PriVeer 2S: Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage (last part-pg3) *complete*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prologue:

The situation is under control. Ranveer couldnt believe what has he done to Priyanka? He instilled fear in her so much that she barely speaks or meets anyone. Ranveer's fire of vengeance doused when his sister whom he thought to be dead,was alive and came in the court and testified in favour of Omkara.

Ranveer felt really guilty of his wrongdoings towards Omkara but especially Priyanka. He could not believe what he turned into due to the fire of revenge that burned inside him.

He wanted to meet Priyanka for one last time as he was being transferred to another city as the Chief of Anti Terrorist Squad. During this few months,he fell for Priyanka but couldnt accept it. Same was with Priyanka.. She couldn't even speak her heart out to her brothers. But.. She knew.. She had to take a step to stand up for herself and for her Ranveer.

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Prologue: pg1.
ch1- pg1
last part-pg3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is absolutely ripe with potential for angst, forbidden passions, guilt, repentance and the final redemption of both parties!
Eager for more! Update soon 😳

P.S. Couldn't stay away from a PriVeer fic! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My goodness this is so amazing.
Eagerly waiting to read more.
Please update soon.
PriVeer is driving me crazy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please update soon and PM me when you do :) Interesting start
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ranveer waited and looked through the glass to see her for the final time as he was leaving Mumbai,forever. His heart wrenched as she didnt come and his hopes also died. He smiled sadly and went towards the boarding counter to board the plane. When suddenly..

"Ruk jaiye,Ranveer.."

His feet froze as the cool and soothing voice entered his ears making him feel alive. At first he thought that he was hallucinating but as she shouted his name for the second time,he finally believed that she was here,for real. As he turned around,he saw her running towards him.

Flashback:

Priyanka had explained her family that she loved Ranveer a lot and wont be able to live without him.. Shivaay,Omkara and Rudra protested about this but when Priyanka opened her mouth,all were left speechless.

"Galti insaano se hi hoti hai.. Aap teeno se bhi galti huyi na apne life partners chunne mein.. Shivaay bhaiya ne toh almost Tia se shaadi karchuke hote agar aen moukey pe aake Anika ne Daksh aur Tia ki sacchayi na batayi hoti.. Shivaay bhaiya ne kitni baar meri dost Anika ka insult kiya,unke liye itni bari ilzaam apne sar le liya.. Apni damaan pe aapke liye keechar ucchaalne diya taaki aapko koi aach na aaye.

Aur Om bhaiya.. Aap.. Riddhima aur Ishana ne aapko dhoka diya.. Aaj bhi aap Ishana ko galat samajte hai par aap jaante hai.. Ishana ne bhale hi aapko jhoot kaha par anth mein woh yeh sab kyun kiya,saari sacchayi toh usne batayi.. Riddhima toh aapko dhoka dene chali thi Papa ke saath milke.. Teeno bhaiyo ko alag karna chahti thhi..

Rudra bhaiya ne toh Saumya ko apne baato se itna hurt kiya hai..isiliye woh aaj Oberoi Mansion mein reh nahi rahi hai.. Hostel mein rehke apni studies kar rahi hai..

Aap teeno ne bohut hurt kiya hai Anika,Ishana aur Saumya ko par fir bhi woh teeno aap teeno se bohut pyaar karte hai aaj bhi. I know ki kahin na kahin hum sab se galtiyaan huyi hai par hum toh unko hi dard dete hai jinse hum sabse zyada pyaar karte hai.. Ranveer ne bhi yahi kiya.. Unhone mujhe aur sabko bohut dard diya par woh mujse be intehaan pyaar bhi karte hai.. Pyaar ek aisi shakti hai jo sabko badal deti hai."

Priyanka cries and leaves fpr airport to stop Ranveer.

Flashback ends.

Present:

Priyanka stops infront of Ranveer and says sadly, "Kya aap mere bina reh payenge? Kya aap mere bina jee payenge?"

Ranveer smiles softly and pecks her forehead gently. Tears of happiness fall from her eyes..

She grips his arms tightly and says with their eyes' locked, "Main aapke baghair ek pal bhi jee nahi paaungi.. Ek pal bhi jeena gawara nahi hai mujhe aapke bina.. Mera dil sirf aur sirf aapke liye dharakta hai aur humesha rahega.. I love you,Ranveer.. Main aapke saath saari zindagi bitana chahti hu.. Khudko aapke hawale karna chahti hu.. Khudko aapki nazar se dekhna chahti hu? Kya aap mujhe Mrs.Priyanka Ranveer Singh Randhawa hone ka haq denge?"

She forwards her hand infront of Ranveer and looks at him with love and care.. Constant eye lock made her eyes' well up. Time passes by and Ranveer didnt put his hand forward. Priyanka's heart startes to wrench with sadness. She wont be able to handle this heartbreak and turns to leave when suddenly,Ranveer holds her arm and turns her towards him and hugs her tightly. People in the airport clapped for Ranveer and Priyanka.

"Yeh moh moh ke dhaage,
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe,
Koi toh toh na laage,
Kis tarha girha ye suljhe,
Hai rom rom iktara..
Jo badalo mein se guzre..
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage..
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe..
Koi toh toh na laage..
Kis tarha girha yeh suljhe.."

Priyanka hugged him tightly not letting him go away from her. Ranveer smiled and pecked her forehead lovingly. Ranveer took out a diamond solitaire ring from his jacket and made her wear it infront of everyone.. She again hugged him in happiness..

Precap: PriVeer Wedding.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing
loved how priyanka made her brothers realize their mistake
super cute and honest confession
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ahhh...so Priyanka is speaking up before her family! And to defend whom? Her love!! What a happy day!
Loved the description of Ranveer making his way to the counter and then Priyanka stopping him.😳
Thanks for the update! And the pm! And continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww. So cute! I'm so glad that Prinku showed the mirror to her brothers. They all have the most messed up love lives and here they are trying to advice her. It's laughable but the typical trait of an older sibling lol. I love that Prinku proposed to Ranveer instead of the other way around. Goes to show just how comfortable she is with him to tell things without hesitation. I can totally imagine their forehead kisses! Uff I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for the pm sweetie
Edited by ChrisinS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start!!
I loved how u made priyanka to speak up!!
Continue soonish😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing👏 prinku stood up 4 da luv of her life😎
update soon nd tnx 4 da pm😳

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