Hello Hellooo...
I hope You are doing wonderful...😆
Coming to the OS...first of all after posting all those GIF's jab maine yeh OS padha toh sabse pehle Title padhke mera yeh reaction tha...
But Khair coming directly to the Update...
This was a Very Very Deep , Well written , Engaging and in a way one of the most sweetest OS you have written , though i don't agree on some parts but still...this was very good part...
You know the first part till their marriage this story was like a Fairy tale to me ...the whole story in a way is fairy tale but till here it was more fictional and less real...like A Naive girl with no parents dreaming of her Prince Charming...
And from here only U get attached to Zoya's character...
But as she got married , from their the Reality took over the fiction , like this situation which Zoya was under is faced by many small town girl in real life too and that you have portrayed in a very real manner... I mean ek tarah ka Cliche hai par hai toh hai...
You know when U get habituated to something or Someone even though Intially You didn't wanted them to be a part of your life...but in course of time you get habitual of their presence...
Like Here Asad married Zoya but he always despised her...but after getting to know her during his illness he got to know her but still he didn't voiced out his feelings that yes he accepted her...agar yeh kardeta toh shayad uss justification waale note ki zaroorat na padthi 😆
But jab koi cheez na ho na tab hee hamey uski Aehmiyat Malooom padthi hai aur wahi hua...
You know in that letter joh words Zoya ne english mein use kiye thay uska matlab kya tha that she is still learning the language yaa usne poori seekh li hai english...
And yeh Bazaar mein ghumne wala part story mein kyun nahi hai, Letter mein kyun tha..
And after that the last part where they reconciled was very good...and just to read that part you can say we can forget what all happened before this in this story..
Matlab it was a very sweet confession..
Par ek baat toh issey saabit hoti hai...
Yahan Log Naive yaa kahe Bhole logon ka fayda uthate hai...and because they are so sweet they forgive easily...
All and All keeping all my complaints 😆 aside...still i feel this was a very special OS..
I enjoyed reading this one..
# A VeRY Happy Belated Birthday to you Dipu Behen...😃👏
Chalo hum chalte hai..
Edited by MayurChan - 8 years ago
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