj; I won't let u.

Chakor sniffs n wiped her tears away n gave him a warm smile.

Maa left n I was alone with uncle n aunty they got my custody they never cared for me. My papas property was on my name when I would turn 21 I would be the only hire. They got scared but soon they found out abt my gift. They made money with me.

Chakor felt digust she lowered her head.

Suraj lift her chin. It doesn't matter what they did. What matters is what we will do with them!.

Maa was an orphan no one come to ny help. But papa had an old friend he was gud well he pretends to be gud but in reality he was with my uncle n aunty.

They planned to kidnapped me but I escaped I'm hiding from them. If they will found me then... She shocked her body was shivering.

Suraj hold her tight she looked at him. At his angry yet careing face. His eyes were filled with anger for her uncle n aunt. But they also tears of sadness.

Chakor hugs him. I'm strong now. I won't give up. I have a new family. U!.

Suraj was happy to know her feeling for him.

The three pout. N we r not ur family?

Chakor looked at them. u still here? I forgot... Suraj; hmm that was bad lie...
Chakor; y? y?. Suraj; U can't forgot. Chakor bite on her tongue.

Chakor thought. Ajay is my bro. Riya my bhabhi... She spits out her coffee Ajay smirkes while Suvaan hide their laugh. Chakor; Vivaan is gud doctor uncle. Vivaan; uncle?. All laughed out loud.

Chakor looked at Suraj.

Maa was like u never let me cry!.

Suraj was touched he caresses ber cheek.

Ajay; cleans his throat. They looked at him. Woh... Who was the uncle u were talking abt?.

Si... Singhania... They were all shocked.

Ajay; what u... U know him personally?

Chakor nod.

He said he is papas friend nut he isn't he is bad he killed the minister...

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Hope u liked it.

Please Do Not Copy my Story

Amazing update👏

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Chakor suffered so much from her childhood😭😭

Loved her bonding with everyone especially Suraj😃😃

Waiting for next

Thank u yes she did poor soul but now she has the right supporters on her side

nice one

Amazing update

Originally posted by: sumsukor

nice one

interesting

poor chakor is always suffereing

thank god she met Suraj and is now in safe hands

hmm

keep it up

Thank u yes he is her biggest support

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Felt sorry for Chakor and her mother, they had no friends after her father's death.

Liked how Ajay served all of them, Riya was impressed.

Suraj is now unreserved in how he cares for Chakor, I guess he's made up his mind to marry her.

So Singhania knew Chakor's father, I guess he too stole property from Chakor.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank u many gyesses r right but I won't reveal whjch

Interesting part.