Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08)

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Fabulous update thanks for pm

Well done its great

It was an open ending

I imagined rishbala together only

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Good choice of ending. Ask us to conclude the end. I like it very much. I like the human and ghost relationship for some time. Until RK decide what he wants. As long as they are together whichever way I am happy. Their love is true and pure. Thank you dear for this story pls continue to write more I

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#243

So much mystry in it till the last point. I feel it would be some rom com type story. But no it is much more farther than that. U have a gift of mother nature as i can feel the pain of madhu by ur writing. Madhu is a pure soul thats why mother nature did not let her kill innocent rk even by mistake. But give every opportunity to kill the real culprits. And ria i agree is shame for all womenkind and must be killed too as low level persons like her are useless weight on the earth. U give an ope end to story but i want them to take rebirth and start their lovestory without any shadow of past. And i m gratefull to u take so afforts to fix this link and then pming me. Even having so busy schedule u care for ur fans thanks alot. Bye. Waiting for ur more writings.

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Nice story
Poor madhu suffered a lot on her last night
Those 4 were really the evil ones
How could they do that to someone
N they even was gonna make rk do disgusting
Madhu got her revenge
Dilpa inderstood why she did it
N rk got his love
I think for my ending I'm invisioning madhu stopping rk asking him to enjoy his life for both of them
N then when he dies of natural causes madhu is there waiting