AsYa/KaBhi OS- Just A Little Story Of No Importance

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YES! THE OS' NAME'S SO 🤣


Frankly I couldnt think of names but what could be a better way to call a fan-fiction by what it actually is! 😆

Before you plunge down to read the story, I would like to have you informed that, this story has been written by me exclusively for DMG15 (our Deepy Behen/Bhai/Jaan/Aan Baan aur Shaan!) on her Birthday. 😳 You know the drill! Wish her a belated happy wala birthday!

The story essentially is about two persons, our Asad and Zoya and here Zoya is very naive and innocent and someone who she very much is, i.e. selfless and big hearted, and will always remain to be. She is also quite darri darri-huyi-si-sehmi-sehmi huyi-si types which our "Good-night at 10:30pm Deepy" definitely is! 😆 KIDDING 😆


The story is very sweet, very close to my heart and I wrote this in a day's time, both developing the idea and writing it down, not because it was Deepy's Birthday but also because I wanted a break from my FF. 😆


Do Let Me Know How It Is! But dont hate the poor guy called Asad. It has a sweet end. Pakka Promise. 😃

Thank you A.Hajnal for proofreading it. Sweetheart you are. 😳

p.s. By Chance you dont happen to LIKE the name of the story, You are requested to feel at home and suggest one instead with a short reason as in why! Best entry wins it😃. (Lets see how many of you land up doing!😆)

Disclaimer : This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited. 4Lions own the Original Characters.

For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳


You know my Name 😎




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THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😃 THIS IS ME NOW😃😆
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OS! SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!! FELT BAD FOR ZOYA BUT KNEW ASAD WOULD EVENTUALLY GET BACK TO HIS SENSES!😆 (RATHER HAS TO)
IT IS SUCH A SWEET STORY FOR A VERY VERY VERY SWEET PERSON AND YOUR BETTER HALF(THOUGH ITS AT A STAGE OF WORK IN PROGRESS NOW! I HAVE FULL FAITH IN YOU😉😉😆)
SO TO YOU ANKIE👏
AND YOU DMG- HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY( ITS BELATED NOW, BUT I WISHED YOU AT 12 ON THE DAY WHILE YOU WERE HAPPILY IN YOUR LAND OF DREAMS)😆


LOVE V 😃😊
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-Edited to Put up a Simple Clarification-


Many of you wouldn't like the way Asad got away so easily, and its justified. Asad did get away so easily only because he has other tests in life to prove which Zoya will not have to go through. Asad as mentioned has an uphill task to make it up to Zoya and Zoya being so understanding and loving and Dil dariya daash saumdar (😆) forgave him easily because she loved him and trusted him. Also Asad's sins were reduced to half ka bhi half because he had realised his mistake and wanted to reconcile as soon as possible. He was truthful and with honesty he pleaded guilty and begged for forgiveness and Almighty granted him. Almighty is the most benevolent. He forgives you the moment you realise your mistake. One fair chance everyone deserves and Asad did too. 😊

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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Special RES for Tehs...😊
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A RES for Everyone...😊

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I think Ankiee...

Yeh wala na tumhari iss story ke last part ke liye suit karega...😆

Khair on a Serious Note..
All the above used GIF'S are Taken/Borrowed from Google...
So credit to their owners and a
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Chalo Bahut hoogya aaj ke liye...
Mein Chalta hun...
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Such a Beautiful story Ankie ...!!!
It was Sooo Cuuuttteee ... So Lovely ...!!!
It was Simply AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGG ...!!!
Very Beautifully Written ...!!!
Tears were rolling down my eyes when Asad was reading her letter ... the way she expressed herself was Heart Touching ...!!!
Loved the Story Sooo Much ...!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am not good with words its truly beautiful story.
U describe very well zoyas each feeling. Her desire to belong to someone, her dreams of her married life, her fear leaving village after marriage, her pain for shattered dreams of her marriage, yet struggling to win her husband's love, her failed attempts, her decision to learn her husband's way of living, the way she nursed back him to health, finally it dawned to her that she's fighting lost battle, her heart break, leaving with broken dreams and shattered heart, her insecurity for giving him n their relationship another chance and lastly his feelings for her realizing her importance in his life.
Beautifully written.👏👏
Loved it.
Thanks for PM. I saw your pm after I post comment.😊
Edited by Ihopelove - 8 years ago

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