Swasan TS..Love Aaj kal final update on page 2 - Page 3

Awsm... U explained every emotion perfectly.

Hey Veena

Sorry for a brief comment but I am in Court today and typing from my phone is very annoying. Really enjoyed your TS, such nice execution and concept. I loved how you showed Swara's progression of feelings as she battled her head but finally found peace when she listened to her heart. Loved how Sanskaar dealt with it all, from giving her space to even ignoring her to allow her to shift through her jumbled feelings but still showing her in his amazing way how much he cares. The ending was very simple but nice in the context and sometimes I wish in Indian shows they could do things without big drama on every occasion:). Lovely read!

Love,

Shru X

Amaging dear...u gave fantastic ending to this...👏

Beautiful veena..😳 loved it.

Awww dear..

Hi Veena 🤗🤗

Lovely 2S you've written, my dear. Had such a nice time reading it, really brightened my morning. 😊

I liked this rational perspective of the ML track---where you have clearly shown how losing one's memory can engender a lot of frustration, anxiety, angst and even distress/fear (in Swara's case, given her fragmented, misunderstood memory of Sanskaar taking a shot). But the essential character traits of the person, their values and beliefs and primary thought processes would not change...

Liked your portrayal of Swara's confusion and the resultant defense of anger she tries to portray. She feels that pull towards Sanskaar despite herself, she can't help but wonder why everyone among the Maheshwaris and the Gadodias tell her how wonderful a husband he was. She can't help but doubt that memory she has of him---and when she feels she is falling weak, she lashes out at him, almost in self defense. 😭

That moment on the terrace, where Sanskaar recreated the decorations from their "suhaag raat"---that was just so moving and emotional. I literally had tears in my eyes, envisioning that agony Sanskaar must have gone through, when Swara hurled those words at him in her frustration and anger.

And so he goes to USA, to give her and himself some space, some time to gain some perspective. Possibly to clear their heads on how to solve this issue in their lives, how to move ahead. And Swara felt that pang in her heart, she was puzzled because she should have felt only joy at her antagonist being out of the country! But she did miss him, yearn for him at the deepest level of her subconscious.

Liked the way Lakshya lashed out at Swara a bit, protective and caring of his Bhai. That brotherly bond is now one of the very nice things about the serial.

And the way Swara waited up for Sanskaar in part 2, and literally flew into his arms. 😳 That was literally a taste of heaven for Sanskaar. Being away from her, battling thoughts and fears of her misunderstanding of him, her showing such an aversion towards him, had taken such a toll on poor Sunny. But when they came together---it was pure bliss. 😳

I was going all 😆 at Sujata's reactions the next morning. And the ending---was so lovely. Swara assuring Sanskaar that she did not regret for a moment, what had happened the last night---it had felt so right, being with him. And while she might or might not soon recollect their deep love of the year past; she was content that she had grown to love him in the present. She had fallen in love with his adoration for her, his pure and intense devotion towards her. 👏 👏

Lovely. Do write more.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Ever since you mentioned your TS.. I was searching for it . I even asked you for the link in my thread but you must not have seen it, I should have sent you the PM.. Now I get this idea I don't why I didn't have it before.. .. So I took the liberty of stalking your posts till I find your TS.. And finally found it and just finished reading it..