Ch 3 pg 3, ch 4 pg 13, ch 5 pg 16, ch 6 pg 19, ch 7 pg 21, ch 8 pg 25, ch 9 pg 28, ch 10 pg 32, ch 11 pg 36, ch 12 pg 40, ch 13 pg42, ch 14 pg 45, ch 15 pg 49, ch 16 pg 52, ch 17 pg 55, ch 18, pg 59
When I had adapted the 'The Destiny' punching two famous Bengali movies, I had seen them so long ago that other than the concept, I remembered nothing. So at the end it turned out to be a new story with new moments and scenes, if there are anything similar with the movies then it is just a coincident but when Preet aka Coolgurl sent me a PM requesting to adapt this movie, I said oh no, this is one of my favourite movies and I remember it scene by scene and since no other idea was coming into my mind I sat down to write it. Doing so I found it to be very difficult as the original was crowding my mind, anyway other then the concept, I am trying to stay consciously away from the original movie but let's see what happens and of course I know you will be able to guess the name of the movie in no time but nevertheless let me see what comes in your mind first before the actual name...
My Earlier FFs:
The Destiny: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=779329&T P
Ankho hi Ankho me: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=738121&T PN
Woh Raat : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/731347/ff-woh-raat-chapter-6-pg-10-last-ch
Anokha Rista (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/712391/anokha-rishta-chapter-18-and-epilog-pg42).
Chhoti si aasha https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/672677/ff-chhoti-si-aasha-ch29-and-epi-pg-76:
Kuch Achhe Kuch Bure (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/641995/kuch-achhe-kuch-bure-ch-24-and-epilog-pg71); Thori si bewafai (https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=615869) Kuch Rahen Anjaani Si (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/573991/ff-kuch-rahein-anjaani-si-ch-36-pg111): Contract Heir: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=536274&T PN. Return of Bani Walia, https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/515481/return-of-bani-walia-note-on-pg-31: :Business Tycoon Jai Walia marries a Mt Abu Girl(https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/486636/business-tycoonjw-marriesfinal-prt-pg64). Mai Apke bina nehi reh sakti hu (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/457994/mai-apke-bina-nehi-reh-updt-pg-11-pt-ix)& Finding Bani (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/469208/finding-bani-ff-part-viii-page-8).
The Crushed Innocence
| Nayi Nahi Yeh Baaten |
The lead dancer was wriggling her pelvis and bosom as she danced around Jai, Jai's patience was running low but he forced himself to remain calm and tried to bear with her cursing his sister Jigyasa's choice of entertainment for his 40th birthday…I turning 40 not 100 was his excuse for not having the party but Jigyasa was not listening, every decade should be celebrated she justified.
Jai sighed and stepped away brushing the away the groping hands of the dancer, to be surrounded by her co-dancers, leaning on him from different angles, Jai gritted his teeth, gave a fiery glance at Jigyasa's direction, who chose to ignore them obviously…Jai somehow managed to release himself when his so called friends, surrounded him, wishing him, congratulating him on his new acquisitions, Jai smiled accepted them mechanically.
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It was after quite sometime that Jai was able to rescue himself, the dances were getting more rowdy, with drinks flowing people were having difficulty on holding on to themselves while some people thought it as fun, Jai hated it…he could never allow his guard lowered, giving others to break into his fort…he was a careful man very conscious of his public image. It was spotless and he would like it to be that way…
Jai went into the wash room to relieve himself….could not wait for it to be over as half drunk and nearly drunk people started making nuisance of themselves there, falling on him, getting sick etc, Jai Walia got out of the place wrinkling his nose as fast as possible…
He looked around and found nobody was watching him, quietly went into the banquet office next to the halls, the place was small and the staff had left for the day…Jai released a sigh, good, much better…stood in front of the window, taking out his mobile spoke to his staff regarding his forthcoming visit to Kolkata, checking the time slot allotted for his private jet to take off, when suddenly the door opened behind him and banged shut, Jai turned to see a girl, one of the side dancers' most probably leaning against it, heaving and catching up with her breath…..
Jai was angry on being disturbed, he cleared his voice glaring at the figure….on hearing his voice the girl turned clutching her front…her face was distraught, ..the front of her bustier torn, on seeing him, she composed herself, stood straight and waited for his words….
Jai saw a heavily made up face, inspite of the same he could see she was frightened, in the dim light of the room, he saw scratches of on her neck, the dress she was wearing was a tight top and pants with flairs, the top was torn showing a very good part of her cleavage which she was trying to hide with her hand…
These girls will dress like this and expect men to behave themselves he thought disgustedly…
Since he remained quiet, the girl broke the silence,
I, I am sorry to disturb you, I I did not realize you were here…she stammered …
Jai's gaze pierced her, he was waiting for her to leave…the girl hesitated looking down at her dress, then turned to open the door to go out…
Wait, Jai called out….
He realized her reason of hesitation; Jai took out his jacket, handed it over to her…
The girl looked questioningly at him, he signaled her to go ahead….the girl murmured her gratefulness hurriedly, took the jacket, wore it and went out…
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Once out of the room, she looked around carefully for her assailant, seeing the coast clear she took big steps towards the room allotted for makeup and change and entered it….Seema the lead dancer was changing her costume looked at her questioningly, the girl lowered her gaze….
Keya baath hai, mamla kuch ageh bara ki nehi…Seema asked
Bahut aggressive hai, mujhe nooch raha tha, the girl replied
Toh
Mai bhag ayi…
Yeh jacket kiska hai….
Kisi… kisi nek admi ka…
Yeh nek admi tujhe sirf jacket hi diya nehi aur kuch bhi diya…
Sirf jacket, the girl said softly…
Seema shook her head, yeh ladki toh mujhe le duboki, she lamented to other girls, areh ek mahina ka upar se tu mere ghar me muft ki roti tor rahi hai, abhi kuch kama ke dikha, mujhe de, yeh Mumbai saher hai bhai, I need money to survive and khali shows se hamara pet nehi bharta, kiyuki idhar mere jaise ladkiya hazaaro hai, kuch samjha…
The girl bowed her head and heard Seema…
Seema came forward and lifted her head: Dekh abhi mai ja rahi hu, you know where, caught a big fish but don't dare to walk into my flat without money today, I am warning you, if you do so, mujhse bura koi nehi hoga…
Lekin Seema di….aaj ka mera hissa
Hissa? Oh for the dance, 400/-…lekin beta 400 rupaiah me Mumbai saher me keya hote hai? Kuch nehi, tera udhar hi toh mere se 400 se jaida hai..
Sirf 400, lekin contract…
I have to pay other dancers too, aur seniors jaida lete hai..
Lekin
Lekin vekin kuch nehi, Pia tu isko samjha de, uska normal kapre aur purse math wapis de, aaj kuch kama ke hi ghar jana, Pia tu ek bar phir dikha de kaise kiya jata …..and ha Pia don't forget to handover the packet to her, I don't want to deal with you know what, she gave a meaningful look towards Pia
Seema's mobile rang, yes darling, I was making myself presentable for you, will be right away…
She gave a final glance at the mirror and left the room after giving a hard look towards the girl..
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Anupamaa
