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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Zarin I love you, you wonderful creative being!


I was so gripped into the mystery of the story, and of course when Maan mentioned the anarkali and then the dhaba did it all click - that part just tugged at my heartstrings. This was just so beautifully pieced together, my words won't do justice to it.

My blood still boils at Maan's memory not being recovered but this OS will now bring peace to my internal rage at 4 Lions.

P.S. and the song choice! How could I have not clocked the gist of the story at the song choice... I am having a rather slow start to February, I blame endless uni work for this...



Fozia šŸ¤— From one pagal to another.

I wrote this to bring peace to my boiling blood too! So much to be angry about, I can't just be stuck on his memory forever ;)

Thanks for being here, girl :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl.white

It is an amazing piece of work. Or shall I say a masterpiece.
I am amazed that the cvs failed to portray such a meloncholic beauty of the memory loss track which was perfectly and most brilliantly captured in your one shot.
Alas, the what ifs...
I felt as if I was actually watchimg these two in your creative world.
The jhumkas took away my heart and so did the ride to the dhaba..
CAB FARE was the sweetest touch to bring about tje memories of their magical past...



Ah, thank you :) I am humbled by your words and am truly pleased that you enjoyed it. When the CVs fail, it comes to the hands of the viewers, I guess šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: had2bu

I totally loved it.

I had wondered also why they never thought to end his ML on the show. The way you did it here was superb. The dhaba, the anarkali, the jhumkas all bring us down that beautiful place in our memories.
I am so in love with this piece. Your way of bringing their love story along and his way of telling her...I am totally at a loss for words. Muaaah! Superb, superb, superb.
I find myself with a hole in my hearts these days, where your characters have taken residence.
Amazing work!
Thanks for writing it.



Thank you Avi! Writing for this forum would not be half as fun without the presence of you and the rest of the BM. I am really grateful for the continued love and support.

I'm glad you enjoyed the memories. I had a really good time revisiting some of my favourite parts of the show while writing this one.

And at the bolded, you have no idea how wide my eyes became when I read that. I am truly honoured.

Thanks for being here!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: palindrome

If you remember,about a month ago, a "FF Awards" thread was being created here...You were nominated for "Gehraiyaan" in that thread..

Without giving a second thought ,i have voted you in the category of "Best FF",however at the time of voting for "Most versatile writer",my heart showed little reluctance as till then,i had read only "Gehraiyaan"...
After reading this "OS",I am so glad and proud of myself that I did vote you in second category" too that day...!!!
You are more amazing than what we call "amazing"...šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘šŸ‘



Palin šŸ¤— Thank you!

I am a strong believer in not being biased towards friends and so I wouldn't have taken offence if you hadn't voted for me. Your comments on my work are more than enough :)

Gehraiyan's tone has been such that there has been limited versatility so far and I am always open to criticism and feedback about this and other aspects. The good, the bad and definitely the ugly - let me have it, ladies! I welcome the offensive! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ddgcmgfan

Zarin...sigh!!!! You have done it again...I am speechless. I have so much to say for this OS but I feel my saying anything is not going to be enough. 'A beautiful Ode to the golden era of one of the best shows on Indian television'.šŸ‘...I miss GHSP😭



Thanks Phoram 😊 You have such a way of saying things that your not saying anything conveys everything. I am really happy that you liked this OS. Thank you for taking this trip through the Golden Era with me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm late, I know and I'm sorry for that.

Pfft, please M! I am the last person who can grumble about lateness. My res'd posts are dotted far and wide, not least of all in your thread!

I was unintentionally putting this one off to read at a later time because somewhere instinctively knew this would create a magical spell which I wouldn't want to get out of. And was I right!

Ah, Zarin. What do I say except that this something you wrote holds so much importance to all of us: the fans who desperately wanted Maan to get his memory back and recall all those wonderful moments he'd spent with Geet prior to that fateful catastrophe.

Oh, Mariam. Why are you all so intent on shutting me up with your wonderful words? I am certainly one of the lucky ones for having readers like you.

You so perfectly portrayed the tinge of disappointment Geet felt all those times when Maan would unknowingly remind her of the precious memories she holds close to herself but could never share with Maan. Though they moved on in life happily, she still couldn't help by twist he'd remember all that; him calling her Mishti, relating her presence to the jhumkas, reliving the magic of Roop Tera mastan with her. All of this made me, along with Geet, wish he'd realise that they're reliving their beautiful memories. Then I doubted if Maan was all acting as if he doesn't remember. By the time he exited the car at the Dhaba, I sighed believing that he doesn't remember anything.

My one khwaish for the show was left unanswered: to have him call her Mishti one more time while knowing the value of the word to her. But alas...
I don't know if Maan could have drawn out the suspense for too long. He loves her too much. It would have been too cruel to keep it from her.

The note actually made me cry happy tears
, and I'm not exaggerating here. And I was left smiling at the thought that he does remember everything. If only they had brought his memory back in the show. If only...

Not many words to say this time Z, except that I loved it. Too much to express. 😊

Sach? Ahh Mari Mari šŸ¤— Truly, thank you for being here.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Beautiful Indeed

When Maan had lost his memory I felt CV's could have handled that track very well they had lots of avenues to chose but instead ...
this story is just fabulous Maan regaining his memory and when Geet realizes that she wants to believe it yet its so difficult its a miracle for her
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Posted: 7 years ago
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the of regaining of the memory, the traces of the moments from the memory lane and the end recovery with her realization, it was such a pleasant surprise.
the show ended for me much before the ML track, as the story, the characters were almost ruined by the CVs the way they handled the Amritsar and the after memory loss track.
but this story has given such as wonderful closure to that feeling..that from now on I can imagine this as the ending for the show.

beautiful one shot..hope to see your writing on the forum and also published it in the future :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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magnificent OS! beautifully written! loved how u portrayed the memory loss track with Maan regaining his memory! šŸ‘ do post more stories! thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful. Missing those days...how i wish

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