Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08)

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Rishkara

@Rishkara

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

aniya dear

🤗

amazing story dear..

loved this vamp madhu😈

really loved it..

its totally different from ur stories..

where is rk gone all the time?

need more rishbala moments+ madhu in her avatar and not in dips body..

(just my wish)😆

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congrats for the new story

Madhu as a ghost very funny

Torturing deepali it's mostly like playing with her

Mukkund and Ria what have they done

The way Madhya asking permission to enter the house

I was thinking why she was asking so many times

Later understood house means it's her body

Rk could feel madhu's presence

He us eager to know who it is

Waiting for what happened with madhu

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swtmiyu

@swtmiyu

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hey.. I'am new here. Ur story was superb n nice title u hv given.the last part suprb means rk knows someone is there always. Lets see how madhu died n how luv will grow between madhu n rk.

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zonnakhan

@zonnakhan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Aaniya one more amazing story! Congrats for d 10th story! 👏

I realy liked d concept... Madhu as Ghost nd RK so sweet.. Looking 4rwd to the beginning of their love story! 😉

The only thing confusing here is that why Madhu is hurting RK??? My poor RK! 😭

Waiting 4 d nxt part... Post Soon 😊

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

thrilling update !! Madhu become a ghost to kill her murderers is rk also involved in her murder ? Dipali is nice girl here :)
plz cont soon its very intresting 😊

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Congratulations on the New story and new genre. Naughty madhu and her mischief were fun. But dipali good girl and madhu baddie undigestable.

Looking forward to next part if rk knows madhu or not. I guess the story is getting more interesting now after mukku is killed and ria comatose.

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Nikita

@Ambrosia22

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Nice.. Love it.. Early update

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Happy friendship day Aaniya.🤗

Unres my post on pg 2.😳

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: .Poorva.
ResUnres..Wooo... Bhoot aya.. Aya mere rabba!!!!
Exactly poorva, infact bhootini ayi, lol..

First thing made me shocked was that Dipali is good here through thoughts were running in my mind that she is also negative but nnah here is goody goody girl..
She, i want to torchur dipali, so made her innocent..!!

Madhu is scary.. But I love her..
I too..😳

Why I read "Can I come inside your house" two times I got idea that the scene is taken from kawach..
Yes, in last i mention it too that initial idea is from kawach..

So Mukund and Roya killed madhu but why.. Big question..
Yeah, & the question will be there till last update.. Lol

And Madhu also believes that rk is also involved in this..
Yeah..

And Rk Is her lover.. And because of that she can't kill him.. Rk - Madhu - Dipali innocent souls..
No poorva, Rk dont know madhu.. In first i mention RK DIPALI HAS NO LOVE INTEREST, so they agreed for marriage.

Mukund and Riya and maybe sultan are bads..But why Rk is marrying Dipali??
Rk is marrying dips coz he has no love interest

Maybe because He don't know Madhu is no more.. He maybe thought that Madhu diched him (Mukund or Riya told him)..
Rk dont know madhu..!! He neever met her..!

Because I know My Rk he can Live his life alone with Madhu's memories but will not marry any girl...Now want to know what happened to Madhu..
Okk, will update soon.

and one Request.. PLEASE!! DON'T LET RK MARRY DIPALI... I can't see Rk with any Girl...i hate it!!!!!!!!