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Prolouge -pg 1

Chapter 1 -pg 13

Chapter 2,3,4 -pg 31



plz ignore grammatical and spelling error

note : hamida is jalal 's grandmother not mom dearies


CHAPTER 5

Jodha shocked expression: Tum ( you), how dare u follow me .i mistakenly judge that u r good guy,but u follow me and call me even said come to ur cabin. ( now only Jodha mind stricked out ur cabin).that means u r my boss with shocked face

Man : Yes iam ur boss

Jodha phone rings and pickup the call

Jodha: Hello

Abdul: Where r u Jodha ,u not in ur cabin

Jodha: Abdul sir ,iam in boss cabin

Abdul: Why u r in boss cabin with confused face.

Jodha: Sir call me and said come to meet me as I came to his cabin

Abdul : But Jodha, sir out of station , tomorrow party only he return

Jodha: then Who is he (with confused face)

Abdul : U stay here, iam coming and cut the call.

Jodha: Who r u, omg ur thief right, I call police now.

Man: Hey beautiful, iam ur boss (with flirty tone)

Jodha: Ur not my boss, because my boss out of station.how dare u enter my boss cabin. And dont call me beautiful, U theft anything give me now otherwise .Said without take breathe.

Man: Otherwise kya (with naughty tone)

Jodha: otherwise...ha, I shout (same time Abdul enter cabin)

Jodha look at Abdul: see Abdul sir I think (pointed to man) he is thief and call police.

Abdul come infront of man and twisted his ear: Mir, what are u doing here.

Mir: bhai it is paining & please leave my ear.

Jodha: Abdul sir u know him with confuse face

Abdul left Mir ear: ha Jodha, he is our boss younger brother and his name (Mir interputed said Abdul bhai I introduce myself to beautiful with pleading tone)

Abdul said u never changed.

Mir: hey beautiful iam Mizra Muhammed Khan . my family call me Mir.

Jodha: sorry sir I mistaken u

Mir: hey beautiful don't call me sir. I feel ur my family so plz call me Mir.(with flirty tone)

Abdul throats: Mir, what r u doing here.(with fake angry tone)

Mir: Abdul bhai, I come to see bhai.where is he.

Abdul: ur bhai went to Chennai for important meeting and tomorrow party only he will come back

Mir: okk bhai and look at Jodha: beautiful, u also come party na.

Jodha: which party sir

Mir: u don't know, tomorrow we celebrate get together party but its boring party , don't worry but I will company u.

Jodha: get together party means every family circle and business people also come right .why u saying boring sir with confused face

Mir: yeah ur right dear but our company arrange only boring party.

Abdul : even I don't like this type of party.

Jodha: first tell me what are u doing that party.

Mir: party only for high class family, boring western music, western food,western dance,only for business talk.there is no enjoyment.

Jodha: hmm.That the problem,I have idea

Abdul & Mir with excited voice: kya

Jodha told her idea to them (silent talk) and look at both face , there is no reaction in their face

Jodha:U both not like my idea

Abdul & Mir shout: amazing idea, this year we celebrate party this way only.

Jodha: how we will arrange everything , we have less time with worried voice.

Mir: this is Mohammed party,u don't worry about that I arrange, u just supervising me.

Abdul: but we want permission our boss first.

Mir: I will talk him , abdul bhai, let start our arrangement we have less time.

Abdul , Jodha and Mir hi-fi each other and said let start with thumps up.

At same time Chennai place

five star hotel, chennai

Jalal: u only said my mishty( jodha) in Chennai. U don't know where is she.

Man: I confirmed sir,that girl in Chennai city, plz sir give me one day, tomorrow I will tell u all detail about her.

Jalal: first don't call her girl, and call her only madam with angry tone and hmm I will give u time. i have important meeting in Chennai ,u can go now with bossy tone

Jalal attend meeting and return back to his hostel. In road side jalal saw four boys surrounded a one girl.

And girl try escape to them, but she failed.one boy touch her face and come to touch with his lip to her and same time our hero tight punch to his cheeks.

Boy: how dare u punch me and try to attack Jalal , other three boys also joined attacked to Jalal.

Jalal: i dare punch u, u misbehave girl, u have not sister,mother in ur family. In god created man is stronger than woman ,because only for save her and not for destroy her With angry tone

One of the boy attacked Jalal right hand and Jalal hand bleeding ,its light scratch only. Jalal beat them vigorously and boys felt down Jalal legs said plz leave me, we r sorry.

Jalal said to boys: not me and said to her. And u all come back to her again then day is all ur last day. ur soul is not yours body(with warning tone)

Boy look at girl: sorry and runs out to save their life.

Girl look Jalal: thank u sir but ur hand bleeding plz come to my home.my home next lane only.

Jalal: its ok, I will manage.

Girl: u save my sainty sir.plz come with me said pleading tone.

Jalal: ok,let go with my car. both are settled down in car.after 5 minutes car infront of girl house.

Jalal and girl stepdown the car.Jalal look at her house and one middle age lady try to put food plate in wall. But the wall is little bit higher than her. A girl call lady to maa.

Maa:choti, u came and see jalal who is he (girl none our choti and lady our jodha maa)

Choti: maa I tell u later, what r u doing here.

Maa: In last half hours no one crow eat our food and then only I decided put food in highest place , then crow come to eat na I tried , but wall is higher then me with sad face.

Jalal hears both conversation and Jalal not understanding anything because both spoke in tamil language. Our hero don't know tamil.and Jalal understanding only food plate placed in wall.

Jalal: aunty, give me plate ,I put in the wall.

Maa: oh no son, but only family members do that ritual.

Choti: maa give him, he is only one save ur daughter today, (narrate whole incidents to janumaa).

Janumaa hug choti with tear eyes said: I prayed god only save u.

Choti: ur god only ,sent him to save me with teasing tone.plzz don't cry and give to him and he is also our family member

Janumaa: ha.. give plate to Jalal and Jalal put plate in wall.at same time crow came and ate to the food.

Choti: see maa, crow also know he is our family then only ate the food.

Jalal ask about ritual, why u people put food to crow.

Janu maa: said : today is new moon day known as mahalaya amavasya/pitru paksha beginning of dussehra. It is a special day dedicated to making an offering to express our gratitude to all previous generation of people who have contributed to our life.its ritual is done family members to deadly person.this day we prepared his/her favourite food and prayed to god and then serve food to crow and then only ritual completed. If crow came to eat na, that we considered previous generation person came to eat that food.( choti translated to Jalal)

Janumaa saw Jalal bleeding hand: oh son, ur hand bleeding come I do first aid to u and said to choti: go bring first aid box to hall and choti left. Janu maa settled down in sofa next to Jalal

Choti bring first aid box give to maa: maa clean the blood with dettol and put bandage over the hand and ask to Jalal : it is paining so much (with worried voice)

Jalal nods his head (Jalal self thought iam very happy today, no one carrying this much love to me except dadi )

Papa come downstairs and enquiry about Jalal, choti told all incidents one by one.

Papa touch Jalal head said: god bless u beta,my pari also stay and protected with u.

Jalal with confused face: pari

Papa: oh , she is angel of our family,today ritual done for her only, she is not more but she lives with us only.( said with tear eyes)

Jalal: sry uncle I remember her to u right.( inself thought he told about her, why I feel ,she very close to me, why my eyes moist and I don't know why this family attached to me in few minutes)

Papa: no beta we never forgot her and then only u remember na.

Janumaa: come son ,have ur lunch

Jalal: no aunty I will go

Maa: no , u have ur lunch and then only u go.

Jalal not rejected her offer and then Jalal, ragupapa ,choti settled down dinning table and maa serves the food and see the food items.

Jalal in self thought The food placed in green leaves (banana tree leaves) and varities of food are placed in leaves. One side sweet items and other side dishes. Till morning I am not eating anything.i saw the food items in my mouth saliva flows.

Jalal taste the food one bye one said to aunty: u r amazing cook.and food very tasty. Jalal stomach full. And wash the hand settled down in sofa.

Janumaa: come with bowl and give to Jalal said drink it beta.

Jalal: aunty, I already filled, I cannot eat it.

Janumaa: no beta, it is sweet dish, after having ur food ,u eat sweet food na,then food digest easily.

Jalal drink the food and ask what is this aunty and its taste is very good.

Papa: Rice payasam (kheer) it is my pari favourite sweet dish.

Choti: angel favourite dish also.

Papa: ur angel and my pari same replica both are same taste.

Janumaa look at Jalal: I forget ask ur name.

Jalal tell name to maa, suddenly Jalal phone rings and attend the call and said ur people do nothing I am coming with shout voice.and cut the call

Jalal: I need go aunty .i have important project paper to sign.

Janumaa: Don't shout like that beta , ur health will be spoiled.with carrying voice.

Jalal : Ji maa opps sry aunty.

Janumaa: U call me maa then only u go

Jalal: Thanks maa.

Janumaa: Whenever u have time come to ur house.

Jalal selfthought:this world is totally different from my world.this people even don't know my name but they carrying so much love me.and said her house as my house. iamlucky or unlucky ,plz god tell me with tear eyes and then hide his tears.

Jalal look at choti said: u must learn marshal art, then only u will save urself with care her cheeks , take care (look at maa, papa ): Maa , if I have time I will come and eat ur handmade food.

Maa: U always welcome beta. & Jalal left the place.

Screen shift to Delhi.

Place : Khurana mansion

Dadil sit in sofa ,Zoya come downstairs and sit next to dadi and same time Mir enter the house and three settled down next each other.

Three unison said : I have important matter talk about both of u.

Three look at each other face and laughed said its about Jalal / bhai marriage.

Dadi stop : U both also selected girl for Jalal

Zoya& Mir : Nods her/ his head said yes..

Zoya look at dadi : Dadi ,u also selected. Girl for bhai.

Dadi: Haan

Mir : But my choice is best choice.

Dadi: No Mr Mizra mohammed khan my choice is best choice.

Zoya: No, u both r wrong, my choice is best choice.

Dadi: She is beautiful, tradition , cultural girl.

Zoya: She is caring, love everyone.

Mir: She is intelligent and brave.

Zoya: She is only handle our bhai angry.

Dadi : She is only handle our Mohammed kandan.

Mir: She is only handle our Mohammed business.

Dadi said both shut ur mouth.this is not debt competition,this is our Jalal life.I want meet that two girl then only we will decide, if u ok for my condition

Zoya & Mir: Ok dadi

Zoya: When u will meet her,dadi

Mir : I have idea, tomorrow our party right .we will meet them that place.

Zoya& dadi: I am not coming that party. It is boring.

Mir: Hmm. Till now u both are not check ur whatsup or email messages.

Zoya: Why u saying like that , bhai.

Mir: First check ur message then tell me ur coming or not

Zoya and dadi check the message. Said interesting with broad smiled.

Dadi : I will come and I want to invite her first.

Zoya: I am also come and invite her too.

Mir: I already invited her.

Dail: Mir, u have fever ya ka and ur brain work so fast.

Zoya: Ha bhai, ur such lazy guy.and ur spend time only for flirting girls with teasing tone and runs the place.

Mir chases her and said how dare u teasing me .

Zoya hugs dadi Said stop him ,.dadi stop to Mir: she is right Mir with teasing tone.and Mir pout said u also tease me.

Mir also join the group hug and said tomorrow we will select our Jalal bhai's wife.

Zoya selfthought: I know meri gudiya (jodha) only select to my Bhabhi.

Mir thought: I know my beautiful (jodha) only select to my bhai wife.

Dadi self thought: I know my Jodha only select to my badi bahu

( yeah dadi, zoya ,mizra selected same person (jodha) )



CHAPTER 6

Place: five star hotel, Chennai

Jalal sit in sofa and relaxed position but think about his mishty.

Jalal thinking: where r u misty, iam Jalal Mohammed Khan,md of MKI construction, I have more achevied in business world, but I failed my own life, no mishty Jalal Mohammed Khan never failed in anything, i will find u soon. Once I find u then my mishty never go away from me.

Jalal phone ring and disturbed his thinking.

Jalal with out seeing caller id & attended phone with irriating voice: hello, who is this.

Mir: bhai, iam Mir speaking

Jalal: hmm, tell me

Mir: I need ur permission for party arrangement.

Jalal: already I gave u permission,right and then why u asking me once again

Mir: oh... bhai I need some changes in party arrangement then only I need ur permission.( with little scared voice)

Jalal: ok ,u and Abdul decided the party, ha don't disappointed me.

Mir with excited voice: thank u bhai. U will come tomorrow bhai.

Jalal: yes I am coming tomorrow morning flight, and then I will check ur arrangement.

Mir: ok bye bhai and cut the call.

Place: Jodha house

Choti: who is pari ,maa.

Maa: she is angel of our house, u know she is look like Jodha, not even look and also characters are same replica for ur angel(Jodha).

Choti: she is more important of our family but till now ur not tell me about her.

Maa carrying her hairs: ur angel also don't know about her and she is our past life.

Choti: maa, tell me about her, what relationship with me

Maa: oh she is ur..(papa come & interputed)

Papa: choti, ur angel call u, go attend her call

Choti: angel phone, and runout room to pick of the phone.

Papa said to maa: janu plz don't tell anyting about pari to our princess, pari is our past life and we live in present and future not in past, I am already lost my pari in our lives. I know her soul around with us.

Janu : I am not tell anything about pari to them.

Papa thinking something and janumaa starring to him.

Janu: u think that boy (Jalal) right.

Papa: ha janu he remember our motu.

Janu: I am also feel like that he is our motu

Papa: but it is not possible Janu

Janu: u also right.

Hall: choti and Jodha phone conversation

Choti: di how are u

Jodha: iam fine .

Choti: I need tell u something with slow voice

Jodha guess something wrong : hmmm, what problem.

Choti: in morning ,raghul gang surrounded me and try to misbehave me.

Jodha: what u r safe na ,they misbehaved u with worried and mixed angry voice:

Choti: I am alright didi , one man come to save me.

Jodha: tell me whole incidents with worried voice.

Choti told whole incidents.said: u know he is such handsome guys,if ur not married then I decided he is my jiju only.

Jodha: he is more handsome kya ,he impressed my choti.

Choti:ha didi , strong biceps,perfect structure and 6 pack body, u see him na and u also drooling him( with exicted voice)

Jodha: no one impressed Jodha, except ur jiju (said with pride voice) And stop ur blah blah .and I need ur help then only I call u.

Choti: order me mam I will do

Jodha: tomorrow my office party, I am not packed my party dress and then only i call u send to my dresses.or purchase new dress for me.

Choti: but u purchase new dress in delhi.

Jodha: I have no time for shopping.

Choti: hmm.i purchase for u and send dress to evening

Jodha: thank u sweetheart and don't go alone , take care

Choti: ur always welcome and I care myself ,don't worry

Jodha: select sari or choli dress or salwar suite

Choti: ok bye I will go to shopping now and cut the call & went to shopping.

Place: delhi

Jodha busy in party arrangrement and at time Mir enter the cabin.

Mir: beautiful, I need ur help for select my dress

Jodha: I have more work to do, I am not coming anywhere.

Mir: I know that only I bring designer to our office.and come select dress for me with puppy face.

Jodha: hmm ok come

Mir & Jodha went to meet designer and show dress to Jodha.

Jodha select his Mir dress: sir u wear red with gold colour sherwani, this is suite u

Mir: thanks u sweetheart ur taste very good

Jodha eyes staring at one dress and Mir noticied it

Mir: why r u starring that dress.

Jodha thinking: Jodha, why u imagine in ur husband in this dress and I don't know when i come to delhi I feel he very near to me. specially in my office, I feel him everywhere. I don't know why I feel like that. Now I imagined this dress for him. he makes me mad about him with her eyes moist.

Jodha wipes her tears: said Mir ; oh this dress suitable to my hubby(in murmuring voice)

Mir: tell me loudly.

Jodha: nothing iam going.

Mir: wait u like the dress very much

Jodha: yes so what

Mir : u can go to cabin ,thank u, select dress for me.and Jodha left the cabin.

Mir: I think this dress suite to bhai because my bhabhi like this dress..

Jodha enter her cabin and thinking about her hubby.

Zoya call to Jodha: hello gudiya di,where are u now.

Jodha: iam in office dear.

Zoya: I need talk to u.

Jodha: but iam busy today and I arrange party items

Zoya: di ur architect not party arrangement manager.

Jodha: I know shona, my company arrange party and I am helping party arrangement

Zoya thinking: party, she is work in bhai company.

Jodha:why r u silent.

Zoya: ha , what is ur company name di.

Jodha: MKI Construction

Zoya: KYA u work in MKI construction but u told me xyz company.

Jodha: ha three months back, MKI brought my old company so I work in MKI

Zoya: so ur work in MKI

Jodha: ha meri maa , why u r shocked.

Zoya: u meet ur boss.

Jodha: no , till now, I didnot see him ,why u asking this question,u already know him

Zoya: no no , my friend circle told me, he is hot and handsome guys and then only I ask ing u.

Jodha: everyperson spoke about him only, in my collegue,salima and even u too talk about him.but iam thinking only about my boss wife.

Zoya with confused face thinking: boss wife, bhai not married but di talk about boss wife.

Jodha: shona ur in line.

Zoya: ha di iam listening but why u thinking about boss wife.

Jodha: oh every girls drooling him, oh poor bechari(boss wife) she also possessive about her husband. She hurt that girls drooling him.

Zoya: but bhai not married.

Jodha: bhai

Zoya: sry tongue slipped,ur boss not married.

Jodha: so what,one day he also married to one girl right.

Zoya thinking: u only that bechari, Gudiya di.( with naughty face).

Zoya said: ok di I meet u tomorrow party.

Jodha: u also come party.

Zoya: oh... ha ..this is big party, my family also invited.

Jodha: ok, I will meet u tomorrow bye and cut the call.

Zoya: oh great thank u god,thank u so much.

Place: mall, Chennai

Choti enter the mall, select dress for Jodha and same time Jalal enter the mall.

Jalal ask to shophelper: show new collection jewellery set

Shopkeeper show new collection set and ask u need tradition or modern set sir.

Jalal: hmm both.

Shopkeeper: ok sir and bring set show to Jalal.

Jalal: saw the piece one by one.and select one set for zoya and pearl set for dadi .and one set for his misthy(jodha). and went to dress section.

Choti select Jodha for blue colour choli dress and dress elegant, beautiful dress.

Other side Jalal select dress for Zoya, Mir and dadi & went out but his legs struck in one place. Jalal saw dress. He like that dress very much. It is white with blue combination colour net saree and full design work , beautiful and close his eyes imagine his mishty in saree and said beautiful.

Jalal said to shopkeeper: pack this dress.immediately and paid the bill and collect the parcel.

Jalal talk with phone bump into girl.

Girl: sry ,sir u are here.

Jalal look at girl: choti, what r u doing here.

Choti: sir, I come and purchase dress for di.

Jalal: ur shopping finished na ,come I will drop u.

Choti: no sir first I need this dress send to di

Jalal: where is ur sister.

Choti: she is working in delhi sir.

Jalal: I delivered the parcel and am also going delhi tomorrow

Choti: no sir ,I will manage and sent her

Jalal: in morning only, u said that iam ur family member, but now u think I third person for u.

Choti:nahi sir, I thought that i disturbed ur work.

Jalal: I have no problem ,give me parcel and address, I deliver.( great JALAL Mohammed khan, today deliver boy to his mishty (jodha))

Choti: ok give him parcel, address and thanku sir

Jalal: lets go I will drop u. and drop to choti went back way to hotel.

Suddenly tyre blast sound and Jalal step down his car saw that car tyre punctured with nail patch and call hotel said sent new car to him.

Jalal waiting for car and talk with his phone to someone, ball hit with his Jalal shoes .Jalal get the ball.at same time one little girl come near Jalal.

Littlegirl: uncle , ball is mine and give to me

Jalal: this is ur sweetheart.

Little girl: ha,give me please with puppy face

Jalal: I give u but one condition

Little girl:what uncle with baby face

Jalal: u don't play alone in road side ok, sweet heart and give ball to her.

Little girl tuck his pant and Jalal kneel down level to little girl.at same time one bullet hit Jalal glass window, if Jalal stand na that bullet hit Jalal heart, sudden bullet sound, girl hug Jalal tighly. Jalal stand up with girl in his arms, saw one bike rider fastly ride the bike went out that place, Jalal tried to catch the rider but he think about girl.it is common to Jalal ,in business field there is more enemy in his life.

Jalal rubs her back: nothing sweetheart and u r ok.

Little : touch Jalal cheeks: uncle u r ok na

Jalal: ha sweetheart iam also alright and kisses her forehead and what is ur name sweetheart.

Little: pari said kiss his cheek.

Jalal :thank u sweetheart today u save my life said with put down her.

Little: bye friend ,I want to go ,my mom search for me

Jalal: bye sweetheart and take care.

Jalal car also arrived and back to hotel.

After one hours

Place: delhi

Man speak in call said: u cannot do anything work correctly, u r useless people. i appointed u only for Jalal but ur are useless with angry voice hit his hand with glass window and blood flow in his hand and cut the call.

Woman: Asad what happened why hit in your hand through window glass.see ur hand bleeding and come I first aid to u said touches his hand

Asad snap her hand: u never worried about ur own children,but know u worried about me with harsh tone

Dilshad Maa:I always love my children

Asad: don't lie mrs Ahmed khan

Dilshad Maa: Asad u cannot understand my feeling and plz forget the past and live happy life beta

Asad: u both only away from my happiness and now u said live happy life.and already said don't interfere my matters.and went out the place


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CHAPTER 7


note :


JMK- Jalal Mohammed khan

MKI - Mohammed Khan industries



Party day: morning

Place: Jodha apartment, delhi


Salima: wake up Jodha, yesterday u told me, u need go to temple early.

Jodha: ha Salima, u also come with me, my maa said always Friday we go to temple and take durgamaa blessing.

Salima: but Jodha I have no mother and iam orphan, there is no one advice me and take care mine with tears eyes

Jodha: whose said ur orphan, this world created by god and u also created by god. Now onwards ur my sister and my family is ur family, don't say once again ur orphan u have rajarampapa, janumaa And two sister .

( guys u thinking how suddenly both r sister..some relation dont want blood relation even long time..if their heart feel ,they r own for each other that enough their relationship..thats magic of love..)

Salima hugs Jodha and cried. Thanks Jodha , I am not orphan.with loud crying voice

Jodha: if u cry iam not give ur favourite chips packets with teasing tone.

Salima: but aunty and uncle accept me for their daughter.

Jodha: u stupid, first u accept and then think about maa and papa

Salima: sry Jodha ,our maa said we need to go temple right lets go temple. Hurry up and am also dress up come with u.

Jodha: that my sister. lets go temple.

Jodha and Salima went to temple and Salima go to collect pooja plate. And Jodha waiting orphanage side

Jodha saw dadi sitting in steps. Jodha went dadi place.

Jodha: dadi, when u came.

Dadi: Jodha beta iam waiting for u and today I am going important party , if don't mind u company with me.

Jodha: sry dadi, but I have to attend important party today. Iam not come with u

Dadi: its ok Jodha (with low tone).

Jodha: it is my office party, I am working in MKI construction, iam also one of the coordinator of party arrangement so that only iam not come to u.sry dadi.

Dadi thinking: meri bahu is working in my company only and she also come to party.omg god also help me .

Jodha: dadi, sry I am not come with u but. next time I will come with u promise

Dadi: ok beta,no problems u enjoy ur party. I meet u later and give me ur number dear

Jodha: ok dadi both exchanged their number .dadi went out to orphanage

Salima came and see Jodha talk someone but not see person face.

Salima: Jodha, who's that lady

Jodha: she is my friend , I meets daily in orphanage, lets pray we need to go office and I need ur help for party arrangements.

Jodha and Salima give pooja plate to priest

Jodha mindvoice: today iam very happy and I dont know what reason in my happiness but I like this feeling,I thought today something happen in my life , even i don't know that bad thing or good thing. Plz god always stay with my family and stay with him (jalal)

Jodha and Salima went out to temple.

Jalal flight landed in delhi and outside airport Jalal driver waiting for JMK .JMK bodyground collect the parcel and put in car. And then JMK settled in Car back seat and driver drive the car.

JMK give address to driver: first go this address and then go to mansion. Driver drove the car and car stop in front of Jodha apartment and same time Jalal phone ring and attend the call and pickup the wrong parcel ,then go to Jodha apartment.

Jalal stand in front of door and press calling bell. Door open but ,not Jodha apartment door but open Jodha neighbor apartment door

Lady : who r u ,what do u want.

Jalal: look at lady thinking: this lady not recognize me, iam JMK world famous business.man but this lady asking me who r u. ( oyie hero even ur wife also no who r u ,u think about lady ,buddhu Mohammed Khan)

Lady: oyie mister , what do u want, why r u starring me, I know iam very beautiful than girls( Jodha and Salima). Don't look like that iam already married.

Jalal with irriating face: parcel

Lady: with shocking face :u r delivery boy, in delhi delivery boy also handsome, hot not bad.but girls went to office and she already told collect the parcel.give me and she returns back ,I will give to her.( lady's new in delhi,that only she is not recognize JMK)

Jalal: give to parcel to her and went out the apartment quickly and back to mansion.

Jalal enter the mansion and bodygourd pickup the parcel follow Jalal .dadi saw that Jalal enter in mansion

Dadi: Jalal u came , come have ur breakfast.beta. after breakfast Jalal and dadi settled in sofa Mir and Zoya come downstairs sit next to Jalal.

Mir: how is meeting in Chennai bro

Jalal: its good

Zoya look at parcel in sofa: what is this bhai, I know bhai u brought our gift right

Dadi: shona , u know very well ur bhai,whenever he go ,he brought gift for family members.

Jalal: how can I forget my shona, my baby.

Zoya: thank u bhai.

Jalal give parcel to dadi,Mir and Zoya.

All open the parcel ,said bhai it so beautiful, ur choice always best.

Ram singh bring Jalal black coffee give to Jalal. See that one parcel is remain in sofa

( Ram singh servant of mohammed mansion , he is very innocent and also stupid)

Ram singh: Jalal sir,this parcel for ur girl friend

dadi,zoya and mir angry glare to Ram singh except Jalal

Ram singh: Why r u starring me dadimaa and in my face any flour there,( with innocent face)

Zoya: Ram singh bhai,why u told Jalal bhai have girlfriend.

Ram singh: Shona baby ,iam not said Jalal sir have a girlfriend And only said this parcel to Jalal's sir girlfriend.

Zoya touch her forehead with hand said: Ram singh bhai ,go to kitchen and work here.

Ram singh:Shona baby u have headache and I will bring tea for u.with worried face.

Shona: Dadi, plz help me.

Ram singh: Baby iam here,I will help u.why u disturbed dadimaa with innocent face

Dadi: Ram singh go bring coffee for me.

Ram singh: Ji dadi,Shona baby I will bring dadi coffee first and then I will help u and went to kitchen.

Shona: Ram singh bhai always irritating me.

Mir: Everyone irriate by zoya but now zoya irritated, it credit go to Ram singh bhai.with teasing tone.

Zoya: Bhai I deal u later,Jalal bhai, who is owner of this parcel .

Jalal thinking: How can I tell u this parcel for my mishty

Jalal: First tell me, why r u people glare to Ram singh with serious tone.

Dadi,Mir and Zoya: Look at each other,in mind voice said we already selected girl for u,Ram singh told u have girlfriend.how dare him.

Jalal: Why u look each other,tell me fast.and Jalal phone ring and attend call went to room ofcousre get the parcel also.

Mir: Dadi great escape.

Dadi:ha, Mir he know we selected girls for him,that lion kill and eat raw us.

Zoya: U r right dadi and we have prepare to our plan.

Mir: I go to office dadi, bye and left out.


Place: MKI

Jodha: Salima all work done.

Salima: All work done except flower decoration only pending

Jodha: U check food items,hall decoration, dance groups,music,dj,return gifts etc with said one go

Salima: Let first u have breathe and then say list.and all work finished don't worry.

Jodha phone rings and see id said our choti phone with smile face.

Jodha: Ha choti tell me

Choti: U got ur dress

Jodha: I got it and my neighbour called me said that she collected dress by deliver boy( Jalal)

Choti: Ok I need talk to Salima di.

Jodha: Talk with ur Salima di and give phone to Salima.

Salima: Hello choti how r u, aunty and uncle.

Choti: Silent

Salima: Are u in line ,choti ,Jodha I think something wrong in phone, iam not hear choti voice.

Choti:I am hear ur voice and angry with u in child angry voice.

Salima: Why my choti angry with me.

Choti: Why u told maa and papa to aunty and uncle.

Salima: I am sry meri maa.i never told this words in my life time.

Choti: That better and tell me about my jiju.

Salima: Who is ur jiju

Choti: Hmm Abdul jiju.with teasing tone.

Salima blushed hear Abdul name: Oh how do u know about Abdul.

Choti: I know everything about u, iam not near u but I tell u that what r u doing now

Salima: Tell me what am doing now.

Choti: Ur blushing and think about my jijiu.if u blush like that my jiju eat raw ur red cheek

Salima: Ur jiju eat raw na, first he propose me na

Choti: Dont worry I will correct him.

Salima: Ur jiju matter don't talk to me now and what to do want choti and I wannt give anything to u.tell me , i buy for u ( with emotional voice)

Choti: Hmm when will u both come home.i miss u both.

Salima: I also eager to meet u , maa and papa.

Jodha interfaces conversation.Salima if u finished let go we do more work.

Pinnky: Ha Jodha, choti bye, I talk u later.

Choti: Bye di enjoy ur party with my jiju with teasing tone and cut the call.

Place: khurana mansion , evening time

Jalal passes Zoya room, he hears phone ring sound, he enter Zoya room there is no one and saw Zoya phone ring and pick up phone, attend

Jalal: hello, who is this

Jodha hears voice stunned in one minute, in mind voice , this voice is my hubby voice, after second thought that its not possible right, Jodha now days u mad about him.

Jalal: hello, who are u , u r line.

Jodha: hello, can I speak shona.

Jalal mind voice: meri mishty voice,how it is possible.i have confirm first.

Jalal said to Jodha: ur my mis..(Zoya come and snatched phone from Jalal hand)

Zoya: hello

Jodha: shona , who's speaking previous to me.

Zoya: oh meri bhai.

Jodha: I called for that u come party or not.and oh..(in mind he is also coming)

Zoya: I coming and meri bhai also coming with teasing tone

Jodha: iam not asking for ur bhai. Iam asking for u only.( Jodha mind voice : why iam happy , he also coming for party

Zoya: bye ,I meet u later

Jalal: shona, who is this

Zoya: bhai my friend.

Jalal: she is also come to party.( eagerly waiting for zoya answer)

Zoya: she is not coming bhai.

Jalal face fell down and Zoya noticed his face said: she is also coming don't worry bhai.

Jalal : I am not worried about ur friend with bossy tone.

Zoya teasing look: ok I see that, till now ur not ready.

Jalal: iam ready for party.

Zoya: this oufit, we r not going meeting and we are going get together party. So please change ur dress and this is not dress code for party,

Jalal: there is no dress code in party

Zoya: bhai , ur really md of MK industries, this is ur party and u don't know dress code. I send u party invitation cards .

Jalal see the party invitation cards:where is Mir with shout voice.

Jalal went to his room and call to Mir

Mir: bhai , u ready for party.

Jalal: what hell is this.( with angry tone)

Mir: kya bhai

Jalal: party invitation card mr Mizra Mohammed khan

Mir: oh .. bhai u already give me permission.

Jalal: but u not tell me , u changes full themes of party.

Mir: trust me bhai and this party really amazing in this evening and I arrange ur outfit in ur cupboard.and bye bhai , I meet u in party.

Jalal: Mir , I will see u in party with angry tone.

Jalal saw outfit his dress in the cupboard, he really likes that dress and wears went to the party.( ofcourse ur wife only selected ur dress)

Place: Jodha apartment

Jodha: choti , why u select dress for me.

Salima: this really beautiful saree and u wear it ( this dress selected by Jalal , parcel changed)

Jodha: see Salima, this blouse back only knot there,( backless blouse)

Salima: if u wear this dress , every person starring only u. I pray to God, keep save my sister from party boys with teasing tone

Jodha: Salima, u teasing me.

Salima: no dear, plz wear it. It is beautiful and Mir also come to pickup us.

Jodha: ok .


Part end


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