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arathy

@sarathy321

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nice update

So, swasan love story again...

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Pari

@Pari_1995

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

A perfect end you gave to the story, loved it. Swasan proved that their love don't need memories to live a life but memories can be created in their already perfect life. I don't know how much i am sounding sane, but i love everything & anything about swasan.
Thank you for the story. If you get time do write some more.

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

beautiful end to a beautiful story... I loved how her all plans failed when she came across him... 😳 do write more in the future...you r really good at it. 😊

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: swakriti
A perfect end you gave to the story, loved it. Swasan proved that their love don't need memories to live a life but memories can be created in their already perfect life. I don't know how much i am sounding sane, but i love everything & anything about swasan.
Thank you for the story. If you get time do write some more.

We all are insane when it comes to swasan😊

But here u have Clearly stated in two lines what I intended to convey in my story, thanku dear

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Helee
beautiful end to a beautiful story... I loved how her all plans failed when she came across him... 😳 do write more in the future...you r really good at it. 😊

Thank u for the encouragement, our sanskar is sooo irresistible 😊,

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice update
So, swasan love story again...

Thank-you, I cannot think beyond love for swasan😊

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hey dear... Such beautiful story... Beautiful end... Well written no dragging... Just loved it dear... His love made her feel for him... Made her to give her whole self to him... Wow... Soo blissful...

That last three lines were like a dressing on top of a desert... Big hugs...

Do write more...

With love...

Kam..

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Dear Veena,

That was a brilliant TS - will unres for a detailed comment soon

Love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Dear Veena,

That was a brilliant TS - will unres for a detailed comment soon

Unres

I really loved the story - how you have shown the progression from Swara's shock at seeing Sanskaar, whom she accuses to her murderer to indignation when she finds that her family members treat him as the modern day avatar of Lord Sri Ram. Then comes the shock that she has been engaged to him twice and married to him twice - the second time, apparently quite willingly and absolutely happily. Her defiant refusal to accept facts and she raises a challenge that she would give herself a month's time to see if she could regain her memories

Your description of the disgust she feels that she had supposedly loved Lakshya, who now was a very irritating version of Lakshman, was absolutely🤣

Then the masterstroke, her being rude with the family members boomerangs on her and her ignoring Sanskaar backfired on her when he appeared to have completely overlooked her very existence. Her heart could not take it. Her jealousy - when he simply left on that tour, when he spoke to Ragini to give updates of his travel and her final step down - she asks Lakshya when Sanskaar would be home (she is quite desperate that she could ask this of the very person who was so open in detesting her).

The change in her behaviour is quite natural given that she has always been a well-mannered

person and has been churlish only because she feels that everyone is forcing her to be a wife to a man whom she presumes attempted to kill her. And Sanskaar's absence is indeed killing her. Which is when she lets her mind surrender to her hearts and ends up in his arms. She finally decides to trust her heart.

Sanskaar is such an unbelievable man, the next morning he was worried if Swara has any regrets. And Swara's answer leaves both him and me breathless. She does accept that she loves him whether she remembers him or not, it does not matter, her heart would always be his.

Beautiful story - please do write more.

love,

Nyna

PS: loved the little bit of humour when Sujata with her usual lack of discretion and / or manners barges into their room and is stunned into silence🤣