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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Very beautifully written .

I am enjoying this FF and I am looking forward to see RajNi's first conversation in your interesting FF.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Very nice. Loved raja's dilemma. Plz updt soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
wow brilliant! Wonderfully written!!
love the progress of the story.
waiting to see raja and rani's realization :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
thanks for including hindi dialogues your writings,
as usual good job👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
p.s..i am introducing Jeevs n kaals character in this chapter , wid bit positive ness...we already have devil trios, n i don't think we need another one...I didn't mention Kaal's character before.. But Raja n kaal's relationship is same as per the show.. but in this case Kaal sent him to hostel for study.. otherwise he was a loving father, but BRM told Raja . he was there for Rani's lie.. pls Don't focus on what lie she told at that time... 😉

Part-5

Palace

Rani was coming out of Lovy's room.

"Rani..." RA called her frm behind..

"Yes, RA..." she looked back...

"Rani, pls tell me how much money u require . i ' ll give it to u, pls leave from here.." RA was looking stressed .

" RA... r u okey?? n why u want me to leave... when i need this job badly..."

" I just told u na, i'll give u money .. pls...leave fom here.."

"RA, i know u r tensed for Raja, but trust me, i'll not give him another chance to create such drama again.. n my dadu always say..."Agar hath pair hoke v admi dushre se madad leti hai... toh vo vikhari hota hai nahi to apahij. aur nahi hum vikhari hai ,aur nahi humare hath pair kam karna band kardiye hain..." i can't take ur help...pls forgive me

RA- Rani, u misunderstood me... i have not any intention ...her face fell down...

R- RA...u r a mother to me...i know , u r worried for our fight, but I can't hide myself anymore... one day we surely have to face each other? then why not today??

RA's POV-"Rani... why r nt u trying to understand?? u r not safe here.. i m sure, they have some hidden motive behind this.. u don't know BRM... And Raja.., i know he loves u morethan anything...but he can go to any extent to fulfill his gurdge over u. pls go from here.."

"RA, what r u thinking again.."

" if u still want to work here, then its ok, pls take care of urself n try to finish ur work before RAJA's arrival...i am requesting u.."

"Raja's arrival??? what do u mean? "

"yes, he is not here, he is in a business trip for 2 days, u can be comfortable , "

" thank u RA, now i can work comfortably , n i'll try to finish it before his arrival, i also don't want to create any scene by going before him"

"ok"

"Arrey RA, what u r doing here?? Maharaj Kaal n his friends may arrived within half-hour . Go n prepare for their wel come" said BRM from behind.

"i m going BRM" RA left ..

"n Rani what r u doing here? go n start ur work. "

"yes BRM, "rani turned to leave

"listen , Rani"

"yes BRM"

"don't worry about Raja, u r now my responsibility , i'll take care of u, okk"

"thank u BRM" she left that place

"yes Rani, i'll take much care of u, u'll never ever forget me in ur whole life" BRM smirk devilishly ..

...

Rani was instructing something, she was standing on a wooden stool, suddenly she lost her balance n fell down..

"ahh" before she hit the floor a pair of hands held her by her waist, she closed her eyes with fear.

"are u okey" a deep male voice made her eyes flicked open,in front of her, there is a man with a sweet smile, "who is this??" wondered Rani

"are u alright baby doll?" that man asked her again with a mischievous smile.

Rani pushed him back n stood on her feet, she was embarrassed , she tried to left that place asap.

"ohh, hello... at least thank me, I saved u from falling down"he said

"Thank u" rani turned to leave..

"btw what's ur name??"

Rani looked back , she had a questioning look on her face.that man smiled again, she started to walk, suddenly that same person blocked her way, coming beore her. she got shocked n stepped back..

"oh, i am asking u something , n u r leaving without answering me"

"i don't talk with strangers n i don't think its important "

"arrey, important kaise nahi hai... i saved ur life n u r behaving like this, so stubborn haan"

"listen , mister, i have a lot of work to finish , pls let me go"

"ok, i'll let u go, but , tell me ur name first"

"Rani"she said with irritation n turned around

"Rani?? u mean RAJA's Rani" said the person

Rani felt like being statued right there, she looked back with disbelief ..

"u r Rani?? seriously, "he had an excited look on his face

Rani was dumbstrucked " who is he, n how he knows her?"

That person came forward n shake her hand.. " I am Jeevs... i mean Jeevan, Raja's jigri DOST,we stayed together in hostel, he always told about u, n since those days i wished to meet u, ... before, i came here several time s,but i didn't get a chance to meet u. after that, i left for London, Today i came here to attend the business event... see, i met u finally, Raja was right, U R really beautiful n innocent ".. he hugged her. Rani was shocked n in the next moment she pushed him back.

"no Jeevs, she is not that Rani, whom u wished to meet , am i right Rani??said Lovy from behind.

"what?? u r not that RANI?? he questioned her...

"no, i am not that same Rani..."Rani said slowly

"then, why didn't u tell me before... u r enjoying my hug...nahi"

"mister, mind ur tongue "said Rani wid anger..

"arrey, jeevs.. she is the decorator of the event, n yes her name is also Rani, but she is not Raja's Rani...anymore"

"what??" asked jeevs..

"nothing...arrey Rani, u required pins for decoration , i brought it for u...take it"

"thank u Lovy" turned to go

"arrey.. Raja, tum kab aye.."Lovy's sentence made her stop right there...she looked towards the door.. There he was... looking at her ...intensely

Rani dropped down those pin packet , she felt all her bloods are drained out from her body, she felt like her both legs have lost their strength ...she couldn't move a bit from that place...she felt her breathing became raged with passing seconds..

"Raja... my friend" jeevs hugged him..

"u both met after long time na... " said Lovy..

"Yeah...lovy..." n "Raja ... u know i just met Rani... " jeevs said while looking towards Rani

Rani looked towards him with shock...

"but ... i m happy she is not ur RANI"Raja looked at him wid disbelief ..."yes, she is not ur Rani, she told me herself "

Raja felt a pang pain in his heart... "how could she said like that"

"btw , where is ur Rani... i am eagerly waiting to meet her..., where is she? " questioned jeevs...

Raja looked towards her. again.. "Raja tum... , what r u doing here...?? "RA had a panicked look..

"wo, maa.. .my meeting get cancelled ... so i returned " he said still looking at Rani...

"okk...let go... meet ur father, he is waiting for u..." RA said

" u go.. i m coming within a second " he turned to jeevs...but jeevs was stills looking towards her... mean while Rani left from there.

"jeevs..." he uttered with anger... where r u looking at"

"yaar... that girl is very beautiful na... a little stubborn also... but ...

" but what??? " Raja uttered with frustration ...

"i love her attitude ... n i think i'll take a chance ..."

" what do u mean?? " Raja has a shocked look

"jeevs...r u getting mad??? " he was now burning with anger..."u have no idea about this type of girls, they only know how to break others trust..." his voice is now trembling

" Raja... why r u telling like this? is there anything happen wid u"

" no...no.. he tried to hide his lies... but i know this type of girls very well..."

"no.. yaar.. u have no idea about girls... yes, i have flirted with many, but i can identify who is who... "u know ... yeh ladkiyaan,pagal hoti hain... unhe pyar karo toh...vo sab kuchh loota dete hain tum par... aur pyar nahi karo toh ussi ehsaas ke saath jeene lagte hain... pata nahi kaise vo phire ussi insan se pyar ke ummidein rakhte hain...jo unke dil tod diye ho.."

Raja was speechless...

" n raja.. this girl is bit different from others... she is not only innocent , but strong also... that man must be lucky one who'll get her..." jeevs left from there , leaving behind a dumbstrucked Raja

okk... let me know how is this update..


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Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow!! jeevs is raja's friend..awesome..
u have no idea, how delighted i was reading this part 😃
amazing!!
jealousyy track!! am loving it 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
your story is getting interesting day by day,I really enjoyed this part😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-6

Raja's POV

I had dreamed about her early in the morning ...I was restless throughout the meeting, i want to return asap... i missed her so much ...suddenly our meeting got cancelled for some reason...after picking up my belongings , i drove so fast that, i felt like i m flying ...I was hallucinating her through out the way... i could see her everywhere ... i felt like she was sitting besides me n smiling... in next moment again i found her on roadside asking me for a lift... When i entered in the main door, i felt like my breathing stopped right there, i m going to die at that same moment... There she was ,standing before me hugging some one ...my blood boiled, i want to shot that person right there... to my surprise he was Jeevs...But how could he dare to touch her...i want to break his nose...n then he told me he likes her... how dare he is??.. She is MINE, ONLY MINE... i can't resist if anyone try to eyed on her... Oh god... why i felt so jealous for jeevs...He is my best friend , n that girl is nothing to me... then why??.He banged his hand on the wall with frustration ..

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Rani was crossing the corridor ..she seemed to be in hurry.. it was getting dark, she has to reach home asap... she was so engorged in her thought that, she didn't noticed her way..Suddenly she hits with someone, her leg slipped n she was about to fell down from the staircase , but that person held her wrist n pulled her towards him... she now hits with a rock hard chest...she closed her eyes.

"what the hell r u doing here" a hoarse male voice snapped her eyes open.. she found herself held by him , he was looking directly to her eyes.. she get scared by his glares.. "oh, God, help me", she tried to escape from his grip..n finally succeeded with it...still he was glaring toward her with anger... she turned to leave, but again he pulled her with force n made her look at him

"i asked u something...?? he barked out at her." i told u not to come here again.. then what the damn u doing here.."his nostrils are flaring..with anger

" i don't think its important to explain u" she said when trying to held a brave face before him... n again turned around to leave..In the next moment she found herself caged between the wall n his body. His both hands are placed on either sides of her to prevent her from escape..their faces were inches apart.. she can feel his hot breath on her face.. she felt weak..she was hell scared from within.. but she tried to maintain a calm face ..

"its important , How could u...? how dare u to go this close to someone.. "he roared again

she was spell bound.. " i just said u, i am not bound to explain u everything" she said when looking straight in to his eye.

"yees.. u r .. u r bound to explain me ...everything "now his eyes were burning with anger.

" kyun,, mein jahan chahu , jiske paas chahu.. jiske karib chahu jaa sakti huun, meri marzi.. iss se tum ko kya..koun ho tum mere...?,kyun bataoon mein tumhe?? "she pushed his hand back with anger..

Raja felt someone pricked his heart with a sharp needle, He felt unbearable pain " Rani...i swear, i'll kill that person who dare to touch u... Always remember u r MINE... ONLY MINE.."he said with gritted teeth to subside his pain ..

"Mine.." Rani laughed sarcastically "there was a time, when i loved to listen this word from ur lips, but now i feel disgust when u pronounce this... u know what.. i hate u .. i just hate u...she was literally crying..

"Rani..." He gripped her arms so tightly, that made Rani squirmed in pain..

" How dare u..." he ranted

" RAJA.. leave her.. " shouted RA from behind.. " i said leave her" she approached towards them n yanked RAJA's hand off..Rani was sobbing now

" come with me, ... i said come with me" RA pulled him away from there. n Rani ran out while weeping badly..

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RA pulled Raja to his room...

" Raja , what were u doing? she asked angrily"

" first tell me, what the hell she is doing here" Raja was fuming with anger

"BRM appointed her as the event decorator"RA said hesitately

" what??? BRM??" he asked with disbelief.. but why??

" i don't know, but promise me, u'll not say her a single word as long as she is being here" she held his hand on her head

" but maa.."

"pls..some friends n relatives are already arrived for event.. pls don't creat any scene in front of them... i m begging u"

he pulled his hand with frustration " shit"

" lets go.. ur father was looking for u.."

" no, i m not going anywhere. . i don't want to meet him, he is equally responsible for my sadistic childhood.." he broke down a vase with anger

" no... no beta, u misunderstood him, he only sent u their for ur future.. he loves u "

" i don't think so.. pls leave me alone"

RA left with heavy heart..
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...cmnt pls
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Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww he is already jealous.. nice one..
continueee
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Part-7

Rani was busy with some papers..Jeevs came there.

" hii"

RANI looked at him for once n ingored.

"hello... i m talking to u" he was not in the mood to leave

Rani stood up n tried to leave from there.

" hey..." jeevs stopped her by holding her hand

she gave him a angry look..

"sorry..." he left her hand.. " btw u r looking exhausted .., may i help u with something "

" no thanks" she turned to leave.

" why??" he enquired

" coz, i don't want to take anyone's help, especially when he is a stranger"

"stranger...? me? i think u forget, we met before, infact i hugged u"

Rani had a killing expression .

" opps, sorry again... look, we met before, n now this is 2nd time,... we should be friends... lets be friends ." he extended his hand towards her.

She gave him a I am not intrested look

"pls..." he pleaded

"ohh God, mein jabtak isse haan nahi kahungi, ye yahan se jayega nahi.. "she thought
"ok" she shaked his hand..

"wow..thanks.. lets do ur work together"

"no..no,i'll handle this, thank u"

" look, now i am ur friend , u can't deny me to help u... let finish all ur work together"

" jeevs, u r a guest here, if anyone find u here...helping me... then ...no..no, pls let me do my work."

" no one is going to do nothing .. i m going to help u, n that's final..okk"

she nodded n they start their work. Lovy came there...

" jeevs... what r u doing there??" she enquired

" Arrey lovy, i am helping Rani "

Lovy surprised " wow, that's good... btw Rani have u finished all ur work..? if not then finish it as soon as possible , the event is in this evening ."

" i know lovy, don't worry, my work is almost finished, only to check again"

" very good"

"lovy... wo humare paise" Rani said hesitately..

" tum jaise middle class lok, paiso ke sibah aur jante kya hain" Raja entered.

Rani choose to be mum..

" dovy..., don't say like this.. she worked very hard for this..." lovy said to him.. " "Rani..wait.. i'll just come back"she left..

Raja was now glaring at her... she felt uncomfortable .. n left from there

" Raj... why r u always say like this to her..? see, she felt bad..."

" tujhe bahat fikar ho rahi hai usski...hmm, ... he mocked at him..."chal chhor, lets go for a drive"

" no... Raj, i am not interested , n i already visited all the places of ur city... u may go, i am going to help her..."

Raja felt her blood boiled with anger...but he choose to stay calm...

" jeevs.. let her do her work... come with me... "now he was ordering him

" no.. yaar, i want to spend some time with her, U know very well, how much i loved to dance? n i am going to propose her for dance in tonight event"

Raja's hand turned in to a fist.. he wanted to punch him...

" n again u know, i m very popular in girls, but i always choos the gorgeous n unique girl for me... n this time that girl is Rani... she is very beautiful..." he said dreamily

Raja tried to control over his anger.

" so that i want to convince her...for tonight.. U KNOW.. ONE night stand" he winked at him

This time his anger crossed all the limit... he held jeevs shirt collar...his eyes were blood red...Jeevs was surprised by his behavior

"how dare u to talk this nonsence about her..." he roared

" Raj...cool... i m just joking yaar" he is now anxious with his glare

" i warn u,,,don't ever try to say anything like this again...i swear, l'll break ur teeth ..."

" sorry yaar... it was just a joke... but u take it seriously " he tried to calm him down

Raja jerked him away.. n left from there

" isse kya ho gaya?? ... he gulped down n looked either side.. " thank god, koi nahi dekha... nahi mere ijjat ka faluda banjata..." he relaxed

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On other side of palace Lovy was searching for something in her locker.. BRM, K entered in to her room.

K- what r u doing Lovy?

L- wo... kokila dadi... Rani has almost completed her work... so i am going to pay her.. then she'll leave

BRM, K glared at her with disbelief..but she didn't notice it..

K - U r impossible Lovy, how could u forget about our plan..u brought her here for that only...

L became uncomfortable with her question ...

L- i haven't forgot anything... but i just want to send her away from this palace. I don't want her to be here.. in front of my dovy.. .i can't see him like this..

BRM- mockingly ... "then go, n not only give her the salary, but ,give her ur pyare Dovy also"

L got shocked " BRM, what r u saying??"

"n do another thing... pls do a favor, tell her that, Raja is still in love with her...he just faking his anger on her... n make her more determined to get him back"she said sarcastically..

L- then what u want me to do now?? she was frustrated ...

BRM- L, i can understand ur feeling , just one day more...hmm

L- but, BRM, can u pls tell me what u hv planned for her? I just can't tolerate her anymore ..she was getting irritated

BRM- u'll see soon .. now u go, and stop her from leaveing ...n yes invite her for event..

L left the room with irritation

K- BRM, not only lovy, i also want to know what u have planned?

BRM-I am going to make that cheap Rani pay for her deed..I'll snatch her self respect, ego, her dignity, n everything..That maid, made me apologized to her infront of everyone ..I can't forget it throughout my life.. I'll make her bound to do such thing.. that she couldn't imagine in her life... people'll laugh on her, i 'll make sure of it...

K- but BRM... how this plan is linked with their meeting?? what r u going to do with them??

BRM- i am not going to do anything...All work ll be done by this .. she shown her something... when this ll go inside her body.. the real drama'll begin...n then we tell her that..,Raja is behind all this... After that the never ending hater season ll begin...

K- Wow, but Raja...???

BRM- she insulted me through Raja,, n u 'll see, that same Raja'll throw her out of his life after this...

K- wow.. BRM , what a plan...

BRM- u just tell them be prepared...

K-okkk

" i'll destroy u Rani... i swear"
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PRECAP- Leave me Raja, pls.. what r u doing??pls...let me go

OKKK, friends... for u
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Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago

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