RiKara OS: Jealous Omkara Rocks [pt 6 pg 14 upd. 20/01/18]

Couldn't get this out of my mind and had to share it.

It's a first draft and I just posted it, a small sneak peak.

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Finally the most awaited wedding is happening and the oberoi mansion is lit with the glow happiness. Gauri couldn't believe if it's a reality or a dream which would break if she were to blink but no, to her delight everything is real, her bade bhaiyya and anika bhaujaai are getting married. She was happy for them but sad for herself. keeping aside her gloominess, she leaves to see if her bade bhaiyya was ready for the wedding and she had to tell him something.

" bade bhaiyya? aap tayyar hain? gauri asks as she enters shivaay's room. " yeah I am ready shivaay turned and looked at his sister who stood near the door with a sweet smile on her face and tears in her eyes. Worried, he crosses the distance towards her and hold her shoulders. "gauri , why are you crying? Is everything ok? gauri doesn't say anything and continues crying. Shivaay holds her throught it and once she stops crying, gauri speaks up.

"hum bahot khush hain ki aapki shaadi ho rahi hai par ab humein jana hogaa gauri looks at shivaayy as she waits for his reply.

~ to be continued~

Lots of fun coming up along with JealousKara and RiKara moments.

INDEX

part 1 pg 2

part 2 pg 4

part 3 pg 5

part 4 pg 8

part 5 pg 12

part 6 pg 14

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Love the sneak-peek. Hoping you'll update soon! :)

Interesting..will be waiting for the update...

Love the sneak peak !!
Please upload the full thing soon

Love it

Awesome teaser

Woww...i would love to read this...Jealous Omakra...something we all were wishing for...thanks so much to this 😊

Hi

Before you read just wanna tell you that it's very short coz :

1. life is very demanding and I don't have much time to write the full one shot

2. and I am not patient enough to post after a few days when its completed.

So, something is better than nothing.

NO PROOF READ

ENJOY

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PART 1

"bhaiyya! Maine yani Rudra Singh Oberoi ne ek bahot important kaam kiya hai aaj, aap sunoge na toh aapko bahot proud feel hoga apne chote bhai par rudra boasts to shivaay who is not really paying attention at him as he looks out the window in search of a glance at Anika.

"accha ? aisa kya teer maara hai tune?

"teer? Bhaiyya teer maarunga toh use lag jayegi he replies confused.

"what? now shivaay looks at his brother annoyed. " tu kya keh raha hai?

Rudra comes and hugs shivaay sideways, " maine na ek photographer bulaya hai Bareilly se rudra says proudly.

Shivaay shrugs rudy's hand away, "Bareilly se kyun, I know very good photographers here, main unhe bulata hun saying this shivaay picks up his mobile and starts making a call when rudy snatches the phone from him.

"nahi bhaiyya mera saara plan spoil kardoge aap. Maine Paritosh vidrohi ko bulaya hai from Gauri digital Studios rudra announces dramatically and waits for shivaays reaction "huh? Huh? Kuch samjhe? but shivaay is lost.

Rudra then explains further, " tabhi toh mai kehta hun mujhse intelligent toh koi hai hi nahi, main na hun toh aap logon ka kya hoga? rudra makes shivaay sit.

"gauri? shivaay asks.

" haan, ye Gauri digital studio vali gauri koi aur nahi balki humari chirraiya chulbul bhabhi hain a.k.a. Gauri kumara Sarma.. uh I mean sharma

Listening to this shivaay stands up, " matlab ye paritosh Vidrohi gauri ko jaanta hai?

"sirf jaanta hi nahi bhaiyya , gauri bhabhi uski childhood love hai as rudy finishes shivaay is shocked "haww shivaay says as his hand covers his mouth.

" matlab gauri bhi use... aur tune use yahan bula liya?

"nahi bhaiyya, chulbul bhabhi ka standard kaafi high hai, vo us vidrohi ka one sided love hai

"ohh thank god shivaay breathes a sigh of relief. "toh yeh important kaam kiya hai tune?

" haan bhaiyya, ab jab O ko pta chalega ki ye Paritosh Vidrohi Gauri bhabhi ko pasand karta hai toh O toh jal jal k raakh hojayega raakh. Jaise jealous SSo rocks vaise hi Jealous Om also rocks shivaay hugs rudy and gives him a kiss " im proud of you

Just then gauri enters and sees them hugging each other tightly, leaving no space and looks at them weirdly. "uh.. Bade Bhaiyya... dadi aapko neeche bula rahi hain

Seeing gauri they jump a foot apart " haan aata hun main shivaay says and leaves after gauri, then rudra follows him.

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It was anika and shivaay's sangeet and gauri being the OBahu, was managing everything with other oberois.

" ye mithai wahan rakhiye fir ye plates bhi gauri instructs the servant and moves towards dadi ; who was sitting on the sofa, with a thal of flowers.

As gauri sits beside dadi, dadi scolds her "puttar tujhe saara kaam khudh karne ki zarurat nahi hai, tu servants se kyun nahi kehti?

"kaha toh abhi abhi aapne dekha nahi? gauri says points towards the direction she came from.

Everyone told her to instruct the servants but gauri was intent on doing things on her own. she felt that if she did things on her own, this wedding was going to be more memorable because it included the heartfelt love she had for her bhaujaai and bade bhaiyya.

" yaar ye photographer kahan hai? gauri heard and looked to see rudra shouting at everyone.

"aa jayega? Uske liye ghar ko sar pe uthane ki kya zarurat hai? came om's voice as he joind dadi and gauri.

For a second, gauri caught om's eyes and they kept looking at each other. The theme for the function was red and black so gauri looked as om sat down, he wore a black kurta and she wore a red Patiala salwar suit with a jacket. Both of them were complementing each other.gauri's trance broke as she looked to see what rudra was saying.

"I know ki mere muscles bahot acche hain but main ghar nahi utha saqta O, be sensible

"shut up rudra om scolded him and gauri and dadi laughed.

Shivaay joins them "kya hua dadi? he discreetly looks at rudra and winks. Om notices this and becomes suspicious but before he could say anything, dadi spoke up.

"kuch nahi puttar, inn dono ka toh chalta hi rehta hai

" tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye a new voice is heard and all of them turn to look at the entranceto see a man with sun glasses on and a camera.

The man enters and a few people follow him. He stops and with a click of his fingers he instructs the boys to start setting up the cameras. Moving further he reaches the oberois and bends down to take dadi's blessings. "peri pauna dadi ji

"jeeta reh puttar,par tu hai kon

The guy stands up and removes his glasses, he looks at gauri and winks as recognition washes over her face. "ji mai Paritosh vidrohi, Bareilly se

Before dadi could say anything, gauri gets up, squeals and hugs paritosh . everyone is stunned to see gauri hugging a man when she didn't even accidently touch Om without mountains of awkwardness between them. Rudra and Shivaay cover their mouths with their hands as a "haww leaves their lips and they are subjected to Om's harsh glare.

Gauri releases paritosh from the hug and turns to dadi, "ye humara bachpan ka dost hai she clarifies and then asks "par tum yahaan kaise?

" rudra singh oberoi ne apne bade bhaiyya ki shaadi ke liye humein specially Bareilly se bulaya hai paritosh says.

"thanku rudy bhaiyya gauri says and the trio of dadi , Paritosh and gauri get busy talking.

On the other side, om crosses his arms as he looks at rudy who was hiding behind shivaay. "rudra singh oberoi ne, teri toh aisi ki taisi om says and rudy takes off with om following him and shivaay following both of his brothers.

~ To be continued ~

i hope you all liked the beginning

i've divided this os in small parts, willbe editing it after it's completed.

Waah waah..Rudra's idea was appreciated for the first time I guess...otherwise bechara Rudy always receive a "Shut up Rudra" after sharing his crazy ideas...but this time he did something sensible...Paritosh Vidrohi's closeness and JealousKara will be a treat to watch...continue soonish dearie...
P.S :Paritosh Vidrohi gave mama ji type vibes... 😆

aww rudy rocked here. now jealous o ki baari. waiting for next update.so update soon.