OS: THE LOVE SHE WANTED TO FATHOM [ShivIka+Sahil] [TY note:Pg 6]

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
So beautiful it was

Thank you so much dear. 😳😳

I am glad that you found this shot beautiful. 😃😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: priyanka_22
Amazing😊 I always wanted to see this side of shivaay😊 thank-you for this wonderful piece

Thanks a lot for commenting dear. 😳😳

I too wanted to watch more bonding between Sahil and Shivaay in the show, hence this shot.😆😆

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samiksha1993

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Rainzz

Hey Samiksha🤗,

Thank you so much for sharing your view about this one -shot. It makes me extremely elated to know that you found this shot nice. 😳😳

It was worth every second that I spent reading it.

About Rudra part, I must say his mention was necessary. If he is trying to convince Annika that he will not forget Sahil in future, he should also not forget whom he called his first baby. In my opinion, if he didnot mention Rudra's name there is ni assurance that he will not neglect Sahil after his own children. But then, it is Shivaay we are taking about here jo apni jimmedaari se kabhi peechhe nahi hat-ta. 😉😉

About LCPD, I wanted to add a bit of medical information regarding his disease to bring a sense of realism. I hope I suceeded in it.😊😊

You absolutely did.👏

I know why the writer doesn't do research as it requires effort. Searching, sorting and then selecting is sometimes a tedious process. So she keeps it simple. No research ever . No logic ever. No ummeed for these things in viewers ever. Any ways, kahan pahunch gyi main.

I am glad you liked the red light bit. And yes, you have decoded his silence too aptly. Sometimes we just need us to pick and hold ourselves in our own private space. 😃😃

I love reading your comments and your explanations about the scenes. They are sometimes even better than what I had thought while writing the scene. ❤️❤️

Thank you but I guess we all have our own perspectives on the most common and routine things. This was one of your best works for me. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: samiksha1993

Thank you but I guess we all have our own perspectives on the most common and routine things. This was one of your best works for me. ❤️❤️

I know. But sometimes what we think as a moment or spontaneous reaction becomes a significant enough after reading the explanations. 😊😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: joy1
Poorvika I'm sure you are not as bad as me.
Or, wait, Do I have a competitor here?
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Trust me Jennie, you have a competitor here.😉😉

I have a very bad memory.😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

AWww...this is so beautiful n heart touching...so perfectly written...just loved it...

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Originally posted by: arohiarsh16
AWww...this is so beautiful n heart touching...so perfectly written...just loved it...

Thank you so much dear.😳😳

It's a pleasure to know that you found it beautiful. 😛😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thank you so much for 100 likes !!

I always cherish the love I receive on any of my work no matter what is the figure of likes. But as this kind of response is rare on my works, I am feeling too overwhelmed right now. So, just wanted to thank you all for showering your love on this OS.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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hey there! 😆

I really don't know how I missed out this beautiful piece of literacy! 👏👏 anyways, now that I have read this let me tell you this that this OS wil remain in some corner of my mind ever. And one of my favourite Os ❤️ because I thourally enjoyed it.

Shivaay scolding annika whenever Sahil sneezed that was so typical of him 😳 I'm at loss of words really because I love this so much😆😆

and then Sahil asking shivaay that can he call him Dad, Man! I was goign through so much of emotion at thta time, really wanted to see something onscreen like this And shivaay referred Rudra too! he really love his baby brother.😳

His love was a thing she could never fathom. As while she knew to immerse the entire world in her love. Shivaay picked handful from the world and loved them limitlessly.

And the limitless cannot be fathomed.

The above lines were just bliss! Loved it ❤️

P.s : I Love this so much 😳

Much Love,

-Anya.