OS: THE LOVE SHE WANTED TO FATHOM [ShivIka+Sahil] [TY note:Pg 6]

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

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S.love1

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful concept and written nicely

Loved this idea of sahil requesting shivaay to be his dad officially

Annikas hesitation and insecurity about the matter was so real and understandable

Shivaay is really a great man, love and respect him as a character

Thanks for this enjoyable one shot

Much love!

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samiksha1993

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Posted: 7 years ago

Other than the fact associated with LCPD that you have mentioned here what really caught me was "Rudra will be my first baby."

This shows the kind of responsible person this Shivay is. To make new relations you don't give up on the older ones.

The way Shivay was unable to spare a glance at Anika when focused on that door and red light is actually a very powerful moment you described here. There are times when mutual dependency does not work no matter how profound the love is. One prefers to stay with their own-self and dwell in their own strength and t is very normal. It did not mean Shivay loved Anika less it only meant he was waiting for the storm to pass.

I am a sucker for information anything that can make me find something new l I love reading it and when it is given to me in such a beautiful packaging as this story isko kehtey hain sone pe suhaga. You made me read about Legg-Calve-Perthes disease.kash humari harneet ji bhi thoda research kar leti to bahut kuch dikha sakti thi. Par in this glorious era of information they love living in the oblivion of ignorance.

As always Poignant, well crafted and it was a beautiful story.👏

Loved it.

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bworm

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wow, awesome os.

Lots of details on medical terminology.

Sahil shivay bond is so cute.

Anika thinking about Rudra getting hurt..so sweet.

Love these two

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Rohini

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is such a heart felt shot... whenever I see Shivaay Sahil and Annika bonding it was always like a perfect family...and I guess that's what you have translated into...

Children are such pure souls that who ever gives them that undying love and care they simply melt into them seamlessly... and for Sahil Shivaay has been that person after Annika...so Shivaay earned that from little Sahil with his care and love...

I loved the last line that you described about Shivaay...

Shivaay picked handful from world and loved them limitlessly ... 🤗

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

awesome update yar

it was beautiful...

whenever I see the moments between shivika and saahil together i always get the perfect family,picture perfect wali feeling...even sometimes I feel that they already had two kids...first baby is always Rudra and second is saahil...I just loved the way Annika thought about of Rudra being hurt...For Rudra it's Shivaay who take care of him from the beginning and now for saahil also he is the father figure...because after Annika it's Shivaay who is closed to...

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Srivalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome os!!

Loved it.

Its soo beautiful..

Very well written..

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farinaks

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Posted: 7 years ago

It was wonderful khidkitod cute and adorable

Written beautifully nd brilliantly

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Aparna

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Lovely OS, Just amazing ❤️

Loved the bond between Shivaay & Saahil. Anika thinking about Rudy boy getting hurt. The way they've accepted not only each other but also their family members like their own is something so beautiful!

Have always admired the Shivika-Sahil scenes, their own chotusa family 😳 Thank you for writing an OS on them 😊