Kuch Achhe Kuch Bure-Ch 24 &epilog, pg71

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Ch 2 pg 3, ch3 pg 7, ch 4 pg9, ch 5 pg 13, ch 6 pg 15, ch 7 pg 19, ch 8 pg 22, ch 9 pg 26, CH 10 PG 30, Ch 11 pg 33, ch 12 pg 35, ch 13 pg 39, ch 14 pg 41, ch 15 pg 45, ch16 pg 47, ch 17 pg50, ch 18 pg 53, Ch19 pg56, ch 20 pg 58, ch21 pg 61, ch 22 pg66, ch23 pg 68

Dear Friends,

This story I am trying to write is on a subject which I am not very aware of…nevertheless the storyline came into my mind so I am giving it a try, I have just started writing it and am not sure whether I will able to finish it, but you are there so I hope with your help, I will be able to sail through…

My earlier ffs were: Thori si bewafai

(https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/615869/ff-thori-si-bewafai-note-on-pg-63) Kuch Rahen Anjaani Si (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/573991/ff-kuch-rahein-anjaani-si-ch-36-pg111): Contract Heir: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=536274&T PN. Return of Bani Walia, https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/515481/return-of-bani-walia-note-on-pg-31: :Business Tycoon Jai Walia marries a Mt Abu Girl(https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/486636/business-tycoonjw-marriesfinal-prt-pg64). Mai Apke bina nehi reh sakti hu (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/457994/mai-apke-bina-nehi-reh-updt-pg-11-pt-ix)& Finding Bani (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/469208/finding-bani-ff-part-viii-page-8).

Kuch achhe, Kuch Bure

Jai Jai mujhe chuo, mujhe chuo, the girl called out laughing, running through the trees….he could catch glimpses of her, wearing her usual white dress, her long hair flying ….

Areh ruko Bani, itna tej mat bhago…..

Kiyu, she called out hiding behind a tree...

Kiyoki kuch dinno me mera 40 saal ho jayega and mai utna tezi se nehi bhag sakta…

Areh Jai, umar se keya hota hai, you should remain young at heart…the voice answered….

Toh phir ajao na, I will show you how young I am …he said while tiptoeing the place where she was hiding…..

Yeh pakar liya, he laughed while holding her from behind….

Mujhe choriye bhi…she cried…

Nehi, chhorne ke liye nehi pakra hu, aaj to mai tumhara muh dekh kar hi rahoonga…he said….

Jai Sir, Jai Sir, Good morning, here's your tea…..

Jai gets up to see his butler Tony serving tea…he rubs his eyes and sits up on his bed, Tony opens the blinds, the morning sun fills the room….Jai picks up the cup, sips the tea…everytime this happens, he wakes up before seeing her face but the voice & the name is the same….yeh Bani kaun hai, its not really an uncommon name but I don't know anybody by that name, thought Jai, why do I dream about her over & over again, thought Jai…its time I get into another relationship, no relationship, no sex, no wonder I am getting these wild dreams, yeh sapna toh teenagers log dekte hai…Jai nodded his head silently to pickup the morning papers….

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Jai was getting dressed, Tony was helping him, he was whistling to himself….

Aditya entered….Jai aaj tum jara jaldi ajana...

Ha Aditya mujhe maloom hai, aaj Anu ka sangeet hai...

Aditya smiles, ha, lekin baath woh nehi hai, the point is Rohit's aunt Roshni is back from overseas...

Roshni? Jai quizzed…

Rohit ka bua, she is a successful businesswomen on her own right still unmarried, mai aur jigyasa tumhare liye sooch rahe the….

Jai picks up the revolver, looks at it thoughtfully, puts it back in the halter, hangs it on his shoulder and stretches his hands behind, so that Tony can put on the jacket he was holding…looks at Aditya

Does she know about me…

Us you mean Aditya, replied, of course she does, we have not hid anything from Rohit's family, have we aur what is the use of hiding, well we are quite famous in our own way, are we not Jai….Aditya smiled…

Jai smiled back and stepped out of the room….

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He went towards the puja room, the panditji was already there doing the Puja….he opened his shoes and entered…the family was there, his sister Jigyasa, her children, her husband Aditya and his mother Dadi for all…panditji finished his puja , took around the aarti, he took the blessing, left the room and walked towards the lift. He got down from the lift at the designated floor to be followed by two armed guard, he walked into the hall saw quite a number of people waiting for him, he smiled and waved at them before taking his designated seat…his assistant, AD came and stood next to his chair…

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Bani was rushing through her packing, Ma mera jewelry nikal do…..

Her sister Pia enters….Areh Bani, tumto itna bara suitcase le rahi ho ki lagta hai tum world tour pe ja rahi ho…

Pia, sab dress heavy heavy hai, Anu ne kaha hai ekbar humlog uski ghar me ghus gaye toh uski bidai ki baad hi nikal payenge.

Their mother Kiran enters, hands over the jewelry boxes to Bani, Bani keeps looks through them once again, mentally matching the sets with the dresses …puts them in the suitcase, closes it shut and looks at her mother, Papa ne keya kaha….

Bass a rahe hai…..

As Bani pulls the suitcase towards the drawing room, the bells rings, the servant opens the door….

ACP Nishikant Dixit walks in followed by another young officer….

Bani kaha ja rahi ho tum…..

Aap bhul gaye, aaj Anu ka sangeet hai, baas aaphi ka intezaar tha, I am taking a drop in your car...

But I have invited Pushkar for dinner, Pushkar this is my daughter Bani, this is Pushkar Shukla,the new IPS officer to join our department...

Hi Officer, greeted Bani and looked towards her mom and Pia…

Papa I must leave now, I have to go now, I am already late, Anu will kill me …

Lekin Kiran, Nishikant looked towards his wife…

Bye Bani, have a nice time, her mother wished her….Bani left through the main door….

Nishikant looked towards his wife helplessly….

Usko jane dijiye, kiyoki she & her friends have prepared a special number for the sangeet and aap Bani ko jante hai na, she doesn't like her plans to be upset…just like you in this regard….

But Kiran, through out her schooling she stayed in hostel and has joined college over just a year in Mumbai, Anu toh uski school ka friend nehi hai, college ka friend ek saal me itna dosti…

Yes, again just like you, she is her father's daughter you know Pushkar…have a seat Pushkar, I don't know why ND cannot understand his daughter at times, but mai itna janti hu that I have to hear his questions till Bani returns after two days…

I hope you have taken the address of the place Bani is visiting, Anu's full name, her father's name etc kiyoki Mumbai is full of crooks…Nishikant goes on…

Kiran gives up, she smiles at Pushkar, who she notes is a pleasant looking young man, IPS Nishikant said…yes he did invite his new team members at home for dinner but lately he brought the young officers with a thought that his daughters might choose one of them as their life partners…he has been telling Kiran about Pushkar for about a month now, infact he has also found out that he is not married and unlike today's generation doesn't have a fiance, bahut accha ladka hai, very bright future….

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Posted: 18 years ago
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YEAH!!!!!!!! YOU are back!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

i missed your fanfics so much Di!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

love the new plot !!!!!!!!!!! it sounds interesting 😳

wonder what happened to jai??????? 😕
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Eww!! Roshni 😡

cant wait to see how jani meet!!!!! 😛

please cont soon
thanks
sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was wonderful.. strting with jai's dream... now jb ka meeting ka intezaar hai.. pls continue sooon..actually i was waithing for ur next ff
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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A very Wonderful Start. Love it
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oh wow tinni! new ff! and by the looks of it...sounds very good! i have to say they seem opposite people and i think their status might be a problem..sorry again with my prediction 😆 😆
so JB will meet in the next or the one after part...nice...
plz continue soon
rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
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YAYYYY!!! A new FF! Loved all your ffs so far... and im sure im gonna love this one too! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I signed on to see a brand new ff by you!! I am so excited to read this- even if you say you dont have any knowledge on whatever the subject may be, I am more than sure you will do justice to it!

Curious about this JW carrying a revolver, and Bani's father an ACP. Somehow I feel that he will be the underworld don 😆 and her father his biggest enimy! Whatever it is a tumultuous love story is definitely something I am looking forward to!

Cant wait to read more! I hope to see a weekend special to keep me through the weekend! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Tiny

party time for me, your are back.fabalous start.loved it.very different and interesting.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi tiny

wow wonderful start!! Looking before fot the next part!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey tin!
wow that was an awesome start
woo hoo you started another FF
hehe
continue soon

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