A Story of two broken heart :27-(Epilogue)pg:14 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey yasmin..
Sorry could not comment lately...life is busy..n im getting lazy...dont feel like replying..but finally i did...

Last few updates were amazing..i soo enjoyed swasan road trip..n short honeymoon...jealousy part was nicely done..well thank u for u efforts of updating..i know how much hard work u put in it...muahhh for that..im very excited for valentines part...
Love u...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter:26 - Valentine's Day Special Episode

Swasan slepping on bed and swara wake and see date
Swara: so today is 14 feb. valantine day wow
And see sanskar sleeping like kid and goes near him and kisses on his forhead
Swara: so mr.maheswari see u wish me or not
And swara goes to washroom and sanskar wakes ups as he is not really sleeping he heard swara conversation
Sanskar: I know swara u want me to wish u but not that easily and thinks something
And again sleep
Swara comes from washroom and see sanskar sleeping and goes near him
Swara: so my love wake up
Sanskar: not like this first give me a morning kiss
Swara: so my baby want a kiss
Sanskar: yeah

And swara kisses on sanskar cheeks and sanskar wake up and goes to washroom and after getting ready he come and see swara is sitting beside dressing table he goes to swara and make her wear mangalsutre and pour sinduor in her manng
Sanskar make her stand and look at her
Sanskar: you are looking beautiful my love
Swara blushes
Sanskar: ok so I am going to office
Swara see him shockingly
Swara: don't u forgetting anything
Sanskar: what hanky purse oh yeah my phone swara please give my phone
Swara angrly goes and take mobile and give him
Swara: anything else
Sanskar thinks : no ok bye I will go and goes from room and hide outside room and see swara
Swara angrly: god how unromantic husband you have given me he doesnot even wish me today how can he forget about this day I will not talk to him and sit on bed angrly
Sanskar smile seeing her moves and goes from their
After some time a courier boy come to maheswari mansion and gave parcel of swara and Dadi takes it and call swara and give her parcel swara goes to room and open the parcel it has a red sari (it is the same sari which swara is wearing when she wore next day after their real marriage ) and suddenly her phone rings and sanskar name is flashing swara see this
Swara: so he get the time to call me atleast late but he remember thnk god
And swara recive the call

Swara: yeah
Sanskar: swara I have send a sari for u we have to go to my frnd party so be ready I will come and take u at 7:00 pm ok
Swara curisoly: anything else
Sanskar: nothing and cut the call
Swara: how mean he is odering me I will not go
And here sanskar smiling thinking swara expression
At 6:00 pm swara started getting ready she wear a sari and put light make up and left her hair open and in name of ornaments she is wearing a gold chain with diamonds pendent of ss which Sanskar send for her with sari and mangalsutra
She get ready and at 7:00 pm she call sanskar dint pick the call she try 4 to 5 times but he doesn't pick the call she get panic after some time a unknown no. call her she pick up the call
unknown: so u are wating for your husband
swara: who are u
unknown: don't equire about me your husband with us if u want him safe so do as we say ok and don't tell anyone if their u tell anyone and here your husband left the world
swara get scared: ok I will not tell to any one don't do anything with sanskar what I have to do
unknown: first come to xyz hotel
swara runs and sit in car and start driving and reach at the hotel and came out of car
swara phone rings and she hurridly take the phone
swara: now what

unknown: follow the arrows
swara see the arrows and move according to them and reach at roof of hotel she see their darkness
swara shouts: sanskar where are u
suddenly a light falls on swara and another on sanskar she get happy seeing sanskar
sanskar while coming from stairs

unknown: follow the arrows
swara see the arrows and move according to them and reach at roof of hotel she see their darkness
swara shouts: sanskar where are u
suddenly a light falls on swara and another on sanskar she get happy seeing sanskar
sanskar while coming from stairs
sanskar: swara today I want to tell u something before u come in my life my life was meaning less only darkness is there in my life I have no reason to live but when u come in my life u come with a ray of light to my life u have given a meaning to my life u have given me a reason to my live swara u had remove all the darkness from my life swara swara I cant tell u how much I love u I cant forget u till my last breath swara. Swara I want to tease u I want to play with u I want to fight with u I want to love u I want to become the father of your child iwant to give u all the happiness of the world I cant see u in tears swara I will always their for u no matters if whole world is against u I am always their with u I love u swara
and lights turn on and sanskar goes near Swara and Swara slap sanskar hard and sanskar see her shockingly and swara hug him
swara: sanskar are u fine na how can u do this prank on me u know for one min. I lost my breath I think I lost u and hug him more tightly
sanskar break the hug and wipes swara tears and hold his both ears
sanskar: soory swara bcz of me tears come in your eyes I am very bad na
swara: no u are my loving husaband
and swara see the decorations and there is a heart shaped cardboard is hanging and in that their photos are paste
sanskar: so did u forgive me
swara: yeah by seeing your work u really surprised me
sanskar: and u also and put hands on his cheeks
swara: its paning sanskar
sanskar make a puppy face: yeah
swara: ok I have one solution
and kisses on her cheeks

swara: do you fell better
sanskar: yeah but little bit pain also their

and swara pushes him and run sanskar run behind her as swara running get dibalance and about to fall sanskar try to hold her but falls but he put hand btw floor and swara head so that she cant get hurt and they share an intense eye lock and after sometime they compose and stand
sanskar : I have also I surprise for you close your eyes
swara like a obident child closes her eyes and after some time he told her to open her eyes and tear come in her eyes their was in sky written that swara I love u and swara see towards sanskar
swara: I love u too my baby
and they both hug each other and then they break hug and do dinner an then sanskar take swara to a room which is beautifully decorated with candels swara see this
swara: this much suprises in one day
sanskar: I want to give u all the happiness swara
and he goes and play the music player play the song

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sanskar take swara hand and hold her from waist and pulled her towards him they are lost in each other eyes and start dancing sanskar spin swara and then start caring her face and then hairs and kisses on her eyes swara get shy and turn and about to go

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdrum

Sanskar hold her hand and pull towards him now swara is facing bach to him and he hold swara from back and then slowly open her dori of sari from back swara closes her eyes and then sanskar uncover her leaft shoulder and kisses continuously and swara is blushing her face become red and he turn her now swara pushes him on bed and goes and unbutton his shirt and start kissing his chest and then they both kisses on lips and release each other for breath and then swara and sanskar cover each other and lights turn off

Precape: Sanskar comes to their room n wonders what Swara has gifted.. and sees something covered and he removes the cover n sees something decorated with flowers n smiles (looks like a crib)!And Swara tells Sanskar that.. the dream he saw..has started to become reality.. a lil bundle of happiness is entering their life.. who will call Sanskar ..Pappa n Swara ..Mamma! Sanskar asks ..really??Swara nods Swasan hug each other!


Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Oky im late..
Sorry yasmin..

I told many that dont feel like typing..but today i did...i replied to few..i had long list of pending replies...

Coming to update..it was soo sweet...i loved it..i seriously enjoyed swara slapping sanky...he literally scared swara with his prank..after all they suffered in their life..sanky played this scary prank..he deserved a slap...it was cute scene..after that it was pure bliss..swasan romance was steamy hot..enjoyed alot..

Thank u
Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Chapter 27 ( epilogue)


Sanskar comes to the room and looks around and sees nothing..! He rues that nothing is there! As he turns to leave, he sees something kept covered n removes cover n sees .. baby crib. .covered with flowers..! He adores the crib! Swara comes in the room and spots Sanskar playing with the crib and Swara calls out Sanskar ! Swasan come close! Swasan hug! Swasan say 'I love u' to each other! Swara tells Sanskar that.. the dream he saw..has started to become reality.. a lil bundle of happiness is entering their life.. who will call Sanskar ..Pappa n Swara ..Mamma! Sanskar asks ..really??Swara nods! Sanskar holds Swara face n says..they have started to understand each others words..without speaking! Sanskar says .. the dream he saw, Swara has fulfilled! Swara says.. Sanskar says that they are two bodys n one soul!! Sanskar says..he doesn have any complains from life!He doesnt want anything more from life! Swara says that tho they are two bodys n one soul, she recollects how she used to love Sanskar in childhood itself and how today they have become special to each other Flashbacks..! -- Ludhiana Sanskar get Swara her out of the water/ how Sanskar fell on Swara after marriage.

She says.. dunno when i merged in him.. n became part of his existence..! Never got to know! Swasan are hugging!

Sanskar appreciates... Swara for her strength n courage! Swara says... whose GOD resides before her.. she can never lose courage!! Swara says..Swasan are two parts of one tabeez.. no one can break them apart! Swara says..they will start.. afresh.. with new happiness.. n new dreams! Swasan come and Sanskar says... he has to share something important.. a lil life is coming in this house..!! All rejoice! Uttra says... will take diamond necklace if its boy.. Dadi chides her on boy/girl thing! Uttra says.. that for girl she wants.. all 9 gems necklace! All are shown decorating the baby crib! Sanskar helps Swara to sit on the sofa.. n she shows a baby bump!! Dadi shows a sweater she has made for baby! Uttra offers Swara milk! Swara says.. dun feel like taking! Sanskar says.. for our baby u have to!Sanskar forces Swara to drink!




They show Sanskar walking impatiently outside OT ... and all family anxious too (waiting for Swara delivery)! Doc informs that.. Sanskar is a dad.. of a baby boy! All rejoice! He asks about Swara n Doc says both are fine!! Doc tells Sanskar that Swara wants to meet u..! All rejoice.. and Sanskar says.. lemme go! Sanskar goes in n sees Swara holding the baby n kisses its forehead.. Sanskar has tears in his eyes watching n Swara signals him to come near her! Swasan hug.. n both hold the baby! Swara signals him to hold n he does! ! Swara kisses babys feet and is in tears! Sanskar kisses her forehead!




Swara n Sanskar hugging! Swara says.. 'This is the symbol of our love! He will keep the story of our love alive!' Sanskar says.. i never knewLOVE.. but i dinno my destiny will make me meet u.. one who will fill my life with happiness!! Sanskar says.. this happiness u have given.. me i cant belive!! Till now. .i dreamt that.. it may jus be our hearts.. but no noisebut now i want.. this lil CRY (of baby) to be there! Swara says.. now our life will be full of happiness! Swara says.. our love shall remain.. .forever.. ! Sanskar says.. yes.. like an example... ppl will say.. 'Mohabbat ho to sirf Swasan jaisi' Sanskar says... 'Till the day.. lovers remain in this world.. Swasan story will always remain in their heart forever.

Well this was not an ordinary love story it was one of the most extrodinary beautiful love story ever told Of most beloved couple Called Swara- Sanskar...
Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
The updates were so nice, yasmin. I really loved the updates. And the ending was just amazing.
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Loved the simplicity and the mystery in the story...nice ending yasmin...read it all in one go...

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