OS: THE LOVE SHE WANTED TO FATHOM [ShivIka+Sahil] [TY note:Pg 6]

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: apuk123
So beautiful <3

Thanks a lot dear. 😛😛

I am really happy to know that you liked this shot. 😆😆

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#22

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
it was beautiful...
whenever I see the moments between shivika and saahil together i always get the perfect family,picture perfect wali feeling...even sometimes I feel that they already had two kids...first baby is always Rudra and second is saahil...I just loved the way Annika thought about of Rudra being hurt...For Rudra it's Shivaay who take care of him from the beginning and now for saahil also he is the father figure...because after Annika it's Shivaay who is closed to...

Hey,

Thanks a lot for commenting dear.😃😃
It's my pleasure to know that found the update worth reading. 😳😳
For me, Sahil along with Annika and Shivaay makes a perfect family. 😊😊
Annika has been looking after Sahil for years and Shivaay too never fails to take care of Sahil that is why this whole idea came in my mind. 😆😆
Sahil seeing a loving father in Shivaay whom he was deprived for years was one of my dream-sequence. So just penned that.😛😛
About Annika thinking about Rudra being hurt, actually I hadn't planned that way. But when I wrote it appeared like that. Actually my focus was on their future with Sahil. But again, your and some other's version gave me new view about the story.😉😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Beautiful

Thank you so much, Gurveen ( Correct me if I am wrong as I am presuming ).😊😊

I am glad you found it nice. 😳😳

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#24

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Its soo beautiful..
Very well written..

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear.😳😳

I am really happy to know that you found this shot beautiful. 😛😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Beautiful OS...

Thank you so much for appreciating my work dear. 😃😃

I am glad you liked it. 😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: joy1
That was heart warming :)
And honestly, i think, this is not some 'phaila hua raita', you wrote there,
but a beautiful raita which we as a viewers would love to watch on our screen some day.
Oh the possibilities!

P.S:- i forgot your name dear 😃
Mind saying it again?

Thank you so much for finding it a beautiful raita.😳😳

But trust me, I have phailaoed it. 😉😉

Ahhh. I doubt they will be having any sensible track around Sahil. They even never put an effort to take Sahil to the doctor for his treatment, let alone finding a father in Shivaay.

P.S.: It's okay dear. No one and absolutely no one is as bad as me in remembering names. 😆😆

BTW, I am Poorvika. But if it is difficult to remember, call me Rainzz. I am comfortable with my UserName too. So call me whichever name you want to. No worries.😛😛

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#27

Originally posted by: farinaks
It was wonderful khidkitod cute and adorable
Written beautifully nd brilliantly

Thank you so much dear. 😳😳

It's my pleasure to know that you found this shot beautiful and adorable. 😛😛

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#28

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Lovely OS, Just amazing ❤️
Loved the bond between Shivaay & Saahil. Anika thinking about Rudy boy getting hurt. The way they've accepted not only each other but also their family members like their own is something so beautiful!
Have always admired the Shivika-Sahil scenes, their own chotusa family 😳 Thank you for writing an OS on them 😊

Thank you so much for the kind words that you used for my writing. 😳😳

I am happy to know that you liked this shot.😛😛

I too love the bond between Sahil and Shivaay. 😉😉

Actually, Annika was thinking about Sahil's condition after Shivaay and Annika will have their own child.😃😃

She had raised him and does not want him to get hurt in anyway.🥱🥱

I too have admired their equation and wanted some scene like this but it never came.