FF: The Crushed Innocence,Ch 19 & Epi-p61

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Aww man; somebody tell me name of the move because I'm going crazy here!😕

Wonderful start Tin; but trust you to start it on a Friday!😆

JW is complete bulakar.....I guess that's what comes with being 40!😉....Poor Bani; she sucks at her job!....

Looking forward to more!😛

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Anjali

@anjalikaran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Am loving this fan fic of yours too...:)
Great writing....
Similar to Pretty Woman but the jacket is very 'Aashiqui':)
Cheers,
Anjali

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mb101

@mb101

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Hey Tin, loved the start of your FF. I wonder what movie your adapating the plot from but I'm sure haven't seen it before. Bani's character is interesting, can't wait to read more. Please continue soon,

Maro 😛

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shobana

@Ammukutty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Tin,

Thanks for starting this new ff.......I loved it.....Storyline is different....great start.... it reminds me of the movie "Pretty Women"...not sure.....both parts were beautifully written 👏 👏 ....hope she is saved by him.....waiting for the next part....

Ammu.

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Niroo

@Niroo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

. hey tin..
so glad that u r back..
u ff's are always.. reallie interesting.. hehe ..
interesting story line..
.waiting to read more.
please continue soon

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Hmmmmmmm....since everyone is guessing....I could also give a try 😃 ....yep....it's my one and only "Shundori Mohila" isn't it 😛 .

Now wondering how Jai is going to handle this woman who has taken care of him when he was sick. Waiting for Monday's treat. Great job Tinni 👏

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

glad u started another ff
i love how they aer not similar to each other and very interesting
cant wait for ur next update

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Momtaj

@momtajbegum1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

im soooooooo glad u started a new one 😃
well this ones really different 😳 really good start

ewww jai was sick on her 🤢 she did not even flinch 😆 would really like to know what happend to bani that she had to do all this

plz cont

Taj

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Nice start, has a bit of Julia Roberts, Richard Gere in Pretty woman. (I mean, she is not a prostitute yet, but on her way to be)

Good job, 👏 👏 👏

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

Excellent update! Cant believe its taking her to Kolkata... I agree with Shobz-- seems a bit like pretty woman.. as she seems more innocent in the business... Wonderfully written! Cant wait to read more!

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