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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
It was very cute update😊
Sukor has feelings for each other😊
As Suraj is in his sense, he thinks these feelings are wrong😕
Waiting to know how Sukor's relationship shapes up
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: katheriene

It was very cute update😊

Sukor has feelings for each other😊
As Suraj is in his sense, he thinks these feelings are wrong😕
Waiting to know how Sukor's relationship shapes up
Waiting for next



Thank u. Yes u r right he thinks his feelings r wrong but let see
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Nice update
The bond between Sukor is growing, liked how Chakor kept clothes for Suraj in the bathroom.

Happy that Suraj and Ajay have become friends.

Chakor in disguise 😆

Suraj is right to question his feelings, he doesn't want to take advantage of Chakor because of her mental state.

Suraj's idea about the toys is great, he doesn't want Chakor to be emotionally dependent on him. If she isn't dpendent on him, it'll be easier for him later to accept that she truly loves him.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Happy new year 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Nice update

The bond between Sukor is growing, liked how Chakor kept clothes for Suraj in the bathroom.

Happy that Suraj and Ajay have become friends.

Chakor in disguise😆

Suraj is right to question his feelings, he doesn't want to take advantage of Chakor because of her mental state.

Suraj's idea about the toys is great, he doesn't want Chakor to be emotionally dependent on him. If she isn't dpendent on him, it'll be easier for him later to accept that she truly loves him.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Happy new year😊




Thank u yes that is right. He wants to make independent soon he will realise that she bcz she is earlier too. She could walk on streets all by herself.

Thank u u too happy new year
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Wow dude you are a great writter...i totally loved it...you are mind blowing dear...👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Wow dude you are a great writter...i totally loved it...you are mind blowing dear...👏



Thank u thats a very special complement for me
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Cant wait more plzzz dear try to update the next part soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Hi thank u n sorry for the delay.

Recap; Suraj went to shopping with Chakor.

Chakor was sleeping on the bed with her new friends a big teddy bear n a doll. Suraj was in the kitchen making some food for the next morning.

Suraj was thinking of Chakor. Her smile made him smile. He knows abt her behaviour n condition but still there a feelings developing inside him. Suraj - No I can't think on her in this way -.

Suraj switched off the light in the kitchen n went to sleep on the couch. Suraj was trying to sleep but his mind was drifting to Chakor. He shook his head n turns to the otherside of the couch.

On the next morning Chakor walks out of the bedroom she saw Suraj sleeping peacefully facing the couch back. Chakor sat on his leg she wanted to watch tv. She switched on the tv n lied on Suraj.

Suraj felt the weight but it didn't burther him. He tries to sleep further but Chakor was watching a serial abt a witch she clutched Suraj shoulder. Suraj felt a pain he opens his eyes n turned his face. Chakor hides her face in his shoulder.

Suraj turns but carefully he places his hand on her. Chakor looks up her eyes were teary. Suraj shocked. Chakor what happen y r u crying? Chakor; chudail... she showed on the tv were she watched Imli in udaan thr witch. Suraj turns off the tv. Don't worry the hero n heroine gonna finish her soon.

He wipes her tears away. Chakor hugs him tight. Phone!. Suraj took out his mobile n gave it her. Chakor opens it without his permission she knows the password.

Suraj stood up n walks to washroom. Suraj took off his clothes n was ready to take a shower... But Chakor enters the door n saw Suraj... she didn't burther she comes near him he was standing there numb. He widen his eyes n gulps. Chakor looks at the mobile. It is off???? She said holding the mobile up.

Suraj didn't react to her words. Chakor shakes his arms. Suraj looks at her. He took his towel n covers himself. Suraj took the mobile n walks out. - Y I kept the door open y???! -. Chakor follows him he put the mobile on charge n Chakor sat next to it. Can I play? Suraj nod. Chakor; yaaa.

Suraj was back in the bathroom. He took a quick shower still thinking of thr happening. Chakor was again on tv n watching a movie. She was watching a marriage of a couple. The man filled the hairline with vermilion on the woman then he knot the mangalsutar on her neck. Chakor saw it they were living together under one roof...

Suraj comes out of the washroom wearing his clothes. Chakor saw him n was angry she pout.

Suraj was confused y she behaved like this. He should be the one who should be angry on her. But y is she angry???

Chakor walks to the kitchen Suraj was surprised she made food... ya food.
Suraj was looking at her.

Suraj was suspicious. U can cook. Chakor took a bowl in filled it with milk n cereals. She starts eating it without talking to him. Suraj anger raised he hates it when she ignores him. More he doesn't even know y she ignores him. Chakor put thr bowl on the table. She took his hand n made him sit. Eat!. She stands in front of him her hands on her hips.

Suraj anger cooled. U made it for me? Chakor nod. Suraj; thank u. Chakor smiled. She looked at the home which was very dirty bcz of her chaos she creat everyday.

She starts to clean up n left Suraj open mouth. Chakor not only clean up the living room but also the bedroom n washroom.

The door bell rings she walks to the door n waited for the person. It was Vivaan who was surprised too.

Vivaan saw Suraj he greets Chakor n then goes to Suraj who was just lost in her doings.

Vivaan waves with his hand in front of Suraj eyes. Suraj was out of his trance. He looked at Vivaan. U see that? What she is doing? Y is she doing it? Who is this?

Vivaan; smiled. Relax I think she is building a new relationship.

Suraj; what? how do u mean this?

Vivaan; maybe she saw or hear something. Which made her think abt her current situation. Did u told her something were u angry on her. What u did?

Suraj looked at him innocently. Are yaar don't know what happen to her all of a sudden.

Chakor comes again to them. Suraj stood up n walks to her. She was still having a pout on her face.

Vivaan comes near he caresses her back very gently. Chakor; Suraj is bad... she had teary eyes. Vivaan looked at Suraj. What u did? In an angry tone. Suraj looked at him innocently n his face was showing his confusion. Chakor walks to him she starts to hit him with her palms.

Suraj let her bcz he hasn't understand yet what she wants. Vivaan looked around what has changed... He saw thr bedroom all was decorated for her. He has changed for her. Vivaan opens the cupboards... clothes all new all hers. Vivaan saw the toys... all for her.

She is having feelings for him. Chakor stopped hitting him. Vivaan comes out with a doll. Suraj hold her hand very delicately. Vivaan showed the doll. Chakor; my doll. Suraj tell him. She hugs him her hands were around his back.

Vivaan; what is this? Y u bought her so many stuffs. She is not going to live her forever. Y r u making at so confortable for her she is a victim soon when the case will end she has to go n start to live her own life. Don't make it harder than it is already.

Suraj looked at him in his anger n possessive way he hugs her back. Vivaan shook his head. Suraj u r mistaken it. Chakor rubs her nose on Suraj chest. Vivaan; she was attached to u. If this case get solved she has to leave u. Chakor; Nahi!!! No!!!! She starts to cry very hard she couldn't control her emotions anymore.

Vivaan; was shooked like Suraj. Suraj can u see what I mean to say? Suraj tried to calm her. Chakor; Suraj. Suraj; No Chakor we r not going to separate. Please stop.

Vivaan become angry. Haan Suraj stop this. U can't keep her. She has no relations to u...!!!

Suraj looked at him with a lost face...
He is right I don't have a relation with her...

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Sorry for delay or any confusion.

Please Do Not Copy my Story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing ff yr...want next part...plzz update soon...cant wait now...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Chakor is developing feelings for Suraj😊
Vivan is right about Sukor's relationship, waiting to know the fate of Sukor
Waiting for next

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