Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08)

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Holla guyzz..⭐️.. Back with a NeW genre😆.. Comedy, sentimental, fantasies & noW BhOot...!!!😈
This is my 10th story😆 Thanks for supporting me throughout..
Plz.. Read onn..!!😳



FroZen uNder The MoOn

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THUD...!!
"Rk care full.. What are u doing ?" A lady rushed towards the living room hearing the sound.
"Hey.. Nothing.. Am okk..!" A guy replied picking up the broken glass pieces of a large photo frame, which might have fallen down a while ago.
"How did it Broke Rk ?" The lady kneel beside him picking up the broken frame in her hand, caressing it with her fingers.
"Its our engagement pic Rk" she said, her voice sadden.
"As i climbed down after hanging it on wall, i dont know how but it fell upon me, i got saved by some inches" the guy, RK replied.
"What.. U aren't hurt right !" The lady quickly checks him.
"Dips no.. Am okk.. And leave this frame. We'll get a new frame" rk said, stroking Dipali's cheeks & took the frame off her hands.
"I'll just go & discard all these" rk said standing on his feet, indicating to the broken glass frame.
"mhmm.. And i'll prepare something for us to eat" dipali spoke & leaves for kitchen.

As Dipali goes, Rk slowly open his left fist. His left palm is covered with blood. He draws out his handkerchief & wrapped it in his palm.
"If dipali would have saw it, she'd have screamed the hell out here" Rk muttered as he tied the two ends of the handkerchief.
Done with his wound he bend to pick up the broken frame, stretching his right arm, when he felt an eerie cold sensation trailing up his arm. He stopped for a moment feeling it, and within few seconds the sensation disappeared. Rk shrugged, picking up the frame he went to disposed it off.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"How is it ?" Dipali asked Rk as they sat on opposite direction having their evening feast.
"The same way a Maggie should be" Rk laughed off as he stuff noodles in his mouth.
"uff.. Cant u be some more considerate, am gonna be ur Wife within a month" dipali sighs.
"So ? Do i have to praise u for making a bowl of Maggie too !"
"Dipali shrugged in defeat "Whats for tonight ? Am not gonna cook. Am tired from the journey"
"Me too & i don't know to cook" Rk spoke
"Order something then !" Dipali suggest
"Dips.. Our farmhouse is at a distant place, away from the market. Orders aren't directly delivered here." Rk explained.

Dipali & Rk were engaged a week ago. The marriage is cause of family alliance. They knew each other from childhood, & they don't have any love interest too. So when their family came up with proposal they agreed as they thought its better to marry friends than marrying a complete stranger. They have arrived here in Manali from Mumbai, this afternoon, to spend some time with each other, know each other better & prepare all the marriage stuff according to their choice as their marriage is going to be held here only in few weeks.
"Then ?" Dipali probes.
"I'll go & get the food for us" rk replied getting up from his chair after filling his stomach.
"But its Raining" dipali loiter behind him as he picked up his jacket & car keys.
"This area is quite safe.. Don't worry.. Will be back soon" rk turned to dipali as she hugged him.
A bright lightening flash across their window making them parted away.
"Bye, take care" dipali closes the door after biding him bye.

Hugging herself Dipali went towards the window & stretch her hand out in rain with a smile. Rain drops trickle down her fingers & mix with the water in the ground. Her eyes went down on the accumulated rain drops in the ground. She observe some eerie changes with the water. Its begins to form bubbles as if being boiled, then slowly it starts changing colour as black smoke starts emitting out from it. Dipali watch it closely as all of sudden she felt a gust of cold wind raise from that smoke & hit her with full force.
"ahh.." She stumble back holding the window pane.
"what Was that ?" She muttered brushing off her hairs from her face, she again stepped to have closer look at it when___
*DING-DONG*
*DONG-DING*
She jerked back with the door bell sound. "Rk went out few minutes back.. Then ?'" Strolling towards the door she opens it filling the cold air in her lungs. Her eyes moves from left to right.
"Strange.. No one here..!" She begins to close the door when a bright slim hand holds the door stopping her from closing it. Dipali feels the door opening voluntarily without her even trying.
"Hey" dipali looks at the source of the voice. A captivating beauty in crimson red & black saree standing on the door step. Her skin sparkling bright, her hairs moist with rain, her eyes smoky black, her lips curved up in a smile & she is looking unearthly beautiful.
"Hello.." The beauty snap her finger in front of dipali's eyes bringing her back to the earth.
"ya.. Hey" dipali replied sheepishly.
"Hii.. Am Madhubala. Actually my car broke down a km away & there isn't any network in my cell" the beauty spoke huskily showing her mobile. "So it would be really kind of u if u can help me. I need to do a phone call"
"umm okk" dipali replied seeing her alone & turned away to get her mobile.
"CAN I COME IN YOUR HOME ?" Dipali hear her asking. She turns to madhu to find her in unreadable expression.
"Ya sure.. " dipali smile.
"Its so chilling cold here" madhu said smiling a bit while rubbing her hands together.
"ya suddenly weather changed" dipali agreed pulling the door wide open for madhu to enter.
"You don't mind me ENTERING UR HOME right !! SHOULD I COME IN ?" Madhu asked raising her brows at dipali.
"ya please come in " dipali smiled encouragingly.
"Thats so nice of u.. Thankyou !! So AM I ALLOWED TO COME INSIDE UR HOME ?" Madhu asked once again stepping ahead.
"Definitely.. Welcome to my home" dipali welcomed.
Madhu smiled at her, her eyes twinkling with glee as she stepped inside her house closing The door.
"Thankyou !" Madhu replied, her voice cold, dipali looks at her with the sudden change in her voice.
"plz be seated i'll get the phone" dipali said
"mhmm" madhu nodded, absent minded, looking around the house & then fixing her eyes on the same walls from which dipali-Rk's photo frame broke. Dipali frowns at her & pick up her phone from dinning table.
"Here" dipali forwards madhu her phone. Madhu tooks it in her hand, looking at it with eerie expression.
"What is it ?" Dipali asked seeing her expression.
"My phone got network" madhu answer huskily showing dipali her mobile "These materialistic things are if no use to me" she smiled slyly dropping dipali's mobile on dipali's hand.
Dipali looks at her "There is something off about her" dipali's inner voice cautioned her.
"Your home is beautiful. THANKS FOR LETTING ME ENTER" Madhu spoke slowly, her eyes glistening. She smirked at dipali's expression & turned away flipping her hairs back.
"So nice to get you. You helped me A LOT !" Madhu said tilting her head sideways, and walks towards the door, opening it she went out while dipali look on perplexed.
*DONG*
Dipali looks at the clock hung on the wall. "9, Rk would be coming by now.. Umm.. We can initiate our lil moment tonight" dipali blushed & went to set the room forgetting about the strange Stranger.
~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hey.." Dipali chirped at Rk opening the door for him.
"Am so very hungry, plz set the table fast, till then i'll get in fresh pair of clothes" Rk said cutely transferring the food packets in dipali's hand.
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"Damn this rain.. My hairs" Rk grumbles standing in front of mirror gelling his hairs after changing clothes.
"R-A-I-N" RK stopped his act, as he heard a faint whisper & next moment he feels a cold sensation brushing his nape. He turns around dropping the comb to find himself alone in the room.
"Guess am too tired.. I need sleep but before that food" Rk conclude & went downstairs for dinner
~~~~~~~~~~
After dinner dipali entered her room & spray some room freshener.
"Perfect night to start our relation" dipali spoke to herself.
"Ahaan.. Perfect night hun !" Dipali hears the same husky voice of the stranger from this evening. She turned around frantically looking around the room to find no one but herself alone.
*CLICK*
She gulped seeing the door of the room closing automatically. She holds the door knob trying to open it, sweat beads starts forming in her forehead. She halted hearing a soft chuckle from behind.
"Who is it ?" Dipali voice out picking up a vase in her hand.
"Forgot me so soon !" Dipali looks up to find a hazy image of the same stranger standing in her room near window, smirking at her.
"You.. How ?" Dipali uttered confused.
"Am omnipresent" came the reply.
Dipali blink her eyes & again no one is in the room except her. She starts moving here & there.
"Where she gone..?" Dipali shouted frustratedly.
"Here.. I Am" this time dipali hears an audible voice, close to her ears. With measurable steps she turned around, stepping back in fear seeing madhu standing very close to her, looking ghostly.
"Y.. You.. How can u be here?" Dipali stammered sweating.
"This is my house, i can be anywhere" madhu replied coldly.
"what.. Are u doing in my room" dipali asked absurdly.
"You only INVITED me" madhu replied with a coy smile.
"Me.. I just invited you in my home" dipali answered bewildered.
"Exactly.. YOUR HOME, YOUR BODY" Madhu spoke huskily coming near to dipali as dipali back away trembling.
"This house is mine already, you do invited me but not in my house, in your house, Your House means your body.. Thats too 3 TIMES..!" Madhu showed her 3 fingers.
"And i accepted ur Invitation" madhu said with a crooked smile.
"What are you ?" Dipali uttered.
"A different Entity" madhu replied lying gracefully on bed "From Different Dimension !" Dipali looks at her widely.
"Come here" madhu crooked her index
Finger at dipali.
"No" dipali whispered shaking her head negatively, and the next moment she felt a hard push making her fall flat on bed in front of madhu.
"I was talking nicely with u but guess u like violence more" madhu said tightly, looking at scared dipali.
"I wanted a body to live in.. To live in this world, and now i'll live in you" madhu said gripping dipali's hairs tightly.
"What are u doing.. Leave me" dipali screamed & the next moment her head was pinned on bed, downwards, her hands locked on her back & she was in half sitting & half sleeping position.
"Shh.. I dont like noise in my house" madhu shush her.
"From now on.." Madhu whispered in her ears "Body will be yours but soul will be Mine,
"Voice will be yours but words will be mine"
a tears slides down dipali's eyes.
"Breath will be yours but life will be mine" madhu said victoriously.
"Days will be yours but night will be mine" dipali whimpered hearing it.
"Actions will be your but control will be mine"
"no please" dipali cries. Madhu turns dipali yanking her hairs making her face to face with madhu.
"Fiancee will be yours but enjoyment will be mine" madhu winked. "So welcome me dipali" saying so madhu entered her body making dipali wither in pain. After few minuted madhu comes out of dipali's body leaving her exhausted.
"If u protest more, the more pain you will have to endure" madhu said stroking dipali's hairs.
"And don't tell about this to anyone or else that anyone would never be able to see the next sunrise of their life" madhu threatened dipali in a chilling tone making dipali more weak.
"And don't keep any doubt.. I"ll be with u 24*7.. Ur best companion" madhu chuckled "which means.." She goes near dipali's ear "I'll follow u everywhere..!"

*KNOCK-KNOCK*

"Dipali" hearing Rk's voice dipali looks around to find herself alone laying in bed. She rubbed off the tears & runs to door opening it she hugged
Rk tightly.
"what happened ?" Rk rub her back as he settle both of them on bed.
"Rk.. Rk its here" dipali blabber.
"What ?" Rk asked perplexed.
"She.." Dipali stopped seeing madhu sitting right behind Rk in her glory looking mockingly at him.
"Tell him & make him my dinner. I feed on life energy, u know right" madhu said to dipali which ONLY dipali can hear. Madhu sexily draws closer to Rk & lick his neck. Rk become stiffened feeling a strange cold sensation on her neck. Dipali holds her head seeing all this.
"I love you Rk" dipali said & looks up to see Rk starring at her & madhu looking at her impressed.
"ahaan.. Then let me love him too.. Ur Rk, Now My Rk" madhu winked at dipali & before she reacts madhu entered her. Rk saw dipali jerked back & after a moment when she raise her head, her face is holding a different expression.
"Dipali" rk uttered and the very moment he felt a push from dipali which make him falls back on bed.
"What are you doing?" Rk asked as madhu in form of dipali climbs on top of him.
"I so damn love you" she said fiercely as she trails her nails on Rk's arms scratching his skin, making him bleed. She leans down on him biting his neck harshly.
"Dipali.." Rk pushed her off him with all his strength making her sprawled on bed.
"What baby?" She spoke sexily looking at him, biting her lips.
"am going to sleep in my room.. Gn" rk mumbled & went away.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Dipali coffee" dipali scrunch her eyes hearing the voice of Rk. She wakes up woth the welcoming days of sunlight after dark stormy night. She looks at the clock when she 11:30..!! She sits up with a jerk as last night events flashed back in her mind. She was so tired as madhu kept coming & going in her, even now too she feels weary.
"Sorry.. I over slept" dipali mumbled.
"No problem.. Must be tired from journey" Rk smiled sitting opposite to her on bed. Dipali's eyes spot a harsh mark on Rk's neck.
"what's this ?" She points as her eyes caught
Deep dark bruises on Rk's hands "How did u got this?"
"I gave him" dipali heard madhu & looks behind Rk to find her lazily laying on the bed smirking at the duo.
"I gave My Rk, my love bite, love scratches last night" madhu replied viewing her polished nails.
"ermm.. You became too wild last night" rk laughs off & dipali fake a smile at him.
"Anyways u remember we need To go today to select our wedding card so be ready" rk said forwarding the coffee cup to dipali.
"you're not going anywhere" dipali sees madhu sitting right beside her in fraction of seconds "Cause if u go, then i too have to go with u.. I'll get bored there & for my entertainment i have to do something like this.." Madhu said sympathetically as she gaze at the hot coffee mug in Rk's hand. Dipali too followed her gaze & within seconds the mug slipped off his hands pouring the hot coffee on his hand hurting him.
"Oww !" Rk withdraws his hands painfully.
"Rk.. Rk" dipali got hurt seeing this & quickly emptied a bottle of water on his hand trying to lessen the burning sensation.
"Sorry the mug slipped off my hands" rk apologise.
"Not ur fault" dipali looks at madhu to find her smirking at them.
"Mellow dramatic, u both" madhu mocked them.
"I don't feel like going, u go & select the card" dipali said.
"okk.. Then am leaving take care" rk walks off but not before sparing a look at the room.
"hmm.. Good job, now let me sleep. Am tired too" madhu winked at her & disappeared.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The whole day madhu didnt showed up & dipali searched net to get some solution. In evening dipali was passing through her room when she saw madhu laying down on her bed. Dipali quickly rushed to kitchen.

"hmm.. What ?" Madhu asked as she saw dipali enter the room & stands beside the bed.
"don't say u are in love with me & cant live without me" madhu joked & starts laughing. Dipali took the opportunity & quickly spread the cloves buds & garlic on the bed trapping madhu. Madhu beco
Me stiffened with this & looked furiously at dipali.
Dipali backed away smiling "you are trapped now, u cant come in me. I'll tell Rk, he'll help me to get out of this"
"No.. No.. Dont do this.. Ahh, its burning me.." Madhu begin to scream "plzz.. Ahh.."
Dipali looks on satisfied.
"Its burning me.." Madhu spoke & starts laughing heartily after a moment, making dipali confused.
"see Dipali, it burned me.. Hehe.." Madhu said between her laughter. Madhe picked up the cloves & garlic making dipali's eyes rounded, she crushed it on her palm & blows it off, smirking at dipali.
"you were acting to get burned" dipali gulped down "It didn't affect you.. But.."
"But in freaking internet it was posted right !" Madhu stated clenching her teeth, her naughtiness gone.
"For how many times i need to tell you.. I AM INVITED IN YOU.. U HAVE INVITED ME.. am not some f**king spirit that u can drive me away with such tricks..!" Madhu pinned dipali to wall clutching her neck.
"Am a powerful entity & now i have became more powerful being in you, feeding ur energy" madhu said tightly as dipali tried to remove her hold off her neck.
"U remember the changing rain drops on the very first day ! Yeah, thats me, i tried to enter u in form of smoke but we cant possess someone unless they allowed us voluntarily otherwise we lessen their willpower to an extent in which they are not capable of thinking straight. U were strong enough so i tried my card to let u invite me voluntarily & u did." Madhu cleared.
"And don't u dare play such mundane game, the more u irritate me the more i'll hurt you" madhu hissed & enter her making dipali sink down on floor howling in pain. After few minutes dipali opened her eyes as madhu possessed her body. She stands up & walks up to the phone.
madhu in dipali's form pick up the phone & dialed a number.
"Hello !!"
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*DING-DONG*
Dipali looks at door with the sound.
"Go open the door !" She turns her head sideways to
Find madhu starring at the door sitting right beside her on a chair. Dipali without a word walks to the door and opens it.
"Ria !" Dipali exclaimed seeing a girl & a guy standing at her door step.
"And mukund" dipali heard madhu whispered, she looks at madhu who is standing besides dipali starring at mukund & ria.
"Hey dips, i was so surprised when u called an hour ago & asked us to come to ur place" ria hugged dipali.
"When did u gutz came in this city ?" Mukund asked dipali giving her a casual hug.
"Just a day before" dipali replied meekly knowing very well that madhu call them here using her body.
"Where is Rk?" Ria asked.
"Tell them that Rk went out to get drinks for them" madhu said to dipali.
"Rk went out to get drinks.. Come in" Dipali replied as madhu directs her & they all walked inside & the door closed behind them with a thud. Ria & mukund looked back startled.
"Whats that ?" Ria uttered
"Air may be.." Dipali replied looking at madhu who just closed the door.
"Take them to the terrace, starry night, under beautiful moonlight" madhu directs dipali as she obeyed "Lets go to the roof top, today's weather is awesome"
They agreed as they walked upstairs mukund skeptically looked around the house which didn't go unnoticed by madhu.
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"Wow.. Its so beautiful, especially the moon" ria exclaimed looking around the terrace.
"Today is full moon night. So night is in its glory" mukund said as madhu glare him.
"Dipali time to sleep" madhu looks at dipali & entered her quickly.
"Years passed & the moon is still the same, the night too, the wind too, you guys too, & me too !" Madhu walks in the space between both of them in form of dipali. Sinking her words Ria & mukund both looks at madhu who is in dipali's form.
"Dipali.." Ria uttered hesitantly.
"i waited for you all for years.. But u never came.. Ever.. Now, see i made u come here to get even." They saw dipali spoke but the words were clearly of someone else.
"What are u saying ?" Mukund asked stepping away.
"U cant forget me.. U have much sharp memory" madhu spoke curtly, advancing towards mukund.
"Mukund !" Ria uttered shocked seeing dipali's eye colour changed to full black even the white part of the eyes, are black too. Madhu stopped & looked at Ria. Both stepped back in fear.
"Remember me?" Madhu said huskily still in dipali's body.
"Madhu !" Ria gulped scared like hell.
"yes.. Bitch" madhu spat. Ria turned to run away when madhu yanked her hairs back & throws her against a wall hurting her head.
"Ria" mukund screamed & went to ria. They saw madhu emerging out of dipali as dipali's limp body fell on the ground.
"Madhu..?" Both uttered in utter shock seeing her. Her hairs frenzy, her head broken as blood covered half of her face, her eyes black, she skin pale & she is wearing the same white gown which was torn from her shoulders, its ragged.
"you were dead.. Then how ?" Mukund gasped.
"Am still dead & now you're going to join me" madhu says ghostly & come forward to attack them.
"no.." Mukund pulled out a chain with holy pendent from his pocket, stopping madhu in her tracks. Madhu scowled at him.
"God is with me.. U cant harm me" mukund said holding the locket out to madhu. In front of his eyes madhu's form changes into a thick black smoke & entered dipali's body once again.
They saw dipali stands up, advancing towards them. She mercilessly pulled Ria's hairs & shoved her aside, then looks at mukund who is holding the holy chain. She evilly smiled at him as she gripped his hand which is holding the chain making mukund looking at her dumbstruck.
"Am invited entity. She invited me. I cant touch u with this chain but being in her body i can touch & kill you even with this chain." Madhu spoke drawing out the colour of mukund's face, she throws him against the wall, making the chain falls from his hands. She leaves dipali's body again making dipali unconscious.
"Get up.. Where ur
F**king energy gone hun ?" Madhu drags him gripping his hairs & smashed his head against the wall as blood sprinkled everywhere. Ria closes her eyes & runs away. Madhu watch her running & throws a flower pot in her direction which hit her head making her rolled off the stairs.
"The moonlight, the weather is so nice, don't u wanna enjoy !" Madhu cried gritting her teeth, she throws mukund on the railing of the terrace.
"sorry.. Sorry.. Please don't do this to me" mukund started to chant.
"I had spoken the same words too" madhu hangs him down the terrace & holds him just by gripping His hairs.
"Forgive me" mukund uttered as he looked downward.
"After ur death" madhu muttered & leaves her hold on his hairs.
"Madhuuu..." She closes her eyes hearing his scream. Her blood smeared face seems calm in the bright moon light.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"How are they doc ?" Rk asked the doctor.
"Mr.kundra, the patient name Ria is in coma & Dipali ur fiancee is alright now, u can meet her" doctor went away.
"Rk.. We need dipali's testimony about the incident." Inspector probes from behind Rk.
"Yes, sir.. Lets go inside" Rk said as they enter dipali's cabin.

Done with his wedding preparations Rk returned back home & found Ria badly injured in hall, seeing the blood stain he went upstairs to find dipali unconscious; he was picking her up when he spotted blood at the end of roof top, he went there & saw the body of mukund in worst condition lying on ground dropped from certain heights. He immediately called the police & brings Ria & dipali to hospital.

"Dipali, u okk ?" Rk asked her loosely holding her hand. Dipali opens her eyes & looks at Rk & beside him inspector.
"ma'am can u enlighten us with the happening of ur house. Ria is in coma & mukund is dead" inspector asked.
"What mukund dead & Ria is.." Dipali asked shocked.
"In coma & don't over react. U are a very bad mellow dramatic scary actress" dipali heard madhu chuckle. She looks up to find
Her standing beside Rk, holding his hand looking as unearthly & beautiful as ever, playing with her hair lock.
"Dipali.. Say what had happed there ?" Rk shook dipali.
"see, how curious Rk is to know what happened ! Hmm.. Seems like he too want to join mukund" madhu threatened dipali.
"I don't know" dipali mumbled looking at madhu who in turn is smirking at her.
"Dipali, all these happened in our farm house" Rk probes.
"say that u invited them to celebrate ur engagement, when they arrive in they were behaving very oddly, then all of sudden starts fighting among themselves. U tried to stop but the pushed u back, u became unconscious & don't know what happened further" madhu told dipali & dipali spoke the exact words.
"What relation u both share with Ria & mukund?" Inspector asked.
"They were our elder brother's friends, Ria, mukund, sikky, sultan were in same batch. Thats how we know them." Rk answered.
"Okk.. Report says they were in affect of drugs, & they were couple too.. So i guess its a open & shut case" inspector concluded.
~~~~~~~~~~~
"Dipali, here is the medicines.. I need to send a mail, am in my room, call me if needed" Rk keep a glass of water on table & went to his room.
Dipali looks around & from nowhere black smoke formed, it twirled & accumulated besides dipali. She looks on as the smoke change into the figure of madhu. Since few days, madhu didn't bothered dipali much except for always entering her to behaving rudely with Rk creating distance between the duo, teasing dipali sometimes, pulling her legs, AND hurting Rk occasionally though minor injuries like__
cutting his finger while chopping veggies, bringing things on his way making him stumble, pushing him off stairs making his ankle got sprained, hiding his things, Dropping dead flies on his food plate🤣 and lately getting his vehicles dashed with another causing unnecessary chaos..!!
"What now ? Don't look at me like an Ape, though u are exactly the one" madhu Joked & begins to chuckle at her own joke.
"Why cant u leave me & Rk alone, why u always hurt him ?" Dipali asked angrily "am sick of u, u entering & exiting my body"
"U only invited me baby" madhu replied calmly "And i keep hurting Rk cause i dont want to kill him soo soon like mukund." She winked at dipali making her more angry.
"Excuse me now. I have some personal work with my Rk" madhu said huskily & disappeared into thick smoke.
"I'll not tolerate u more. U said i cant tell anyone. Fine then i'll make u noticeable. He will definitely help me" dipali muttered & pick up her cell dialing a number.
"Hello bhai..!"

~~~~~~~~~~~

Madhu entered Rk's room & saw him lying on bed on his back & typing some mails on his mobile. She stares at him intensely & then stealthily climbed on his bed. Rk felt the same cold eerie sensation which he has felt numerous times. He feels his bed dips as if someone climbs next to him on bed. Madhu draws herself close to him keeping her hands on both sides of his head trapping him beneath her. Rk felt heaviness on top of him & a cold breath on his face. He becomes still & keep laying there immobile waiting for some movements & it did came.
Madhu place her right hand on his throat. Rk felt a cold sensation on his throat & within no time it changed into a tight hold. Madhu clutch his throat choking him to death. Rk wriggle in her hold as he starts coughing badly struggling to breath.
Madhu looks at him exasperate & leaves him with a jerk, she creeps out of the bed. Rk too gets down coughing & drank some water.
"This is what happens every damn time.." Madhu muttered angrily. Whenever she tries to kill him she always stops voluntarily, dont know why.
"Its something in him. A pure aura, a very pure soul which always stops me from killing him" Madhu mumbled as she thought of all past events.

The very first day Rk set his foot in farmhouse madhu was all set to kill him. Madhu dropped the photo frame upon him but before
It hit him to death she divert the direction making it fall on his hand & not head.
After that she tried to kill him many times but always stops at the last moment, then she starts giving him minor injuries but this guy never complained. She tried to frighten him off but he was all cool about it. Then she picked up the weapon of annoyance. She begins to annoy him to death by doing all absurd activities but then again this guy very patiently failed all her plans, just like now. Madhu sighs & turns to go out when she hear him speak.
"I know someone is here" Rk said loudly looking around vaguely. Madhu turns back at him to hear him out.
"I can feel u, i can sense u around me, u are always around me.. Who Are You ?"
"


Yeah, the initial idea is from kawach, but except the ghost thing all other things is different..⭐️
Plz do like & comment..
Thanks
Aaniya
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INDEX
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Part-|| on page 13
Part 2

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First..
Resed first but took forever to unres... sorry for the delay dear.. hell busy these days...🤣

okay coming to ur 10th story... congrats first for writing 10 wonderful stories... each of its own kind... so unique & different... but one common element in all stories... FUN!! all ur stories are so fun filled & crazy... and hilarious... so like my type... 🤣

Well, this story is so different from ur other works... i really loved it..
haha... madhu seems scary... but surely she faced a brutal death i guess... bcos of those creeps Ria, Mukkund & even Dipali.. Rk i m not sure... guess he must be innocent... but still madhu is tormenting him with her slight teasing & hurting sessions... 🤣

haha.. Madhu scared the shit out of Dipali.. LOL!!!
i thought Rk will also get scared a bit but he was so cool & composed.. he didn't pee on his pants.. LOL!! in fact he seemed to enjoying the cool air blowing behind his neck LOL... & those wild tortures... he must be sexually aroused with her touch... but then too he was in control... may be he didn't want to do it with Dips... LOL!! but what to do... madhu has no body.. & she could find only my sexy vamps body... well, her mission was to kill her culprits... & rk is for fun romance i guess... LOL!!!🤣

Frozen under the moon?? did mukkund & gang took madhu to mount Everest & abandoned her in the freezing cold & thats how she died?? LOL!!! poor guess i know... 🤣

Rk's fiance is Dips... but cares the least for her.. LOL!! he wasn't bothered whether she comes out with him for dinner or to select the cards.. may be that becos he wanted madhu to kill her when he was gone out LOL!! see, he admitted the fact that he felt her presence... but he still left his fiance to some strange spirit... to a ghost (no offense... ghosts are not that bad... LOL)... a loving fiance will never do that... that proved Rk didn't love or even care for Dips.. LOL!!!🤣

now i wonder how will a human & ghost will unite?? will madhu walk in to his body?? then their bodies will become one nah?? 🤣

okay... as ever enjoyed reading ur interesting story... thanks dear... keep writing more.. will be waiting for next... 🤣

i m in a good mood... so simply ROLFing... don't mind hun!!🤣
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Unres
Hey Aaniya dear congrats for your 10th story!! And yeah your transformation is amazing! From comic to emotional to adult to ghost great going dear. Do write a thriller story next...😳

Liked the title yaar...eeriness can be felt at that time itself!! RK is so innocent and cute...he never complains even though Madhu annoys him. Atlast I was shocked to see him calling out to Madhu. He knew her presence then.
Dipali is nice! I can't conclude it yet as her friends were creeps and murderers of Madhu. Am glad she served as a medium to execute the kill! Madhu's face became serene after the kill. I liked that line. A goddess of fury a second back became peaceful and serene means something drastic has happened. Did Mukund rape Madhu? And this stupid Ria??

What does Rishbala future hold? Madhu is already dead. Really confused. Will dips be in the equation or out of it?

Interesting start. Thank God it wasn't that scary...I loved this bold and ghostly Madhu 😃
Are these people...RK and Dipali staying in the same house where the murder took place ?? Lol they are bold yaar! 🤣

Thanks for PM 😊
Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Res Unres.. Wooo... Bhoot aya.. Aya mere rabba!!!! First thing made me shocked was that Dipali is good here through thoughts were running in my mind that she is also negative but nnah here is goody goody girl.. Madhu is scary.. But I love her.. Why I read "Can I come inside your house" two times I got idea that the scene is taken from kawach.. So Mukund and Roya killed madhu but why.. Big question.. And Madhu also believes that rk is also involved in this.. And Rk Is her lover.. And because of that she can't kill him.. Rk - Madhu - Dipali innocent souls.. Mukund and Riya and maybe sultan are bads.. But why Rk is marrying Dipali?? Maybe because He don't know Madhu is no more.. He maybe thought that Madhu diched him (Mukund or Riya told him).. Because I know My Rk he can Live his life alone with Madhu's memories but will not marry any girl... Now want to know what happened to Madhu.. and one Request.. PLEASE!! DON'T LET RK MARRY DIPALI... I can't see Rk with any Girl...i hate it!!!!!!!!
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Part-1 updated... Pms in progress...!!!!
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Very thrilling Story.While I was reading ,I have fear.I can't explain my feelings.Supeeer Aani.
I am waiting for ur update.
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Aaniya congrats on the new story, just can't explain my feelings when i was reading it, thrilling experience, i was transported in that world while reading it. Dipali seems to be nice here, so R.K can feel Madhu's presence around in the house, Madhu is a ghost and has come to take revenge from them coz may be she thinks R.K also is involved in it.
Curious to know what happens next, shall be waiting for the next update.

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Congo for ur new story dr
Its so thrilling and also rk can feel madhu around him ,even if she is dead ,how sweet...
Wanting to read more...
Thanks for the pm dr
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Wow!!! 10 stories!!! Congratzzz for it!!!!

Scared!!!!! scared totally, but read anyway!!
I am scared of ghost movies, so at first while reading it, became too scared.

Madhu!!!! Ghost!!!! At first when you described her in red saari, I imagined beautiful Drashti!!!
So, now, I understand, she has been killed by Mukund and Ria!!!!
And the house is hers only!!!
I was confused why she is asking too many times to welcome her, but she was asking invitation to enter her body? Oh God!!

Deepali!!! Poor her!!!!!
She will not know what is being done by her in the form of Madhu?? Oh my god!!!!!! Too scary!!!

And why is she kissing Rk, is she attracted to him?

Wait, one think striked me!!! I think she was already in love with him when she was alive...hmmm...
So, she destroyed Rk- deepali's pics and tried to separate them too!!!

Ria, Mukund deserve that!!! Ghost Madhu did right!!!!

But why is Madhu trying to make Rk hurt by diff ways?? Is he at fault to?? Is she angry on him for trying to marry Deepali??


Amazing, thriller update!!! Enjoyed reading it a lot but scared too!!!!!!
Thanks for pm!!

Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago

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