Akdha FF- Marriage at first sight Part 1 to 25 & thread2 link-pg - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



😆😆😆

<font color="#ff0033" size="4">Thank u for photos ...really correct pair ..👏</font>
<font color="#ff0033" size="4">Miss fantasy said that say thanks to u..</font>
<font color="#ff0033" size="4">so thank u baby..for photos.😳😳😳</font>

<font size="4"><font color="#ff0033">u know baby, miss fantasy finshed first chapter..but she tried to post ..but she cannot post today..she already commented 10 post.now we will wait for update</font>😕</font>



ooh ho dii then we have to wait for tomorrow aahha..miss fantasy from today onwards you will save all 5 post at least everyday plzzz for me and my didu (wink)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
and dii you saw those pics which I sent you ??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Naazrt



ooh ho dii then we have to wait for tomorrow aahha..miss fantasy from today onwards you will save all 5 post at least everyday plzzz for me and my didu (wink)
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yes baby.. u r right..surely she save atleast 5 post otherwise..we will angry with her..ok
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naazrt

and dii you saw those pics which I sent you ??


already updated 😳

we help to fantasy to select abdul and moti pair photo also😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



yes baby.. u r right..surely she save atleast 5 post otherwise..we will angry with her..ok



of course didu ..
we will angry on her if she didn't save her post for us..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



already updated😳

we help to fantasy to select abdul and moti pair photo also😉



dii i sent you Mirza's pic not Abdul aiyyo hehehee ok now iam searching for Abdul hmm dii I think we should tell miss fantasy that Gautam rode is best for jalal's best friend role Abdul yeah I like him ..
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Originally posted by: Naazrt



dii i sent you Mirza's pic not Abdul aiyyo hehehee ok now iam searching for Abdul hmm dii I think we should tell miss fantasy that Gautam rode is best for jalal's best friend role Abdul yeah I like him ..


no baby gautam rode not suitable to abdul character. abdul little bit funny character..he scaring person in front of jalal but he so lovable person..gautam rode ..we will choose another stories..😉
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Thanks for liking and comment dearies..if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part ...iam sry .dearies..

Prolouge & Character sketch page 1

Chapter 1


Place : chennai, south India

A sunrays fall on her girl face.a middle age woman come to balcony side and shake girl arm .

woman: Jodha chellam (chellam means dear ) wake up. its already 7 "0" clock

( yeah a girl none other our Jodha heroine).

Jodha shout : What 7 0" clock maa, I want go office early,maa with shocked face

maa close ears with her both index fingers : yeah I Know, go fresh up and come breakfast quickly .

After some time jodha come to downstairs (a man sits in dinning table ,reads newspaper)

jodha Look at man: good morning papa

papa: Good morning princess

jodha: Maa where is choti, am already late.

( maa eyes gestured papa to ask jodha)

papa: In slow voice chellam, how is ur work going ( maa rolled her eyes. & make angry face look to papa )

jodha: Papa plz,if any matter said me straightly

papa: Oh .. Ur uncle told about ur marriage alliance ( papa showed groom photo to jodha) & said groom family,character blah...

jodha: Stop papa , I don't want marriage iam already mar..with slow voice( a voice came from back) " angel".

jodha turns look at her choti ( choti gestured nods no)

choti: Angel ,iam late chello

jodha said to parents: please understand me, I need time .

papa: Ok princess ur wish my wish ( maa cleared her throats) sry our wish.

jodha smiled says thanks.

choti & jodha unison: Bye papa , maa. & left the place.

maa said to papa : I don't know what happened my dear / baby in 3 months something bothering her.

Papa: Her office tension only ,janu.there is nothing like that u think .

maa: I wish so but not accept fully

papa: Oh my princess ka maa , plz concentrate also ur sweet husband. (teasing tone)

maa: Some time u behave like ur my third Child and ate breakfast go to ur office ( in fake angry voice) papa pout look at maa

outside building

choti: Angel, in correct time, iam not coming ,u told everything to papa and maa

Jodha: Sorry, choti but iam already married with moist eyes

choti: Di don't forget, you are married but both person only know u r married person. u and mine. U always hide ur thread in ur dress and ur mang tika hide behind ur hair.

Jodha in stern voice: this is not thread.

choti hold both ears in her hand say sorry with puppy face :ok lets go otherwise devil princi not allow me to class

Jodha: Dramabazzz chello

At evening

maa serves coffee to Papa. both Girls enter the house and sit sofa get relaxed time

a suddenly lady voice from outside

choti& maa: She arrived (shout in choti naughty face & maa irritating face).

papa: Manju only came why you both shout like dinosaur arrived

Choti turns to papa: dinosaur better than her papa ( jodha sit silent Watching her drama)choti stand infront of them and start imitate to Manju antics .she always told about her saree, my hubby bought from Paris. this necklace unique pieces made for her and even she told sandal when, where make ( imitate in Manju aunty with body language) she always wore status tags papa. What we will do papa

papa: I am not forget that day ,my both princess what did with Manju .

choti make innocent face :what we did papa.

papa: don't worry, I remind u dear

flash back starts

jodha age 14 choti age 11 ,both are prankster .always irritating manju aunty (neighbour) Manju also complaint about girls to jodha parents

one day jodha parents scold our girls for prank to Manju

choti : I hate Manju devil with angry face

jodha : Haan, choti.. aunty insake of mom ,papa scold us , suddenly idea strike in her mind ( silent talk) both hi-fi each other and smiles evily.

First I explain about Manju aunty

Manju aunty is rich person and her husband always around the world because he is businessman and her daughter .last week only her daughter went to grandma place to enjoy her vacation.

Manju aunty's house look like small bungalow .the walls decorated by painting, photos such a beautiful house. In night time look like bhooth bungalow .

In dinner time

Both girls stay with manju aunty house tonight because girls parents went out of station

Manju and girls (jodha and choti) ate the dinner & went sleep to respective room .Manju and girls are used in downstairs room ( one door are attached with both room and other two door is common entrance of both room) attached door always locked, only used in separate doors.

In rainy day, time: 11.45 pm

Note: plz guys imagine ur in manju place.

Manju slept in bed and her phone ring .and her hand search phone with closed eyes .once get her phone,ring cutoff .places phone in table and again turn to sleep .once again phone ring she wake up with irritate face whose the hell call this time .and see the id, shocked that no is Manju landline no.

In self thought Nobody in my house whose call me .in mind strike girls call to me. Go to next room .open the door lightly saw that girls sleeping peacefully & fully covered with blanket .and back to room thinking whose calling to me enter the room suddenly see that bathroom light on .iam not switch on light with little shiver voice . In slow footstep go to bathroom & shaky hand to open door ( guys if bathdoor opens firstly see only mirrors) .she saw that mirror something written..read the written word in mirror" I WANT SUCK UR BLOOD" immediately closed eyes ,heart beat raised, In mind flash that words only .after few second lightly open eyes, there is no letter in that mirror. look her room ,room has complete pin drop silent. It look like horror house . Outside of the house heavy rain falls, window door clashing sound ,Dogs barks sounds and thunder sound hears like that ear jaws are break. now she scared face go to bed pick up the phone and mistakely looked caller idea details that there is no missed in phone. in self thought how it is possible .suddenly a crying baby voice came from outside of the hall. she come to Hall .her eyes scanned whole hall. one side of hall tv shows are running, it is horror movies playing. She came near to tv and her shivering hand to switch off tv .suddenly tv volumes increases and I want suck ur blood voice from tv.(movie actor say line)now heart beat raised heavly, her face full of sweating. that sound effects, leg back towards and automatically tv switch off .she step in backward direction and mistakely sit in chair in next second hears horns sound, she jumps from chair & close the eyes shout : Haaa...

suddenly power cut ,all boldness are gone now ,manju scared shivering voice said that hanuman slogan .she saw one black shadow step to stairs / steps with oil lamp in its hands. she looked at shadow , say slogan continuosly and she gather all her boldness step to stairs and eyes full of moist and very scared .at same time heavy payal sound heared in downstairs. she turns look back that black shadow in downstairs and loud sound smiled HA HA HAA ... .(Now manju heart beat raised like any second heart is popped out of the body and whole body shivering)

She reached upstairs that black shadow appeared in front her face and close her eyes and slowly open eyes shadow gone . in stammering voice ask who.. are ...u and what do ...u ...want...vessel are falling down sound in kitchen at downstairs. At same time clock rang 12 0' clock bell sound . I want suck ur blood ...eco sound reflects whole building. She almost faints hears eco sound. Quickly running to pooja room and sit in front of god idol and close eyes shout hanuman slogan and slept that place

Flash back end

At present

All laughs hardly

.jodha: choti, I never forget her face reaction (holding stomach in her hand laugh loudly)

Choti: ha di that prank one of our best prank in laughing tone.

Maa/papa: after that incident manju stayed in one week hospital. Bechari ,she scared so much

Back to flash black:

Next day Evening maa & papa returned to the house. Manju aunty servants told that manju admitted in hospital. Both reached to hospital and enquire about her.

Maa/papa: what happended manju, why ur face look pale.and ur whole body shivering.

Manju narrated yesterday night incident

(maa and papa look at each other ,in mind thought decided this prank done only our both devils) maa said to manju: take care ur health & bye and left the hospital

At Building:

Maa/papa shout in high pitch voice: jodhaa , choti

Jodha & choti: maa /papa ur returned with slow voice

Maa in angry face: just shut up

Papa: I already told don't prank with manju ,y both did it with harsh tone

Choti: hum kuch nahi keya papa (look at floor said with guilty voice)

Papa: look at me,don't lie choti, iam ur papa( angry voice)

Jodha & choti: sry papa both hug his waist crying vigorously (papa felt bad for princess because he never shout like that)

Papa : Stay away from her hug and wipes both tears .don't cry princess in calmly said.( both are not stop crying)

Maa decided diverted hers mind ask about how to make that prank tell me smiling face .

Maa settled them in sofa comfortably and cares both hairs .u both not tell ur maa.

Girls silent

Mom : Ok tell me mirror writing idea whom planned.

Choti excited voice said di idea ya.

Jodha : (in slow voice) We are planned to prank for Manju aunty . After u left the house.nobody in her house .so decided for prank tonight.

Jodha and choti said yesterday incident: We arrange pillow in sleeping position covered with blanket.

Choti: Di silently enter aunty room in attached door ways and hide into bottom bed. At same time I called Manju aunty phone in her landline no.after aunty check our room na that time di write mirror letter and switch on bathroom light & hide behind curtains of shower.

Jodha: After aunty saw that mirror word and close her eyes .and that fraction sec I wipes that mirror word.in nature and god also help with us .yesterday every rain , thunder storm and ..papa stop ask :even Windows clashing sound and dogs barks also

Choti: No papa it my plan . so I already tie roop in window and pull rope that make window clashing sound. and we already manage neighbour dogs (ceaser) u know na papa puppy obey di order only . I signaled to ceaser that time ceaser barks.

Jodha : We already time setting in dvd player .( just imagination only if u setting Time automatically TV on and decided scene also set and after scene finished, automatically switched off).we set vampire movie.

Choti: We arrange horn chair (bottom of chair attached horn ,if any one sit sound produced).

Jodha : We are fully covered with black dress including faces. we are both decided ,iam in upstairs and choti in downstairs. In updownstairs show to black shadow face to aunty at same time choti hide in behind the chair in downstairs . in same ways I hide in behind the curtains and choti show face to aunty.

Maa: eco sound and crying baby sound

Choti : we already connected to speaker with attached mic in our dress. We spoked eco reflect in whole building. And crying baby is tape recorder sound .

Papa: but I have doubt , ceaser one dog na , manju told dogs barks.

Jodha & choti: laugh loudly said oh we corrected ceaser and ceaser corrected juile ( ceaser s lover - neighbour dog ).

Maa/ papa told: u both are crazy . ha don't do that once again and tomorrow we will go hospital and u both ask sorry to aunty .that one condition only we only forgive u

Jodha & choti in said voice: ok papa/maa

Flash back end

At present

Choti & jodha : laugh loudly remember flash back.

Maa and papa look at both girls with side hugs told any evil eyes not fallen to my angels. Both girls look at parents unison told romance in front of ur angels ur very bad in teasing tone. And join the group hugs.

Part end




part 2,3,4- pg 31

Precap: our hero entry and twist also there

first 1 to 5 part if u feel boring..after 5 parts u will not get boring.. i need to explain every character so plz bear it..

If u like this part plz press like button and comment me..

If u want pm for my story plz buddy me or commet in thread..i will send u budy request ..

Thanks for visiting dearies.😃

Edited by Fantasy-ka-Love - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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u r so fast..😃 vrinda dear
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