AsYa/KaBhi OS- Just A Little Story Of No Importance

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

V dmg broke up with me and got married to Mr G whom you divorced!😡

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CaptainV

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
V dmg broke up with me and got married to Mr G whom you divorced!😡

she will get fed up don't worry! Such a show off! 😉 #bitterex

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

I so very loved it ❤️

So beautifully writtten ..

Wud love to read more of such random pieces

Although i thot asad got away easily but den ur explanation said it all 🤗

Please do write more

Thanks for pm

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dmg15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Hello all😊

First of all I apologize for replying so so so late Ankie 😳

N I feel really honored to have friends like you in my life .❤️ Thank you so much for making me feel so special every time

You r one of the best people I have in my life 🤗

This story is so special to me cause you have written it for me only which noone has done ever ❤️

Thank you all for your wonderful birthday wishes .it means a lot to me 🤗

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dmg15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Tehs thank you for your special birthday wish

Phir se😉

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: dmg15
Tehs thank you for your special birthday wish
Phir se😉

😆

You are welcome always..

We love you beyhadd 😆

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: TheNamesV

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jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

I don't have words as in what 2 say after such a love filled OS
Ankie I just loved it 😛
It was a beautiful journey from start till d end where they re-united 😊
plz do write such more OS's once in a while 😉 😆

Edited by jas91 - 8 years ago

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--Scarlett--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

This story is of great importance unlike to what you said but tbh I loved the title!
Asad and Zoya they tried loving each other and wound up falling in love... such a beautiful story!

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: TheNamesV
😃 THIS IS ME NOW😃😆
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OS! SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! FELT BAD FOR ZOYA BUT KNEW ASAD WOULD EVENTUALLY GET BACK TO HIS SENSES!😆 (RATHER HAS TO)
IT IS SUCH A SWEET STORY FOR A VERY VERY VERY SWEET PERSON AND YOUR BETTER HALF(THOUGH ITS AT A STAGE OF WORK IN PROGRESS NOW! I HAVE FULL FAITH IN YOU😉😉😆)
SO TO YOU ANKIE👏
AND YOU DMG- HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY( ITS BELATED NOW, BUT I WISHED YOU AT 12 ON THE DAY WHILE YOU WERE HAPPILY IN YOUR LAND OF DREAMS)😆

LOVE V 😃😊

HAHA V! Thank you for the lovely comment.

Yes @Dmg we wished you at 12 but what to do you are our By 10:30 to Bed madam! 😆

Originally posted by: Amina...
Such a Beautiful story Ankie ...!!!
It was Sooo Cuuuttteee ... So Lovely ...!!!
It was Simply AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGG ...!!!
Very Beautifully Written ...!!!
Tears were rolling down my eyes when Asad was reading her letter ... the way she expressed herself was Heart Touching ...!!!
Loved the Story Sooo Much ...!!!

Thank you Amina 😳 The letter part was my favourite part too. 😊

Originally posted by: Ihopelove
I am not good with words its truly beautiful story.
U describe very well zoyas each feeling. Her desire to belong to someone, her dreams of her married life, her fear leaving village after marriage, her pain for shattered dreams of her marriage, yet struggling to win her husband's love, her failed attempts, her decision to learn her husband's way of living, the way she nursed back him to health, finally it dawned to her that she's fighting lost battle, her heart break, leaving with broken dreams and shattered heart, her insecurity for giving him n their relationship another chance and lastly his feelings for her realizing her importance in his life.
Beautifully written.👏👏
Loved it.
Thanks for PM. I saw your pm after I post comment.😊

AWW DEAR 🤗 Thank you so much for such a huge comment even after confessing that you are not so great with words! Touched my heart! THank you so much.

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01
I was Sooo happy to read this...
As always an awesome OS.
Bholi bhaali zoya and serious type asad-what a combo.
Really liked it
And that letter almost made me cry.
Thanks for the pm
~JAZ~

Thank you JaZ though I really didnt cry while writing it. Let my emotions just bare 😆 Glad that it made you all cry coz it was meant to be 😆 Thank you SO much 😳

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
It was a beautiful os..
Emotions, dreams and life are well protrayed

Thanks Mirage. Rightly said Emotions dreams Pain tears Smiles happiness that makes life!

Originally posted by: MissSparkling
Nice

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sasir
Superb..
Emotional...

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Amazing os dear
loved it
zoya is an innocent village girl who married to city boy asad
asad initially does not like her but after realized her importance
loved the way she took care of him
asad realized his mistake and ready to ask forgiveness
loved the whole os
thanks for pm

Thank you dear! 😊 Hope it was worth your time. 😊

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
So sweet story