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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
nice one.. wondering what might be their plan!! hope its not that big and guess it will bring them close ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey continue the story pls.. why discontinued? :/
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
sorry friends... i m writing my paper in these days... so i hv supressed my etretr craziness for somedays... i hv to study na...becoz Ab mujhe raat din unke hi khayal hai( especially RAJA 😉 )... aur jaada sochungi toh meri fail hona tai hai...soo u can feel my tragic state.. 😭 i'llreturn for u dears..keep patience.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dpati508

sorry friends... i m writing my paper in these days... so i hv supressed my etretr craziness for somedays... i hv to study na...becoz Ab mujhe raat din unke hi khayal hai( especially RAJA 😉 )... aur jaada sochungi toh meri fail hona tai hai...soo u can feel my tragic state.. 😭 i'llreturn for u dears..keep patience.. ❤️


yes life is important! All the best for ur paper yr! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Hii friends ,
my exams are over... thank u for ur patience ..here is the next part

Part-8

Rani was ready to leave, but Bindu stopped her

" hey... r u leaving .."

" yeah... my work is completed, i have to go to my daadu before it getting dark"

"okey... i know u have to, but not today" Rani was surprised .." arrey.. its a very big event...i can't take any risk"

" what r u talking about??" rani was confused now

" Rani ... if u left before event,n there ll any require of urs at the end moment... then what 'll i do ...listen rani ! if there's any mistake happened in today's party.. BRM'll kill me..so pls don't go..."

" But lovy... i hv to go... i can't stay here any more.." her face dropped .." u know very well why i don't want to be here "

"i just want to throw u out from this palace... far from my Dovy's sight...but fr this BRM , I m requesting this cheap maid to stay here...its disgusting " thought Bindu..."Rani...i know, Raja is treating u badly nowadays ... trust me i'll talk to him.. n its the matter of only one evening.. then u r free... pls stay only this evening..."

" but ...lovy..."

" i don't want to listen anything now... u r staying... n i m inviting u to our special event, not as a employee, only as a friend..okk"

Rani has no option .. she nodded in yes..

" okk.. i'll bring u some dresses for this evening..."

" no, thanks lovy.. i m okey wid it"

" but, i m not Rani... hv u lost it.. u r gonna wear this dress in our high class party...sorry but u can't ..."Bindu throws tantrum on her... Rani agreed without any interest...then Bindu shown her some modern dresses.

" lovy... these???"

"yeah... these r latests designs...chose one..."

"thanks lovy.. but i can't wear this...these r very short"

" common Rani.. these r the fashion nowadays ..."

" no.. no, i'll not comfortable wid this... i m okey wid my dress"

"but..."Lovy's sentence interrupted by Ambika's entry..

" Rani.. u r going to wear this.." she brought a saree for her n handed it over to her

" RA! this ???" she has a questioning look

"I just got to know abot u r staying for the event... so i think i'll bring u this becoz i noticed ur dress was torned duing work.. take this. i m sure u ll comfortable wid it" .. RA said wid a smile..

" RA...i think u hv a good idea abou her choice.." Bindu throws tantrum on RA

" yes...bindu, she is a daugher to me as like u...i can't give her everything , so this is a small gift to her from me...Rani..take this saree as my blessing." .. she put her hand on her head

" okey... Rani..get prepared .. the event is going to start after sometimes " Bindu left from there wid a irked face

" RA...thank u..i know u always stand by me in all situation...n i really respect u from my heart..but this saree looks very costly ... i can't take this...sorry"

" pls Rani! i only bring it for u..if u don't accept it, i feel bad..."*

Rani hesitately accept that.

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Evening, Event...

Raja n jeevs r talking on something n laughing...

" Jeevs jantu... hw can u propos that servant for dance... she already left this palace after lovy pid her." Raja laughed when gulped his drink..

" what?? she left widout informing me...??"

"yess...ab kya hoga tera... koi aur ladki dhund le dance keliye..."but jeevs didn't listen to him... he was looking somewhere else..

" hey... jeevs, jantu... where r u lost" he said looking towards his gaze.. n he felt his heart started beating faster than ever...There she was , the most beautiful girl ever seen... she wore a red saree with golden work over it.she had a little make up, which give her a serene look. she was looking like an angel came down from heaven... he noticed every single person was looking towards her with mesmerized gaze.. he want to take her somewhere to spare her from evil looks...

" gosh... she is gorgeous man... who is she??someone wishpered by his side..

"omg...Raaj, she is an angel yaar...but u said me , she left.. ? asked jeevs turning towards him..Do whatever u want, but i m going to propose her now.." he was not waiting for Raja's reaction n walking forward..

Raja's jaw clenched with anger...he was going towards them... there eyes met...

" Yea.. rani.. u r gorgeous yaar.." jeevs complimented her

" Thanks jeevs..." she said by avoiding Raja's gaze

" btw... i hv a request ..."

" request...?? rani questioned

" yes... will u be my dance partner for this evening..."jeevs requested

"what??" she shocked...me??she looked towards Raja.. his eyes were red with anger...she turned around and said yes to jeevs...n excused her from there

" yeeepeee.. yeh hui na baat... Raj, maine kaha tha na mai iss party ke sabse khubsoorat ladki ke sath dance karunga... ab tu v apne liye chun ley..."jeevs was very happy

"my dovy ll dance with me... hey na dovy.." said bindu from behind

Raja left from there wid anger...

" yes, lovy be his partner, becoz i already booked the most beautiful girl of this party.. so i think he feel jealous "

" what r u saying... the most beautiful girl of the party is standing infront of u..n she is going to dance wid the eligible bachelor of this party... n pls don't think i m talking about you...its DOVY... my dovy.."said lovy with a proudy smile

" no lovy... u r wrong. U r beautiful ,but not that what u think... if u look at her , i m sure u ll feel jealous .."

" Jeevs .. hw dare u to compare me with someone else..." lovy was angry now

" chilll... she is non other than ur friend... RANI..."

" what??Rani..." but her jaw dropped when her eyes fell on her... a current of jealously stared running in her body...

" lovy... u r looking gorgeous " Rani complimented her

" yeah... but not like u... someone mesmerized by ur beauty... n he already compared u with me..." lovy laughed sarcastically

" no..no, lovy... yessa kuchh v nahi hai, tum bahat khubsurat lagrahi ho ajj...sachhi mein" she felt awcard...

" okey u guys continue .. i remembered some work..." bindu left that place

binu pov... "no, Raja should not hv to meet her... if he ll meet her today, i m afraid that, he ll not control his emotion ... i hv to keep Dovy engaged wid other works.."

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Rani was standing near a corner in the party... a waiter came towards her n offer her a drink..rani started to gulp one sip, but waiter's word stopped her right there

" mam... this drink was sent by Kunwar Rajveer... especially for u ... hv a nice drink mam..." before Rani could utter a word that waiter left from there...Rani looked towards the counter... Raja was there drinking, n gazing towards her...

" how dare he to sent me drink...? she think n fumed wid anger , she walked towards him

" i don't want anything from u..." she said directly looking into his eyes

" what??? " he asked confusingly

" now u can't understand anything... u sent me this drink through a waiter, n think i'll come to u n say thank u for this... wait , r u spiked this drink???"

"Rani... what the shit r u talking..n i hv nt sent any drink to u"

" shut up... what r u thinking about me, i m a fool... i can't understand anything.. i know ur motive ... u r trying to humilate me again, in this party, in front of everyone...but, u ll not successful this time.. i ll not give u the chance.. okey.. " she said angrily

" look Rani ... don't test my patience .. i said na i didn't sent any drink to u..." said raja with disgust

" i m not going to convince with ur words Raja...i don't have a little faith on u now... so pls take this..i know u'll never drink this becoz it is spiked" she handed him over the glass n turned around to go

" if u think, i hv spiked this ... then look at me, i m going to drink it... n for ur information , we don't serve our guests spiked drinks... " he said from behind n drank from that glass.." abb toh jan gayi hogi key this was spiked or not... u know.. what's u poor people's problem , they think they can do anything when they get a rich man's attention... nw look in to ur case... Jeevs kya dance ke liye propose kar diya, tum mere saame dahad ne lagi...kamal hai"

" tumse toh baat karna hi bekar hai"... she left from there

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BRM, kokila talking with the waiter...

" hv u done ur work..." asked K

" yes.. mam, i gave her the drink n as per ur instructions i said it was sent by Rajveer sahib" said the waiter

" did she drank it??" asked BRM

" i don't know BRM, i left from there asap"

" u donkey,, i told u to be there n make her drink that anyhow.. but u r left from there.. nw hw can i found out she drank it or not"BRM said angrily

" i m sorry mam..pls spare me" he pleaded

" BRM .. leave him... we'll find it out very soon" said K..." now u leave n don't dare to talk abot it with anyone..." The waiter left

Rani was coming towards them...

" Rani... u r looking beautiful "said BRM with her sugar coated voice

" thank u... BRM.. do u need anything, tell me i 'll bring it for u"

" don't u feel dizzy.. or something ??? asked kokila when gazing her face

" what???" Rani can't hear properly

" Ohh... she just asked, r u enjoying party..."BRM tried to hide kokila's word

" yes...i love this"

" did u hv some drinks?? if not then go n take one.. that is our party's specialty .."

" yes BRM...a waiter served me one... but... "
before she completed her sentence ,Jeevs came there n take her wid her for dance

" yes... she drank it ..abb ayega asli maza" said an excited K

Lovy came thr , she was looked very angry.. "BRM, can u tell me ... whats going on... r u really on my side?... i don't think so...only for u that Jeevs dare to compare me with that classless girl...if he is not Dovy's bff..i do break her nose... n he was right.. if u guys looked at her ... u ll feel jealous.then think about Raja .. he loved her... if he again flows wid his emotios then... what ll i do?? ..."


" ok... ok... just wait for some more time... both Raja n jeevs r going to hate her" said BRM with a smirk..

" r u serious .. but how.. wht have u done wid her? "

" wait n watch... one thing more... when we signal u , sent her out from the party... our men 'll handle rest"

" thank u BRM... i m going...but u hv to tell me about our plan"

" okey... later.. go"

Lovy left from there n two evils smirked...

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All couples were on dance floor ... Raja was looking at Rani who was dancing with jeevs. He felt jealous n want to snactch Rani from him... but Rani was ignoring his gaze on her..Jeevs was very happy by getting Rani as his partner..n it kills Raja more...with the dance steps jeevs turned Rani.. bt she felt dizzy n fell on Jeevs chest. He held her tightly to give her support ... Raja was burning with anger after seeing this.

" Rani r u okey? " asked jeevs wid concern

" just felt little dizzy .. i think its due to tiredness"

" u should hv take rest...u guys continue .. i m going to drop her in my room for rest" said lovy

" no lovy thanks.. i can go myself.. u enjoy" said Rani

" then i'll drop u there" said Jeevs

" no.. jeevs , i said na, i m okey.. i can make it to room so don't worry for me.."

" u sure"

" yes" Rani left the party... n BRM indicate someone to go after her...

" this was ur last day of happiness Rani...from next morning u can't walk straight on road... becoz all r going to laugh on u... ur family... becoz u r going to do such shameful thing chi, chi... u can't imagine ..,u'll be the 1 who invite ur Barbadi... " think BRM

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Rani was passing through the corridor.. she can feel someone was following her... she tried to walk first... she again felt dizzy... she turned around.. there was a man .. his face was covered with cloth... before she can say something, a hand pulled her from behind n the door closed... that man ran back, when he saw someone was coming towards him...but that person came forward n banged the closed door...the former man got the chance n ran away from there...

okkk friends... for u..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
hey when will you post next part??? eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
This part contain a bit INTENSE scenes... i am not good at writing this, tried it first time..

.PART-9
Rani's House

Rani got up from her bed with a loud coughing sound..she rushed towards Daadu's room...Daadu was coughing badly..

" Daadu... what happened, r u okey? "she asked while gave her a glass of water..n patted her back..

Daadu drank that water n felt better... she looked towards her.. Rani's eyes r filled with tear..she hugged her..

" Daadu... lets go to the hospital... "

" no, beta, i am fine now, u looked tired... go n take some rest...i m going to the temple...ll be back within hour.."

" no, don't go anywhere, daadu.., u r not okey"

"i m fine...i had a wish for u n Raja...i want u two be happy ever...so this puja is important for me.. i have to go anyways.." with this sentence all colors are faded away from Rani's face...

" Go n sleep, ...mein jaldi lout aungi..." said Daadu n left for temple

Rani sat down right there lifelessly...

Rani's POV

"Daadu, i m sorry, i hide u everything... i broke ur trust..." i am sorry she was sobbing loudly...

Flashback

She felt dizzy in that party.. she left from there... someone was following her... she tried to found out who was that ,but before she said something to that person.. a hand covered her mouth from behind n pulled her inside the room... she was scared as hell.. that room was dark... she tried to shout..but in vein... that person's hand covered her mouth very tightly.. she tried to set free from his grip... suddenly a voice drained her all blood from her heart...It was HIM

"don't struggle" ... his tone was hoarse

he took away his hand from her mouth...she turned around to look at him...a slow light was coming through the window... she saw his face with that.. his eyes had a different look...he was looking directly to her eyes..
she felt scared with this...but she maintained a brave face..

" how dare u touch me"

" why...r u feeling worst with my touch... his face came closer to her face... u hv no problem when jeevs toched u in that party.. then why hv u problem with my touch... i was before him... i should hv equal right to touch u... like him" a slap fell on his face this time... he looked back towards her angrily..

" u r such a dog... u know what's ur problem... u never trust anyone... first it was me, now its jeevs... arrey kabhi toh kisii ke uper trust karna sikho... tum kya trust karoge... tumhe to apni app pe hi trust nahi hai.. u r insecured then n now... " she said angrily...
" don't u try to be with him..., i warn u... U R mine ... only mine" he snapped out n grip her arms tightly..she struggled to get free...

" this time, i m not going to obey u... its my life.. n i'll live it as i wish... u have not any right to interfere in it... n who r u to tell me not to be with him...I'll be Jeevs friend Mr. Rajveer Rana, not to deceive u, but for my happiness.. becoz whatever he may be, he respect woman... n he is not like u... when he promised something... he tries his best to fulfill it.. he is a real man... n u r a JERK..." these sentences pireced in his ear..Rani tried to left, but he pinned her in to the wall this time... they were inches apart..his anger crossed all the levels.. he fumed with anger.."how could she deceive him... how could she praise someone else in front of him"..
she was looking at him with wide eyes...tears r started forming with it... haters clearly visible in that ..."he can bear her anger but not her hater" he thought himself... she was looking so vulnerable ... her eyes were looking towards him firecely.. her lips were shivered with their close proximity...
" these eyes... these lips n this girl .. all r mine.. i ll not let anyone stole it from me" he thought to himself when looking at his tigress... suddenly he felt a urge to kiss those lips.. n in the next moment he was kissing her... Rani was utterly shocked with this sudden act... she can't think anything straightly...
a loud bang on door returned back her sense... she pushed him away with shock.. n ran towards the door, before she opened it, he pulled her again, n this time her back collides with his solid chest... "Raja... leave me.."she tried to escape from his tight held...she felt his hand on her bare waist... she felt like a current flows through her spine...
"what r u doing??... "
he turned her around to look at him .. his eyes had a different look..that look was not an enraged look like nwadays...he had that previous look in his eyes..with which she fell in love with...his pupils were dilated with desire.Rani felt like she would lost her control too, if she looked at those eyes for some more time... she tried to look away, but he made her looked back at him again..

" have u never loved me for once" his voice was soft

Rani looked at him surprisingly..she can't believe to her ear... this was the long lost voice of him, for which she craved.This question always make her weak infront of him...but always he asked this question to test her patience.. she wanted to shout at him.. "yes, i loved u then n NOW.. but my love has no value for u".. but she tried to maintained a cold face n said, " no.. i never"

"don't lie.. u loved me then n now, ur eyes say this"

"no.. i never ever loved u.. i hate u , u broke my trust, u humillated me...i hate u, just hate u.. go away" she pushed him with force.. with this he lost his balance n fell down.. his head hit with the table corner, n he shriked with pain... "ahh"
Rani was shocked by seeing this.. she ran towards him..there was a scar on his head.. " Raja.. r u okey?" she asked while cupping his face.. Raja got hold of her hand..." say again, u hate me.." he was in pain
" Raja u r hurt... lets go out.." she was crying now
" look, here i m in pain, but u r crying... n u said u hate me" he laughed sarcastically..
"Raja ... why r u doing this??" she asked while sobbing..." becoz,I love u.." Rani was surprised..
" i know u r drunk.. after such humillation how can u say, u love me.." she snapped back

" i hv tried to hate u Rani.. but i can't...every time my heart told me I can't live without u.. but i denied it" Rani was speechless this time.." pls don't leave me.. i ll not able to survive this time"he was crying and hugged a shocked Rani...
She also felt a urge to hug him back.. " i never left u Raja.. u r the one who left me.. u said that i was the reason of all ur suffering... n i don't want to be that reason again.. pls let me go" she tried to pull herself from his hug. but this made him hug her more tightly...
" don't leave me... i can't see u with any other person...it hurts me more than death... pls don't leave..." his tears r nw wetting her neck... "i m sorry.. mein mar jaunga tumhare bina... i love u .. i love u". this words were enough to break her all promise , what she did with herself.. she hugged him tightly... her tears had no intention to stop...
Raja broke his hug n cupped her face..." i love u Rani" with this, he kissed her passionately...Rani had no resistance now... they kissed till they felt the need of air...Rani felt numb with this... she looked at his face.. his eyes r filled with desire...he tried to kiss her again... but she protest.. "no, Raja.. this is not right... lets go..." she tried to pull him with her..he pulled her back n in this process they fell back on his bed..

She was laying under him... their eyes met... both had craved for each other...Rani felt his fingers were carassing her milky skin... she tried to say something, but Raja covered her lips with his.. slowly they broke their kiss.. " Raja.. this is not right"..

" everything is fair in love n war "... he kissed her nape
" u r drunk ... u ll regret it .." he looked back at her eyes with her sentence..." I will never regret it as long as this is u".. he said n kissed her tear... " I need u Rani.. pls let me be yours forever" this was the last resistance of her emotional turmoil.. she gave up and...
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" what the hell r u doing in my room..." this sentence was like a thunderstorms to her ear..

" Raja..." she called him slowly...

" get out from my room" this gave a heart attack to her

" R...Raja" she was on the verge of crying

" get out" he was not able to stand properly till now due to nasha..but why he was saying like that...

" R..Raja what r u saying.. can't u remember anything" she was hell scared now

" yes i remember everything... u cheated over me with my friend... u r a gold digger"

" Raja.. how can u say like that after this..." she slapped him... Raja was not in conscious state...he was not in state of listening anything... she ran out from there ..she hitted with RA
" Rani...listen to me" but she didn't ..she ran out from that palace..her legs were not in the state of walking .. she wished to die... but when she remembered about her Daadu.. she had no other option...


FLASHBACK ENDS

"aaahhh... why did i lost my control.. how could i let him play with my life??why Raja why ...?? she was crying loudly
" abb mein kya karoo... daadu pls forgive me... " she cried holding her knees...

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Next morning, Raja's room

Raja woke up from his sleep...he felt throbbing pain in his head..." oh god, this headache " he hissed with pain...RA entered in to the room at the same time...

" Good morning ma... i have a bad headache ... pls send me a Ginger tea... i need it badly" he said without looking at her...

" we r getting late Raja, get ready first..." she said without looking at him n drawn some clothes from his cupboard ..

" getting late.. r u going somewhere ..??"

" not only me, but we... me, ur father n u"

" i m not going anywhere ...my head..." his sentence interrupted by RA

" u r bound to go... " she said sternly.. this made Raja to look at her

" but ma, i said na i m not interested , u may go... btw where r u going in this early morning" he questioned

" Rani's house" Kaal entered ..

" what??... but why?? what the hell r we going to do in her house.. i m not going " suddenly a tight slap fell on his face... it was RA

" ma??" he was utterly shocked by this

" don't call me ma.. u janwaar..." she gritted her teeth with anger

" ma... u slapped me, but why... what happened ... pls tell me"... he held her arms with concern.. but RA jerked his hand away

" don't pretend like u can't remember anything, u nonsense , i feel ashamed that u r my son.." she was crying now

" ma... what r u saying, pls tell me clearly ,... i can't understand anything"

"don't lie... i said, don't lie...u have done such a shameful thing n nw u r seeking for explanation "

" but ma..." his sentence cut by Kaal

" don't ask further question .. do what we said... otherwise i' ll beat u again" he also had a irritated look on his face

" Pitaji... app v.." he said surprisingly

" if i have done this before.., u dare not to do this today...u knew well, this thing 'll harm our reputation "he said irkly

" for god sake , koi mujhe bataye ga ki maine aisa kya kardiya... jis ke liye subah subah app log mujhe daant rahe ho.." he was shouting now wid frustration

" u harmed a woman's dignity Raja... u ruined her... u ruined Rani.." RA was sobbing loudly

Raja was beyond shock after hearing this

" u destroyed her every dream, her each way... everything ... u destroyed her completely Raja... ur revenge got full filled..., she is totally ruined by u... u kept ur word..."

Raja was speechless

" but i m not going to leave her to suffer with this... she had no fault .. then why should she suffer for ur misdeed ... U know what, u never been deserve a girl like her... she loved u unconditionally but u did this to her... now i m going to give her her right, n i'll give her what she deserve.. Today i m going to ask for her hand... n for this i don't need ur permission... coz u lost this right" she said with cold voice

" get ready soon, we r waiting for u downstairs..." said kaal n they left from his room

Raja sat down on his bed with a thod sound... he can't recovered from RA's word...

Raja's POV-- ye maa kya keh rahithi... but why she said like that... why i can't remember anything of last night..He pressed his head with both his hands..."i was in the party... n she was with jeevs..." then...suddenly his eyes fell on something .. n he got shock of his lyf..." this... i gave her this anklet on her b'day... how did it came here?? that means... shit.. shit...shit..he remembered something

" how could i do this to her... ??? no..." he banged his hand on side table.the vase fell down n broke..

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Hall, PALACE

BRM,K were there n talked with a man..

M- sorry, BRM...i couldn't do anything...

K- matlab... wht r u trying to say"

M- " before i catch her.. someone pulled her inside the room... n i can't get her..

BRM- what the heck r u talking... u can't catch her...n who was that person, who took her..u saw him
M- no, BRM.. there was dark in the corridor, i can't see that person.. then i saw RA there , i got afraid n ran away..
BRM- u r good gor nothing... u can't find a ordinary girl...now what r u doing here... get lost before anyone finds you...
That man left from there. Jeevs n lovy came down from their respective room..

J- hey lovy.. have u seen Rani...

L- no... i think she left early this morning.. " she looked at BRM 's face n smile while saying this

J- ohh.. i just wish to meet her before i take my leave... but tell her when u meet her, I 'll return only for her ...

L- okkk.. but why r u leaving today?? stay some days more, Rani'll come for her payment...(she'll never come here again...).. u can meet her

J- yes.. i want to.. but lovy.. there is an important meeting in our company .. i have to present there at any cost..

L- okey... have a safe journey ..

J- thanks.. btw where is Raja?? I hv not seen him from last night.. he was vanished from party last night..

L- yes, where is he?? i think wo so raha hoga abhi tak... he is really a kumbhakaran...wait.. i m going to wake him up... she headed towards his room...

Kaal and RA came there

J- anty... where is Raj?? i m getting late... i want to meet him before my leave...

RA- he 'll be right here within some time...

J- okey... he looked at his watch n said" i think i should take my leave... my flight is within fifteen minutes ... I couldn't meet him.. Anty.. tell him bye from me.. " Jeevs took his leave...

Lovy came down with a shattered Raja..

L- arrey.. jeevs chala gaya kya??

RA nodded in yes... n then she n kaal ready to go..they hint Raja to come

BRM- Kaal, RA .. where r u heading in this early morning ??

RA- BRM, we r going to Rani's house..

BRM- Rani's house.. this early.. but why???

RA- ek galhti sudharne ke liye... looked towards Raja angrily..

L- galhati... RA what r u talking about...??

RA- i ll explain u later.. but nw we hv to go... I asked Panditji, today's mahurat is great...we can't delay on it..

BRM- mahurat... RA ye kis mahurat ki baat kar rahein hai ap...

RA-I m talking about Raja n Rani's marriage ...

BRM, K, L were beyond the shock after hearing this...

K- RA.. wht r u saying?? Raja n Rani's marriage.. hw can it be possible ... u know their relationship status nowadays ...

Kaal- he already has done something like that... we have no other options..

BRM- but what he had done?? can u explain me clearly ... for what reason u r going to get him married to that ordinary girl...

RA- she is not an ordinary girl...she said while sobbing... "i told u before, don't bring her to this palace ... but u didn't listen to me...i knew that, something is not right... some mishap ll happen..."

K- RA... rona baand karke batayenge ki hua kya hai... she asked in a irritated voice

RA explained them everything... while Raja was there with his head down.all the time... all got shock of their lives by this... Lovy's was statued at her position ...

RA-he ruined her... she started crying... while kaal tried to console her..

L goes towards Raja...n " Raja... this all r lies..is not it?? RA must have misunderstood u...right??

R was speechless...

"RAJA.." L shook him..." tell me something "

BRM- RA... ap itni si baat ko, kitna bada bana rahe hain... iss umar mein eisa ho jata hai kabhi kabhi ... iiss mei badi baat kya hai... She said with its not a great issue like smile,,

RA's anger crossed all level nw...

RA- wht did u just say..? it is not a big thing...he plays with a woman's dignity ... hw can u say like this??? actually this is not his fault, it is ur fault BRM...u made him a ruthless,emotionless n merciless person... n i knew it very well u didn't like Rani from the beginning ...n u suddenly became very helpful towards her...u employed her in this palace, when u well known about their fight... if light n insects r stay together ...light always burns the insect...it happened..

All r looked towards RA with shocked eyes with her changed voice...BRM was uncomfortable with this

BRM- RA... mind ur tongue ... u r talking with ur mother-in-law...n u r blaming me for this??? she tried to maintain a strong face

Kaal- sorry, BRM, actually she is very hurt with Raja's deed...but she is right... we should have to regret for our fault... n this marriage is the only solution for this...all things ll solved by this... n Rani is a very good girl as per my knowledge

BRM-but Kaal, hw can an ordinary girl become the queen of this palace... one should have know about our rituals, behavior etc...can she do this all... i mean can she handle this big responsibility

RA- u don't worry about this BRM, i m here for her, i ll teach her everything ...

BRM- Kaal, try to understand , she can't maintain all this...

RA- BRM, what do u want?? this marriage or a police case...

All were horrified by hearing this...

RA- if u don't allow this marriage to happen... i'll be the one who appeal a case against u all for harassing a simple girl ...on the behalf of Rani ...u want this?? her eyes were burning with anger

K- Have u gone mad... u file case against ur family for the sake of that girl...?? she asked mockingy

RA- then, pls.. make this marriage happen... n while Raja has no problem with this, i think ,u should nt have any...pls m begging u stay away from my son's matter..i m enough to handle him

BRM- okey, if he wants this marriage to happen... i don't have any problem...but i want to make my Raja's marrige in a grand way... but in vein, u want it to happen today...so can u keep a request... She started her drama again

RA- request..????

BRM- yes... i want to not declare this marriage...

RA,Kaal- what?? they r surprised

BRM- i mean , not declare it untill i prepared a grand ceremony for their marriage... are bhai humare Raja ki saadi hai... dhoom dham se toh hona chahi hae ki nahi...

L,K looked at BRM with disbelief

before RA could say something kaal cut her words..

Kaal- ok... BRM, i m happy , u give ur approval for this marriage... ur grant has a great value for this... we wouldn't declare it for ur sake... u want ur grandson's marriage in a grand way.. we make it happen.. thank u

L was crying now.. " Raja u can't do this... u can't marry that girl...u hate her... " Raja said nothing

RA- Raja lets go...

RA, RAja n kaal left for Rani's house...Lvy was crying badly behind ...

L- BRM, what is this? this was ur plan??. .. how could u grant this marriage..?? u want that Rani as ur bahu... not me... ?? she sobbed loudly, K tried to console her.." BRM, i hate u... u separated me from my dovy" ...

K,BRM was shocked by this

K-BRM, our plan take an u turn... hw can it possible ...

BRM- i too can't understand anything...hw could Raja say yes for this... he hate her so much...i think something happened without our knowledge ... we have to find that out...

BRM kept her hand on lovy's head... lovy looked towards her with teary eyes..

BRM- lovy... " but lovy jerked her hand away..

L- BRM, i m not going to make it happen .. my dovy can't marry that girl... u had planed to make her geedy... but hw they get together ...answer me

BRM- i m also thinking that... i promised u to give u Raja... i ll keep it...i swear.. u helped me in every way

K- but how, BRM?? today they ll get married... n they ll stay together again.. n this time we can't do anything

BRN- all r that worthless person's fault.. if he caught her in time last night... then we may not face this situation

L- what r u talking about??? what person..??

K- yes, we had planned to kidnapp her, n then make her image ruined infront of Raja... but that person could not help us... infact we made her drink a spiked juice...spiked with a aphrodisiac pill...

L- what...??????she asked disbeliefly

BRM- that drink made her excited...n she might trapped in our plan.. but unfortunately she was found by Raja... n this mishap happened...

L- BRM... pls tell me what to do now... Dovy is in guilt for this...i know very well he would not see her hurt... how to make Dovy realise that, it was not his fault...it was hers...


BRM-then go, n make him realise that Rani is the only culprit for this...he has no fault as a man...wash his brain properly, with this sentence.. that Rani tried to get benefit with this..she don't love him... she only want his money...etc...u can understand what m saying??? she smiled devilishly looking at lovy...

K- BRM, r u sure, this can help us??

BRM- i m very sure...after knowing it was her fault Raja probably starts hate her again... now he might bring her for his guilt... after knowing the truth he'll throw her out without any mercy...n they'll againt separated even after marriage...

L- okey.. i'll do everything to get back my dovy...

BRM- i know... Raja is only urs... she patted lovy's back..." Rani, i may lost this time, but i feel sorry for u... ur first step in this palace 'll welcome a devasted life ahead for u...i'll make sure of it"


Edited by Dpati508 - 8 years ago
cuteAngel23 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#28
waiting for the next update
sahilasya thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Just found ur ff and its incredible
Plz update next update soon
cuteAngel23 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#30
this was really a long update.but I like it.wondering what will be next .waiting...

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