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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update dear😃
Finally Akdha's misunderstanding is cleared party time 🥳
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Hope they patch up soon😭😭
Update jaldi waala n thanks fr the pm
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Super fantastic and lovely update..OMG i just love the part where ja and jo cane ti know about each other..Like the reactions of trio and maid while seeing Jalal's smile..Hate that villain gang..Interesting to read further..what will happen next..Awesome story..Thanks for pm..
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CHAPTER 11

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Previous part - Part 9,10 Page 58


Place : Jodha apartment.

Jodha : Iam not deserve him, he is rich person

Jodha heart: U r fool, he love u that only he care for u

Jodha mind: she is not stupid , u r stupid , he is rich person, he want like to marriage to rich girl nor like her middle class girl.

Jodha: she is right .he not accept me to his wife with sad voice.

Jodha heart: But Jodha ,salima said he is worried for u and appointed more no of doctors, checkup only for u.

Jodha little smile : Ha

Jodha mind: Appointed doctor team and he worried about u. its only sympathy for u its not his love with u.

Jodha face fell down.

Jodha heart: Dont hear her words , u remember in party time u looked ,his eyes shows only love for u right.

Jodha :ha I saw he looking only for me.he eyes full of love for me , he missing me so much.

Jodha mind: U thinking about him only but think that girl also, she hug him and said so she is his wife

Jodha heart: He is not married that girl lied

Jodha mind : Yes he is not married but if she is future wife .i mean she is her financ

Jodha shout both are stopped , iam already confused,now u both are confusing more.leave me alone.

Jodha heart and Jodha mind vanished in air.

Salima enter in jodha room

Salima: Jodha why ur shouting and touch her forehead said ur fever reduced letgo change ur dress and I already packed in our things

Door bell rings and salima went to Open the door.

Salima open the door and saw Asad Stand in front of door..

Salima: Come inside bhai

Asad: How is sweety

Salima: She is fine but now little bit fever.

Asad: Fever, u dont told me morning with worried voice

Salima: Oh bhai , Jodha said not told u about her fever.

Asad: Where is she.

Salima: Room

Asad went to her room and Jodha come out the bathroom.

Jodha: Bhai, when u come.

Asad: Come we need to go hospital first with strict voice

Jodha : Nothing bhai iam alright with pout face

Asad: I call doctor and check up for u.

Salima: Not again bhai, already more than 10,doctors checked our Jodha.

Asad: Kya what r u saying with confused face.

Salima narrates office incident and Asad selfthought JMK angry and ruthless person carring my Sweety.I want to know all details then only i decided what am I do.

Salima:Jodha u ready and just check packing thing only ,if I miss anything, tell me, I will pack.

Asad: Jodha u have fever, how will go alone ,no iam not allow, u both go to Chennai.

Jodha: But am all alright bhai, we need to go.

Salima: Plz bhai, I will take care of her.we need to go with pleasing tone

Asad: Ok but one condition with straight face

Salima and Jodha look at each other.said what condition

Asad: I am also come with u and we are going my private flight.

Jodha: U also coming and iam so happy bhai.

Jodha hugs Asad.Asad gestured salima join to hug.salima hug Jodha and Asad.

Place: Mohammed mansion

Jalal and Abdul enter the mansion.Dadi sit in sofa

Dadi: Jalal and Abdul beta come sit with me. Jalal and Abdul sit next to Dadi.

Dadi:u come early today.

Jalal: Oh Dadi , I have no work that only we come early.( in mind voice, my JO not in office, how can I stay here)

Dadi: Abdul today sun rose in the west kya with teasing tone.

Abdul: Iam also same doubt with Abdul favourite smile.Jalal glare to Abdul and Abdul close his mouth.

Dadi: Jalal beta u want to change Mc to MH (Mohammed construction to Mohammed hospital) with teasing tone

Jalal:iam not understand with confusing face

Dadi: MH, all specialist doctor what are doing in Mohammed industries, beta with smirked face

Jalal: Oh Dadi (Jalal eyes gestured Abdul to answer Dadi question)

Abdul: Oh Dadi ha Jalal arranged doctors for our staffs.

Jalal: Ha Dadi I arranged doctors for free checkup to our staffs.

Dadi: Jalal beta but staffs or staff in teasing tone.

Jalal get up sofa :Dadi I will fresh up and come and went to his room quickly.

Dadi and Abdul laughed loudly.

Dadi stop laughing : Tell me everything Abdul ,what happened in office today with little serious tone.

Abdul stand up: Dadi,oh iam also need to fresh up and run out to his room.

Jalal room

Jalal: Dadi always teasing me & pick up the phone and dail to Jodha number .phone ring noone pickup the phone.

Other side.

Jodha arranged everything for trip.and her phone ring and go to pickup the call and salima come to place

Salima: Jodha lets go, we already late.bhai in car.

Jodha: Just one minute and iam coming

Jodha pickup the call and attend the call said hello at time phone switched off because there is no charge in her phone

Jalal: JO phone switched off and iam eagerly waiting for talk with her, first she not pickup my call, now phone is switched off ,oh great. With irriating tone

Jalal pickup his maa photo: Ur bahu so careless, even she is not care about her health.u know maa today in office she fainted in my arms and narrates everything about office incident.U right maa she is my JO.she is mine only.u want see ur bahu.Jalal show Jodha photo in his mobile to maa photo.Maa ur bahu so beautiful right not even face and her heart also more beautiful.

Jodha , salima and Asad journey starts to Chennai in Asad private flight.

Salima: bhai ur flight is super, it is not look like normal flight and everything in this flight like in our home.separate rooms, more faciltity.

Asad: it is specially designed salima.

Salima: really u idea super.

Asad: this is not my idea and fully designed by my khadoos friends.

Salima: whose khadoos bhai

Asad: he is my friend and iam always call him to khadoos .

Salima: Jodha letgo I want see all place in flight.

Jodha: u go iam not coming, I need to sleep with tired face

Asad: salima u go roaming everywhere, this is ur flight, don't disturb Sweety

Salima: ok bhai, iam hungry, I go to air hostess ask some food, rather I will die with dramatic tone. And left to place.

Asad laughed said : salima always think about food only.

Fight landed in Chennai.

Three settled in car ,outside of airport and after some time car stopped in front of Jodha house, Chennai.

Place :Jodha house, 11: 30 pm.

Choti waiting outside of house, Jodha and salima tapped her choti shoulder and choti turns look at both sis.

Choti hugs Jodha tightly said: I miss u so much.why u guys are late, iam waiting for u more than 10 minutes.

Jodha: u waiting for us only 10 minutes, but u buildup like waiting for one day outside of the house.

Salima: u not missed me, only miss Jodha with fake sad voice.

Choti: oh salima di am also miss u so much and hugs salima.

Asad: my little princess miss me also

Choti look at Asad and her eyes moist,in mind voice ,my Asad bhai in front of me, iam very happy today but not show anything in her face.

Choti turns to Jodha: di , letsgo inside we need to surprise to maa and papa and drag salima hand go to inside.

Asad hurts for choti rejection. Jodha side hug to asad said: bhai, don't worry, choti happy see u but not show her face.

Asad: I know Sweety,she love me so much, but she is not talk to me, its really hurt me.

Jodha: don't sad, I will talk to her, lets go inside bhai.

Salima, Jodha and Asad arranged everything in hall and choti went to parents room.

Choti knock the door: maa , papa, come out with panic voice.

Maa and paa open the door: choti why ur panic, why u shout beta, u alright, maa checked choti head to toes with worried voice.

Choti: maa angel ..with panic voice. In hall with stammering voice

Maa look at paa: choti papa plz go to check hall, see my child how much scared.

Papa and maa come to hall and choti come behind her parents with smirking smile.

hall light switched off and hall fully darkness

maa: choti papa, go to switch on the light at same time switch on shouts surprise, Happy wedding Aniversary maa and papa.

Maa and papa look at Jodha, salima and Asad standing in front of them.

Papa and maa are happy saw their children.choti said how is my suprise

Maa go to choti and twisted her ears: nowdays ur so naughty with smiling face

Choti: maa it is paining, leave my ears with puppy face.

Papa:janu leave my princess ears

Maa leave her,and choti go papa hugs and show her tongue to maa.

Maa: choti papa, u only spoiled my daughters,today prank to us,iam worried to her, she prank to me.

Choti hugs maa said: I love u so much maa and maa also hugs choti.

Jodha: maa and daughter, both fight finished, we also here and see us also. Asad look at choti, how much happy in this family. Plz god stay happiness in my choti life.

Asad said : maa ,papa come and cut the cake.

Jodha hugs maa and then papa wishes happy Aniversary

Salima estitate hugs to maa and papa.maa look at salima said: salima ur not hug ur maa and papa.

Salima run to maa hugs tightly and cried

Asad: Sweety, in our house one more crying baby also added look at choti with teasing tone.and Jodha nods her head.

Choti: iam not crying baby bh..( choti say to bhai, but stopped)

Asad eagerly waiting for hear bhai word to choti mouth, but she stopped middle in word.

Choti: salima di, ur sake only all r teasing me and don't cry.

Maa wipes her tears and kiss her forehead said, my children never cry infront of her mother

Salima nod her head: happy anniversary maa and then go to papa hugs happy anniversary papa.

Asad also hugs both of them and wishes also.

Choti: come cut the cake and first bite for me only.iam only decorated everything , these people just now come.( pointed out fingers salima, Jodha and Asad)

Papa: yes , my princess ur my first priority , but I love all my chidren equally.

Maa and papa cut the cake and give first bite to choti and then Jodha, salima and Asad.

Maa : lets go to sleep,it already late, let talk to everything tomorrow.

Choti: but maa

Maa glare to choti: go to sleep. ( maa always maa right, she care about her children health, in her angry also shows only for care her children.)

All are went to sleep, salima, Jodha and choti in one room and Asad in other room and maa ,papa in own room.

Jodha room

Salima and choti sleeping peacefully in bed but Jodha sleep away from her and whole thinking about her Jalal only.Jodha look at Jalal photo in her phone and kiss over phone said iam not deserve u.but my life, ur the only one person occupied in my heart, this heart belong to u only ,ur r king of my heart , good night jaan and slept.

Other side Jalal : Jalal thinking Jodha and kisses her photo. Good night JO, see u tomorrow I eagerly waiting for morning rise but this night not go fast.i miss u mishy said hug his pillow imagine pillow his JO and slept.

Next morning.

Maa enter the kitchen shout : omg what happened my kitchen. Maa eyes scanned whole kitchen , flours spread in ground, vessels are replaced everywhere, kitchen look like war place.

Maa glare to Jodha, salima, choti and Asad: what all are doing in my kitchen.who did this

Jodha: we are not done anything,maa with puppy face

Maa: oh, this everything done by any ghost with hand in her hip and papa also enter the kitchen.

Papa: janu why u always scold my children, they want help ur work and that only they come to kitchen and ready for break fast.

All together: yes maa.with innocent face

Maa look at papa: don't defend them and papa head bow down.

Jodha: maa, this idea only by bhai, we r just helping to bhai .choti and salima nods her head. Jodha winked at Asad and continues said Maa ur princess are innocent, ur prince only done everything with innocent face.

Asad: maa don't trust her word, she lieing maa, iam not doing anything,that girls doing everything.

Jodha: u don't trust me and ask salima and choti.

Salima & choti: she is telling true maa with puppy face

Maa went to Asad place: raise her hand to ( girls thinking slap scene but not) carring his cheeks and kiss his forehead. Girls eyes wided and mouth open to ground.

Maa look at girls: u people thinking, I scold my son, Asad side hugs to maa said: see my maa in my side only.

Papa: son and mom one team, but papa always daughters team with hug girls and girls shows her tongue to Asad and mom.

Other side delhi

Jalal ready to office , come down and sit in dinning table.Dadi, Mir,Abdul and Zoya already in dinning table.

Jalal wishes good morning all of u.

After eat his breakfast and Jalal got up the chair.

Jalal: Abdul if u finished ur breakfast and come with my car.

Abdul: no Jalal, I have some work in outside, u go to office, i come later.and Jalal left out the mansion.

Mir: Abdul bhai, u no have work in outside, why u lie to bhai.

Abdul: I lied him because today iam not face his valcona burst out.

Mir: in morning also bhai mood in good but why he angry with u with confused face

Abdul: u come to office na, u also know the reason.

Dadi : Abdul and Mir why u people mumurring each other

Abdul: nothing Dadi, iam finished and we are going to office.

After two hour both are enter in office,whole staff roaming in office and do their work with tensed face.( romeo is one staff of kc , he is good person but little flirt character)

Abdul stop romeo ask what happened in our office, all working seriously today

Romeo : Abdul sir, yesterday our boss in Ramar mood, now he is ravan mood, now devil is back .

Abdul And Mir: if I told him, u said he is ravan and devil, and then what happened to u.with teasing voice.

Romeo: don't do that, my life in ur hands with shaking voice and left out the place

Mir: Abdul bhai, I forgot , iwant to go college early and bye bhai and enjoy valcona burst with teasing tone.

Abdul: Mir great escape and now iam only face to lion alone.

Abdul enter Jalal cabin: Jalal work in laptop and Abdul silently enter the cabin.

Abdul: Good morning sir.

Jalal angry glare to Abdul: this time only come to office with angry tone.

Abdul gulped his saliva: I am already informed sir with fear voice.

Jalal come stand next to Abdul and Jalal hand To correct Abdul neck tie with said so u already know my JO leave today but u don't inform me.

Abdul: oh sir, I thought to inform u about her,but I forgot it.

Jalal wears Abdul tie tightly to close his neck said iam also forgot ur my childhood friend. Jalal smirked.

Abdul: No iam not forget,yesterday if I told u na ,iam only gave permission leave for her.u surely killed me yesterday itself.that only iam not tell u.

Jalal: U think I alive today with calm face

Abdul: Jalal I don't know that time she is my Bhabhi , plz iam sry yaar.

Jalal: This time i forgive but u repeated once again and u hide anything about her.i will kill u in my own hand.u got it Mr Abdul mohammed khan

Abdul nod his head said: I tell my saali u threating me with innocent face

Jalal: U think , JMK scared ur saali by the way who is ur saali first.

Abdul: Hmm Mrs Jodha Jalal Mohammed khan

Jalal : Jodha not salima sister even salima has no one right

Abdul: Yes but now salima have two sister and one is Jodha and other Jodha younger sister.

Abdul narrated how to accept Jodha to salima to her sister.

Abdul: Really Jodha is angel for everyone.u know Jalal my salima more happy ,she got her family.now I understand why u always thought about ur JO in these months with emotional voice.

Jalal: Ha Abdul she is my angel, my JO.

Abdul : Salima and me are orphan & Jalal angry glare to Abdul

Jalal : How dare u say orphan, u not think our family is ur family.but I am consider u also same to me like Mir.

Abdul : Jalal iam finished yet, salima and me are orphan but I got my family back in sake of Dadi. Now salima also got her family.

Jalal hugs Abdul: U also sad today what happened salima also leave today with teasing tone

Abdul nods his head: Both are went to Chennai and meet for her parents.

Jalal: What she is not well, how dare she go to Chennai.

Abdul: Come down Jalal and already talked salima about her.Jodha have no fever dont worried about her.

Jalal mind is accepted but Jalal heart not accept

Other side ,Jodha room

Jodha standing near balcony.Asad enter angry face and shout Jodha.

Jodha turn back look at Asad and selfthought bhai never raise his voice to me now he call me Jodha instead of Sweety.

Asad : Jodha what is this ( in party photos - Akdha dance photo and Akdha starring photos and also shows Jodha crying runout the hall videos.) with angry tone.

Jodha: Oh ...bhai

Asad: Tell me Jodha what relation between u and JMk. With angry tone.

Jodha hears anger voice tears rolled in her eyes: Oh ...he is my husband with closed eyes.

Asad: What...with shocking expression.what are u saying.

Jodha : Bhai dont angry with me with crying tone.

Asad see her tears feeling bad for baby sister and calm down his angry: Iam not angry with u said lift her chin with his fingers & look at her face and wipes her tears and help to settled down to her bed.

Asad: Tell me how to meet Jalal

Jodha said how to go friend marriage to valpari.( Jodha and Jalal went to valpari for friend marriage this flash back part 8)

Flash back starts.

Jodha and arohi speaks about college days.

Jodha: I call to Arjun jiju and u talk to him.Jodha dailed Arjun number.

Otherside,Arjun room

Arjun phone rings.and Jalal stay in arjun room only.so Jalal pickup the call.

Jalal: Hello who is this with bossy tone.

Jodha selfthoughtt: How dare he, he ask me who am I with even bossy tone.

Jalal : Any one in line and u r only called but not speak, these kind of people are useless.

Jodha hears Jalal words and Jodha mouth opened wided.

Jodha: Who r u , u r not my Arjun jiju and ha what do u say iam useless person.how dare u speak me like that with high pitch voice

Jalal: Oh u r a girl right that only u call me to flirt with me.

Jodha: U think u look like my Rajat tokas Handsome guy and I am flirting with u with taunting tone

Jalal: U and ur stupid hero with irriating tone

Jodha: What do u say my rajat is stupid.if u infront of me and I will punch ur cheeks surely.

Jalal eyes open widened: U punch me and Arjun interpet Jalal and Jodha conversation

Arjun: Buddy why u speak with angry tone.and who is this line.Jalal give phone to Arjun.

Arjun: Hello, who is this.

Jodha: Jiju who is early spoke to me.

Arjun: Oh he is my buddy and tell me why u angry with him.

Jodha told previous conversation about Jalal and her

Arjun: That only my sherni angry, behalf of him , I asking sry for u .iam sry my sherni.

Jodha: Dont ask me sry and said to him, he is good day today that only iam not in front of him.

Arjun: Surely iam tell ur words to him and plz give phone to my sweet heart.

Jodha: No iam not give her.and bye

Arjun: Sherni plz ..and Jodha cut the call.( Jodha college friend call Jodha to sherni means lioness)

Arjun look at Jalal: Jalal ur sake only she is not allow me to speak my arohi.

Jalal: What can I did it.

Arjun: U only did it and accept sherni allow to speak my arohi.

Jalal : She such a jungle billi and am not talk her once again and I think she is adamant character.

Arjun: No Jalal she is sherni, I accepted but she is not admant .she is such prankstar, brave, child heart and intelligent .

In college days arohi and sherni are close friends.

Arjun : U know my love at first sight.i saw arohi fallen love with her.I want tell her to my love.but iam scare about whom

Jalal:: Whom

Arjun: Sherni, arohi friend, she is very possessive and caring about her lovable person. in our college days, she prank everyone but her prank only harmless one day one of my class mate bad mouthing about my arohi, u know Jalal , what sherni did with him.

My class mate sitting in our canteen, ordered sandwich to him.sherni already prepared special sandwich to that guy.(special sandwich nothing sandwich between cream instead of some amount of sand, need spices so little bit more amount of chilli powder and layers with some spoiled vegetables.)

Sherni replaced special sandwich to him, my class mate ate one bit of her special .sandwich, his tongue is burning due to chilli powder, he standing in table shout water,

Sherni gave water to him, he drink water fully in one gulped.sherni smirked to him.

Jodha: go to hospital otherwise u died after 30 minutes and I mixed some poison tablet in ur water with casually tone.

Guy head his spinning: what , plz save me, iam not badmouthing any girl in my lifetime.

Jodha: really, iam not accepted ur words.

Guy: god promise, iam not repeated once again. Go to arohi said to sorry to her.

Jodha: I forgive this time but u did it once again.u will face real sherni.

Guy nod his head: plz save me.

Jodha: hmmm go to ur room and slep in ur bed, I added only 3 tablet sleeping pills in ur water , not poison tablet. U got it.

Arjun end up story, Jalal said: really she is sherni

Arjun: that only we call to her sherni.

Flash back ends

Jodha told everything to Asad ( silent talk - next part flash back) how married to Jalal.

Jodha: don't angry with me plz bhai.

Asad: this months u don't tell anything about him.

Jodha: yesterday only even I know his name.but iam not worthy for him

Asad: why u said u not worthy for him.

Jodha:because he is rich person, u know he using his cellphone price is 48 million (4.80 crores)

Asad: no Jodha , he using phone rate is 4.85 crores not 4.80 crores.that phone name Falcon SuperNova Pink Diamond iPhone 6 , it most expensive phone in the world.

Jodha mouth open wided,: how do u know ,hit her forhead , u also business circle.u also know everything about him .hmm that only I said am not worthy for him.iam middle class girl

Asad: u thought iam not ur bhai, that only u said u poor compare to him.

Jodha: dont talk like that bhai, iam not considered that point view, iam only think about his family and his status.

Asad: first clearly tell me u love him.

Jodha: yes , I cannot live without him but iam not stay with him also.

Asad: u think love is based on money.

Jodha: I never thought about him like that way.but I want know really accepted me to his wife in his whole heart

Asad: ok i u give idea , u follow my ideas( silent talk)

Jodha: if I follow ur idea, he is angry with me.after what I will do.

Asad: he is really love u, he get back to u,what do u say.

Jodha half hearted accepted his idea and hugs Asad and Asad selfthought Jalal now iam playing with u and smirked.



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Chapter 12


Place: Chennai

Asad: hmm, in our family, whose know u r married.

Jodha: choti only know about, iam married.

Asad: choti know Jalal is ur husband.

Jodha nod her head: no bhai, I forget tell her.

Asad: don't tell her now and salima , mom and papa also.

Jodha: hmm,bhai u angry with me for hiding my marriage.

Asad: ha with fake anger Jodha face fell down.

Asad cupped her face: how can I angry with my baby sister.

Jodha: thanks bhai.

Salima enter the room, said: bhai , Jodha ,mom called u people for lunch.

Salima, Jodha, choti , Asad , ragupapa and janumaa joined have a lunch.After the lunch all are settled down in sofa.

Asad come with some packs and kneel down in front of janumaa and ragupapa. Give pack to them

Maa: what is this beta

Asad: plz open this ma, this is my anniversary gifts both of u.

Janu maa open that pack and pack inside beautiful necklace and branded gold watch.

Maa: it is so expensive, why u brought this .

Asad: maa, ur love is not compare anything in the world, this thing nothing infront of ur love, u think iam ur son, plz accept my small gift with puppy face.

Papa: Asad if anyone see this face, no one agree, u r business tycoon and md of JS industries with teasing tone.

Girls: ha papa ur right.

Maa glare to others: don't tease my son.

Jodha: bhai, u only gift for ur parents but u forget us, ur too bad bhai and Jodha pout

Asad: how can I forgot my princesses and give packs to three girls.

Jodha open the pack: bhai. I- phone 7 plus mobile ,all of us.but it so expensive.

Maa: Asad how much this mobiles .

Jodha: Each mobile one lakh mom with causually said

Maa: Asad u know very well, ur princess all careless person.why u bought expensive gift for them and girls twisted her lips.

Asad: I know maa that only i bought less amount mobile with innocent voice.

Maa twisted his ears: One lakh mobile, u thought it is cheap.and girls giggled to Asad

Asad: Maa it is paining leave me, iam not bothered about money .i want only my princess happiness.

Maa removed her hand and care his cheeks: If I die in this minute and i don't care, u will take care my princesses. All family shout: Maa / Janu.

Jodha: Dont talk like that once again maa.all hugged maa and said u not leave us. If god also not separated us. papa phone rings and went to attend the call.

Attend the call after come to hall said : Janu we need to pollachi ( Coimbatore district in tamilnadu).

Janu maa: Why we suddenly go to pollachi with worried tone

Ragupaa: Oh Lakshmi atha ( bua) serious condition

Janumaa: What, she is serious condition with crying tone.

Jodha and choti': Whose lakshmi grand ma and u never told we have relatives in pollaichi.

Janumaa: Oh beta stammered( in mind voice how can I tell u about that relation)

Paa: Oh princess , ur maa and me first lived in Pollachi.and she is our neighbour house that sake only we know about her.she is not our relation ( sry princess I lied to u first time)

Jodha: Ok paa , u both went to Coimbatore but choti alone in home.

Asad: I have suggestion , choti have study holidays for month So she come with us to Delhi.after two weeks she will come back to Chennai.

Paa: Ok but princess dont roaming, this study holiday not any vacation holiday.

Janumaa: Iam not allow her go to Delhi.

Jodha understand maa fear: I will take care of her.

Maa nod her head said : Go pack ur bags and study books also.

Choti jumps in joy said:to weeks I will stay with u in delhi, super.all are went to pack respective bags

Maa room

Janu : I am scared, choti will go to Delhi.after she away from me.

Paa: Whenever choti go , she is ur daughter only.

Janu:I don't know ji, iam scared, they will see choti or choti will see them, then my child breakdown once again , in this year she suffered so much ,I know she is my daughter only but iam fear about them, they will break my child heart once again, then she will scatter.

papa: janu, u trust Asad right,he will take care of her, don't worry about her.

Janu: hmm

All enter the hall with their respective bags.

Asad: I arranged fight ticket both of u.

Paa: ok beta

Enter the airport and girls and Asad went to Asad flight and maa & went to Coimbatore flight.

Flight reached in Delhi and girls went to apartment straightly and jumped to bed then slept.

Next morning.

Jodha selfthought: How will I face him plz god give me strength face him.

Choti: Di I want to meet jiju.

Jodha: How can u know about ur jijiu with shocked expression( Jodha thinking she talk about Jalal).

Choti: U only told me

Jodha: When I told about him.

Choti: U only told Abdul jiju and salima di love matters

Jodha relieved : Oh u talk about Abdul sir.

Choti: Then what u think.

Salima interpet: Stop calling him to jiju and he never propose me in his lifetime.

Choti: Today he propose u , dont worry my sweet didi and after he propose to u and u will give me treat.

Salima excited voice: Really he propose me, but he is very shy type.

Choti: I have idea and told her Jodha and salima ( silent talk).

Three girls thumps up said mission starts now.

Jodha and salima went to office and choti went to study room

Jodha enter the office floor and eyes widened and her jaws touch to ground.

Abdul: Jodha finally u came to office.and why u saw office like u first time enter in our office.

Jodha: why all girls wore short short dresses Abdul sir with fuming tone.

Abdul: But they wore not first time.

Jodha mumuring:yeah, first time I enter in office .why he appointed this girls allow wears short dress.she started cursed to Jalal.

Abdul understand her jealous and hears her mumuring words : He hee

Jodha come out thought: Abdul sir why u laughing me and iam going to my cabin.

Jalal car enter the kc building and his body guard escorted to him to enter the building.

All staff wished him and he straightly enter his cabin and settled down his chair .

Jodha outside of Jalal cabin self thought: Jodha u can do it, don't see his eyes, if u see his eyes then he know about ur feeling to him.

Jodha knock the door and Jalal said come in.

Jodha: Good morning sir. today onward iam ur new secrtary.

Jalal look at her face: Mis( he tell to mishty and Jodha interpret)

Jodha: Miss Jodha sir.( not look at his eyes)

Jalal hurts and already he angry her for went to Chennai yesterday now she told miss not Mrs.

Jalal : Oh miss ( Jalal stress miss word) Jodhai

Jodha sense his anger: Yes sir in slow voice.

Jalal: If u go now after one hour come with my coffee.

Jodha went out the cabin and fastly enter the cabin selfthought: Even iam not Stand in ten minutes infront of him and what I do know.hey babaji plz save ur favourite child.

Jalal sefthought: what happened to her, why she behave ,iam stranger to her.Jalal closed his eyes and think about past.

Flash back starts

Arjun and Jalal conversation continues.

Arjun : Jalal she is not only prankster and also intelligent, brave girl.she only help me my love story.

Jalal really interested hearing about his sherni.arjun continuously told about her sherni avatar in college days.One day , sherni, her parents, her sister , arohi , me and some of my friend went to famous threatre saw movie in Chennai.it is evening time, film starts 7pm.

Movie is going smoothly and interval time me , arohi and sherni went to outside and collect some of snack for others.

Arjun: sherni, u need anything, popcorn,icecream.

Jodha/sherni:no jiju , I don't want anything, I need water only.

Arjun give bottle to sherni, she is very thirsty and open the bottle, drink half bottle of water.

Arjun : how much bottle cost.

Canteen guy: half litre bottle Rs. 50 sir.

Jodha: what half litre bottle rs. 50, how dare u, I want to meet ur manager, tell me u all pay for tax in this bottle amount, show me tax proof first with angry tone.

Canteen guy now scared and called threatre manager.manager came that place with some of bodyguards.

Arjun and arohi scared saw manager with bodyguards, but Jodha is sherni,how will she scare look at them

Jodha show her finger to manager face: how dare u people, half litre bottle water but u selling to 50 rs.

Manager tried to conviced to sherni: but sherni not conviced and bodyguards angry look to us

Arjun and arohi dragged Jodha into inside of movie hall. Jodha fuming in anger.till now ad are going in threatre.now Jodha angry raised more,she throw water bottle to film screen said, if u not start movie otherwise I teared film screen and all body guard surrounding to us. Body guard dragged all of them outside( arjun, arohi, sherni, parents and sisters , some of my friends) Already police also arrived that place. police arrested all of them. We are all come with our car and police jeep followed us.

Police station arrived, time almost 9 pm and all girls stayed in outside police station,already threatre manager corrected inspector .

Inspector: u all are creating nonsense thing in threatre.i filed cases against all of u.

Jodha: sure u filed cases against us but I compliant about u first ,after 8 pm no one lady stayed in police station, u arrested girls in night time.Arrested time,There is no lady constable with u.

Inspector anger raised and raise his hand tried slap to Jodha that time press members all are arrived.click photos inspector position.inspector hand down automatically.

Jodha: I am only informed media about u and arrest us.

Inspector scared: sry mam, plz forgive us,don't do anything wrong

Jodha: After ten minutes threatre manager and body guard come infront of me

Inspector nods his head and called manager, narrates every details. After ten minutes all arrived to police station.

Manager: sry mam, plz don't do anything , our theatre name are spoiled, i wapsed my complaints and body guard also say sry to Jodha and others.

Jodha: I forgive u, if once again I will saw u people sold high amount to any thing in ur canteen with angry tone.

Manager: no mam, I will take care of it.

All are went to respective home .

Arjun: now tell me, what do u think about our sherni.

Jalal: why she fight for just 50 rupees.

Arjun: I ask same question to her outside of police station she told me , arjun jiju, we have money bought that thing , but in threatre, some poor people come see to movie, that people have no money that time, how the people buy costly thing, but if any emergency , people need some water, at time people not money in his hand, insake that people will also died that only iam angry about management.

Sherni look at paa: paa, I did anything wrong.

Paa: no beta, my daughter never wrong, I proud to tell others ur my daughters.next day she filed case about water issues in threatre( not revealed threatre name) judge ordered every theatre provided free water supply for people ( guys this is true incident to happened my sir )and arjun finished sherni story.

Jalal unknownly liked her character said arjun I want to talk to her.

Arjun dialed arohi phone and Jodha pickup the call. Arjun put in loud speaker.

Arjun: hello sherni darling, plz give phone to arohi.

Jodha: iam not give her, this is ur punishment for dd did to me.

Arjun : whose is dd

Jodha: dusht danav ur friend. Arjun laughed and Jalal glare to arjun.

Jodha: where is he now.

Arjun: sitting next to me.

Jalal: iam sry sherni , plz forgive me and arjun open mouth wided self thought: Jalal asking sry to girl, omg iam in real world or imaginary world

Jodha: my side also mistake that only I forgive u and I called only dd to u.u have any problem in that name.

Jalal: I have no problem, whatever name u call me.

Jodha: u r so cute, but u have punishment also and after arjun and arohi marriage finished, u give me treat.

Jalal: as u wish mam.

Jodha giggled: ok , give phone to jiju.

Jalal shake his hand and arjun come to real world , give phone to arjun.

Arjun: ha sherni, ur angry gone.

Jodha: ha, now dd and me are friends and now I give phone to arohi.

Arjun:no I talk later ,I have important deal now and cut the call.

Arjun look at Jalal and Jalal said : why u starring me, if iam any ghost.

Arjun: ha, I think ur ghost and u asked sry to girl and she said to dd, cute but ur not angry to her instead of u laughed

Jalal: I don't know arjun why I behaved with her.

Arjun: but I know, why u behave to her, because ur in love.with teasing tone

Jalal: no yaar, nothing like that, ha I liked her, this is not love.

Arjun: iam not confirmed but it is initial stage for love. What ever iam happy for u.iam going talk my love and left the place.

Jalal: I am in love with little smile and confused face. Flask end back to present.

Jalal cabin knocked & Jalal come back to real world.Jalal open his eyes. Saw Abdul is standing infront of him.

Abdul: what happened sir, why ur disturbed .

Jalal: nothing Abdul, I think about my JO today she behaved to me , iam stranger for her and narrates morning incident

Abdul : Jalal really iam confused yaar, in morning she behave very possessive about u then why she behave different

Jalal: iam not understand , Abdul narrates morning Jodha murmuring talk about girls wore dress.

Jalal : oh madam jealous, I love her possessive nature to me self thought and look ate Abdul, u go to our cabin.i will take care of her with smirked smile.

After some time Jodha come to Jalal cabin with his coffee.

Jodha: Sir ur coffee.

Jalal: Miss Jodha , thanks for coffee with sipped coffee

Jalal: Nice coffee miss Jodha and bring xyz file miss Jodha .

Jodha angry his word : Yes sir I will bring.( Jalal every time stress miss word)

Jalal: ok miss Jodha and Jodha went out with angry face.

Jalal self thought: In angry face my JO so cute.if she stand next to me, I eat her angry red cheeks raw.

Jalal working in his laptop and suddenly some one enter in cabin. Jalal thought his JO.

The person close to Jalal and same time Jalal hears Jodha voice may I come in sir.

Jalal look at her face: Ruquuia what r doing in my cabin.

Ruqz volunterly fell down Jalal chest said: Sry Jalal my legs twist and my hairs stuck ur button.

Jodha enter the cabin.look at both of them position.

Jodha angry raised and also hurts them position said: Sir ur file with harsh tone.

Jalal look at JO and said Ruqz get up now with Irriated voice

Ruqz: Jalal my hairs stuck ur button with seduced voice.

Jodha not tolerated more them position and push the glass statue near to her

Ruqz hears breaking sound and leave Jalal and standing in self next Jalal.

Ruqz: Hey girl, why u break this statue with bossy tone

Jodha: Sry mam, mistakely my hand touched that statue with irriating voice.

Ruqz: Clean it .

Jodha kneel down and collect glass pieces but glass hurts Jodha hand

Jodha: Ouch...her hand bleeding.

Jalal : Jodha , come near to her and touch her hand and carefully remove glass piece shout poen.

Poen come to cabin

Jalal: Quickly come with first aid box now.

Ruqz: Jalal, it just small cut, why ur over reacted.

Jalal: Miss Ruquuia, this is my office.this not ur house, getout my cabin immediately.

Sam stampered her foot and went out the cabin.

Jodha: Sir, mam told right, this only small cut with her eyes moist.

Jalal : Ur hand bleeding and iam not tolerate ur pain with emotional voice.now Jodha look at his eyes.

Both starring each others.at same time poen come with first aid box and disturbed them dream land.

Poen give Jalal to first aid kit and went out.

Jodha: Sir I will do myself give to me.

Jalal one anger glare enough shout her mouth Jalal did her first aid.

Jodha: Thank u sir for everything ( Jodha stress everything word) and left out immediately.

Jalal hand pulling his hairs : Why JO, u stay away from me and first I need to clear all misunderstanding between us.

Jodha cabin: Jodha selfthought: hey babaji, why he hug that chudail,rakshashi( devil),I know he is not his mistake,that devil volunteered did with everything, iam hurt that I saw devil in his arm,my heart is pain.i cannot see any women in his arms even though iam not stay with him but in my heart said he is mine only, sirf Jodha ki Jalal.

After some time,poen come with Jalal coffee, give to Jalal

Jalal: why u bring, where is Jodha.

Jodha: mam only prepared coffee to u and said me give to u.

Jalal: hmm and poen went out.

Jalal sipped the coffee and spiilt out fully selfthought, oh my jo angry with me,in my coffee add sugar instead of salt.Jalal come out of cabin and went out Jodha cabin ,there is no one in her cabin.Jalal search everyplace but she not in office.Jalal dialed Abdul number.

Jalal: Abdul where is Jodha.

Abdul:, if Jodha not in cabin,u call her, why u call me sir with teasing tone.

Jalal: Abdul just shut up, tell me where is my JO, iam already think about her anger& u teasing me.

Abdul: just now me and Jodha come to contruction site.

Jalal: when will u people arrive in office.

Abdul: after 2 hours , we are in office.dont worry I will take care of her,afterall she is my bhabhi.

Jalal: hmm, after reached office, call me immediately and cut the call.

Evening time

Jodha and Abdul enter the office, Abdul dialed Jalal phone and Jalal picked up the call.

Jalal: u and Jodha reached the office.

Abdul: yes we arrived sir and Jodha next stand in Abdul so she hears Abdul and Jalal conversation.

Jodha: Abdul sir I need ur help.

Abdul: ha Jodha tell me ( Abdul forget disconnected Jalal call, other side Jalal also hears both conversation)

Jodha: u drop me near park in our office because already salima went to park in her scooty.

Abdul: why salima went to park and u also want to go, what happened, plz tell me.

Jodha : oh Abdul sir we are going to park with blushing face.

Abdul: Jodha why u r blushing

Jalal: kya my JO blushing, why

Jodha: oh Abdul sir, we are going meet important person in park.

Jalal:iam here,then whose is important person my JO with possessive voice

Abdul: whose is Jodha

Jodha: we don't know sir and give letter to Abdul, read this letter u understand.

Abdul read the letter loudly :

hi sweetheart, I know u think who am I, first I saw u in our apartment. l mermized ur beauty, ur smile,everything about u.first I send u flowers , ur favourite chocolates, then yesterday suddenly u went out , I missed u so much then only realized I cannot live without u.plz sweetheart come evening xyz park near in ur office, iam waiting for u

Yours

Crazyfellow

Jalal angry raised ,his body stiffed , Abdul reads that letter, Jalal thought this letter to his JO,how dare he called my JO to sweetheart and gave flowers,chocolates to her and then he want to meet my JO to park.

Abdul: whose is he Jodha, why u people meet him to park.

Jodha: Abdul sir, I don't know who is this, but he proposed genuely that only we want to meet him.and come Abdul sir, iam already late.( in mind voice I know dd( Jalal) heared Abdul and my conversation .we only plan for Abdul sir only.u volunteers come to scapegoat what can I do for u and u deserve it.in morning u hug that devil.)

Abdul : Jodha what are thinking we already late.( Abdul mind voice that guy propose my salima, plz god save my love)

Abdul and Jodha settled down the car and Abdul drives car to park and Jalal driver his car and follow them.

Abdul and Jodha enter the park .already Jodha messaged to choti.

Jodha said: see Abdul sir, salima sit in park bench, let go Abdul sir.Abdul and Jodha went to pink place,

Salima: Jodha u came ,iam exicted meet to him.Jodha tell me,how is my dress and hairstyle, iam look like ok.

Abdul jealous raised: salima,ur dress not good,why u want to meet him.

Jodha: because he gave flowers and chocolate and even wrote letter, that only we want to meet him.

Jalal search Jodha and Abdul in park hears Jodha talk said: JO, u want see that guy for he given to chocolate and flowers, if u want chocolate, I open chocolate company for u ,if I saw him now, I kill him in my own hands with angry voice

Salima: Abdul sir, what happened with u, why u said, I don't meet him.

Abdul: oh salima

One guy come with flowers in his hand, guys look like slim,fair color ,wore white shirt and blue jeans and wears cap in his head,kneel down in front of salima.

Hai sweetheart, u come for me, thank u so much, whenever I saw u, I fallen love with u.u will become my love

Jodha said: how sweet proposal yaar, Abdul fuming in anger.

Jalal hears guy love proposal: how dare he propose my JO, my love and even my JO said sweet proposal .with angry tone.

Salima:I accep( salima said to accept , Abdul interpet salima)

Abdul touch salima hand: salima, idont know this is correct or wrong, iwant tell my feeling to u,when I saw first time I fallen love with u, yes salima, iam in love with u, I love u so much.salima eyes moist.i understand ur not love with me, u love him, iam not disturb u.adbul turn back to go out but salima

Salima hug Abdul: I love u too.

Abdul for second statue that place and Jodha throat ,Abdul come back to real world.

Guy: oh sweetheart, u love him but, what I will do,miss Jodha u also beautiful u accept my love.

Jodha: yes am already love with u, I accepted ur proposal

Jalal heared salima nd Abdul conversation,now only his heart stabled, next second his happiness vanished, my JO accepted his proposal, no it is not real.

Jodha: I love my little princess.

Abdul and Jalal shout: princess

Salima: she is our sister choti ( choti removes cap,correct her hairs )

Choti: aj , salima di accept ur proposal but till now I am not accept

Abdul: what happening yaar, anyone tell me clearly.

Jodha: we only planned for u, I know Abdul sir,u never propose salima in ur life time,that only we played small drama.how is it.

Abdul: if u continue drama in few minutes, my heart burstout anytime and thank u so much, u helped express my feeling.salima u come with me today night dinner ( with little stammering tone)

Choti whistled : aj dinner date but iam not allow my sis with u.

Abdul: aj mean

Choti: Abdul jiju

Abdul: choti u already accepted me then only call me jiju.

Choti: yeah I accepted ur my jiju but iam not allow my sis to dinner date if u want, u accept my condition.

Abdul: what condition meri maa

Choti: I ask some question and u say corrected answer, then only I allow my di to dinner date with u, if say wrong then forget dinner date.

Abdul look at salima and Jodha for help and Jodha and salima nods her negavitely,

Abdul: ok ask me

Choti: not know, I will ask after 7pm, now we are going to celebrate for our plan success and dinner date tomorrow only not today.

Abdul: ok

Choti: letgo sis, this treat sponsor by our salima di.bye aj with teasing tone.

Choti , salima left out and Jodha look at Abdul: Abdul sir I forget tell u one thing.

Jalal continues hearing: what she told now, already she done everything.

Jodha:Abdul sir plz cut Jalal sir call with giggled voice and went out with sisters

Jalal eyes opened wided and she already now iam hearing everything,but she prank with me, u forget JO u played with JMK, I give u punishment tomorrow for this prank in JMK style with smirked face.



Part end


Precap: let me think🤔


JMk punish jo in his style..😈


may be mir and shivanya face off😆



Prolouge - above
part 1 - pg 13

part 2,3,4- pg 31

part 5,6,7 -Pg 42

Part 8- Pg 52
Part 9,10 Page 58




Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago
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iam not shock😲
u have copyright for first place😳😆
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very fast kavya dear😳
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Lovely updates dear
Thanks for pm
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Unres
Amazing chappy
She's lioness
What Asad is planning
No MU
I'm going to read the next one now
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-



Unres
Amazing chappy
She's lioness
What Asad is planning
No MU
I'm going to read the next one now


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