PriVeer 2S: Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage (last part-pg3) *complete* - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
I am loving it
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Damn please write more! I love this!
Edited by ThatNarcissist - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awesome!! I dunno when something like this will happen in the shw... I mean its way too far off...
I loved the story... n their confession at airport... so cuteee!! love itt!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
n oh plz write more... u have done a grt job!! :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Wow, i just loved the title
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Last Part:

Priyanka descended from the stairs as the spotlights fell on her. The beautiful red and gold lehenga,the gold jewellery,intricately designed chura and kalirey,accentuated her beauty. Ranveer smiled as she neared the dias and he forwarded his towards Priyanka and helped her come to the dias.

"Tu hoga zara pagal,tune mujhko hai chuna,
Kaise tune ankaha,tune ankaha sab suna,
Tu din sa hai,main raat,
Aa na dono,mil jaayein shaamo ki tarah,
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage,
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe,
Koi toh toh na laage,
Kis tarha girha yeh suljhe.."

Ranveer and Priyanka were handed with the Varmalas' as the Panditji asked them to exchange the garlands'. Priyanka was picked up by her brothers' while Ranveer's cousins' picked him up and amidst fun and frolic,the garlands were exchanged.

Tej and Jahnvi were called for the Kanyadaan ritual. Priyanka became emotional as Tej and Jahnvi kept Priyanka's hand over Ranveer's hand and asked him to keep her happy,always. Ranveer's mother did the Gatbandhan and Panditji asked them to stand up for the Pheres'.

Ranveer took Priyanka's hand in his and took the first four pheres' and Priyanka also followed the same by taking the last three pheres'.. All the while,their fingers' were entwined with each other..

"Yeh moh moh ke dhaage,
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe,
Koi toh toh na laage,
Kis tarha girha yeh suljhe.."

"Ab kanya ke maang mein sindoor bhariye.." Panditji asked Ranveer and forwarded him a pot of Sindoor.. He took a pinch of it and applied it on the forehead parting of Priyanka's head.. Priyanla closed her eyes' to feel his touch as he marked her his forever..

"Kanya ko mangalsutra pehnaiye.." Panditji asked as he gave him the mangalsutra..

Ranveer took the mangalsutra and tied it around Priyanka's neck as the Panditji chanted the final mantras' of the wedding and announced Priyanka and Ranveer as the newly wedded couple.. All the guests',including both the families',clapped for Priyanka and Ranveer and showered them with flowers and blessings..

Ranveer and Priyanka locked their eyes' together as Ranveer welcomed her in his life through his eyes',which Priyanka loved the most.

After the tearful Bidaai,Priyanka was grandly welcomed at her new house by her sweet and caring mother-in-law. As the couple entered,they performed some post wedding rituals and after that,Priyanka was taken into their room,where she will stay and spend her life with Ranveer.

The room was beautifully decorated with red roses and jasmines along with scented candles'. Priyanka was made to sit in the centre of the bed,under a veil..

Ranveer came inside and the sight infront of him made him smile. He locked the door and came near Priyanka and lifted her veil to see her angelic face. Ranveer all over,fell in love with Priyanka again.

He inched forward and took her rosy petal like lips for a soul searing kiss. Priyanka also surrendered herself to him as he kissed her with love and passion. He placed a soft kiss on every place of the jewellery Priyanka wore.. As night grew more,they were in each others' arms' as they made love and became one soul..

*The End.*
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Aww :') Perfect ending. I can't wait to see the two on screen together. :D
Till then, stories like these are all we have to fangirl on! This was beautiful. Waiiting for more of Priveer stuff from you. Also, Twerps and I updated 2 parts on the Priveer story circle. Please post whenever you can! Yay <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
This was beautiful..I love that song and you weaved it so nicely into their union.
This just made me so happy! This is the love we want to see between the two of them, the trust, the acceptance.
Hope the show grants us this union at some point in the future.
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

This was beautiful..I love that song and you weaved it so nicely into their union.

This just made me so happy! This is the love we want to see between the two of them, the trust, the acceptance.
Hope the show grants us this union at some point in the future.
❤️


next janam mein hoga shayad.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz


next janam mein hoga shayad.


😆 yeah...most probably!

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