Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow that totally interesting and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Congrats for new story Aaniya dear..👏
without reading I can say its going to be an awesome one..⭐️
Will comment after reading dear..😳
Thanks for pm ..keep writing.🤗
wow superb story dear..👏
So thrilling and scary..i can imagine Deepali's face when stunning ghost Madhu daraofying her..🤣
Poor Deepali..and Rk ..seems he knows something..
Madhu is taking revenge..and Mukund is dead..OMG!!
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What going to happen next..waiting for it..😛
But I love this ghost Madhu..😉
W'fully written..⭐️
Thanks for the awesome read..⭐️
You again amazed me my dear..🤗
Keep writing..thanks for pm.😳






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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all congrats on your 10th story secondly thanks for the pm i just love your works, all your stories are awesome and am glued to each one of them and this one is no different when i started reading and madhu entered i thought she might be some vampire ( well can't help it whenever the word supernatural comes first thing comes to my mind is vampires 🤣 ) but then she turned out to be a ghost 😆 well i never liked dipali so madhu torturing her gives me peace and she took revenge from mukund he killed her and now i guess she'll slowly fall for rk so lets see how the story goes 😃 i loved it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story..
Omg ghost story.. Wo vi madhu ghost hai and dipali ki body use kar rahi hai.. lagta hai past ma kuch hua tha uska saath jiska revenge lena wo ayi hai ria,mukund gaya ab sultan and sikky ki bari hai and ya rk ko itna pareshan kyun karti hai..
Waiting for next part..
Thanx for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the first part👏
Very thrilling, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Super start.
Tq for the PM
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
superb story 😃
supernatural 😉hmmm😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats u reach at ten ,many more to come na. Awesome part.Madhu is spirit n come to take her revenge. Mukund out n ria is in coma.Sultan n sikky next.Madhu hurt rk too ,why.
Update soon n thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishuv

Second!!
Congo souwmiya🤗


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Hey Aaniya dear congrats for your 10th story!!
Thank you sooo much yaar..!!⭐️

And yeah your transformation is amazing! From comic to emotional to adult to ghost great going dear. Do write a thriller story next...😳
Hehe.. Adult is coz of u, from libido mistake or else i wouldnt write on it..😆 and thriller noo.. U are perfectionist on it😉

Liked the title yaar...eeriness can be felt at that time itself!!
Glad u liked it.. Actually okk, this title was reversed for vampiric story.. But then i wasnt able to write on it.. Soo...!!

RK is so innocent and cute...he never complains even though Madhu annoys him.
Yes, i very patiently handdle it & and never blame other for any misfortune or any wrong happen with him..

Atlast I was shocked to see him calling out to Madhu. He knew her presence then.
He knew someone is there but he diidnt knew that its madhu.. & he feel her cause she was interacting with him thrrough hurting him & morover he also felt the cold sensation too...

]Dipali is nice! I can't conclude it yet as her friends were creeps and murderers of Madhu. Am glad she served as a medium to execute the kill!
I wanted to torture dipali too & this is the best way..lol..

Madhu's face became serene after the kill. I liked that line. A goddess of fury a second back became peaceful and serene means something drastic has happened.
And i like ur line goddess of fury, nice.. If i knew it earlier i wpuld have use it too.. Hehehe..

Did Mukund rape Madhu?
😃 😃 u got my answer.. ?? Something like that.. But not exactly rape as its very touchy subject..!!

And this stupid Ria??
Is a b***h..

What does Rishbala future hold?
I know what their future holds...!!

Madhu is already dead.
Yes..

Really confused.
Why..?

Will dips be in the equation or out of it?
She is kinda helping hand..

Interesting start. Thank God it wasn't that scary...I loved this bold and ghostly Madhu😃
Thanks you..!!

/DIV][DIV]Are these people...RK and Dipali staying in the same house where the murder took place ?? Lol they are bold yaar!🤣
Yes.. But they dont know that the murder took place..!!


Thanks for PM😊

thanks for coming..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome n different n even funny tooo
What's the connection between madhu n all others mukund n ria seems to be one of her killers may b sikky n sultan also the culprits but what has rk dipls has to do with her!!?? Maybe she used dips to kill her culprits but what about rk...

Wanna know it...eagerly waiting for next part

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