Rewarded - Part 4 (Final Part) - The Restitution Series - Page 6

Just finished it. But I wanna read more and more.
You gave us the ultimate reward.
Btw I loved the selection of names of this series.. How perfectly you picked them.
So my sixth sense was right?
I really felt pain for Ragini this time.. Death is better than this.
Kaveri got her part of punishment. I loved how Sanskar ensured she had no way of escaping from this confinement. I miss this Sanskar in show. He was looking like an alien to me from some days..
That AdRi moments are really good. Annapurna fought with her own demons.
Finally that awesome SwaSan moments. How much I loved this. I just don't wanna ending of those moments. You depicted so perfectly.
You send them for overdue honeymoon to Bora Bora!
They totally deserved it..
A huge round of applause for you. You create magic with your writing. The intensity and logic of your stories attract me the most.
Loads of love dear.

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Just finished it. But I wanna read more and more.
You gave us the ultimate reward.
Btw I loved the selection of names of this series.. How perfectly you picked them.
So my sixth sense was right?
I really felt pain for Ragini this time.. Death is better than this.
Kaveri got her part of punishment. I loved how Sanskar ensured she had no way of escaping from this confinement. I miss this Sanskar in show. He was looking like an alien to me from some days..
That AdRi moments are really good. Annapurna fought with her own demons.
Finally that awesome SwaSan moments. How much I loved this. I just don't wanna ending of those moments. You depicted so perfectly.
You send them for overdue honeymoon to Bora Bora!
They totally deserved it..
A huge round of applause for you. You create magic with your writing. The intensity and logic of your stories attract me the most.
Loads of love dear.

I finally unreserved my post.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/130175283

XOXO

Sree

Originally posted by: Sree...

Res

Unreserved

Firstly thank you for bearing with me for such an extended delay in unreserving. Although I had read the part as soon as I saw the PM, I couldn't find enough time to pen/type down an appropriate comment. So thanks for bearing with me.

Coming to the last part I simply loved it. it was a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful journey.

I could say I loved how you punished Ragini because although I might sound a bit sadistic, I feel that if you hadn't turned the story round like this, Swara would have ended up forgiving her again and I would have been thoroughly disappointed. You have I noticed mentioned later how Swara still feels bad for her sister. You rightly said it was the life sentence for both the grandmother and her beloved grand daughter.

Coming to the next part, this completely took me by surprise, not that the others didn't. I never expected you to delve so deep into Kaveri's life and I must say you did confuse me little that I had to reread to completely grasp your words. But it is really commendable how much depth you have to each aspect of the story without deviating too much or boring us all out. You do know how to keep us hooked😃

The next two parts are my absolute favourites. I loved how included Adarsh's part. How he still considers Annapurna his mother and all of them fussing over parineeta was so cute. The adarsh kaveri interaction was beautifully portrayed as well.

Coming to my dear SwaSan. Okay you made us wait a lot for something like this. Leave the best for the last huh? Well i must say all the patience was well paid off. I enjoyed the swasan scene sooo much. I loved the recollection from Sanskar's point of view the most. It was so beautiful and refreshing and really needed in times like this that I wished it never ended.

Why dont you write a more light hearted SwaSan only fic for all of us suffering from KavKar torture? Please Di? Pretty please with cherry on top?

Thankks for bearing with me.
Lots of love🤗
XOXO
Sree

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey sis 🤗

I ban you from the sorry but hug you big for the unres comments you gave me! Mmmwah. I am travelling shortly back to the uk and reading this before has made me feel better about the LU I read about today's episode. Thank you honey!

I am satisfied that you liked this so much. I am done with Ragini and I don't care if she gets redeemed or not she deserves serious punishment so am sadistically also glad I wrote that end for her despite the fact it still made the human part of me feel bad for her despite all she's done. I deliberately said Swara felt bad as she would, Ragini's bad karma isn't Swara's.

Ah yes I don't like to think someone is doing all this without a reasoned through motive etc so I spent some time delving into Kaveri and fleshed out her story, the feedback I have had has been truly heartwarming. And it's the same with the Adarsh angle. Am so happy people have liked it all so much, that's enough reward for me:).

SwaSan are of course the main reason for writing and each time I do I feel very nervous and uncertain about doing them justice so am so happy you said what you did.

I will try and work on a lighthearted piece. My problem is I am a mood "absorber". The angst in the track brings it out in me and often then I can only think dark and deep and then put that right. At present I am thinking about a totally different story on SwaSan, like very different from every one I have done. Creating an entirely alternative plot rather than reworking existing like I usually do. But that won't be a light and fluffy one. So let's see if I can think of a genuine light hearted piece. I will certainly try do what I can love:).

Love you lots and thanks for always encouraging me xoxo

Hey Di🤗 Your jhappi.. I didn't apologise 😆😆

I'm frustrated withragini as well but currently I hate Sujata more than I hate Ragini or even Kavita in the present track.

Wow, SwaSan with a completely differentstoryline would be so interesting to read. You know sometimes when I read yours and Viji's fics for a while forget what is actually going on in the serial.. gets so confusing sometimes.

Whatever you feel like, do write more on SwaSan. Can't wait to read.

I'm always here, maybe late but not gone😆

XOXO

shruti first of all happy new year...i know it's too late to wish u now😆 but what to do life has become so busy these days..

Originally posted by: tarun1234567

shruti first of all happy new year...i know it's too late to wish u now😆 but what to do life has become so busy these days..

Just completed reading 4 parts...it was beautifully written and thanks a lot for pm😳 nahi toh i would have missed such a beautiful masterpiece😆

Originally posted by: anu91

Nice ending dr...

Originally posted by: Sree...

Hey Di🤗 Your jhappi.. I didn't apologise 😆😆

I'm frustrated withragini as well but currently I hate Sujata more than I hate Ragini or even Kavita in the present track.

Wow, SwaSan with a completely differentstoryline would be so interesting to read. You know sometimes when I read yours and Viji's fics for a while forget what is actually going on in the serial.. gets so confusing sometimes.

Whatever you feel like, do write more on SwaSan. Can't wait to read.

I'm always here, maybe late but not gone😆

XOXO

And so this beautiful Restitution series came to its lovely end..!!😃😃 It was a really wonderful journey Shruti..I really loved every moment of it..🤗 Thank you sooo much dear..😳

Ragini didn't die after all..But she is a living dead body..OMG..Such a harsh punishment for her cruel deeds..And Dadi too is suffering the punishment indirectly..

And Kaveri is undergoing her long lasting sentence in Prison..👏 Great..!! Loved the way Adarsh chose AP over this sick conniving woman..!!

Pari is pregnant..aww..so sweet..😳

Poor Lakshya..May be he gets a good wife soon..

And our Swasan world..❤️ Wowww..it was dreamlike Shru..🤗 I really loved reading about them☺️ and now a wonderful honeymoon to Bora Bora awaits the lovebirds..😃😃 Hope you write about it too..😆 I am being greedy here😉

Lots of Love,
Naina😊😊