Other than the fact associated with LCPD that you have mentioned here what really caught me was "Rudra will be my first baby."
This shows the kind of responsible person this Shivay is. To make new relations you don't give up on the older ones.
The way Shivay was unable to spare a glance at Anika when focused on that door and red light is actually a very powerful moment you described here. There are times when mutual dependency does not work no matter how profound the love is. One prefers to stay with their own-self and dwell in their own strength and t is very normal. It did not mean Shivay loved Anika less it only meant he was waiting for the storm to pass.
I am a sucker for information anything that can make me find something new l I love reading it and when it is given to me in such a beautiful packaging as this story isko kehtey hain sone pe suhaga. You made me read about Legg-Calve-Perthes disease.kash humari harneet ji bhi thoda research kar leti to bahut kuch dikha sakti thi. Par in this glorious era of information they love living in the oblivion of ignorance.
As always Poignant, well crafted and it was a beautiful story.👏
Loved it.
Edited by samiksha1993 - 8 years ago