AsYa/KaBhi OS- Just A Little Story Of No Importance

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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+ 29

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

awesum
"Tumhe hamesha khana banana padega. Wajid bahut hi ghatiya khana pakata hai!" can totally imagine karan's excpression on this

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Aww poor zoya she tried her best to fit in his life but he was always rude towards her but I literally cried after reading her letter and then ant bhala to sab bhala ye ladke aise hi hote hai kya real life me bhi?jab tak koi solid jhatka Na do tab tak they take girls for granted

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anopama

@anopama

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

A little sweet story

Cant be upset at asad he was just being himself

Tht is what he always portray

Zoya well she tried still even if she wasnt appreciated

And her efforts did pay off he came to appreciate her and care for her

Long journey but they will travel it together

He did regret and he did repent

Love it

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

It was cute... Lovely and thanks.

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shonajain

@shonajain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

ohhh myyy goddd ankuuu
it wasss veryy sweeet

adorable wonderful amazing stupendooo os
loved how asad ran to zoyaaa

loved the dialog " yeh mera iss raste pr pehela kadam , saath chalogiii " muaah

superb it was

arz kia ( bahuttt bekarr h read at ur own risk...haha haha)

500 or 1000 k note k liye lagii hai lambi line
gaur kijiyega

500 or 1000 k note k liye lagii hai lambi line
anku your stories are nasha like a red wine

maaafii hihihihihihi

thanku for pm
love shona

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MayurChan
A Special RES for Tehs...😊

Thank you very much Mayur..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Ankie...

This was so pure...so realistic..so much like a fairy tale..

Like I have no words what to write for this..

First a big shout out for writing almost the entire part without even using their names...

And then the way you described small little things...her village activities..her naivety... her dreams ... her life.. aspirations.. it was beautiful..it added up to the whole overall effect..

I really loved it ... in fact I read it twice just for the feel of it..

And the best part was the letter...dil ko lag gaya...

Well apology was quickly given but your justification supports it too,, so I take your word for that..

And why did he get married when even his mother was not present to force him.

Just a small question...no in fact two...how did she learn English on her own by sitting at home?

Like did she use google? But then how

She didn't even own a phone ... so iPad? Or laptop?

Or maybe from books...

And did she watch English movies in her village that she found his car as the ones shown in them?..

I want WA thinking emo after every question...

And kosten no 2...

When did she get lost in the bazaar...and if she didn't know address and number of the house and no cell phone too.. then how did she reach home again?

These points really need to be thought about🤣

I hope u won't be mad at me now..

Here I have given a good long comment and also some kostens for u to answer

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

And yes I forgot main thing...

Deepu Belen 🤣

Belated happy birthday...once again. As in PHIR SE😉

Edited by sweet_tehs - 8 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

I would like to reply to everyone in detail but maybe tomorrow😳, but @Teh behena I loved your Kostens which no one else raised👍🏼 (which I thought people would but they don't. 💔)

Okay

A. he married her after his mother's death, because she wanted him to marry her, made him promised, he kept, rest implied. 😆

B. she learnt it from books. she knew English. But Bad English. Not even kaam chalau, which she had learnt at her village. (She says it in the letter) no No Google or Wiki. She has no knowledge of technology. Remember? 😆

C. You must have seen in movies or shows, where in villages they do have satellite TV systems. So she saw those SUVs there. Though understood none or very little of it. (Mentioned in the story) 😆

D. She got lost but she had gone with the driver isnt it?. No one came. She was really scared. But the servant Wajid found her home. Implied. 😆 thats why Wajid knew she had left. Coz she told him so. 😆

Rest long replies to all commented tomorrow!

Thank you all for the likes and comments❤️