Akdha FF- Marriage at first sight Part 1 to 25 & thread2 link-pg - Page 35

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Awesome update

Jalal saved choti. ...went to jodha's house too had payasam too😛

Again he became a courier boy 😉 ...jodha selected his dress for the party...Jalal send the wrong parcel...jodha is wearing what Jalal selected 😛

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So both are so near from each other but can't know that
But finally they will meet
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CHAPTER 8

Place: party hall, Evening

The big hall is fully decorated by flowers like roses,oxchid ,different varieties of flowers but original flowers .hall fully glowing in sake of colourful light.one side of hall arranged stage for different varities of dance.

Jalal , Zoya and Dadi enter the hall. Abdul welcome them,

Abdul: Good evening Dadi /shona/sir.

Zoya: Abdul bhai today party so different from previous year party.

Abdul: u like it shona

Zoya: No bhai, I love it with excited voice.thank u bhai.

Abdul: ur thank goes to our new architect

Zoya: I want to see him ,bhai

Abdul: not him shona ,her,she have both brain and beautiful ,traditional girl.

Zoya: really, it all arranged by girl and I want to see her.( inself thought I know my gudiya di only did it everything.)

Dadi: even wish to meet her and lets go inside shona.( mindthought my bahu have good taste)

Dadi and shona went into inside. Jalal and Abdul are standing in outside.

Jalal: Abdul u changed whole themes u not inform me.with angry tone.

Abdul: sir.. Mir already informed u right with scary voice.

Jalal: u know very well, foreign client also come this party.

Abdul: I know sir , we arranged everything properly

Jalal: food items

Abdul: all Indian food like Punjabi,south Indian dish and north Indian dish.

Jalal: but ,Indian food are more spices,how foreign client eat that food.

Abdul: she arranged less spices food for foreign client, don't worry we arranged everything.

Jalal: hmm, lets go inside. I want to check whole arrangement with bossy tone

Jalal and Abdul went to inside

Jalal saw that hall fully arranged flowers and lighting, it look like both tradition and modern decoration. It neatly arranged everything.

Jalal: Abdul why we people arrange golu, it is get together party

Abdul: I ask same question to her that she said ,this party mainly for foreign clients..insake of golu foreign client know about our culture , dressing , foods . in our generation they don't know about our full history and our cultural, tradition of india( including me too).so I decided to golu arrange in party. In golu sake children also know about epics and tradition values.

Jalal: hmm ok (Jalal impressed her answer)

Jalal: but why u people arranged entry fees.

Abdul: entry fees goes to children orphanage fund.

Jalal: If u people want donate orphanage , I will give u,but why u put entry fees.

Abdul: sir, I asked sir, she said that alteast today only they spend their money to valuable things.. if we collect entry fees that amount goes to orphanage so people spend money in good thing right, that only I permit to collect entry fees.

Jalal: where's she

Abdul: one hour back only she went to her home,and already I called her,Mir goes to pick her.

Jalal: ok , after she come party and tell me , I want to meet her.

Abdul: ok Jalal

Jalal: Abdul, u remember, iam ur friend with fake shocked face

Abdul: what can i do , my boss is angry person and if iam not properly work ,he fire me through his big eyes.

Jalal smirked face and said acha I tell ur boss , u told he is angry person.

Abdul: u say nor say, he never fired me to job. Because he is good heart person

Jalal: MR .Abdul,u go to welcome our guest or talk ur friend, I am not giving u salary for chat with ur friend with bossy tone.

Abdul: yes boss. I talk later my friend with smiling face and left the place.

Jalal: he never changed with small smile.

Place: Jodha apartment

Mir waiting outside for girls coming and Salima come down to parking area

Mir: Sb where is JB

Salima : What Sb and Jb

Mir: Salima beautiful and Jodha beautiful ( in mind voice Salima Bhabhi and Jodha Bhabhi )

Salima: See she come to stairs

Mir look at steps:in mind voice Omg she more beautiful today.iam jealous with my own bhai.bhai u r so lucky,u got my Bhabhi .iam also lucky bhai, proudly told she is my Bhabhi.

Jodha stand infront of Mir wave her Hand in front Mir face and Mir come back to real world.

Jodha: Sir why look me like that.iam not looking good.

Mir: Omg ur look more beautiful today.in murmuring voice bhai starring only u not anyone..

Jodha: What did u say, iam not hear.

Mir: We already late, lets go to party.

Mir, Jodha and Salima enter party hall. Jodha heart beat raised and same time Jalal heart also raised rapidly

Jodha and Jalal unison said: why I feel he /she very close to me.Jodha distracted by Mir.

Mir: sb and jb iam going to see bhai & enjoy the party.

Salima: Ok Mir and left the place.

Salima and Jodha talk to some staff members.

Salima: Jodha iam hungry.as bring juice for us.salima left to food counter

Jodha: Salima ,she always thing about food.suddenly one person close Jodha eyes through her hand

Jodha: Who is this and leave my eyes.

Person: Tell me, who iam

Jodha self thought: Oh meri Shona

Jodha: I know ur my..

Zoya: Tell me quicky. With eagerly waiting for Jodha answer.

Jodha with teasing tone: Ur my Naaz right I miss u so much. Where are u now days ur not call me also.

Zoya remove her hand said: Di iam not ur Naaz and iam ur shona .u forget me.

Jodha turn face to Zoya: How can I forget my shonu darling.i just tease u dear .

Zoya hugs Jodha: I miss u so much and maa ,papa and choti everyone fine

Jodha: All are fine dear

Zoya ask more question Jodha family and told about her carriers and Jodha politely said to her

Zoya : I will go and come with Dadi .iwant introduce Dadi to u.u wait here iam coming and left the place.

Jodha waiting for Salima and Zoya no one comes.and saw some person Stand in golu place .she went to place.

Old ladies starring at golu.Jodha saw that the old ladies starring golu long times

Jodha: Aunty why r u people starring golu.

old lady: Beta why put golu on 5 stairs only.

Jodha: Auntyji I tell u with polite voice.

We put only 5 steps.because in base row,we kept dolls like animal and bird should be kept.

In next row ,dolls like chettair ,conductor,like normal human beings should be kept in next rows.

Dolls like ramana,Ramakrishna paramahamsa,other mahans should be kept.

Dolls like incarnation dasavathara,Krishna,Rama should be kept in next rows.

Dolls like ambal,shivan,Vishnu,Lakshmi god dolls should be kept on the uppermost step so that only we set 5 steps.

Other lady: Why u people set animal and birds in base row.

Jodha:: First as just living beings without knowledge like animals and then with only brain and not with any likes to attain god ( human beings like money minded ) and then reach saint step when will come out money minded then only we reach saint level and then only we reach to god that only we set this order .

Other lady come that place: super Jodha beta u clearly told about golu steps detail.

Jodha: Dadi u come this party,u dont inform me, morning said with child fake angry .

Dadi: 2minutes before u talk like that 60years old lady ,now u talk like u r 6 years baby.and Jodha twisted her lips.

Jodha phone rings and attend her call.

Jodha look at Dadi: Dadi I need to go and see dance group.i talk u later.Dadi iam sry.

Dadi: Its ok u go do ur work.And Jodha left the place.

One lady ask Dadi :hamida ji u know very well that girl.

Dadi: Ha padminiji she is very nice girl.

Padmini: I like that girl very much and I think she is perfect for my granndson. Plz Tell me about her family details.

Dadi in mind voice: How dare padmini.u think u want meri bahu hand to ur grandson..she is my Jalal wife and sirf meri bahu.and padmini shake Dadi hand.and Dadi come out of her thought..

Padmini:what r u thinking,I ask about girl detail.

Dadi quickly said :Nothing she already engaged

Padmini: Oh my bad luck.but she engaged family very lucky that family got her.

Dadi: We lucky l know

Padmini: What

Dadi: Lets go dance program start and then dinner already arranged for us.

Shift to Jalal

Jalal talk some of the client and talk about business matter ,at time Dadi,Zoya and Mir reach that place.

Zoya: Bhai

Jalal : Ha tell me shona

Zoya: Come with me ,I introduce important person to u.

Dadi: Nahi Jalal beta come with me I introduce my favourite person to u.

Mir: No bhai,don't hear both of their word come with me ,I introduce one person to u.

Jalal irritated by three .and said u people student of Ramsingh

One of the client and come to their place

Client: Mr MOHAMMED u arranged wonderful party and thank u inviting for party.

MOHAMMED: My pleasure, Mr Wilson And u have ur dinner .

Client: Yeah I have it .it is wonderful dishes.u have delicate staff that only u r no 1 in business world especially that girl she is very intelligent and beautiful.

MOHAMMED: Thank u and dance start now and come Mr Wilson.both are left the place.

Dadi: He is first priority only his business.

Mir: If Bhabhi come and then bhai around only meri Bhabhi.let go enjoy the party.

Dandiya Dance program finished.and Mir announced

Ladies and gentlemen I welcome all of u dance lets dance..if dance performer only one condition.dance participation wear face mask even pairs only allowed.

Abdul,Mir,Salima and Jodha stand in side of corner.

Jodha: Salima, Abdul jiju very shy type,u go to ask for dance

Salima: How can I ask him.even I am also shy.he is man but till now he not ask me.

Jodha: I will help u my dear sis.

Pinnky: Thank u dear

Jodha: Abdul sir I need ur help

Abdul: Tell me Jodha.

Jodha: If u have friend in this party because Salima need to dance partner I think u have any friend company with her

Abdul: No I have no friend with tensed face.

Mir: No problem bhai .i will dance with SB with teasing tone

Abdul pressed Mir shoulder said: But u dance with Jodha right and lets go Salima I will dance with u.

Jodha: Iam not dance with Mir sir.

Salima: Jodha plz accept for my sake with puppy face.

Jodha: Hmm ok.

Other side

Zoya: Bhai i have no partner and come dance with me.plz bhai I have no partner plz...

Jalal : Ok come.

Zoya : First wears this mask.

Jalal and Zoya wears mask and come to dance floor.and Jodha,Mir,and Abdul,Salima also come in dance floor with mask face.

Song starts.

All dance with respective partners suddenly Mir phone rings and attend the call left to Jodha alone in dance floor.

One guy come and stand next Jodha ask shall we dance babe.

Jodha look at guy: his Eyes full of lust to her and said iam not dance with u.

Guy: It s ok come with me babe and lets go dance

He dragged to Jodha dance floor and dance with her.

Jodha uncomfortable dance with him.and inself thought god plz save me today.

At same time Jalal and Zoya look at Jodha uncomfortable with that guy.

Zoya mind voice: Gudiya di why dance with guy.she is not comfortable with him. What I will do..

Jalal mind voice: Who is this girl.why iam angry about that guy dance with her.she is also not comfortable with him.why i worry about that girl.

Mir also finished call and come back dance floor.saw Jodha in stage.

Mir mind voice: How dare he touch my bhabhi.what can i do now , think Mir think

Mir went announced place and Said dance participator let change ur dance partner to next person.

Jodha next person our Jalal dance with Zoya.

Zoya in mind voice: Mir bhai u save our Bhabhi today.

Zoya: bhai, Let go ask the girl dance with u .i think she is not comfortable with him plz bhai

Jalal: U shona

Zoya: No bhai.I want see Dadi first ,u go bhai.

Jalal : Hmm .and went to Jodha side.

Jalal gesture to Jodha hand for dance.

Jodha look at Jalal eyes : His eyes attract to her & her hand automatically went to his Hand.

The song starts. Both are starring with other eyes

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

( Jalal and Jodha twingled in hand)

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I for the world?

( Jalal hand place in Jodha waist protectively and Jodha placed her hand in Jalal shoulder)

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaah miljaaye

May my sighs find a shelter in your heart;

( jalal pulled jo close..in sake of pull jo face hit jalal heart..both heart beat raised ..)

tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye

may your love annihilate my life.

jitne paas hai khushbu saans ke

As close as fragrance is to breath,

(jo's fragrance smell make jalal to insane)

jitne paas honthon ke sargam

as close as melody is to lips,

jaise saath hai karwat yaad ke

as close as the twists and turns of thought,

jaise saath baahon ke sangam

as close as arms entwined,

jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar

as close to me as my dreams,

utne paas tu rahana hamsafar

stay that close to me, my life's companion.

rone de aaj hamko tu aankhein sujaane de

Let me cry today; let my eyes swell.

( Jodha eyes swell and eyes her moist)

baahon mein le le aur khud ko bhig jaane de

Take me in your arms and let me drench you with my tears.

( jalal pickup jodha in airs..)

hai jo sine mein qaid dariya voh chuut jaayega

The river imprisoned in my breast will break free,

hai itna dard ke tera daaman bhig jaayega

and the pain is so great, it will wash down to your feet.

jitne paas paas dharkan ke hai raaz

As close as my secrets are to my heart,

jitne paas buundon ke baadal

as close as raindrops are to the clouds,

jaise saath saath chanda ke hai raat

as close as the moon is to the night,

jitne paas nazaron ke kaajal

as close as kohl is to the eyes,

jitne paas paas saagar ke lahar

as close as the waves are to the sea,

utne paas tu rahana hamsafar

stay that close to me, my life's companion.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

adhuuri saans thi

My breath was incomplete;

dharkan adhuuri thi

my heartbeat was incomplete;

adhuure ham

I was incomplete.

magar ab chaand puura hai falak pe

But now the moon is full in the sky,

aur ab puure hain ham

and we are made whole.

song completed

(both stopped but not remove their hand with each other..)

Jodha selfthought: Why he attracted to me so much.i can't remove my eyes from him why i think i remove her eyes as he went out away from me.why I feel he has same eyes like my hubby.he placed his hand my waist why iam feel protectively.why my heart beat more rapidly than before.why I fell iam in safe arms.why god .

Jalal self thought: Why she attracted me so much.why I feel she is my mishty.why I hug her waist protectively.if I leave her waist and she went away from me.why I thought like that.why my heart beat rapidly. I saw her tears..why my heart have pain..why ...

All clapped sound akdha come back to sense , remove both of their hands..step back with each other

Mir announced u people are wonderful dance.remove ur mask and lets go dinner ,all left the place only Jalal and Jodha standing here

Jodha and Jalal starring each other.and Jalal / Jodha eagerly waiting for show his /her face both remove their mask

Jodha look at Jalal face: tears rolled in her eyes and her tongue numb and her leg not move. She is not realist nor dream, he infront of her, his life and soul infront of her. But she is not in real world but think she is in dreamland

Jalal look at Jodha: Jalal starring in her face. His eyes are not closed even not blink for sec ,he think if I closed my eyes she is vanished in air ,my misty infront of me or she is hallucination me

Both are not speak in single word but tears rolled in both them eyes , both eyes shows them pain of their heart.

Jodha come in real world in mind voice he infront of me.and iam the happiest person in the world. Her leg move to hug her hubby.

That second Jodha happiness vanished in air.Girl running and hug (Jalal) tightly said darling I miss u so much.

Jodha look to Jalal and girl randomly: in mind thought: why god u play with my life and plz said this is not true..

Jalal not in sense , he only look at Jodha even he not recriprocate girl hugs.

Girl said to Jalal : why darling u not hug me, iam ur wife.

Jodha hears girl word that time her heart bleeding so much like someone stabbed her heart through knife and she is not more stand in that place, she runout the hall and tears rolled in her eyes like river flowing.girl word repeatly hearing in her ears.At same time rain start heavily .she is running in road side. Her legs are weaked and kneel down in the road and crying vigoursly. One hand touch her shoulder and Jodha raised up her face

Jodha: bhai with crying face.

Asad: Sweety what happened, what r u doing in road side , why r u crying.

Jodha not speak anything and hugs Asad tightly and cries vigorously.

Asad senses something wrong: lets go Jodha and protectively placed in car. Asad drive went out.

Other side

Jalal come out thought and saw that Jodha running outside. Jalal push the girl in floor and running out search for Jodha . Jalal searching and shout mishty, where are u come back to me.

Jalal saw that Jodha hug one man ( Jalal not see Asad face and only see his back shown).and his mishty left to man with his car.Jalal run and catch to car and but car left out.

In car Jodha self thought: he move on his life, he is not mine now and thinking about him cry vigrously.

In road side Jalal self thought: why mishty hugs that man, if really she move on her life and she is not mine and shout mishty.

Part end.

Precap: Flash back story. May be akdha misunderstanding clear..

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