AsYa/KaBhi OS- Just A Little Story Of No Importance - Page 6

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ankie...

This was so pure...so realistic..so much like a fairy tale..

Like I have no words what to write for this..

THANK YOU SO MUCH! 🤗 I have always aspired to write FAIRY TALES. But its difficult 😭 BUT THIS COMMENT OF YOURS MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD 😳

First a big shout out for writing almost the entire part without even using their names...

And then the way you described small little things...her village activities..her naivety... her dreams ... her life.. aspirations.. it was beautiful..it added up to the whole overall effect..

I like doing that 😛 What's there in a name 😆. Like you implied, yes its difficult because you are in a constant struggle to make your readers understand who HE IS and who SHE IS and you know I like doing difficult things. 😛 😆 Aww thank you so much this Zoya of mine is too cute and so naive that I really loved her. Such Zoyas are SO LESS to find. 😳 but like you, they remain my favourite too.

I really loved it ... in fact I read it twice just for the feel of it..

And the best part was the letter...dil ko lag gaya...

Two times. ITNI KHUSHI. I cant handle 😭😭😭 now you are making me cry.

Well apology was quickly given but your justification supports it too,, so I take your word for that..

This is an OS and mujhe na isko aur BADHANA nahi tha frankly, so easily de di dil pe patthar rakhke. But If I had kept Asad pining and hurting himself for Zoya, it would have been more attyachar on Zoya, which I really didnt want her to go through. He'll have his own tests of love jo if I feel ever to write I will. 😆

I hope u won't be mad at me now..

Here I have given a good long comment and also some kostens for u to answer

NO NOT AT ALL. I AM SOOO HAPPY THAT YOU TYPED SUCH A HUGE COMMENT FOR ME! ME! ME!

🤗

ps All KOSTENS answered. 😛

Originally posted by: dmg15

Hello all😊

Hello Hello Ms 10 PM PE GOODNIGHT 😳

First of all I apologize for replying so so so late Ankie 😳

DMG! You did reply the moment you finished reading it. WHY R YOU APOLOGIZING 😛 oh you want me to fight like me and hooman do. 😳😆 😉 I DONT MIND 🤣

N I feel really honored to have friends like you in my life .❤️ Thank you so much for making me feel so special every time

You r one of the best people I have in my life 🤗

ONE OF THE. 💔

V

Teh

Hooman

Did you hear

DMG

The

Love

Of

My

Life

Called

Me

One

Of

The

💔

Dont worry

Iska badla lega re tera Ankie 😈 by making you feel too more special 😈

This story is so special to me cause you have written it for me only which noone has done ever ❤️

Thank you all for your wonderful birthday wishes .it means a lot to me 🤗

Ab likh di hai na now sabko batao ki kar di hai 😃 😆

mere bday pe apne haaton se leeter likha okay 😳

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Hellooo...

AWWW MERA RIZUUU KHAAANN where did you get this gif from it is so cute 😆

I hope You are doing wonderful...😆

Haan apke duayon se khush hai hum 😛 ab please pizza deliver kar denge toh muft ka then zyada wonderful i will do i mean FEEL 😆

Coming to the OS...first of all after posting all those GIF's jab maine yeh OS padha toh sabse pehle Title padhke mera yeh reaction tha...

🤣 🤣 🤣

But you have to admit accha khana title I gave isnt it 😆😆😆

But Khair coming directly to the Update...

Haan Agaye. Aur kitna khair and directly will we manao and come aa hi jate hai 🤪 😆 bad joke. tumhare sangat ka assar hai li8 le lo 🤣

This was a Very Very Deep , Well written , Engaging and in a way one of the most sweetest OS you have written , though i don't agree on some parts but still...this was very good part...

Aww! That was very flattering! But nevertheless thank you. 😳 one question, which was/were the sweetest I have previously written apart from this, according to you. Would like to know 😃

You know the first part till their marriage this story was like a Fairy tale to me ...the whole story in a way is fairy tale but till here it was more fictional and less real...like A Naive girl with no parents dreaming of her Prince Charming...

Thank you. I have always wanted to write a fairy tale and now that you all are saying I have succeeded in doing so I feel SO GOOD. Thank you! 😃 Abey Tattu, I am writing a fiction, not SI or CP of yours that I need to be realistic. 😆 But if you want I can write one 😲 😆

And from here only U get attached to Zoya's character...

Intention toh wohi tha 😛

But as she got married , from their the Reality took over the fiction , like this situation which Zoya was under is faced by many small town girl in real life too and that you have portrayed in a very real manner... I mean ek tarah ka Cliche hai par hai toh hai...

again EK TARFA 🤣

Tattu stop your EK TARFA now 🤣

KJo ne kitne paise khilaye hai for saying EK TARFA TELL ME

🤣

li8 lo. Sense of Humor mar gayi meri 🤣

But yes, people dream of one thing and get lost in it. Then reality comes and jolts them out like 444v and then people are left to hum DEAR REALITY, LAGE 444v CHOONE SE TERE 😆

OKAY THAT WAS 🤣 sorry 🤣 not 🤣

You know when U get habituated to something or Someone even though Intially You didn't wanted them to be a part of your life...but in course of time you get habitual of their presence...

Initially * Sp mistake.

YES exactly, jokes aside but true, we adjust to them or the situation for our own betterment. Very true.

Like Here Asad married Zoya but he always despised her...but after getting to know her during his illness he got to know her but still he didn't voiced out his feelings that yes he accepted her...agar yeh kardeta toh shayad uss justification waale note ki zaroorat na padthi 😆

Not despised actually, its kind of irritation. Ab hogayi she is here she shouldnt be here why is she not here etc kind of dilemma and his illness just made him realise how wrong he was to push her away. Like you said he had accepted her but work became KABAB mein HADDIYO ka dhancha. You cant help it always. What to do. issi liye justification. 😆

But jab koi cheez na ho na tab hee hamey uski Aehmiyat Malooom padthi hai aur wahi hua...

CORRECT. That was the idea. 😃

You know in that letter joh words Zoya ne english mein use kiye thay uska matlab kya tha that she is still learning the language yaa usne poori seekh li hai english...

And yeh Bazaar mein ghumne wala part story mein kyun nahi hai, Letter mein kyun tha..

Sab kuch story mein daal doon toh letter ki kya zarurat thi 😆

YES she had learnt it by her own self but there was no one to tell her if she was on the right track or not so she tells him in the letter. Poor baby. 😭

And after that the last part where they reconciled was very good...and just to read that part you can say we can forget what all happened before this in this story..

Matlab it was a very sweet confession..

THANK YOU. Mujhe bhi Last part pasand hai. movie wali feeling ayi mujhe 😆

Par ek baat toh issey saabit hoti hai...

Yahan Log Naive yaa kahe Bhole logon ka fayda uthate hai...and because they are so sweet they forgive easily...

ISNT IT TOO OBVIOUS. 🤓 each and everyone does. every single person out there does.

All and All keeping all my complaints 😆 aside...still i feel this was a very special OS..

I enjoyed reading this one..

# A VeRY Happy Belated Birthday to you Dipu Behen...😃👏

Chalo hum chalte hai..

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ankie...

This was so pure...so realistic..so much like a fairy tale..

Like I have no words what to write for this..

THANK YOU SO MUCH! 🤗 I have always aspired to write FAIRY TALES. But its difficult 😭 BUT THIS COMMENT OF YOURS MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD 😳

Finally u feel good about something😆

First a big shout out for writing almost the entire part without even using their names...

And then the way you described small little things...her village activities..her naivety... her dreams ... her life.. aspirations.. it was beautiful..it added up to the whole overall effect..

I like doing that 😛 What's there in a name 😆. Like you implied, yes its difficult because you are in a constant struggle to make your readers understand who HE IS and who SHE IS and you know I like doing difficult things. 😛 😆 Aww thank you so much this Zoya of mine is too cute and so naive that I really loved her. Such Zoyas are SO LESS to find. 😳 but like you, they remain my favourite too.

Ohhh like me😳

Yes its true such zoyas are difficult to find.

And I wonder they would have that happy ending as this Zoya.

I really loved it ... in fact I read it twice just for the feel of it..

And the best part was the letter...dil ko lag gaya...

Two times. ITNI KHUSHI. I cant handle 😭😭😭 now you are making me cry.

Dont cry this is true.. I maybe late in replying but not in reading😉😆

Well apology was quickly given but your justification supports it too,, so I take your word for that..

This is an OS and mujhe na isko aur BADHANA nahi tha frankly, so easily de di dil pe patthar rakhke. But If I had kept Asad pining and hurting himself for Zoya, it would have been more attyachar on Zoya, which I really didnt want her to go through. He'll have his own tests of love jo if I feel ever to write I will. 😆

Yes Even I don't like my Asad pining and hurting himself..

I wish u write more on this then..

And please don't keep us waiting till 1st of April..

Next bday ab April mein haina 😆

I hope u won't be mad at me now..

Here I have given a good long comment and also some kostens for u to answer

NO NOT AT ALL. I AM SOOO HAPPY THAT YOU TYPED SUCH A HUGE COMMENT FOR ME! ME! ME!

🤗

ps All KOSTENS answered. 😛

Yes I did write a big comment for you and only you...

And still I'm not very happy with all your answers..hehe.