SWASAN TS - ONLY YOU[LAST PART ON PG 8 21 JULY] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Hi harshda
Its really nice start n story
I really liked it very much
You penned each word very well
So it also consists some suspense
What happened in past n how sanskar give pain to swara
What role Kavita played in it
I want to know
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Nicely written.
Please update fast.



Thanks a lot dear.
Glad you liked it.
Will update soon
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</table>Hey Harshadha..👏fantastic update... The secret killing me man...

Kavita again... Ewww... I'm wondering what will be that secret made swara to run away from him... That too for five years... Is swara married to someone no... No... No possible for that...

But... Is swara naa standing in front of him...

Continue soon...

With love...

Kam...




Dear Kamila,
Thank you so much .
Even after being busy, you did manage to comment 😳...A huge thanks for that.
Too much suspense 😆
Kavita ... you for surely hate her even more in this story .
To know more , do read next update
will continue soon.
Love
- Harshada



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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Harshada,😊
This update was very interesting.😉 OMG!!! What happened between SwaSan that hurt Swara so much that she left Sanskar forever??!!😲😭 What that Kavita did??😡 Is Swara married to someone else now??😲😕 Nooo nooo plzzz don't do this!!!😭😭 Update soon dear.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.



Aheli dearest 😳
Thank you so very much dear .
Glad you liked the first part.
Do read the next update to know what exactly happened between swasan , what role kavita played here and if swara is married or not!
Will update soon.

Love
- Harshada
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Intigruing Update.
You have Portrayed Sanskar's Character very nice and Penned down his emotions Perfectly.
Waiting to see wat this Kavita naam ki bala did to my SwaSan.
I loved the part where Sanskar says to Kavita "Tum aur Main kabhi Hum NAHI Ho Sakte" damn this line was too good for Delusion Kavita.
Thanks for the PM.
Continue Soon dear.
P.S:You both Sisters are too good at Writing Emotional Stories and I seriously liked Alexamonous Story very very much its the first emotional story which touched my Heart.



Thank you so very much dear Sara😳
Glad to know you liked the update dear.
Glad you think I have portrayed Sanskar's character and his emotions nicely.

Kavita😔 She will be playing an important role in swasan's life.
I can promise you will hate Kavita here.

😆 I kind of enjoy writing such things. Glad you liked that line.

Will update soon

PS: Thank you so much dear. Though max work I have written so far falls under the category of sweet and cute but writing emotional stuffs, pain, agony and angst is something I like to write most.

Ohh really? you liked alexamenous so much?
It was my first attempt in writing but never knew it would be liked so much.
Extremely happy to know it touched your heart dear.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Nice one Harshada..👍🏼Please continue soon..Eagerly waiting to know what happened..Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊


Thank you so much dear.
Glad you liked it.
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Harshada dear..

Amazing start. Loved it.👍🏼
Sanskaar's pain & agony was clearly visible in the prologue. You have beautifully penned down it.
Kavitha..arrgh...😡 don't want to mention about her.
Eagerly waiting to read further. Update soon.
And thnks for the pm dear.



Thank you so much dear Kaveetha.
Glad you liked the start.

Thats so sweet of you to think I have penned everything in a well manner.
Will update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Hey the first part is really amazing!!
Just loved it. Poor Sanskaar!! SwaSan pain and that cruel Cavity ...ugh!
Waiting for SwaSan meeting!!
Can't wait to read more and more!! Please update soon!!


Hi dear,
Thank you so much.
Glad you liked the first part.
I hope not to disappoint you in future updates,
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Thank you so much dear.

Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sur1911

Hi harshda

Its really nice start n story
I really liked it very much
You penned each word very well
So it also consists some suspense
What happened in past n how sanskar give pain to swara
What role Kavita played in it
I want to know
Update soon
Thanks for pm



Hey dear😳
Thank you so much.
Glad you liked the start and the story as well.
Will update sooon

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