Rishbala TS 'FroZen uNder The MoOn' ||COMPLETED@27|| (31/08) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aaniya congrats on the new story,
Thanks ananya..

just can't explain my feelings when i was reading it, thrilling experience, i was transported in that world while reading it.
So good to hear that.. Am happy that u can feel connected with the story..

Dipali seems to be nice here,
Yeah..

, so R.K can feel Madhu's presence around in the house,
Yes, he can..

Madhu is a ghost and has come to take revenge from them coz may be she thinks R.K also is involved in it.
Certainaly yes..

Curious to know what happens next, shall be waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: keerthiprasad

Congo for ur new story dr
Thanks keerth..

IV]Its so thrilling and also rk can feel madhu around him ,even if she is dead ,how sweet..
Yeah.. Her cold sensation😆

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Wanting to read more...

Thanks for the pm dr

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Wow!!! 10 stories!!! Congratzzz for it!!!!
Thanks kaustavi

Scared!!!!! scared totally, but read anyway!!

Hehe.. Thanks for reading..

I am scared of ghost movies, so at first while reading it, became too scared.
When madhu is ghost, why to get scared baby..😉.

Madhu!!!! Ghost!!!! At first when you described her in red saari, I imagined beautiful Drashti!!!
Yeah.. I wrote the scene while imagining her..

So, now, I understand, she has been killed by Mukund and Ria!!!!
yeah.. They are behind her killing

And the house is hers only!!
No, its not hers.. Its Rk's farm house.. But she lived there as ghost so she is calling it her house.

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I was confused why she is asking too many times to welcome her, but she was asking invitation to enter her body? Oh God!!
Yeah, she need to possess her body so she need invitation.!!

Deepali!!! Poor her!!!!!
She will not know what is being done by her in the form of Madhu?? Oh my god!!!!!! Too scary!!!
yeah, dipali dont know anything happened, when madhu is in her body.

And why is she kissing Rk, is she attracted to him?
Nooo, i never said she is kissing her.. Madhu in dipali's body is hurting her as biting his neck, not kissing him.

Wait, one think striked me!!! I think she was already in love with him when she was alive...hmmm...
Lets see, if it is truee..

So, she destroyed Rk- deepali's pics and tried to separate them too!!!

Ria, Mukund deserve that!!! Ghost Madhu did right!!!!
yeah, they hurted madhu

But why is Madhu trying to make Rk hurt by diff ways?? Is he at fault to??
May be he is..!!

Is she angry on him for trying to marry Deepali??
hehe noo..!!


Amazing, thriller update!!! Enjoyed reading it a lot but scared too!!!!!!
Thanks for pm!!

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Wow that totally interesting and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: RM14

Congrats for new story Aaniya dear..👏
Thanks you so much deepti..!!

without reading I can say its going to be an awesome one..⭐️
Aww.. Thats so sweet of you..!".

Will comment after reading dear..😳

Thanks for pm ..keep writing.🤗

<font color="#ffa500"> wow superb story dear..👏</font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">So thrilling and scary..i can imagine Deepali's face when stunning ghost Madhu daraofying her..🤣
Haha.. Yeah.. Madhu as ghost .. Just wow..!!

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<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">Poor Deepali..and Rk ..seems he knows something..
Err.. He can just feel madhu's presence around him.

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<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">Madhu is taking revenge..and Mukund is dead..OMG!!
Yeah, she is vindictive ghost..😉

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<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">😲
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<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">What going to happen next..waiting for it..😛</font></font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">But I love this ghost Madhu..😉</font></font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">W'fully written..⭐️</font></font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">Thanks for the awesome read..⭐️</font></font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">You again amazed me my dear..🤗</font></font>

<font color="#ffa500"><font color="#ffa500">Keep writing..thanks for pm.😳</font></font>

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Originally posted by: dvdianvishtianr

First of all congrats on your 10th story
Thanks dear..

secondly thanks for the pm
My pleasure..

i just love your works, all your stories are awesome and am glued to each one of them
Thats a big compliment.. Thank you so much..!!😳

and this one is no different when i started reading and madhu entered i thought she might be some vampire ( well can't help it whenever the word supernatural comes first thing comes to my mind is vampires )
Ok, i have to say this.. At first i actually characterised madhu as vampire then changed her as ghost.. God, ur thinking is close to what i had written..

but then she turned out to be a ghost well i never liked dipali so madhu torturing her gives me peace
Same here, i love torchuring dipali..

and she took revenge from mukund he killed her and now i guess she'll slowly fall for rk so lets see how the story goes i loved it

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Congrats for new story..

Thanks mona..

Omg ghost story.. Wo vi madhu ghost hai and dipali ki body use kar rahi hai..
Yeah.. Sizzling hott ghost..

. lagta hai past ma kuch hua tha uska saath jiska revenge lena wo ayi hai ria,mukund gaya ab sultan and sikky ki bari hai
Hmm.. Vindictic ghost..lol..

and ya rk ko itna pareshan kyun karti hai..
kuch kia hpga rk ne past me..!!

Waiting for next part..
Thanx for pm..