LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! superbly written! Maaneet talk abt the case! she reveals abt her family n who her dad is! bt the Handas shld nt knw! update soon

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

awesome !!!

it's a very different story and an interesting one too...

geet was given by her biological family to their friends and now she has to defend her dad to the court...

her biological parents realized that she is their daughter...what about gautam??

maan found out a part of the truth but will he keep it to himself???

waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Maan cracked lots of information from geet. Geet like an innocent girl he said about her to him

Nice parts😉

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Just Awesome Update

Before starting the discussion on case Maan wanted to ask some questions from geet as he was getting suspicious and Geet was also scared, Maan is sharp and intelligent police officer and geet could not escape and told everything about her family, her father relations with Jairaj, Maan already knew the brave stories of Jairaj and Kabir ,Maan is socked why Geet asked him not to tell ACP family to anything and she herself does not know anything, liking this little bit flirty and jovial Maan , loved it

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Update ' Maan and Geet talks and he tries getting as much information out of Geet it does seem like she is still soft to be a lawyer as when she senses Maan touching a topic that is hitting home she either gets tense or nervous and she been a lawyer must actually become stronger but I enjoyed their talks

Thanks for replying...

Yeah she is kind of naive and innocent but to make her strong in lieing about her identity in front of a policemen is difficult... because if she lied and Maan as a cop got suspicious can find out through documents as she has to submit her document in court and in embassy too... right... so there was not escape when Maan was asking and telling her to reveal... he actually have an idea that she is her mentor's daughter the way she said her father's name and buisness inter designing,...

with regards

dhruvika😃

Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: myrahluvsk
nice update
maan flirting with geet order k bahane
maan is doubt to geet because geet is very interest in case
maan bato bato mai geet se sari details nikal raha tha
about geet father maan is doubting something

precape is interesting
waiting for next update

Thnx for the replying

Yup he was because he had figure it out about geet being his mentor's daughter

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Originally posted by: nakh5683
Lovely ue I like we're the story is going so maan asked abt geet ehy she interested in the case though geet was nervous she told how her dad was in trouble and jairaj helped him he is a business man but maan the efficient cop came to know abt geets dad and she told he was ex cop who is apparently maan and every cops role model geet is thinking deeply she and maan both think jairaj is innocent maan will help her he teased her making her blush

Originally posted by: suwaibah
maan can help geet...
koi to hai jo chup k war kr rha hai acp p

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Fabulous update. Geet and Maan met in a restaurant. Maan asked about her. She told him about her family and father's name. Maan is happy to know that she is Kabir Deshmukh's daughter as Maan thinks him as his role model. Geet asked him not to tell about her to Jairaj family as her father has asked her not to reveal her identity.

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
Wonderful part... Maan was amazed to know geet is kabir daughter n willing to help her in jairaj case.. Geet want to hide her identify bcs she promise her dad.. Can't wait for next part.

Originally posted by: swapna.p
awesome update..
geet and maan opened up with each other..
waiting for next update..

Originally posted by: pari_DD
amazing updte... maan d geett met in restaurant. maan sense geet uneasiness he makes her comfortable by asking her family details maan is shocked to knw that she is d daughter of rolemodel kabir deshnukh.. maan told abt d murder. murder case because of jairaj arrested geet sense tht they missing something. waiting for d nxt updte...

thnx for replying

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Originally posted by: Alamelu
So glad geet and maan Opened up with each other and am hoping they can solve the case. I wonder why her dad does it want jairaj to know about geet. Would they not be happy to see their daughter. Ha I g given her up am sure they would not reveal the fact yo her then why this fear

Thnx for replying you will know in upcoming parts😃

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

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Originally posted by: utsha
Very nice update.
Geet seemed a bit naive to handle a case like this but loved her convo with maan.
Was maan flirting with her or he has some other intentions??? Maybe he wants to know something else.
He seemed quite shocked to learn about geet's true identity and about his role model.
Story getting interesting.
Thanks for pm.
Cont soon.

Thanks for replying...

with regards

dhruvika😃

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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Nice n interesting story!!
Bohot din hogaye serious stories pade hue😃

Even the plot seems gripping hope it revolves round the case more than the fact that geet being a Handa!!

Loved the story so far...❤️

Waiting for the next!

Thnx for replying yeah i prefer to revolve around the story and as handa is important and case too... you will see in near future...😃

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Originally posted by: heemasomani
Fantastic update
Maaneet talks
he tries getting as much info she is very soft

Thanks for replying...

with regards

dhruvika😃

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Originally posted by: maansee
Nice story
Nice concet .

Hope geet jaldi sach samney laayegi

Looking forward

Loved your writing style

Can i get the pm

Thnx for replying yeah i pm whoever comment on my story😃

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Originally posted by: aparna3011
fabulous update

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! superbly written! Maaneet talk abt the case! she reveals abt her family n who her dad is! bt the Handas shld nt knw! update soon

Originally posted by: dreamy
lovely update

Thnx for replying

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Originally posted by: mlaran852
awesome !!!

it's a very different story and an interesting one too...

geet was given by her biological family to their friends and now she has to defend her dad to the court...

her biological parents realized that she is their daughter...what about gautam??

maan found out a part of the truth but will he keep it to himself???

waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thnx for the reply... Nope Gautam's parents just had a doubt but they still are unaware of her identity and gautam doesnt have any cluee about him having a sister...

Maan revealing i dont think he will but in near future u never know...😃😈

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: preetidhawan
Just Awesome Update
Before starting the discussion on case Maan wanted to ask some questions from geet as he was getting suspicious and Geet was also scared, Maan is sharp and intelligent police officer and geet could not escape and told everything about her family, her father relations with Jairaj, Maan already knew the brave stories of Jairaj and Kabir ,Maan is socked why Geet asked him not to tell ACP family to anything and she herself does not know anything, liking this little bit flirty and jovial Maan , loved it

thnx for replying😃 thnx for liking maan i want to show the different character apart from the show...😳😳