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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
Why again misunderstanding and separation 😭😭😭...plz clear their misunderstanding 😕...rest was awesome 😊
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--


ye kya ho gya 😲
phir se separation 😲
woh ladki jarur Asad ne bheji hogi... 😡
sab kita acha chal rha tha, romantic dance...ab toh hug bhi hone wali thi par us ladki ne sab chopat kar diya 😡

I think ki ab dadi mir ya zoya hi mu clear karenge...

so now update soon..
waise 1 doubt...
jallu ne jab jo ko apni selected Misty sarri mai dekha toh shock kyu nhi hua????

or ha miss fantasy u can help mf di...kyunki ek din woh bhi yhi post honi hai...mera hi fayda hai 😆


thanks for lovely comments vrindu dear😃
let me think who send that chudail 🤔
may be three crazy person clear between akdha mu or some other ways😉
why jalal shocked because both r dilemaa..they r not their own sense..😛
surely i will help her otherwise devil will kill me 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--



Mai toh fir se first aa gyi 😆


ofcourse u r first 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Read Chapters 5,6,7, and 8 at one go.

Both have endeared themselves to the other's family.

Their families have also chosen them to be life partners.

Finally they were with each other, dancing to a romantic number but their expected joyful reunion turned into a heartbreaking one.

Jalal and Jodha are devastated , after witnessing scenes that led them to jump to the wrong conclusions.

A very exciting read. Thoroughly enjoyable. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 1-4
Awesome
It was well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update..all three are very eager to introduce jodha to jalal..I like the part where jodha explains golu to old lady..Jalal s impressed by Jodha's arrangements..mirza s naughty boy..SB and JB part s nice..for a sec i thought jodha begum and aaluma begum..ha ha.. AkDha's dance part s so lovely..most waited part s happened..heyeee both r very happy..but y this misunderstanding? Waiting for next part.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
5 6 and 7 was awesome
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Hope the misunderstanding would be clear between them
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Awesome update...
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks for liking and commented on previous part..thank u so much dearies..i did not reply ur comments..sry i strucked my work..

Prolouge - PG 1
part 1 - pg 13

part 2,3,4- pg 31

part 5,6,7 -Pg 42
Part 8- Pg 52

Chapter 9

Asad car stop in front of Jodha apartment.

Asad shake Jodha arms said: We arrived sweety.get down the car..

Jodha step down to car and walk in apartment like zombie.her face full of tears marks and white tone face change into red colour because of crying, her face look like there is no interested in life.

Asad helped Jodha settled down to sofa.

Asad :Sweety go change ur dress ,ur dress fully wet.

Jodha not hear anything Asad word only remember girl word " iam ur wife".

Asad shake Jodha once again said : Go change ur dress.Jodha back to real world and went to her room without speaking anything.

Jodha phone rings and Asad pickup the call.

Salima: Hello, Jodha where r u.why u not pick up my call.why u left without me.

Asad: Hello Salima first listen and then ask question.

Salima: Who are u , what r u doing in my Jodha phone, where is Jodha.

Asad: Listen Salima , Jodha safe , she is apartment now , u come quickly to apartment. And iam Jodha bhai.

Salima: She is alright with worried voice.

Asad: Yes , she is alright and I stay with her till u come.

Salima: Ok and cut the call.

Abdul drop to Salima in Jodha apartment and left to Mohammed mansion ( Abdul also stay in Mohammed mansion because Abdul parent died in childhood so Dadisa take responsibility of Abdul.even dadi adopted abdul legally .Abdul parents close relatives to Dadisa ).

Salima enter the apartment and saw that Asad sit in sofa.

Salima: Sir, u r Jodha bhai with shocked expression ( Salima know very well he is Asad Ahmed Khan md of JS industries)

Asad: Ha, iam Jodha bhai

Salima: Where is Jodha, why she left the party without told me with worried face.

Asad: I ask Ruqze question to u .what happened in party.she called me morning said about party with excited voice but now she cried in road side said with angry voice.

Salima hearing his angry voice : Oh..i don't know after dance I left for dinner.after I searching her everywhere and but she is not party hall then only i call her with little scary tone.

Asad sense her scare and come down his angry : Salima plz stay with her.dont ask her anything to know.i think she is sleeping.in morning I talk to her and take care of her with worried voice

Salima : Ok bhai sry sir.

Asad: No u call me bhai, Jodha told me everything about u, she accepted u to her sister so u also my sister.

Salima: Thank u bhai and I will take care of her, don't worry about her.

Asad and Salima enter Jodha room saw that Jodha sleep in bed without change her dress.Asad went near in Jodha and care her hair through his hand and then look at Salima

Asad: If any emergency u call me this number & give card to Salima.

Salima nods her head and Asad left out the apartment.

Salima cover blanket above of Jodha and went to her room.

Other side Jalal walk in road side thinking about his misty.

Jalal phone ring in side pant pocket and pick up call.

Jalal: Hello.

Dadisa: Jalal beta where r u , I call u many times but ur not pickup my call come to mansion beta

Jalal know very well Dadisa health condition: Iam coming home Dadisa.

Dadisa: Ok beta.

Jalal call to his driver and said come to pick him.

Jalal enter the mansion and everyone waiting for him..Jalal enter to hall.

That girl Once again try to hug Jalal ,Jalal angry raised and control his angry to avoid her hug and push the Floor.

Girl stand up, why darling u push me iam ur..not even finished word Jalal raised his hand to slap her but Dadisa stop.

Dadisa: What happened beta why raised ur hand to Ruqaiya.and u never raise ur hand to slap anyone women in ur life time but what happened now.

Jalal selfthought: How can I tell u Dadisa.in witch ( Ruqz) sake my mishty went away from me.i saw her priceless tears, my mishty tears.how can I control my anger.

Jalal close his eyes and control his angry look to Ruqz said: Miss Ruqaiya,u r guest of my mansion and don't advantage took me.if u once again do that u not enter mansion in ur life time.u got it.with. Angry Voice

Jalal angry voice heared Ruqz jerked with scare and Mir & Zoya silent giggled look at Ruqz face.

Dadisa: Jalal beta what she did it .

Jalal narrrated Ruqz hug and what Said She is his Wife except Jodha part.

Dadisa disgusting look to Ruqz: why u did it Ruqaiya and u know he is not normal man and he is business tycoon u spoil his name. donot repeated once again with warning tone

Middle age women : Maaji, I know Ruqz did wrong but she is future wife of Jalal.that only she behaved like that even said she is wife of Jalal.

Man: Ha Dadisa Ruqz love jiju so much. see Dadisa how much she crying because jiju said she is guest of the house.

Jalal angry raised shout: Adham I clearly told am not married to ur sister and don't call me to jiju .If u call me once again u also get out my mansion said went to room angrily.

Woman: Maaji see Jalal how rudely talk to them

Dadisa: Ayisha , Jalal is correct.i am also agree with Jalal.

( ayisha s jalal step mom and mir & zoya s real mom.

Ruqz and adham is Ayisha brother children)

Ayisha: I wish Jalal married to Ruqz

Dadisa: But I am not wish that and Jalal also with straight face.

Ayisha stammered her foot and went inside and Ruqz and Adham followed her.

Mir and Zoya laughing heavily thinking about Ruqz and Adham face.

Dadisa stop them asked why are u laughing madly .

Zoya: U worried about that Ruqz

Mir: U worried about both devil

Dadisa: Nahi beta iam not worried about that useless persons and iam worried about our Jalal.today his face remember my childhood Jalal.when Jalal maa died that time Jalal face look like his life away from him that face I saw today, why I feel that my jalal life away from him.

Mir: Dadisa I think u r over imagine power. Bhai have some business tension that only he behave like that.

Zoya: Ha Dadisa Mir bhai is correct.dont tension yourself thing about Jalal bhai .tomorrow he become alright.Dadisa go to sleep its already late. Three went to respective room.

Place: Ahmed khan mansion

Asad speak to some person.

Asad: U work in kc (Mohammed construction) u don't know what happened in party.

Man : Really I don't know.

Asad: I need each detail about that party.

Man: Yeah I will do.

Asad: I need cctv footage of the party tomorrow morning itself

Man: Everyone disturb my sleep only.hey Allah mujhse Bachoo.with murmuring voice and I will do and cut the call.

Asad thinking: Jalal if u hurt my sweety, iam not leave u.

Other side Mohammed mansion

Ayisha ,Ruqz and Adham are not sleep because they are devil right.

Ruqz: Bua / aunty u only said go to hug Jalal but infront of Dadisa u act , udon't know anything.

Adham: U stupid sis, bua not here Jalal capture our neck and throw out of the mansion.

Ayisha shout Jalal Jalal this mansion hears only that Jalal name .everything about Jalal.I want to spend even single rupee I need standing infront of Jalal I beg to him.all properties under his name only

Adham: Bua in Jalal childhood u kill him. Now we are freely enjoy this property.

Ayisha: U stupid u think Mohammeds are all fool.Jalal grandpa written all property in Jalal name.if Jalal died ,all property goes to any orphanage.That sake only I decided Ruqz married to Jalal but old lady (Dadisa) not agreed for marriage.

Adham:in U sake only Jalal angry with Ruqz .u only said her do with him.

Ayisha: Ha I enter the party and Jalal starring a girl long time. Jalal not look up any girl in his life .but he starring a girl.that only I said Ruqz go to hug Jalal.but Ruqz why u said him ,u r his wife.

Ruqz: Sry bua I hug him but he is not reciprocate to me so I said word to him.

Ayisha: Be careful both of u .mainly Ruqz u need impress Jalal and that old lady.

Ruqz: Iam really scaring his angry.

Ayisha: Don't worry I will talk with him.go sleep ur rooms.

Place : Jodha apartment

Jodha wake up in sleep and stand near balcony in her room thinking about her life.

Flash back starts

3 and half month back, Jodha went to friend marriage to valpari ( valpari one of tourist places of tamilnadu in south india)

Jodha and her friend reached to valparai for friend marriage . valpari is greenery place.everyplace saw only green colour are shown, lots of waterfall , it mostly tea estate so always look like green and dense forest.

Jodha phone rings and pick up the call.

Jodha: ha choti iam arrived safely, its wonderful place, u miss the chance.

Choti: u enjoy with ur friend , u not worried about me with emotional voice.

Jodha: oh my sweetheart, u have college that only I came alone. next time surely u come with me.

Choti: really next time , suppose u married, that time also I company with ur honey moon. with teasing tone.

Jodha: badmash, shut ur mouth (unknowingly blushed)

Choti: my lioness angel blushing, its eight wonder.

Jodha: bye I talk u later and cut the call.

Jodha enter bride house and bride parents welcomed them.

Bride girl hugs Jodha and her friends

Bride: Jodha , I am not imagine u come my marriage.and ur sister allowed my marriage alone to u.

Jodha: Arohi, ur my college friend and colleague also how can I avoid ur marriage.

Arohi: I arrange everything for ur fresh up while I arranged car with driver for roaming to valpari

Jodha: First tell me how is my Arjun jiju and till now he roaming with u like in college days always around u only with teasing tone.

Arohi blushed: Jodha u never changed, u always teasing me .lets go fresh up and come.after breakfast, we all are going to see valpari

Jalal room

Jalal thinking about first meeting of his misthy.

Flash back starts 3 and half month back.

Jalal went to client son marriage and also groom friend of Jalal .he vist to valpari.

Jalal drive the car and see outside scenary stop the car. While walking enjoy the cool breathe of hill

Jalal saw one little girl infront of middle age man and ask something.

Little girl: Anna ( brother )buy anything in this items.my mom not well.i need to money to get hospital to her.

Jalal not understanding in her language but understand ,she is poor,and she need money.

Middle age man irritating look to girl: U poor girl , don't come near me .if u come near na my dress spoiled said push the girl forcelly

Girl support hand not down to road but her hand scratched because of road side stone.

Jalal angry raised to man and he want beat that man forcily.but leg stop.because one girl come infront of that man

Girl: Uncle something in ur face .

Middle age man look at beauty of girl said : my face, beautiful with cheap flirting tone.

Girl: check ur left cheek uncle

Man: I have no mirror in my hand and u help me with cheap voice.

Girl: Sure uncle and I will do and Girl pick up her kerchief and help that man.

Jalal more angry that man because girl help him , Jalal not saw her face .only saw that she wears white chudidar and only back side of view.she helped the man went out.

Jalal look at man face now he is angry vanished ..everyone blasting laughter look at his face.

Man face full of black colour (charcoal )applied .everyone laughing look at his face.then only realised girl did prank with man

Jalal saw same girls with her friends

One girl: What u did with that man superb yaar..

Girl: How dare he, if girl come near him as his dressed spoiled that only I applied face pack to him but my face pack is black colour.hifi to friend

girl went to little girl helped collect things and kiss her forehead said dont cry baby said I help u sell ur thing.

Girl friend : U give some money but why u said help sell her things.

Girl said : She is poor but not begger , u understand girls ,quickly buy her things.

Jalal hears her conversation and think she is different with smiling face.

Little girl come with Jalal said : Anna buy one of my thing.

Jalal get the purse and give to 2000rs and said i bought all ur thing and give to me.

Little girl get the money and happily went to place and Jalal also left the place.

Girl friend: Jodha let go and we need to go. Yeah girl none other our Jodha.

( jalal not see jodha face ..only he hearing her voice and back view of her)

Flash back end

both slept remember with each other..

Someone carrying Jalal hairs and Jalal wake up the sleep look at middle age lady sit next to him and carring his hairs

Jalal: Maa why u left me .iam alone in this world said hug her waist in her sitting position.

Maa: Ur not alone iam always with u and ur mishty always with u.

Jalal: Maa but my mishty move on her life.

Maa: How can u tell ur mishty move on his life.

Jalal: I saw my mishty hug someone.

Maa cupped his face said look at me. Jallu u think like that.

Jalal nod his head like child did.and maa smiled.

Jalal: Maa iam worried about my mishty went away from me but u smiling with child angry face.

Maa: My Jallu till now u not grown up, u grow fully man but ur heart only stuck in childhood

Jalal pout and maa said u only said each time my mishty, my mishty but also said she move her life.Jallu close ur eyes & hears ur heart beat ,ur heart said real thing .Jalal nod his head.and close his eyes.

Alarm rings and Jalal wake up the sleep.

Jalal look everywhere there is no sign of maa near him After second realised his maa came in his dream.

Jalal pick up his maa photo and ur right maa and I want know about everything about my mishty and then only I decided.

Jalal phone ring & pick up the call.

Jalal: Hello JMK speaking.

Man: I got all detail about madam sir.

Jalal face bright said : Tell me quick

Man: Madam name is Jodha,.her family in Chennai.and told about family details.

Jalal : Now where is she.

Man: This is really surprise for me and u also.

Jalal: What

Man : She is working in ur company. in three days back only she joined in Delhi branch .

Jalal happy twice now my mishty work in my company .

Jalal: U did it good job and all her information send to my mail and ur payment come ur home itself.

Man:thank u sir and cut the call.

Jalal look at maa photo: maa ur bahu name is Jodhaanjali nahi ma Mrs. Jodha Jalal Mohammed.Khan( With pride voice) U know maa my mishty work in my company no no her company .iam happy maa.Jalal quickly ready come to downstairs.

Dadisa, Mir and Zoya sit in dinning table and Ramsingh serve to them.

Ramsingh drop vessel and his mouth open widely

Dadisa : Ramsingh why u dropped the vessel what happened.

Ramsingh gestured look to downstairs

All face turns to down stairs.

Mir choked the food and mouth open wide and Zoya mouth also open wide and Dadisa hand touch her own chest.

all are looking Jalal coming in downstairs with bright smile.noone know Jalal smiling face. in first time mansion servant saw that Jalal smiling face. Everyone in shock state.

Jalal look everyone reaction not bother anything.because he is very happy today.

Jalal wish good morning Dadisa, shona and Mir with same bright smiling face

Noone reply him and all are thinking, we are alien place.

Jalal said I need go to office early and bye everyone and left out.

Zoya: Dadisa plz pinch me, iam in dream world or real

Zoya shout : haaa... Ramsingh bhai why u pinched me.

Ramsingh :Shona baby u only said pinch u.

Mir: Both are stop ur fighting.Dadisa what happened in our mansion.

Dadisa: Really I don't know I really looked our Jalal or any ghost inside our Jalal body.

Zoya: Ha u see his smile, I thought our Jalal bhai act any close up (toothpaste) ad.

Dadisa: Ha Shona yesterday night he more angry and now he smiled anyway my Jalal happy.iam so happy see him this way

Dadisa, Mir and Zoya in selfthought: Jalal/ bhai happy today, I do anything Jodha / my bhabhi close to my Jalal bhai. what will I do

Above three head bulbs glow and unison said Abdul / bhai in mind voice.

Ramsingh look at three face expressions changed in minute to minute ( Ramsingh thinking it his mind voice, but he openly said everyone heared what he said) Said all Mohammeds what happened today.everyone dreamland, dont think about them ,Ramsingh. don't waste ur super brain.

All three glared to Ramsingh.

Ramsingh: Why u people look me with innocent voice.

Zoya: What do u said now , we are in dreamland and u r in superbrain.

Ramsingh: Shona baby u have mind read power.u catch my mind voice.with shocking voice.

Mir: ha, Ramsingh bhai, our Shona is witch that only she read ur mind and if u standing in front her, she changed u to dog with teasing tone .Zoya angry glare to Mir.

Ramsingh: Kya he immediately went to kitchen.

Mir laughed loudly and shona are u really witch?

Zoya try to beat to Mir and Mir run away to Zoya and Zoya chase to Mir.

Dadisa smiling about her children happiness




Part end


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Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago

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