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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Thank u cuteangel23
actually i hv a leg sprain...n i took leave frm my office...i was getting bored ..so think to update...i'll try to update daily, untill i joined again...so pls comment if u have time...Here is the next part for u...

Part-13

Next Morning...

Rani woke up when sunray touched her face...she looked around...she slept on the floor last night..she remembered his words...hurtful words..."he hate me this extent..." a lone tear flown down from her eye..."i have to stay here untill my dadu is totally recovered from TB..then we'll leave this place forever .." she tried to regain herself ...she stood up n goes inside bathroom..

when she came out of the bathroom , she was feeling relaxed, that cold water made her nerve calm...her eyes fell upon him, he was sleeping like a innocent child..." he may be look like such innocent, but he is a stone hearted person, who have no emotion n respect for others"...she goes near the window n slide the screen...by which sunray directly fell on his face...but she was totally unaware of this...when she turned around to leave, some droplets of water fell on his face., from her wet hair...she moved towards the mirror n starts to put her accessories ...

Raja work up by the water drop, n got irritated with sunray..." what the..."he turned to otherside to avoid sunray.., but his jaw dropped when he found her sitting near mirror n dressed up...she was looking very beautiful with that pink saree...he could get a glimpse of her from the side of mirror ..she put on bangles, applied kohl in her eyes...then a light lipstick ...she looked like an angel with this lottle make up...then she drawn the Mangalsutra from the drawer...n looked at that for sometimes ..she was in deep thought...on the other side Raja was curious...she put the mangalsutra on her neck n applied sindur on her maang...Then she turned to leave...This time Raja again acted like he was sleeping...

" thank god...he is sleeping till now, i hv to leave before he wake up, otherwise he'll again start fighting..n i hv not more energy now to fight with him.."she moved to leave

" arrey...yesse hi jaogi kya..." said Raja from his bed

Rani was shocked by his voice..she turned around n looked at him...he was smirking..." oh god...he woke up...now he'll again start something nonsense , i hv to leave before he starts it " she ignored him n tried to open the door...

"i know u have no shame...but my family has...if u go downstain like this , people will make joke abt us...n i can't tollerare this..."

"u r talking about shame?? really...wow...n btw i hv no time for for ur nonsense talk.." she opened the door this time

" arrey...niche jane se pehle apni blouse ki dori to bandh lo.." he said mockingly

This time Rani remembered something n got embarrassed ...she turned n faced him..but she couldn't look at him..she tried to tie the doris, but in vain, her hand couldn't reach at them ...she was struggling...

" may i help u??" Rani looked at the direction of voice...he was standing near her...there was a little distance between their bodies ...he wore a mischievous smile on his face..

" no...no, i can do it myself..." she gulped with their closeness

" come on wifey...let me help u...btw its my responsibility to save my family from embarrassment ..."

"no thanks ...i don't need ur help anymore..."

"why??..now i can understand , u r now the DIL of this mansion ...u don't need anyone's help now..."

She looked at him with firece eyes...but choose to stay mum

she again struggled with her dories...Raja shighed.." yaar..this girl is too stubborn ..."he suddenly made her turn around, so that her back was faced to him..she was beyond shocked...

Raja tried to tie the dories, meanwhile his gaze fell on her milky skin...due to low cut, her back was totally bare in front of him...he couldn't control his urge to touch her...Rani felt a current flows through her body, when his finger brushed on her bare skin...she tried to mentain distance from him...but suddenly he pulled her back n her back collided with his hard chest...his one hand on her belly...n with other hand he was caressing her nape...

someone knocked on door...they both regained consciousness n separated within blink..."agli baar darwaja band kar dena..." said RA while looking down...she was smiling

Rani's face was flushed n get red with embarrassment ..."maa app.."

RA came near them..." wo..i came here to call u downstairs ...i couldn't invite friends , becoz of BRM...but i don't want to left any rituals...so i arranged a pooja in our house ...pandit ji aa gaye hain...so if u hv finished ur work, can u come with me .."

Rani felt more embarrassed with RA's teasing..."maa...lets go..."

RA told Raja, who was totall silent all the time," come downstairs after freshen up..." RA left then with a smile...

Raja was happy becoz his mom speak to him after 5 long days...he remembered what had happened just between them..." she is soo irresistible ...huh...control beta..don't be traped again..." he moved to freshen up...


Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-14

All family members are gathered in the hall for puja.RA came with Rani...Rani's face was covered with vail...

BRM, B, n K also there ..they were not happy wid this...

BRM- "arrey...bahurani, why r u covering ur face..."??

RA-" wo...BRM, today is her mooh dikhai rasam..so i said to her to do this..."

B-" but we already seen her face before... n ..mooh kala karne ke baad muh dikhai ka kya faida..." she commented

RA got angry with B's misbehave n tried to say her something , meanwhile Rani stopped her ...

RA-" if anyone has problem with this ritual, she can take her leave...i want to complete all the ritual with peace..."

B felt offended n left from there with anger...

The ritual finished well...Raja came downstairs ...

RA-" arrey...tu abhi aa raha hai...u r always late for everything ...the ritual is just completed..."

R-" maa.. sorry, i m late..." he was feeling relaxed when his mother talks to him normally

RA-" no problem..."...n " Rani come with me...u hv to make a sweet dish first..."

Rani nodded n goes with her

" thank god, maa is happy after a long time..."

" its only for Rani..." said Kaal from behind

Raja turned back..."papa..."

Kaal came near him, n put his hand on his shoulder .." Yes Raja..Rani is the reason behind all of our happiness .."

Raja was confused..

" look..there was a project which we tried to get before...but due some reason it was rejected several times before...we got this today...our manager just called me..."

Raja was surprised, he heard about that project before...but what is the connection between that project n Rani?? he couldn't understand...

" she is very lucky for us beta... I think to u should work for this project... as manager..."

Raja was happy...his father always chided with him for his ignorance ... n today he is giving him a big responsibility ...he couldn't believe his ear..he felt happy

"we get this project only for ur wife's luck...so u should be work for it.."

this time Raja was angry... " toh... this work is given to me as a daan...for her shake.." he thought, but didn't say anything..." whatever it may be, papa is giving me an opportunity , i can't lose it...its the only thing to regain his trust..."

" one thing... r u cleared all ur paper??" its necessary

Raja's face fell down...

" u haven't cleared all.. what u r doing in college other than study..."

" papa..wo..."

" i don't want to listen anything...u r married now...but till now u didn't clear ur paper...look at Rani, she was taking care of her home as well as her study...learn from her"

Raja was fumed with anger, but he couldn't do anything..

" okk... i m giving u last chance, clear all ur paper, then we'll talk about it..otherwise Rani'll be the manager of this project..." Kaal left from there with chide

" I'll not leave this Rani ki bachhi"

Rani came there for something n heard their conversation ..she couldn't control her laughter..n left from there..Raja followed her n get in to the kithchen..

"Arrey...beta..do u need something ..?" asked RA

"no..wo..i need water.."

"ohh...lo.." she gave him a glass of water...he waa starring at her while drinking ...she was trying to control her laugh ...

"do u need anything else..??" Asked RA

" no maa. i've to go to college...Papa gave me a big responsibility ... i hv to gain his trust again..."

"its really a good thing..." she was happy

" maa, hv u forgave me...?" he hold her hand

" yes...i already forgave u from the day when Rani agreed to marry you...she has such a big heart..." Thank u Beta..."she said to Rani...Rani looked down..

Raja.." Yahan vi...don't know, what jadoo she spread on them..."

RA kissed Raja' s forehead..." go..n proove urself..n i know Rani'll always be with u..."

This sentence made her stiff at her place.." no maa, I'll not able to do this...sorry" she thought ...

" maa, u r very innocent, u don't know this girl..." Raja thought to himself..." i know it maa, she'll always be with me...is not it Rani" he asked her with a sarcasm
BR]
Raja left from there by giving a quick glance to Rani...

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Rani came out from the kitchen after making dish...she was heading towards her room, suddenly B drag her hand n made her stop...her eyes were red due to crying for hours..

" what happened Bindu?? r u okey??

" u r asking me this?? no, i m not okey... n its becoz of u only..." she shouted

" becoz of me? what r u saying?? Rani was confused

" yes.. u Snatched my Dovy...only for u I got offended
in front of everyone ..."

"what??"

" yes ...u plotted that drama, to get in to my dovy's life...n u got married to him... why r nt u trying to understand He doesn't love u...He hates u...

" how dare u to talk to her like this...apologize her..." said BRM

" BRM..she is the one who snatched all my happiness, my dovy.. n u r saying me to apologize her..."

" arrey...pagal ladki...i knew that, once upon a time,u were his lover, U both worked together, eat together n slept together..." BRM looked at Rani's face.. she was shocked..." but now, u hv to mentain distance from him, becoz he is a married now...n Rani is his wife...I know u both can't separate, but try to respect their Rista...so ..lets apologize .."

" sorry Rani..."said bindu with disgust ...she knew BRM is planning something , so she choose to stop the fight...

" its ok bindu... u helped me , when i was in need...Thank u , i know this sudden marriage is not acceptable for all...but i was bound..." She left from their




" abb dekho...agey agey kya hoga...we'll create all the reason to sepate themm.."Said BRM...Both laughed loudly..
Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
wow two two updates.thank uuu
and take care of your legs 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Part-15

After 5 days of their marriage...

Raja didn't wasted any chance to hurt her with his words...but Rani also defended herself all the time...they fought only within their bedroom, but to outside world they are a perfect couple...for their families shake...

Rani was inside the kitchen...RA hv gone to temple for prayer with BRM...kaal was in a bussiness trip...all servants were busy doing their work...Rani heard a laughter...it came from the hall...from the kitchen one can see the hall room...she looked outside to found out the source of laughter...she saw Raja n Bindu were talikng n laughing ...

Rani Remembered BRM's word..." they slept together..." She wanted to slap them..." wait...why i m getting angry by their closeness ?? m i jealous with their close proximity ..??...i shouldn't hv to be jealous for that idiot person...who not only broken my heart only, don't know how many are there like me, suffering from heart breaking till date...He has such a cute face n sugar coated words...that one can believe him at the first sight...Like me...".."oh god, again...i just said him cute again, what happened to me...Focus Rani focus...u shouldn't hv to think about him..."

But she couldn't help herself to looking at them behind the kitchen pillar...Meanwhile Raja' s eye fell on her..suddenly she avoided his gaze...n acted like busy...He smirked by this..n wanted to chide her...

" U know bindu...someone is peeping through us..."

"Its lovy for u...my dovey..." She said n put her hand on his chest..."

Raja felt uncomfortable n removed her hand...Lovy got disappointed ...He wanted to chide her more...so he speak loudly...

" yaa..Lovy, someone is burning with jealousy..." he said looking towards the kitchen ..."

B's eye followed his gaze...She found Rani working inside kitchen ...she fumed wid anger..

" Dovey...What is this??" she screamed at him..

" arrey, Janeman...why r u shouting by sitting far from me...come to me n wishper in my ear..." he said , but he looked towards the kithchen all the time..he wanted to made her more jealous ...Lovy left from there with disgust ...

Rani inside the kitchen thought..." Besharmi v haad hoti hai...He is much more than a badtamizz...he is flirting wid a girl in front of his wife...disgusting .." she tried to focus on cooking...but she couldn't ..she left from there ...

Raja looked at her n smiled...

Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Part-16

Rani again started attending classes ...but she never gave other students any chace to found out, that she was married, becoz she respected BRM n also don't want to announce it ..Becoz, Raja was ditched her infront of everyone ...if they come to know about their marriage , they must think that, it was her who has a fault...

She always wore high necked dress to hide her mangalsutra...On the firstday , she didn't wore it, but she was shocked when she didn't find it on her neck...she thought she lost it on the way to college...infact she was in tear...becoz once dadu said her, not to remove it at any circumstances...when she got back to home , she found it lying near her mirror... Raja also mocked her that day, n said her not to act like a serious wife, who loves her husband...But she was more than happy that, she didn't argue with him...which made Raja shocked...so in next day she decided to change her dress...not the mangalsutra...( yaar yeh ladkiyaan mangalsutra ko leke bahat emotional ho jate hain...nahi, i am an eyewitness ...)😛

But Rani's this look was not digested by Minu...she asked her about it many time, but she avoided all time...Sometimes Raja n Bindu , commented her about her dressing style...she never listened to them...

Rani was walking fast in classroom corrider...she had already been late for class...only for her Husband

" oh god...the class has already started...I'll kill him...maa told him to drop me here...but he vanished at the peek time.." she exclaimed...".Rani..u r such an idiot..how can u depend on that person, who has never interested in study...Bandar kya jane adrakh ka swad...I m sure, he'll fail again. this time too...then i'll see, how he get that manager post...Gadha kahinka..." she murmured herself.

The corridor was deserted for class time..she was about to enter inside the classroom, someone pulled her by her hand...this happened so suddenly ,that she closed her eyes with fear...when she opened her eye, she was in a dark room, she tried to screamed, but that person pressed his hand on her mouth to stop her scream...she struggled to get free...she looked around the room, it was the library,next to their classroom ...it was dark due to closed windows...but "who is this..."she struggled more to set herself free...

" stop struggling ...Wifey..."

suddenly she stopped struggling with his voice...now he removed his hand from her mouth...

" Raja..kya kar rahe tum??..." she shouted

"shhh..." he shushed her..

Rani looked at him, it was too dark ..only a small light came through the window hole..

" leave me...i m already missed a half lecture, becoz of u...let me go, its a very important lecture.."

"really...very important.!!.more than me." saying this he came closer to her...now his hot breath brushed on her cheek...she gulped with their close proximity ...

His one hand now hold her waist n pulled her more closer to him...her body was plastered with him now...n his other hand caressed her cheek...

" Raja...pls.., let me go..." she said while gulping...her heart was beating loudly...she can hear it..." what if he hear it..?"

"ur heart is beating loudly Rani, i can hear it..."

she looked at him...he looked straight into her eyes...she looked other side n tried to avoid his gaze on her...

she was afraid now...her mind said her to stop looking at him, but her heart said other thing...

" Raja let me ..." her eyes widened , when she felt his lips on her...she suddenly tried to pushed him, but he hold her face, in place n pulled her more towards him...she was now unable to move...her eyes closed with the sensation ...He was sucking her lower lips n it was making her dizzy...her mind said her to stop him, but her heart want to feel it...

he pressed her more to his chest n kissed her with more farver...this made her forgot about everything at that time...she responded back..her hand made its way to his hair, n cluthed it with anticipation ...

Suddenly the bell rang n announced the end of the class...her eyes flicked open...she ditached herself from him...she was not able to looking at him, she was so embarrassed , her cheeks were tomato red due to after math of the kiss...He started laughing with her condition ...

" u know what Rani, u r so irresistible ...whenever i see u i can't controll myself...but don't think I kissed u becoz i love u...yeah galaht fehmi mat pall lena..."

Rani glared at him with anger...

" actually...i don't want you to attend ur classes..becoz of u, my family always show me down... I heard ur murmuring ...gadha kaha tha tumne mujhe...i'll show u i m not a gadha...okk"

" u know what, the donkey is much more better than u, u did this to stopped me from attending classes ..u r so jealous na, i always get more respect than u in ur house...becoz i deserve this...I m not like u...u r such a jealous pig...u want to show me down , i'll never ever make it happen...its my challenge..."she roared with anger...

" challenge accepted..its better for me, i'll get more chances like today..." he wishpered in her ear...she pushed him...

" no...i'll not give u any chance again...u can trap others with ur smile , but not me..."

" lets see...who wins...btw u have kissable lips ...Wifey...why i didn't found out before..."he said wid a mischievous smile...

she got irritated n left the room with disgust..

" i'll never let u win Rani.." he touched his lips with his hand n smiled




Rani came out from the library..she tried to calmed her enrazed breath..." what he think about himself ...how he did this to me only becoz of jealousy ...n i alsi lost my control...ohh god, what happened to me...arghh..." ..she murmured herself n bounced with Minu, who was looking at her, from distance...

"minu...u r here, class khatam hoga yi kya..."

"yes...class ended just now, but where r u today...n why ur face is flushe..."

" wo..wo, actually, i was late for class, so i came here in much hurry...only for this..." she lied..

" okey, lets go to library , n wait for next lecture ..."

" library ????...no..no, minu..." that memory flashed in her head, which happened just before several minutes...

" arrey...but why??"

"..i hv no mood, lets go to the cantin..."

"okey...but tell me one thing, it is too hurt outside, n u wearing a dress which covering ur tip to toe...what r u trying to hide...hmm" minu inquired

" ohho, minu,,i told u before, i want to save my skin from sunray...so i wear these...lets go.."

"but, mujhe toh daal mein kuch kaala lag rahi hai..."

" nahi, puri dal hi kali hai...now u r happy...lets go..." she dragged minu with her...

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Raja was sitting with his gang...Bindu n all her friends were also there...B comes to Raja...

" dovey...why r u sitting in the corner..."

Raja was in a thought n smiling with in thought...

" Dovey, what r u thinking ..n u r smiling too...tell me na..."

"nothing...just..."

"u were smiling ...there is a reason ...tell me na.."

"lovy...pls let me be alone for sometime...pls..."

"okey...but give me ur phone, i want to click simi's brthday cake pic...i forget to bring mine..."

"okey..." he gave her the phone, n she left

Raja's POV---

"yaar, i m feeling very happy...becoz i kissed her..."..."i know it very well, she is not what other's thinking about her..." ..she is so irresistible ..."

FLASHBACK

There was a pooja on his house in morning ...but as usuall , he tried to sleep till 9am...after Rani's entry, he always have to woke up before his time..actually, she never let him sleep after 8am...

He was sleeping peacefully n was in his dreamland, suddenly he felt something fell upon him...his eyes flicked open...but with the bright sunlight, he couldn't open his eyes fully ...he was able to see slightly ...but he felt something is wriggling over his chest...he looked at the direction...His jaw dropped by the sight...

There she was...on his chest, her hair was wet..like she just had her bath...she had wore a red saree...water dropped from her wet hair...she was looking so beautiful , her eyes were on his chest...she was struggling with something...Raja looked down...Her mangalsutra tangled with his shirt's fabric...she struggled to pull it out...Raja was mesmerized with this beauty ...His eyes glued on her lips...suddenly he felt a urge to kiss those lips...He was about to kiss her, she succeeded with her struggle , n pulled out her mangalsutra...n goes near the mirror ...

He could see her bare back with a single strap- blouse..." this girl'll be the reason of my death..."...control...Raja control..".but his desire to kiss her, was overpowerd his promise...

he woke up from the bed n goes near her, she was about to move, n bounced with him...She looked at him with surprise ,

" arrey, wah...ajj kumbhkaran ki neend itni jaldi tut gayi..."

he didn't say anything... only stared at her...she got scared n tried to leave..

"Rani..." came RA's voice...Rani pushed him n ran out from there...

Next in pooja he stared at her all the time...Rani was feeling uncomfortable with his behavior ...

" Raja, beta...it'll take time for pooja..but Rani has an important lecture today...she can't reach on time...so will u drop her at college"

"okey, maa..." he said while staring at her...Rani felt embarrassed ...

But Bindu had some important work, so he left with her after pooja...n again he missed the chance...

FLASHBACK ENDS

" tum mujh se bachke kahan jati Rani..." he smiled ..." its almost a month to our marriage...when ever i tried to put u down u stayed stong all the time. with such confidence ,n made me think twice about all the things...in all these days, i tried to resist me ...i tried maintain distance, i hurt u intentionally...but all the time i failed.."...he sighed...".i think i m started falling for u...again.."..."pls Iss baar dhoka mat dena wifey..."..he smiled thinking about their mornings encounter..

" i told u that, i wanted to stop u to attending class...becoz i couldn't think any other words at that time...Infact I wanted to kiss u...n u made it easy for me, by challenging me...I could felt ur love wid that kiss, u need me as much as i need u...I don't need any reason now...I WANT U RANI...I LOVE U...'n i m going to confess it...tonight...wait for me..."he was so happy

Bindu just came there to return his cellphone n heard all his selftalk...her eyes were red by crying..." no Raja...how can u do this...U hate her..." she thought...she tried to talk wid him...but he left from there,...Bindu was more than frustrated .

Raja' phone rang in her hand...Caller ID shown RA..." this woman is really a villain between us..." she wanted to cut the call, but received it without interest...her eyes twinkled when she was on the phone ...she cut it without saying anything...she wiped her tear..." Rani...!! Raja is always mine...i'll never let him be urs..."she tossed the phone n smirked wickedly ..." Thank u RA...u gave me a reason to separate them..."

Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part--17

Same day, College cantin---

Rani n minu were sitting there...Rani was in deep thought...Minu shook her hand..

" Dear, what r u thinking now?? ..i m noticing it, ...u r behaving strangely today...U okey na..."

"yaa minu, just thinking about Dadu, ...??"

"daadu...phir kya hua un ko"

"nothing happened...i just want to meet her..."

" meet her?????...u r staying wid her..na.."

Rani got consciousness ..." yaar...wo, i m working in palace na...so i can't meet her regularly ...i have to stay in palace..." she lied...

" then call her from ur phone" minu advised

" minu...i forgot my cellphone in palace..."

" okk, u can call her wid my phone..."

"no minu not now, I'll definitely call her after class.." they got silent for minutes

"dear... how r u staying in that palace?? i know it is difficult for u to stay around him...btw don't let him come near u...He can do anything...mein janti hoon inn pagal asiquon ko..." minu started while shipping her coffee..

Rani's POV...
"Minu... i don't know how to say u that...i already got married to that Badtameez...n today...he was...ughh.."

" dear...what r u thinking again..."

"no...nothing...lets go to class...lecture'll start within minutes .."

They came outside ...and headed towards their classroom ...they heard someone was calling them n they stopped there...

it was peon who calling them..

" Rani...there is a call for u..principal is calling u for this...pls come wid me..."

Rani n minu looked at each other wid suprize..

" who is it??" asked Rani..

" Don't know...but it is urgent..." said the peon

Both R n M go with him...n Rani attend the call...

RA was on other side...n told her something ...

" Dadu...!!! what happened to my dadu...??...where is she now..??...maa...hello...maa ...the call interrupted ...

" Rani, wht happened to dadu...who called u, n why r u calling her Maa??" she was so confused n panicked too

" Minu... dadu slipped on bathroom floors ..neighbors admittedher in hospital..." Rani was crying now...

" what...??? but how..??"

"'i'll tell u everything later,... now pls search for Raja... n tell him to come here immidiately...we have to reach at my home asap...dadu..." she was panicking

Minu was so confused ,when she told her to call Raja..."why she want to call him..what 'll he do with her dadu's condition "..she stood there confusedly ..

" minu...u r standing here.. till now... i told u to go n search for Raja..." she was totally unaware about what she is saying...

" but Rani... Why Raja??"

"tu mujhe sawal puchhti rahegi yaa kuchh karegi v...don't know how is my dadu's condition ..." she got irritated now..." okkey..if u don't want to search him, then stay here ...maa told me that , she already informed him about it...he most probably searching for me... " she rushed out ...

" Rani...sun toh..." minu also followed her

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Raja was rehearsaling for a play wid his gang...his eye found her, searching for something ...He goes near the door n opened it...bindu saw this n also followed him...she didn't want them to talk...

" Raja...!! ..." she was breathing fast after riding stairs...

Raja was about to ask her something , Bindu interrupted him..."Raja, wo director is calling u... arry Rani, u r here.?? come in, watch the rehearsal ...dovey is too good in acting..."

Rani was surprized by their behavior..."Raja...wo maa ka.." but interrupted by Bindu

" Dovy...let's rehearse the romantic dance sequence...Rani ...u can't belive...dovey is too good in it...after all we played as lead in many play before... hai na dovey..." she placed her head on his shoulder...

Rani was getting irritated with this nonsense talk..." Raja..wo dadu..." again Bindu didn't gave her chance to complete the sentence

" dovey...let's go yaar, we have to rehearse again for final...sorry Rani, we have to go ..u can talk wid him later in home...after all he is ur husband...but now, set him free to rehearse..."

Rani statued at that place...when Raja turned to go...

Raja want to tease her for the last time, totally unaware of her situation ...he want her to get jealous more...he turned back...Rani looked at him hopefully ...

" u want to go to ur dadu'...then who is stopping u from it...go na...but I hv np time now...I want to make this play perfect...n u knew it very well i m a great actor...is not it??" he high-fived with bindu

Rani felt someone slapped her hard...she couldn't belive her ear..." he is saying this...?? after knowing about my dadu's conditions ..." she couldn't utter a word after hearing his word...

" arrey...how can u go without ur husband... right...then wait till the evening ...i have to rehearse for the play...n for the Night too..." he wishpered

"He is such a brute...my dadu gave him the love, which he never deserved...today she is in hospital..n this person is mocking her..." she was shattered with his behavior

"arrey...u r standing here till now...go to home n wait for me...i promise i'll take u to ur home...okk.." he smiled

" i don't need to wait for u Mr. Rajveer ...i can go myself...i can handle all the situation by own...thanks for ur concern about me...u show it me today, that how cruel u r??? ...its my fault, i came to u only becoz of maa ...but i don't need ur help now." her eyes were blood red due to anger... n tears were threatened to flow from it...

Raja was so confused with her behavior...he could smell something is not right wid her...Minu reached there...

" Minu.. let's go from here, we r getting late..." she wiped her tear.. dragged minu wid her n left that place

"Rani..." Raja tried to follow her...but bindu stoped him..

" dovey, where r u going in middle of rehearsal ...??"

" something is not right...she was very worried.. i hv to go..."

"dovey...nothing happened..u r panicking with out any reason...let's rehearse ...arrey... wo ladkiyaan maike jane keliye jidd pakad lete hain kabhi kabhi...i knew it...tum rehearsal ke baad chale jana...okkk"

He retuned back to the dorm with confused state...

" I m sorry dovey... i hv done this to u...becoz i can't watch u with Rani...u r only mine...sorry"...she sighed



cuteAngel23 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#47
tnks for the updates
plz inka patch up karwa do or iss bindu ko inn ke beech se hataon plz .
Dpati508 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Part-18

Same evening , Palace:-

Raja n Bindu came back from their rehearsal ..Raja was in a hurry to meet Rani, becoz he want to say her about his feeling asap, n start a new life. He was in a good mood throughout the road...he was humming some songs..after he reached in palace, he directly headed towards kitchen, becoz he well knew , he could only find Rani in kitchen this time...

" arrey, Raja, how is Rajmata?" questioned RA..

This question made him stop on the way...

" Daadu???"what happened to her??" he wondered

" u r with her, n u questioning me??" RA asked surprisingly

" what r u saying maa? why would i be with her...i mean she is in her home...n i just returned from college ..."

" that means u didn't go there..i told u to go to the hospital ..." RA irritated

" hospital...?? why? n when u told me to go there? seriously maa, i m totally unaware of it...pls tell me in detail" he was worried after hearing this

" what r u talking about? i phoned u n u received too but didn't say anything, then i called her too, n i thought u fetched Rani from college, n directly go to the hospital...becoz her daadu was slipped in bathroom , n her condition was very serious. Their neighbor admitted her in hospital, Ur father n me were out of station for some urgency, so i called u to handle this...but" RA felt disgusted with his irresponsibility." it means Rani is alone there..how can u be this irresponsible Raja"

Raja felt a jolt of shock after hearing this, now he could coincide all the things happened on morning, Rani' s helplessness , her tear, her anger, n after all His mock to her, " ohh god, what i have done??" he want to pull his own hair with anger..

"i m going to the hospital..how can i face her after this?." said RA n tried to leave but Raja stopped her

" i m so sorry maa, i swear , i hv not receive any call, n i m total unaware of this maa, infact my cellphone was with B..." he looked at B , she felt uncomfortable

" dovey why r u looking at me, i didn't do anything, "

"then who received maa's call?" Raja asked angrily, he couldn't believe her

" wo...wo, i wanted to tell u instantly after getting the call, but i got busy in something n i totally forgot about it...m sorry" she tried to start her drama again

"u forgot?? how can u forgot such a big thing??" he shouted at her

" sorry dovey??"

"u better know that how much i love daadu..how could u forgot??" he shook her by hand


" This is not the time to angry, go to her, she needs support,she is alone there..hurry up"


" i m going there, i'll be with her, pls don't worry..." he assured RA n left for the hospital

RA came to B

" u did it intentionally ...na??"

B was uncomfortable with her question

" RA what r u saying? why i want to do this with any intention ??"

" becoz u always want them to separate , n u get this chance to make misunderstanding between them"

"RA, pls...i don't .." she can't complete her sentence

"B ...i warn u, stay away from my children, don't try to come between them, i'll never forgive u"RA left

B smirked evilly




Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
Dpati508 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Part-19

Hospital:-

Raja reached at hospital hurriedly..he was so impatient throughout the road..he cursed himself for his words to her, he thought to mock her for the last time, to make her jealous by staying with Bindu n then at the night he'll apologize to her for all his misbehave as well as hurtful words...n then they'll start a new life together...but after his stupidity, those all thoughts are seems too far to reach...he thought to reach to her asap and apologize her then and there...

when he entered inside the cabin where Daadu was admitted, he felt a sharp pain in his heart...Rani was crying by holding Daadu's hand, who was laying there still unconscious ..she was slipped due to lost of her balance, n the TB relapse made her health conditions worse this time

R-"daadu!!.. pls open ur eyes...look at me, talk to me ...pls"she sobbed harder

Raja was standing on the door helplessly...he had no gut to face her after morning incidence..

" u always do this to me...always hide ur illness...why??... i asked yesterday about ur health...u didn't tell me a single thing...look, wht happened now..."

Her tear stained face made him restless...but he was cluless what to do at the same time..

"DAADU...pls uth jayiye na...mere liye..." she kept crying .." i have no one other than u, u can't leave me like this...i kept ur word and got married to HIM..."

he shocked after hearing the sentence...

"but u didn't keep ur word to look after urself...don't leave me daadu, i'll again be an orfan...i don't have much strenght to handle this pressure ...i want ur love, ur affection ...u r my strength ..pls come back to me...i know u always said to me, if i hide anything from u, u'll leave me forever...sorry daadu, I HIDE EVERYTHING FROM U...i was bound to do that, i couldn't take any risk for u...but I promise to tell u everything...n i hope u can understand me then...get well soon daadu...pls...get well soon, we'll go back to our place...n never ever came back here...this place snatched all happiness from our lives...it snatched everything from me...it made my life so loathsome...Daadu...daadu, i don't need anything...i don't need my study, don't need any job...don't need HIM...i only need u ...pls get well soon...we'll go back to Kasauli again...n start a new life again...i'll tell u everything .'.How he loved me, how he ditched me...n how he again forced me to go back to him again'..i am tired now dadu,i can't handle it anymore.. i want to sleep in ur lap...pls come back to me..." she was crying hard...

when he heard about their leave, a lone tear escaped from Raja's eyes by seeing her pain..." how much she suffered becoz of me ..i am the single reason behind all pain...but she can't leave me...they can't leave me..i'll never let then go..." he wanted to hug her tightly and console her n assure her that nothing will happen to Daadu, she'll be fine..n he'll turn her every pain in to happiness...He stepped forward to reach at her, but he suddenly stopped at the place, when he heard..

" Daadu...u always want Raja n me together...so that u made me marry him...i marry him only for ur sake...i thought, whatever he may did with me, thats becoz of his stressful childhood...n i also felt guilty , becoz somewhere i was a reason for that too without my awareness ...but i think he'll never disrespect u...becoz u loved him unconditionally ...But I was wrong again...he is turned to a total stone hearted person..Do u know, he knew about ur situation but he mocked me when i asked for his help to bring u here...U gave ur affection to a person who never ever deserve that..." she sobbed hard

" i was total unaware of this Rani..." he couldn't stop him by saying this...this made Rani to look at him suddenly ...but she again turned away her face with disgust

He had tears in his eyes...he was guilty for his deed, it was shown on his face...

" i m sorry Rani...m really really sorry...i didn't have any idea about this...n i mocked u without any damn thinking...i couldn't get u were serious n in need ...i am sorry.." he kneeled down beside Daadu's bed by holding Rani's palm in his own...tears rolled down from his eyes

At first Rani tried to belive him...his eyes said he is really guilty...but his words kept ringing in her ears..." yeah...bindu was right..he is very good in acting...now he is acting like so innocent in front of me...one can easily believe him by his fake tears n painful expression ...but i'll not again..." she thought n in next moment she jerked his hand away...Raja was surprised with her behavior ..

" Look, Mr. Rajbir Rana...This is not ur rehearsal adda..n i am not interested in ur acting anymore ...this is hospital..n my Daadu is ill...so pls go from here" she said with a cold tone...

"Rani what r u saying??..acting..??" he was hurt by her words

" yeah...or what should i name this ...??" her words had no emotion now...

" Rani...belive me...i..i.." but Rani cut his sentence

" pls Raja, i am begging u...pls go from here..."

" how can i leave u n daadu in this situation.."

"ohh really...u r soo concern about my dadu's health now...where was ur concern then, when i was begging for ur help...i lost everything to keep her healthy...lost everything...my self respect ..my dignity...my future...but she is such a cheater, who always hide her illness..." she smiled sarcasticly by looking at her Daadu...actually u r really concern about her, i already widnessed it...so pls go for ur rehearsal ...its really important for u...pls go from here" .. she folded her hands

Raja hold her arm.." Rani pls listen to me..."

"what is left to listen Raja? is there anything left to listen??" she brusted out,

" i know u always accuse me as a gold digger ...i had no problem with that...but today u crossed all the limit...i thought, whatever u may think about me, u can't deny my daadu's affection...her love towards u...she always said that I am her life...n look she gave her life to u too... but u had no time for her..." she said with sarcasm

" Rani..." he tried to tell her the situation , but she hold his shirt collar ...

" u knew everything na...u knew this well , i was so helpless then...i would surely begg for ur help...n u'll got a chance to fulfill ur revenge...u have enemity with me Raja, but what my dadu did to u?? how could u mocked me at that time, when my dadu was in a hard situation...didn't she loved u as her own child..how could u do this to her too??..have u a heart in ur chest or not" she pushed him away... n cried badly

Raja was spellbound with her anger...he could understand her frustration ...

" pls leave from here...i don't need ur help now, i can handle everything myself...i don't want to see ur face..."

" Rani..pls..."

" I say just get out..." she shouted ...Minu and a nurse came their hurriedly by hearing Rani's voice n surprised by seeing Raja their...

N- "pls don't make noise near patient .."

"sorry nurse..pls tell this person to go from here..."

"who is this person? is he a relative of urs..?"

" vo...actually,..." minu tried to handle the situation ...

" who r u??" asked the nurse to Raja

before he answered her..." he is an outsider..." said rani with a stern face...it made Raja to look at ger shockingly..he was extremely hurt with her words...

"i think he couldn't find his relatives cabin...is not it sir??" minu begged him to leave with a wishper..

" okey..tell me the cabin no. i 'll fetchu there" asked nurse

but Raja left from there with a broken heart...after that nurse also left from the cabin

" dear..r u okey...??" asked minu

" hmmm.."

"why did he came here??" inquired minu

But Rani choose to be mum...she goes near dadu's bed n placed a kiss on her forehead..." i 'll never believe him again"

To be continued ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hii friends , i am so disappointed with current track of etretr,Rani's departure from the series n Raja's new love story...but our cvs don't want to listen anything...i am so sad, infact i decided to stop writing on RajNi...but i love them...n i know, i only find them in my thoughts now..therefore i decided to keep me and my shattered friends happy by continuous writing..

I want to say sorry for my very very late update...but i'll try to update whenever i get time...

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