RajNi FF: TUM MERI HO...

Hi all RajNI fans..why there is no ffs,ss on our beloved Jodi??i had found a few bt those were either discontinued or very short.so i think to write one.very firstly i want to confess i m not good in english. pls tolerate me with very bad grammar.so this FICTION may contain both English n hindi dialogue s..This story based on Rani's kidnapping track with a bit diffence.

PART-1
wo hume pyar nahi karta tha Minu, wo toh hume nafrat karta hai.ajj se nahi bachpan se..aur hum uske dhoke ko pyar samajh baithe the...Rani was crying , holding her knees..

kya bol rahi hai dear..yeh kaise ho sakta hai. sir ka pyar dikhawa tha, i can't belive.unka pyar toh unke ankho mein jhalakta tha, toh phir yeh sab...Minu trying to console her

mein apne app ko yahi samjha ne ki kosish kar rahi hu Minu.lekin jo usne kaha wo kaise bhul jau..wo ye manta hai ki uske dardnak bachpan ke jimmedar mein hu..tab jab mujhe iss duniya ke bare mein kuch v nahi pata tha .only 7 saal ki thi mei tab..mein toh wo sab bhul gayi lekin wo ab tak nahi bhul paya wo sab..n he punish me today for that deed jo main ne kabhi kiya nahi.. He broke my Heart , He played with my soul, my life. phir v me usse bhul nahi pa rahi hun ,,kyun??Rani cried very badly.

sambhal apne app ko dear...

lekin mein uske samne kabhi tut nahi sakti..wo mujhe tod kar khushi pana chahta hai..mein eisa kabhi nahi hone dungi..mein waise hi khadi rahungi jaise pehle thi..mein apni dadu ke ummidon par mitti nahi phailne dungi..agar wo RAJA hai toh mein v RANI hu, saying this Rani stood up n leave the room

Rani, Rani... sun to...rani

TO BE CONTINUED...
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wow finally a rajni ff.. awesome :D
nice plot.. hope u continue with it :)
also pls don't make the ff completely in hindi.. add more of English. it will be easy for many! :) just shared a point, otherwise the ff is pretty start point of the track! :D

thank u moonlight3094,, for ur pov n appreciation .i'll try as per ur suggestion.. 😊

Part -2
Amerkot Palace, Raja's Room
Raja's POV

I give her so much pain, i want to make her life miserable .Today all my wishes come true..I should be happy. But why..WHY i am feeling restless?? whenever i think about her face, her innocent eyes n those tears why i feel those pain which i gave her r returning towards me like a bumeira..yeah those tears r my prize for my superb act..ha ha ha..i am the winner of this love hate game.i m the Winner..is it true?? I console myself..YES, YES i win , i win over my enemy . i win over her by making her whole world shattered .but why i feel worse pain in my heart.? She deserves this punishment for her long told lies .Now she can understand the pain of trust breaking..then what is this pain means.. is it LOVE?How can it be possible...love n hater can't stay together...I hate her , i hate her...but at the same time my heart repeated U LOVE HER, U love her...]

Flashback

"I love u Raja..i love u very much, u may throw me out of ur life, but i can't . i loved u.. i love u ..n gonna love u till my death"

"I m not going to leave this city at any cost Raja, i'll stay here , infront of ur eyes..Hum v dekhna chahte hain tumhare nafrat ke agg ko kab tak hum jhel pate hein..Remember raja there'll one day to come when u want to reach to me but u can't .I thought whatever my life was in past, i don't hv any regret ..becoz i find u as my new life ..But i could 'nt imagine i 'll bound to regret for this life..n u made me realize it..RAJA..Thank u..."

Flashback ends

"Stop..stop...stop " screamed RAJA by hold his her with his palm..

i'll not make u win rani..Never.. Ur words r not going to effect me anymore I hate u...mein tumse pyar nahi karta...mujhe tumhe bhulna hoga.. Rani..He bangs his hand on bed...

Raja's POV ends

"so u truely love her..is not it?? Rani Ambika entered in to the room..

Maa...

"why..beta, why r u hurting urself?? u n me , we both r know this clearly that how much u love rani...then why r u doing these??"

"No, i don't love her"

"Achha, ur mouth is saying this son,, but ur eyes r telling another story..n u can't hide anything from me.. i don't understand why u trying to do such things"

"She is my enemy maa, she made my childhood miserable ..he smiled sarcastically ..n i made her pay for that..my wishes get fullfilled.. nw she is suffering..n i m haappy"

"Ohh..Really son..u r happy..i see that. u mentioned her as ur enemy...but i wonder whoever in this world stands by with his enemy in all situation ..Tell me?? U r always been there for her ,since childhood ...n u can't deny it.."

"These r all bogus .."

" may be my words r meaningless for u, but i request u to pls don't hurt urself..ur happiness is with her son..don't do any such thing for which u ll loss her forever.."

"Please maa, go from here ,,,i don't want to talk about this anymore..pls leave me alone"

"OK..i m going from here, which mother is able to see her child's pain..But before i left i want to tell one thing...Rani was not only person for ur misery ..there were some others ..they hide themselves n push rani to daylight..." Rani ambika left the room

Two pairs of evil eyes withness all the son-mom convo from a little distance.Their evil minds started to creat new plan for this situation ..

TO be continued



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moonlight3094 ...i tried this part in english as per ur view..pls tolerate wid any grammatical or spelling mistake

Wow.

Wow great.. he Is realizing! :D
one of the best part of etretr 2 is raja's emotional side.. nice pov!!

p.s. thank u for considering my view :)
and yea grammatical errors doesn't matter infront of the concept.. so no worries.! ;) u keeping writing yr! :D

Part-3
Rani's house

Rani was preparing for her cllege. Dadu entered in to the room.

"have u both fought on some issue ."

"who dadu..."?

" u n Raja.."

Rani is spellbound ...No..no dadu, there is nothing like that...

"then y Raja beta is not coming to our home"

"wo..wo dadu..he may be busy in some work n again he started his hotel project last week..he may not get time for this...Rani tried to convince her..."

"I know that Rani, but he has to make time for us...for his 2 best friends ...Ohh ..sorry ..only for me..becoz u already got promotd from his bf list to his love..Dadu is teasing her..."

Rani stood there like a statue. She has no words..."No dadu..i hv nt promoted ,,bt ditched.. He broke my trust...i want to cry dadu..i want to share it wid u..bt i can't.."

"Rani..what happened??"

"nothing..i m getting late dadu..."rani cane out from her thought...
"OK ..u may go.."rani start to leave..."listen Rani , tell Raja beta to come here, when he get some leisure ..ok"said dadu...

Rani nodded in yes...suddenly dadu statred coughing badly..
"Dadu...r u alright...dadu.."

"yes..rani..i m fine, do nt worry.. go..go...u r already late for ur lecture "

Rani saw some blood droplets in dadu's cough..."Dadu..i m not going anywhere, u come with me...we r going to hospital right now.."

"arrey..i told u na, i m fine...u go"

"no u r not ..pls lets go to hospital ..pls"

Rani brings dadu to hospital. after some check ups doctor told rani about dadu's TB relapse ..and suggest Rani to admit her immediately before condition getting worse..

"how much it costs doctor .."

"minimum 15,000 ...pls deposite money on counter ..after that we'll start her treatment "

"but doctor ,, i hv not this much money now..."

"i m sorry...i can't help u in this matter...try to deposit asap.."

doctor take his leave by saying this...rani get tensed ..n They returned from hospital ...

"dadu...pls take ur medicine timely ..this is very important for ur health.."rani said while giving dadu her medicine ..

"what happened Rani.?? is there any problem with my health? u r looking so tensed since we returned from hospital .."

"no..dadu...nothing like that..u r absolutely fine. pls take care of urself..pls..there is no one for me other than u..pls be healthy..".Rani hugged her n cried secretly..

"ok..i'll take care of my self ..Ab khoos"

Bth smiled n hugged each other...


Palace

BRM's Room

BRM seems to be in deep thought..Kokila was sitting beside her.Lovy entered into the room.She is very happy,,onecan said at one glance of her face..

L-BRM, Kokila dadi... i m very happy today, u knw why?

kokila tried to sushhed her, but she was nt in listening mood...

L- u know, my Dovy is returned to me..he returned only for me..n he thrown that poor, chipku Rani out of his life..i m so haappy today..Finally my dovy 'll be mine..

Kokila indicates to shut her up...but...she was so busy to notice this..
L- i knew that clearly, my dovy can't cheat on me. He loves me n today it is confirmed ...n aftr yesterday's ill treatment that fattichat Rani'll never come to the palace again ..." so huana dovy puri tarah se humara".

in the very next moment a tight slap fell on her face..It was BRM..lovy was shocked ..

L- BRM ...why?? she is on the verge of crying

B- shut ur mouth up , u crazy, brainless girl...can't u shut up for a moment..I wonder..what u'll do in ur life,,being like this..Tday i can understand why Raja is nt interested in u..becoz of this childish n unmature behavior ..n listen u'll nt get him in ur next 7 lives, if u r being like this..

Lovy is crying nw..kokila tries to assure her..

L- still crying.."i was happy. so i want to share it wid u two..but u slapped me".

B- why r u so happy?? " kyun itne khoos ho rahi ho".. tell me , u stupid girl..

L-is nt it a good news that, Rani left this palace n Raja forever?? I think u ll be happy with this news..but..

B- but?? i slapped u only for once..u deserve more than one"..she tried to beat her again ,but kokila stopped her..

K-BRM, pls stop..pls focus on our topic. lovy is a child..pls forgive her..

B- kokila..make her understand that, Raja is not going to lov her till he has a little sympathy for Rani in his heart..u& i both widnessed his immense love for Rani yesterday .. r nt we? he can't concentrated all this time..he was beyond restless..

lovy is shocked by hearing this,,"BRM, what r u saying? how can u say this.. Raja has feelings for rani after yesterday's incidence? Have 'nt u seen how he insulted her in front of everyone ..?? Rani 'll never forget it throughout her life... n u say..he is still loving her..

B- u r always believed in superficial expression , lovy..yes.. he may be hating her nowadays , accusing her for his childhood matter..but there is no time need to change his mind...can't u remember ..in their childhood... how they fight on some silly matters..n again reunited within short period..if that thing ll happen ithis time ...then what 'll u do ??

L-- BRM, pls do'nt say like this..

B- he loves her as much as he hates her..u cant imagine
when the dice ll turned n they reunited again..today he has hater for her in his heart..tomorrow again they may forget it n want to live together ..

L-panicked..no..no

B- so we have to rooted the love out of their hearts..we have to aggrevate their hater towards each other..i know ,that Rani is very clever.. she must try to convince him..before Raja changed his mind we should try to make rani hate him...n i hv a plan..to imply this they should be infront of each other..

K- but..how BRM?? after yesterday's incident.. i do'nt think Rani is going to come into the palace again in her life time..then hw to imply our plan..

BRM looked at Lovy..she is sadd..

B-lovy'll bring hr into the palace..

L-- shocked.. what ..?? me..?? but..BRM..

B- if all r going wid the flow.. no one can help to reunite them...

L- but..

B- u hv to do this..if u want her to leave ur RAJA forever..

lovy left that room wid irritation..other two smiled devilishly ...


Ok..friends ..this is a long update..pls comment

Hello I'm nivi. Though I have been in IF for a long time I am new to this forum. So just now started to read rajni stories. This is really awesome story. I started watching etr after the kidnapping track. I hate this BRM so much.Wonder what she is going to do now by bringing rani to the palace. Plz unite raja and rani soon. Do pm me whenever u updt.

Wow simply awesome ,👏 great job,try writing more stories of Rajni and please try to add some hindi dialogues along with english explanations.Just my pov Otherwise your story is going good,keep it up👍🏼

Thank u all for ur comment...i'll try reach ur expectation

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Part-4

College

Rani was standing there on corridor ..she seemed to be in deep thought.Meenu came from other direction ..

"dear, u r here, i m searching for u throughout the college" Rani turned around , she was crying.

"Rani, what happened ??why r u crying ??

"Meenu..Hamare dadu...

"what happened to dadu?? is she alright ?? "meenu asked wid concern...

"She is not fine,meenu. Her TB has relapsed . doctor told ne to admiit her asap, but..."

"but...??

"the treatment is very costly ...and we have not that much right now...i hv a saving, but that's very small in front of this.." Rani was crying now...

"how much?tell me..."

"15,000...from where i bring such amount within short period ..."

"don't worry..we'll find a way..."

"but ., i have no time, i need it very urgently ...i know,, i can't collect it in such little time...my head head is spinning meenu, i can't think straightly... "mere dadu ka kya hoga meenu, mei kuch nahi kar sakti unke lie...i m not a good granddaughter ..."

"dear, pls control urself.."

"how can i control, meenu?? i have no one other than her...n who'll give me money for her treatment...she was sobbing badly

"I'll give u that money..." a voice made them turn around...

There she was " Lovy"...she came towards them.. " i'll help u Rani"

Both R n M were surprised ..." u...what u have just said?? u 'll help Rani...but why??inquired meenu..

L- becoz i want to, have u any problem??

M- u...but Rani stopped her..

R- Lovy...thank for ur offer..but i can't take it..

L- why Rani...u r in need, n i just want...rani interrupted

R- i don't need ur help ?? n i surprised " tum kabse mere madad karne lage".. u rich people only know how to break someone's trust..she smiled sadly .. before there was raja n now u...i can smell ur hidden motive behind this..."So tumhare help tumhare paas rakho...i don't need this anymore...she turned back to leave..

Lovy felt uncomfortable ..."Whatever ...i just passed through the corridor n heard ur convo..u r in a bad need for money.. for ur DADU..." she emphasized on the word DADU...Rani stopped right there..."I knew it, u'll never take my help...but i want to help u in this situation ...so i think of to give some work.. n then i'll paid u..but it seems u found another way...well i m leaving ..."

"Lovy... "called Rani from behind...Lovy was waiting for this...she turned around ..."Now what??"

"what r u just said...u want to offer me some work???"

" then what did u think?? "mein tumhe aise hi itne saare paise de dungi.." actually i was in search of a god decorator for our upcoming event..i know u r good in this... n u r also in need.. so i approched u..but u don't need this...i have find someone else for this...so bye..."

"wait , Lovy...i need this job, "

"really, just a moment ago, u r not interested for..."

" I m sorry.., Lovy,pls hire me, pls.."

"dear.. what r u doing? don't do this? she is a chudail u know it very well...i don't think she has a good motive..pls don't listen to her" meenu tried to stop her..

" no, meenu.. i don't have onother option, i have to do this for my dadu..n only Lovy can give me that amount."..Lovy...tell me,, what i have to do??

"here...?? come to palace tomorrow', i'll give u detail"

"palace...???" Rani socked by hearing this word...

"Yes...u r work is there" n the event is after 3 days...so u may start ur work from tomorrow "

"but...Lovy..u know very well, i cant go there"

"toh mat jao" said Lovy with irritation..i'll hire someone else..."Rani's face fell down.." U know what Rani... u r very egoistic ..u'll never know one day u'll lost ur Dadu for this ego.."

"Lovy..." said Rani angrily..

"Rani, its true, that i don't like u from our childhood ..but i m not ur enemy ...whenever i saw someone 's pain, i can't control my tear..n u r in pain right now...i just want to help u...it also true that after Raja's betrayal u have no courage to enter in that palace...but what to do? the event is organized only there...now u decide, do u want to come or not?.."

"i 'll come ..."na he hume uss Raja se dar hai, nahi aus kisi se"..i' can do everything for my Dadu...I'll come lovy..."

"OK, see u tomorrow .." Lovy left from there with a victorious smile ..

"dear pls listen to me, don't go there...it'll be very painful for u to working in front of him." Meenu tried to convince her..

" i know meenu, u r concerned for me, yes.. it 'll be painful, but i have to do this for my dadu..n how long i hide myself? as long as, i hide myself he'll think that i am afraid of him..but i m not, he is wrong this time..i'll go there n show him, his presence is not affected me any more..i'll live here, in Amerkot , infront of his eyes,, n he can't do anything...he knew that Rani, who loved him more than her life...but its time to show him real "Rani Gayatri"...Rani left from there living behind a tensed Meenu...


Next Day, Palace

Rani was standing in front of the main door of Palace..she was very tensed.."Hey, durga maa, i m again entering into the lion 's den,pls, give me courage to face all upcoming situation ..don't make me weak infront of him..pls, be with me all the way..."Rani prayed to her goddess n took a sharp breathe..finally she steped in ...

Lovy n all family members are on dinning table...her eye searched for him, but he was no where seen.." thank god ...he is not here".. she sighed...

Rani Ambika noticed Rani's arrival..."RANI beta... u r here??" all others looked towards her.. She greeted them...BRM, K n L shared a mischievous smile...

"Rani... what r u doing here"...she enquired..

"WO.. Rani Ambika...mein...but lovy interrupted her...

" Arrey Rani.. u came...good, come eat breakfast with us.."

"No, thank u Lovy, i already have it...pls give me the detail of my work..so that , i can start it from today "

"Work..?? what r u talking about? RA questioned surprisingly..

L- RA, i hired Rani for the upcoming events decoration... she is very good at decoration , u knows it very well...

RA- but , lovy.. how can u do this?? u knows present situation between her n Raja... If Raja'll see her here again... then Pata nahi wo phirse kya kar baithega...??

L- RA, i just want to help her, she is in very urgent need of money...we couldn't found any good decorator...then i found her..i think by hireing her both of our problem s can solved...so...

RA- but lovy...get interrupted by BRM...

BRM-RA, why r u panicking..? u r only focusing on ur son,, bt think about this poor girl... she is in need, n we should help her...

RA- but BRM... Raja

BRM- i got to know about Raja's misbehavior .. how can he do such thing... here Rani has no fault ... n they r no more friends now,, he might misbehaved with his friend Rani, but not with our employee. from now Rani is an employee... If Raja'll try to misbehave with her.. i'll punish him ...n i assured u Rani' safety...here...

RA can smell something fishy on their behavior but choose to being mum at that same moment.

R- RA... pls don't worry for me.. i'll not give him any chance to create any unpleasant situation.. keep trust on me..pls let me work here.. again u all r here... so i feel safe..

RA nodded in yess n left from there...

L - Rani, go n wait in my room, i'll be right there within 10 mins...

R- ok... n left from there..

BRM - well done lovy... u do bring her here...Lovy was amazed with her praise ..

K- what next??

BRM-- just wait for RAJA's arrival ...

L- BRM, i don't have any idea about ur plan , but i m sure there must be a big one...why i have not a brain like u ..

BRM - u have RAJA all over ur head,,, there is no space for anything else...

L- BRM... she frowned with a little shyness

BRM n kokila laughed at her childishness ...




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Rani entered into the room, the room was dark, she switched on the light...n there he was, sleeping soundly...she turned around to go back...but...

Rani...Rani...his voice made her stop right there...she looked back..he was calling her name in sleep... Rani can't control herself to go near his bed...she sat on the floor beside his bed...she touched his face...Raja woke up and sat on the bed...

"What the hell r u doing here"...he yelled at her...

"Why Raja... why r u hurting yourself...i know whenever you punished me u get hurt more than myself..."she was sobbing

"no...u r liaing...i get happiness.., when i hurt u.."

Rani smiled with tear, " oh, really...but why i feel like u r in pain more than me?i know u more than urself Raja... u r dieing without me...

"No ,, not at all"

"then ...said it by looking in to my eyes.. then i 'll get convinced ..'

"just...get out from here.. i m not interested to see ur face..go"

"i m not going from here, as long as u'll looked in to my eyes n said u don't love me.." she said stubbornly...

"i don't love u...raja said by looking at her eyes...but why he can't take his eyes off from her face..." he think n turned his face away without his will." u get ur answer, abb jao"..he pushed her...

" i got my answer... u love me beyond this world... but u don't want to accept it..., "

" Rani, i said, i don't love u, i hate u,i hate ...his words melted in his throat when suddenly Rani hugged him ..."but i love u Raja...my love is sufficient for both of us...pls don't do this...don't throw me out from ur life Raja...i'll surely die without u..."

Raja can't take it anymore...he hugged her back tightly..i love u Rani... i love u...i never ever did hate u..n i'll not as long as i live...i'll die without u...I love u..******

I LOVE U RANI... Raja woke up from his dream... Rani was nowhere to seen... Rani... Rani.. shouted Raja...

"Sir...sir... what happened?? r u ok?? "the Hotel boy asked him...

Raja realized he was in a hotel room, yes he was there for his business meeting ... but...

"do u need something sir... asked the boy.."

"no..no..go from here" n the boy left the room..

he looked at the door, "she was there some moments ago..." he looked beside his bed... "she was here also...she hugged me, " AHHH.. .. RANI

"HOW CAN I DREAMT of u ?.u r my enemy, ur resporesponsible for all my sufferings... He punched the bed with anger..."Rani... why u don't leave me alone...why?? i hate u... r u listening .. I HATE U... he shouted out of his lung...