SWASAN TS - ONLY YOU[LAST PART ON PG 8 21 JULY]

Originally posted by: -CRJ-

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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

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Hey Harshada 😊

Hi dear Nupur🤗

I have read your other SwaSan pieces Bt this is my first comment about your work!

So sorry for not commenting before on your other works!

No need to say sorry dear.😊 Its perfectly alright.

This is your first comment on my works and I will always treasure this one😳

I love your way of writing! And I first read something by you was a SwaSan story which was written by you along with your sis Mukta :)

I'm a fan of Mukta's works and now I became a fan of yours also :)

Hope we will get lots of SwaSan stories from you & plz PM me if possible!

Thank you so very much😳

Glad to know you like my way of writing.

Ohh! Must be alexamenous ...

She have told me about you😊 that how much you like her work.

I nowhere write even near to what she does.

But such a pleasure hearing you are liking my stories so far.

Hope to write more dear.

Sure...I will Pm you.

Now coming to your story: So it's your first ever writing and trust me it's beautifully written!

Though I still don't know what happened 5 years ago, why Sanskaar hurt Swara, how they met at the first place, how Sanskaar left his revenge & fall in love with her, how Swara fall for him & what kind of role kavita played! Lots of questions yet to answered! Which will be answered in coming update/s I believe!

Yeah This is the very first thing I have penned down.

Really? 😊 I am very much nervous and anxious about this one being my first writeup.

Yes ofcourse, your all questions will get answered in upcoming two updates.

But one thing is for sure, you do will hate Kavita even more in this tale.😉😆

Bt you portrayed Sanskaar's every feelings - his love for Swara, his self loathing for hurting her, his fear to lose her, his agony after Swara left, his anger towards that cavity - all very beautifully! Then in present, his regret, then his happiness after knowing about Swara's whereabouts was amazing!

Thank you so very much for such lovely words dear.

I am glad you think I portrayed Sanskar's pain, love and his agony nicely.

So Sanskaar went to meet her as soon as he get to know where she is Bt she is not at home! Sanskaar again became sad BUT BUT BUT!

You stopped at BUT and I assume it will be Swara standing in front of him?

Lets see if your guess is right or not😳

Curious to know what will happen when both will meet each other after a long time!

I hope not to disappoint you in future updates.

Plz update soon & don't worry about it being your first work bcoz it's really beautiful :)

So plz update soon and PM me if possible :)

Will update soon dear and will pm you.

Thanks again for this beautiful comment dear Nupur.

Lots of love & hugs!

~ Nupur

Lots of Love

-Harshada